Penname: Onimosity [Contact]

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Member Since: 30/08/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

It's time to trust my instincts, close my eyes, and leap.


Totally stealing the idea of a story queue from Missus James.


In the Pipeline:


Anatoly's (of Beastly Things) story


Challenge Fic for Nene


Challenge Fic for femmenoire


Completed:


Beast


 Ever After*


The Art of Giving*


Broken English*


In progress:


280 Days (The next story in the Beastly Things Series)


*Visit the website below for more information on my completed works and works in progress.


 


Published Works:


Goal! A Love Story written as Bellamy Black



Beta-reader: No

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Summary:

 

 

 Beautiful Banner by Missus James

 

When Mia, a beautiful southern black lady, finds herself as the personal assistant to two of the most gorgeous white men she's ever met, she finds herself in an unlikely situation that will challenge everything she thought she wanted in a normal life. 

 

Mia Shannon struggles to adjust to her life in San Francisco after moving there from the south. It's hard being the only black girl at the company she works for and even harder when she's the personal assistant to two of the most wealthiest, gorgeous men white men she's ever seen. Mia finds herself having feelings for both her bosses and realizes nothing can ever become of them except to exist in her fantasies.

Kale and Aidan fell in love with Mia the moment she walked into their office for an interview for the personal assistant position. It took them almost four years to get close enough to Mia where she was comfortable enough to be around them as best friends. Now they want more and they are determine to make Mia the only woman in their life. 

Loving Mia was first posted on Fictionpress, then later transferred to The Chamber by KatherineMadison. Please do not copy and post my story to any other sites without my permission. Thank you! This story is an original fiction completely written from my overactive imagination. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 96215
Read Count: 229046
Published: 16/11/10
Updated: 16/02/11


Title: Chapter 11: Loving Mia Part One

Okay, so normally I hate when writers post one version and then revise it but this. I love this new direction. It's really moving the story along and is HOTTTT. Please update tonight!

Author's Response: Thanks for being so opened-minded. The previous version was bugging the heck out of me and I realize I took it down the wrong road, but I'm back on track. This is something I never do and I was afraid some of my older fans wouldn't like it. Some of them did, others were angry, but what can I do? One thing for sure, it won't happen again. 

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/12/10

Title: Chapter 12: Loving Mia Part Two

Oooooohhh that was ridiculously hot. And I may be alone in this but...

please don't let her be pregnant! 

please don't let her be pregnant! 

please don't let her be pregnant! 

But you've been on point so far so I'll just have to trust you.

please don't let her be pregnant!  

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/12/10

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Summary:

Kwan is one fifth of Korea's most popular idol group, and a dedicated, card carrying heartbreaker. But what happens when he is confronted with the girl from his past? the one that got away? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 65707
Read Count: 69301
Published: 06/12/10
Updated: 15/11/11


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

You know what I love about your stories other than everything? I always find them when they are like 20 chapters deep which means I can just sit back, read, and enjoy and not get antsy for updates until the end.                                                                                                                                      But when I reach the end...it is on.  Love it!           

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Woot woot! I'm happy you enjoyed! haha

I feel the smae way about yours madame! haha I wait until they build up and then go on a reading spree

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/06/11

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Summary:

 

Just when Georgina Akande thought she had rid herself of her creepy ex-fiance, he strolls back into her life in the worst way possible.

A misguided attempt to assert herself leads to some painful home truths, but, also, the opportunity to grow and love again.



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Love Is...
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 37015
Read Count: 8026
Published: 18/01/11
Updated: 31/05/11


Title: Chapter 2: Karma Goes To Town

Val!

 

You may have just bought yourself a reprieve from "Red" harassment...for a week.

This is fabulous. Nice zippy pace. Love it! 

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/01/11

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Summary: Sometimes the best decisions are the hardest ones to make. And sometimes the hardest choices are the wrong choices. The trick is figuring out which is which.

Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Film)
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 12418
Read Count: 25020
Published: 28/01/11
Updated: 03/02/11


Title: Chapter 3: Shaken His Ankles Free

I adore all your work and this is probably one of my favorites even though it is very difficult to read at times because of the extremely emotional content. Difficult in a good way, a way that makes Kleenex happy. So glad you are posting here. Don't forget about the Animates!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

 

And don't worry... there is still one more chapter for Living Among People. It's undergone several revisions, but still isn't quite right. The moment I get there, I will post. Promise.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/01/11

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Summary:

When Carla Jones makes a gruesome discovery at her neighbour's house one evening, life as she knows it takes a dramatic and unexpected turn. A modern retelling of Little Red Riding Hood.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Ostrander
Chapters: 24
Completed:Yes
Word count: 76580
Read Count: 30235
Published: 06/02/11
Updated: 16/02/11


Title: Chapter 5: The Huntsman...

So of course I had to youtube Maple Leaf Rag only to find out I know the song but never knew the name of it. Yay Val for being edumacational!

You know, this is the first time I read this and felt a trace of empathy for, um, so-and-so's, loss...he still crazy but I felt a twinge of sadness. Just a twinge.

Onward!  

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/02/11

Title: Chapter 8: The Space Between Fox and Wolf...

I have to say, Jason beneath the tree with the wolf pup on his lap is one of my favorite images from this story. 

Evil Miranda Adler!

That is all.  

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/02/11

Title: Chapter 13: What's Mine is Mine...

So I owe you some reviews  because I've read everything you've posted (cough) so post more (cough) and I'm not even reviewing in order but I just had to tell you.

I love your dialogue. I love the banter between Carla and Lisa ("love box!"). It just flows so easily and I know how hard good dialogue can be.

Very nicely done, Stalkee.

Now get to posting.

Signed,

Your #1 Stalker  

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/02/11

Title: Chapter 4: A Wolfish Plan...

I really do just love this story.

 I love the characters, the plot, the descriptions, the care you put into all of it. It's just great. It's exciting and romantic and just a really, really good story. And I know that's not enough praise for how much I adore this story but it is sincere.

Now let's talk schedule, I think one update a day until you're done will work for  me- everyone- me.

Honestly, I am Snoopy on a dog house right now. Soooooo happy! 

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/02/11

Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

It was gentle prodding!! Very gentle!!! I never came to England!!!

 (Quietly canceling airline ticket) 

Yay Val!!!!! 



Author's Response: Haha! You crack me up, woman. Thank you.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/02/11

Title: Chapter 2: Once Upon A Time...

Seriously, woman. I am sitting in my chair singing your name like it was the theme song to "Two and Half Men."

I am so glad you reposted. You are far too talented to not share your work with the world. Yay Val!

I'll stop now, I'm getting misty.

VAAALLL!!!!!! Snoopy Dance!!!! 



Author's Response: *Huggles* thanks for liking my stories, Oni. It means a lot to me as I really respect your work.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/02/11

Title: Chapter 7: Crave...

Gosh I love them, they're so hot and sweet together...you know I adore this story (I have the police report to prove it).

Now, let's talk schedule. The three updates a day work for me so keep at it! It's tomorrow in England, isn't it?

 

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/02/11

Title: Chapter 24: Red...

Dear Stalkee,

I am still not reviewing in order but I just have to say that I love and have always loved the scene with the piano. The image of Carla anchoring herself to it while trying to reach for Jason (Thorsten, whatever) it always makes me misty. That scene is probably what  earned you your best international stalker (that's me, by the way).

I'm not even going to pressure you about Red sky (today) because you got Riverdance of DEATH!! (note the exclamation points) n the horizon and that story is making me smile just thinking of it.

And then that Freddie Ljundberg....yum...you may have earned yourself two days of no pressure. Yum.

Great work woman, great publishable work.

No bunnies will be boiled in any pots today.

Love (with wee golden knives),

 

Your Stalker 

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/02/11

Title: Chapter 6: The Apex Predator...

I was all giggly and giddy this chapter. Their first meeting! Yay! And I noticed you retitled your chapters. I like.

I told you I stalked this story. 

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/02/11

Title: Chapter 9: A Mad Disguise...

So I am not pressuring you (yet) but you have to write a story for Kyle...and Tobias. No pressure. I love that I am picking up all this stuff I didn't notice before. They way they pretend to react like humans like, nice little detail there Miss Val. As always I cannot wait for more...and I don't have to. Yay!!!!

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/02/11

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Summary:

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 They were three...they wanted a fourth.


 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 19686
Read Count: 9700
Published: 24/03/11
Updated: 21/07/11


Title: Chapter 2: Who's That Girl

If I would to describe this story in one word I would say Zippy or Sly. But it just bounces right along, very crafted. I am intrigued.



Author's Response:

I like zippy, it reminds me of that Disney song.

Love 

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/04/11

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 31]
Summary:

here is my summary



Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 28
Read Count: 16684
Published: 14/04/11
Updated: 28/05/11


Title: Chapter 4: Thanks to ODB

This is it? You make us wait forever for your updates and this is all you give us? I need more! Now!

But the link works!



Author's Response:

Sorry to disappoint you, there is just no pleasing some people, although i got lots of shiny stars which is very cool!!!

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/05/11

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You know, i have never rated a story one star before. Aren't you glad you are the first? I just had to try it out just once.



Author's Response:

It isnt even a whole proper star, just half a star, i gotta tell you frankly, I am not feeling the love here

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed half-star
Date: 03/05/11

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This sucks! Kidding, kidding.



Author's Response: You are so mean Oni, i am going to report you to the admins!! Oh wait, I already know, lol

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/04/11

Title: Chapter 2: This one is for junebug

Boo! Hiss!! Stop writing!!

But the image button seems to work



Author's Response:

you are so nasty to me, but on the plus side, the image button does work (not for all apparently grrr). I am a fledgling writer, posting for the first time on the site, some encouragement woudl be nice you know... i dont think i am going to post any more chapters now, so there *pokes out tongue*

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/04/11

Title: Chapter 3: This One is for Oni

This chapter...I am choked up. It was compelling, riveting....everything good story telling should be.

Why you are not published I just don't know.

Thank you for sharing your gifts.

 



Author's Response:

thank you thank you thank you, i am so glad you liked it, it was very cathartic experience for me and it is nice to know that somebody else gets it too. sometime these things are so hard to craft into words.

 

Really appreciate your kind comments, it is very encouraging  *unpokes tongue*

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/04/11

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Summary:

It's been six months since Reese Davies had a decent date and even longer since her toes curled and her eyes rolled in the back of her head. Desperate times call for desperate measures and she accepts a last ditch effort from her brother and her best friend for a new strategic partnership. Love match or total disaster?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26568
Read Count: 45973
Published: 13/06/11
Updated: 03/08/11


Title: Chapter 8: A Night to Remember

Gosh they're hot.

I know I say grown and sexy all the time but this and they are and that's perfect.


Sigh.

And I can't even harass you because your noggin hurts. Darn it.

Writing more will make you feel better. True Facts.

Author's Response:

Thank you babe. Much appreciated. More writing to come.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/06/11

Title: Chapter 7: Words of Wisdom

 

I kinda am falling in love with Reese and Markel, the backsotry of who they are, the Freak and the Geek. I cannot believe you thought this would be a three chapter story. Nut ball. Anywho, onto The Sex and Reese. The hotness, oh the hotness. I love them together. And you have 60 minutes. Get to posting.



Author's Response:

I was delusional...thinking I could let them go in three chapters...now it's their story and you've sparked an idea for a possible brother and sister spin off...

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/06/11

Title: Chapter 11: So Beautiful

 

Um...yeah....is anyone ever comfortable writing the smexy? But i will just say, your discomfort is evreyone else's reading pleasure (please, no puns). So keep it up woman!



Author's Response:

Ha...not touching that pun with a Lex the Sex sized pole.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/11

Title: Chapter 12: Great Minds

Grant, Grant, Grant...trouble in the making i do believe. But yay for rex buying a clue! Go to her man!!! Well done. And it is manana. nowa.



Author's Response:

I told y'all not in this story...I promise to keep him contained...in the very short prequel yet to be posted...total bad boy...necessary of the evil eye and warnings

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/11