Penname: Cali2mt406 [Contact]

Real name: Pam (Paw)

Member Since: 13/09/09

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Born and raised in California, Until 2003 I moved to Montana!! Were  it is really cold I wonder often what I am doing here, other then the fact that it is beautiful here!! I love to read. Mostly romance novels. The authors on this board opened  my eyes to other storys beside the sappy ones I love and still will always read. However these lady's here write character with flaws and characters that love one antother dispite them. Lady's please continue to do your thing cause your doing it well.

 




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Big Girls Won't Cry by Suprina Frazier
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

They messed with the wrong woman this time!

FBI agent Subrina Rayelle is on a mission to take down the people that forced her best friend Leesha into prostitution and then beat her to death when she tried to escape.

Refusing to even cry one tear of grief for Leesha until all guilty parties are brought to justice, Subrina sets her sights on Nevada where the crime took place. If only she hadn’t met her soul-mate on this mission – a beloved nephew to the leaders of the suspected prostitution ring and who may also be among the guilty parties himself. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 210
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3441
Read Count: 79606
Published: 09/10/10
Updated: 09/04/11

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 6.1

Rev got showed his true colors. I like that!! Good for Subrina

Author's Response:

I likes that Subrina exposed that crooked preacher too. His days of grace had run out. He needed to be stopped before another innocent person got hurt.

Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/10/10
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 8.2

Salethia, needs to think before she opens that mouth of hers. Rashad is going to get her. Cant wait for more. Awesome chapters.

Author's Response:

I so agree with you about Salethia's need to THINK before she speaks. Stay tuned, I plan to post more tonight.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 23/10/10
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 9.1

Already love Avalon, your wrote her snappy character just like Delta. Awesome job.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Cali2mt406! Delta was my inspiration for Avalon's character. I loved her so much in Designing Women. Seeing her play 'Suzanne' - the gun-toting southern belle was a hoot. lol.

Thanks again for the feedback!

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Date: 24/10/10
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 9.2

I love Caesar's relationship with his mother as far as him persnonaly the jury is still out :o)

Author's Response:

Hopefully you'll like him as the story proceeds. I tried to give him an interesting sense of humor. We'll see if that attempt was successful. tee-hee.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 24/10/10
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 10.2

I am all for more updates :o) I see Ceasar has his first attraction to a full size woman. This should be very interesting.

Author's Response:

I'll see what I can do this week. As for C, he is most certainly attracted to Bree.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 25/10/10
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 11.3

Awesome chapters, loved the interaction between between the 2. Look forward to more.

Author's Response:

There is LOTS more interaction coming up between C & S/B. Some of it is pretty funny too.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 25/10/10
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 13.2

Great update!! I have a feeling Subrina isnt going to be able to resist Ceasar for very long.

Author's Response:

She's gonna definitely try. Can't say how successul she's gonna be though. tee-hee.

Thanks for the comment!

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Date: 03/11/10
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 15.1

Oh Ceasar how could you!!

Author's Response:

I'm pretty disappointed in him myself. :(

Thanks for the feedback!

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Date: 05/11/10
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 15.2

Nice, Subrina is going to wipe that grin off his face. Love it.

Author's Response:

You know it! tee-hee.

Thanks for the feedback!

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Date: 05/11/10
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 15.3

Loved this chapter!! Ceasar better step up his game or he is going to be left out in the cold.

Author's Response:

Don't worry, C plans to do just that - step his game up. ALL the way up.

Thanks for the feedback!

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Date: 05/11/10
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 17.1

Hmm wonder What Avalon suspetcs!!! Glad she told off Ceasar, I kinda feel sorry for him being he is sorry. Glad he is not going to give up.

Author's Response:

Yes, Avalon is the one to watch at this point in the story. Lots of good juicy details with her.

Thanks for commenting!

 

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Date: 06/11/10
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 17.2

I just knew Subrina was feeling Ceasar!! Will be interesting to see how Ceasar .pursues her

Author's Response:

Oh yes, she is definitely feeling him. C is gonna be creative that's for sure when pursuing Subrina/Bree.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 06/11/10
Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 33.2

I hope once Ceasar knows why Subrina lied to him he will forgive her. Hopefully love will over ride hurt feelings.

Author's Response:

All of that hurt is still a ways off. Wish it could be avoided, but unfortunately, it can't. Until then, let's have some happy times for these two, shall we?

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 05/12/10
Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 34.2

Awe I loved this update!! Ceasar in love with a woman who he never thought would be his type. Classic.

Author's Response:

Yes, brotha man got blindsided by his attraction to a big girl. giggle!

Thanks for commenting!

 

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Date: 05/12/10
Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 20

Wow Avalon and Vickie went through something no child should have had to go through, especialy Vickie. Ceasar was 2 cute with his nosy self. I think Avalon sent Subrina that book I also think she got real close to Leesha. I love the way all of this is coming to together. Look forward to more.

Author's Response:

I thought C was kinda cute playing I-Spy as well. tee-hee.

Your guesses about Avalon are on the right track. lol

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 08/11/10
Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 22.2

Had a feeling Avalon befriended Leesha.

Author's Response:

You're gut feeling was right. Avalon was Leesha's only support system in Nevada.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 14/11/10
Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 23.1

Awwe Subrina got her feelings hurt. She needs to relax and not jump to the wrong conclusion. After all she is the one that wanted to cool things down,

Author's Response:

You're right, she is the one that pulled away first. But that's the thing with certain decisions. We THINK we know what we want/need, only to find out later that it's not REALLY what we wanted/needed after all.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 14/11/10
Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 23.2

Uh oh Ceasar doesnt know when to stop and think before he talks. Poor guy he is making his feelings for Subrina make him do silly things.

Author's Response:

Yeah, he's making a fool of himself over Subrina. Kinda sad and funny at the same time. He'll get it together eventually.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 15/11/10
Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 23.3

Subrina always knows how to but Caesar in his place!! I love it. What she told Ricky had me busting up.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked that scene so much. It was a hoot to write. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 15/11/10
Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 24.1

Caesar did redeem himself very well. Subrina challening him to a dance off that was so cute and Caesar say he has some skills. What a riot. Loved this chapter it was full of fun.

Author's Response:

I enjoyed writing this chapter so much. Glad you enjoyed reading it. I didn't want the story to be super-serious all the way through.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 17/11/10
Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 24.2

Blaine has some nerve with his married butt. I loved that Caesar caught Subrina off gaurd the goodnight friend.

Author's Response:

Blaine just don't give a flip about hardly anybody but himself and what HE wants. He got some love for Ricky and a couple other folks as you'll see in later chapters, but he's even selfish in HOW he loves them.

Yeah, that was pretty special how C caught S/B off guard. Fooled her!

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 17/11/10
Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 27.3

Great chapters. My heart went out to Ceasar when he found his father.  Subrina is a good actress!!  I dont blame her. What happend to Leesha was just wrong.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad that the story is touching you on so many levels. From your comments, I picked up compassion for C, admiration for Bree, and anger about Leesha's situation. Did I miss anything?

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 20/11/10
Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 28.2

That was Hot!!

Author's Response:

*Big Grin*

Glad you liked that scene. Thanks for the short, but sweet comment! lol

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Date: 20/11/10
Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 29.1

Ceasar seriously needs to think before he talks. I think both are even they both took each other down a notch, had Subrina calling him Daddy :o)  I hope in the end Ceasar can forgive and understand why she is doing all of this.

Author's Response:

That is one of C's flaws - he sticks his foot in his mouth A LOT. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 21/11/10
Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 31.2

Hot chapter!!

Author's Response: Yep! tee-hee

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Date: 28/11/10