Penname: Onimosity [Contact]

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Member Since: 30/08/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

It's time to trust my instincts, close my eyes, and leap.


Totally stealing the idea of a story queue from Missus James.


In the Pipeline:


Anatoly's (of Beastly Things) story


Challenge Fic for Nene


Challenge Fic for femmenoire


Completed:


Beast


 Ever After*


The Art of Giving*


Broken English*


In progress:


280 Days (The next story in the Beastly Things Series)


*Visit the website below for more information on my completed works and works in progress.


 


Published Works:


Goal! A Love Story written as Bellamy Black



Beta-reader: No

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Reviews by Onimosity


Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary: Two people out having a night of fun and passion.

Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: Jovan (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2894
Read Count: 959
Published: 29/10/08
Updated: 29/10/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am joining the movement to get you to start writing again. This is good stuff!

Author's Response:

A movement to have me writting again well it working lol. I be writting but can't say when but it happen and thank you so much for the review I love your work and honor you take time to post a review for my little work.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/12/10

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

 

Harmony Peterson, an ambitious young medical student, wants to perfect her bedside manner before she begins her clinical rotations. Keegan Grant is more than willing to help.

Fantastic Banner courtesy of TokenBlackGirl

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7603
Read Count: 7600
Published: 26/01/10
Updated: 04/02/10


Title: Chapter 4: Muscles & Nerves

I love this story. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/01/10

Title: Chapter 5: Mental Status

I love this story so much and can't wait to read more about this couple.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! This story was really more of an introduction to H&K (and Julie, who is the subject of the thing I'm working on for the challenge) and I hope to explore their relationship a bit more deeply when I next get some free time. I'm glad you enjoyed this little tale.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/02/10

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 41]
Summary:

I'll never talk again

Oh boy you've left me speechless

You've left me speechless, so speechless 

And I'll never love again

Oh boy you've left me speechless

You've left me speechless, so speechless 

-Lady Gaga

"Speechless" 

 

Cassandra Mitchell never could fight the spell that pushed her and Christian Norris together. Their love was sometimes up and sometimes down but always there. And now that he's gone, she has nothing left to say.

 

Disclaimer:  All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9846
Read Count: 29148
Published: 11/02/10
Updated: 21/10/10


Title: Chapter 1: How?

Really interesting beginning. Can't wait to read more. Plus, Speechless was the first Gaga song I actually liked.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/02/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 233]
Summary:

             

 

After being betrayed by her best friend and being cheated on by her boyfirend, Aiyana Kendricks has decided to leave her hometown of Rochester NY behind. Moving to Las Vegas, she finds herself happy with new friends, a great party planning job, and a new boyfriend named Mark. But what happens when her past comes into her life again? Will the new couple be able to stay together when so many forces are trying to pull them apart?

~*~

Life's like a road that you travel on
When there's one day here an' the next day gone
Sometimes you bend, sometimes you stand
Sometimes you turn your back to the wind

~*~

LV Choppers Playlist

Something To listen to while reading LVC. All of the songs have inspired me in some way when it comes to the story and characters.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s), Other
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 34
Completed:No
Word count: 70063
Read Count: 32183
Published: 19/04/10
Updated: 19/01/11


Title: Chapter 6: Double Date

I love this story. I love the pace of your chapters and it is fun-ny. Enjoying the read!

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/04/10

Title: Chapter 28: Calm Before The Storm

Gahhhh!!! How could you end it there? Kinda loving Sophia. Ricky just gets scummier and scummier.

And this...

Dave lay on his back and thought of the one person that he was still unsure of. He use to see a future with her; he use to see that they could’ve been happy. But now every time he’d dream of her, the white picket fence and a couple of kids…a mail man would come along and fuck her behind the garage. 

I was all moved by his musings but then you wrote this and I just laughed.

Well done. 



Author's Response: I can't let things get too serious...its just not in my nature. lmao

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/05/10

Title: Chapter 29: The Call

DENITA!!!!

All is not forgiven but I will stop harassing you. Loved it as always....do I smell a divorce in the air?  

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/12/10

Title: Chapter 30: Shout Times 3!

Fiiiiiiinaallllllyyyyy!!!

She has to come clean! That man still loves her (right?) even if he is worried about her screwing the mailman.

Come on Phil!  

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/12/10

Title: Chapter 32: The Run-In

“Well hello yello jello ass clown.” 

 

You wrote that for me, didn't you? Didn't you?

I still love and adore Phil....even Phil and Mark together. BUT DON'T DO IT!

Phil belongs with Dave!

 

Love the update! 

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/01/11

Title: Chapter 34: Claire

hmmm....this chapter almost redeemed Mark although I don't think Ana will take him back so easily but she might be more understanding.

You know I'm waiting for more, right? 

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/01/11

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 113]
Summary:

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Jonathan Denson isn't what you'd call the life of the party but when he enters a room, he commands attention. The only problem is, the attention he craves isn't the attention he's getting. It's just too bad that the only person he ever truly wanted isn't ready for what he has to offer. Left with no other option, John decides that he's sick of leaving romance up to fate and takes his love life into his own hands.

Disclaimer: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended    

Huge shout out to KKMonroe, formerly CPM09, for my title. This story would have been called something I wasn't completely satisfied with if not for her genius. Thank you, lovely lady :)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 12160
Read Count: 25793
Published: 03/05/10
Updated: 22/12/10


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

For some reason, I like Rochelle (not for Jonathan of course). Anywho, I very much look forward to your updates for this and other stories.

Author's Response: I connect with Rochelle too...but that could be because I created her. *shrugs* Thanks, Oni! I'll get to those other updates soon.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/06/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 26]
Summary:

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Twenty-Two year old Mahogany Smith has dealt with one traumatising moment after another. The death of her single mother at the tender age of six. Her first love and fiance` breaking it off with her and then her younger sister trying to break her with every chance she gets. On the outside, the young pharmacist seems to have it all together. She's completely stable and follows a certain path. There's a side of her that's going to be released though.
Twenty-six year old Kheng Santana has just returned from the undeclared "war" overseas. At first glance, it would seem like the young man isnt affected by the tragedies that have taken place while serving the country; but at night the faces of the innocent people killed in the middle of two countries tango appears in his dreams.

“…you don’t see me”
“Ye-“
“NO! You don’t SEE ME!”



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 4751
Read Count: 2309
Published: 07/05/10
Updated: 24/05/10


Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

Great beginning. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/05/10

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 177]
Summary: DA Banner

 

Twenty-three year old Leigh Grayson has had only one thing on her mind for the last five years: Justice. But to get justice she will have to fight one man’s sick obsession.

Will Detective Damien Crook be able to convince her to accept his help and most of all his love?

I want to say a huge thank you to Renee Banks for all her support and editing skills. Renee, you have no idea how much it means to me!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 33650
Read Count: 31680
Published: 09/05/10
Updated: 18/12/10


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

At last!

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/05/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 80]
Summary:

It's been seven years since Billy walked out of Lily's life. He's returned to Genoa City with one goal, and he's willing use all of his resources to accomplish it.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, The Young and the Restless
Characters: Lily Winters
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language
Series: LnB stand alone stories
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 85777
Read Count: 146922
Published: 01/07/10
Updated: 07/04/11


Title: Chapter 2: Two

Nick and Lily? Got to admit, I hadn't thought of them as a pairing...and apparently they won't be for long. Mwah ha ha.

Like your versions of Kate, Jana, and Amber. Like them better than the ones on the show. 

  

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/07/10

Title: Chapter 16: Sixteen

Oh this was good....very intense. My sense of dread grew with every line until the final reveal that Lily is pregnant.

I hope it's Billy's, I really do. And if it's not, I hope that doesn't stop them from being together.  Those Loveable Adulterers.

But Nick...freaky...borderline abusive. Lily is a better woman than me to forgive him for the fall or maybe she's still feeling guilt about Billy.

We'll see...can't wait for more.  



Author's Response:

I'm happy that you found the chapter to be intense. I wasn't sure how it would come across.

Thanks for commenting!  

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/02/11

Title: Chapter 1: One

I love this!! I stopped watching Y&R shortly after Chloe/Kate dismantled Lily's life. I always liked Cane and Lily but thought it was Lily and Billy that brought the heat. 

Keep it coming. 

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/07/10

Title: Chapter 3: Three

You're so cruel to end it there. 

Love this. It really did improve an awful day I was having. 



Author's Response:

Yep, and I will not even deny it. LOL 

I'm glad I could help. *g*

 

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/07/10

Title: Chapter 6: Six

You are good at bringing the drama. Congrats on a barely annoying Cane and an intriguing Adam. I always liked Adam#1 but I suspect this is Adam#2. And when are you updating please? I think now is good.

Author's Response:

I'm trying to be fair to Cane. I use to like the character, and I think that...anyhow. LOL

This is Chris Egan, and not Michael Munney *sp*. I've never really cared for either, but I prefer CE. I've only watched maybe one or two of MM scenes, but I don't really care for his version of Adam. 

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/08/10

Title: Chapter 4: Four

So I am dying to know why he left and the real reason that he's back NOW. And to see more of Nick (a character that bored me to tears on the show) and Lily's interactions. 

Great dialogue, by the way. Soapy without being SOAPY.  



Author's Response:

I've given a few of hints as to why he left, and chapter three gave some as to why he returned. I'm glad you liked the dialogue. I say it over and over again, but if I don't get anything else right. I hope that I have good dialogue... although sometimes that's the only thing I get right. LOL

Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/07/10

Title: Chapter 5: Five

I liked this chapter. I am sucker for young luv. Plus, the fact that she does care for Nick "The Boring" Newman. It will make Billy's plotting all the more interesting.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/07/10

Title: Chapter 8: Eight

acknowledging the cracks in a marriage...that's just a couple of steps before the break. Mwah ha ha.

 Nice to know Kate is still clHOE in any universe.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24/08/10

Title: Chapter 12: Twelve

I really enjoyed this chapter.   Nick, ugh, is there a five-year-old lil Cassie or Noah out there? I was very anti-adultery, even for LnB, but if Nick was cheating first...ugh. Plus the way he was checking out Sharon. Ugh.Lily and Billy together and talking, the passenger part was pretty poignant. Definitely want more.

 

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/10/10

Title: Chapter 9: Nine

The Nilly loving didn't bother me, kept it convincing. Really looking forward to the next update.

And i kinda like lil' stephanie. 

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/08/10

Title: Chapter 10: Ten

There was a very interesting contrast in this chapter between Billy remembering the Lily that was and the life of the Lily that is. Hope you update soon.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/09/10

Title: Chapter 17: Seventeen

When you do short you do deadly...

Wow.

 I'm so glad that Billy is realizing what he's done and the games he's played and how his behavior and not just Nick's led to Lily being injured.

So glad the reasoning for his return was given. Yes I knew it was the picture but it was what he saw in the picture, the lack of joy in her. Now everything he's said to Jack he has to say to Lily PLUS explaining WHY he left and WHY  he stayed away.

Compact and Powerful was this chapter. Lawd, I'm channelling Yoda.

Wait for more, I cannot. 



Author's Response:

LOL@ Channelling Yoda.  I will answer your question in the next few chapters.

Thanks for commenting.  

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/02/11