Penname: Cali2mt406 [Contact]

Real name: Pam (Paw)

Member Since: 13/09/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Born and raised in California, Until 2003 I moved to Montana!! Were  it is really cold I wonder often what I am doing here, other then the fact that it is beautiful here!! I love to read. Mostly romance novels. The authors on this board opened  my eyes to other storys beside the sappy ones I love and still will always read. However these lady's here write character with flaws and characters that love one antother dispite them. Lady's please continue to do your thing cause your doing it well.

 




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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 38]
Summary: Connie thought she wanted revenge on her cheating husband. She got more than she bargained for.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 995
Read Count: 9974
Published: 07/07/10
Updated: 07/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice

Author's Response: Thanks for the short, but sweet comment, Cali2mt406! :)

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/07/10

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

 


 


So much to do, so little time.


My (failed) attempt at the 1000 word fic challenge. 


Banner by curiouslyamused 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1060
Read Count: 2442
Published: 11/07/10
Updated: 11/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Please, Please, Please

What a cute story! I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/07/10

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 88]
Summary:

Noelle and Trey are two individuals looking for the same thing, in Washington D.C.'s highly competitive social scene, where power and money are king. Though they are both from different worlds they both want... An Unconditional Love.

    

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I would like to send a big shout out to JUNEBUG66 for all of her help getting this story off the ground. She was a literal Slave Driver. But because of her drive and commitment, I finally got the beginning parts off the ground. So THANK YOU,  Sister girl. For helping a newbie like me :0). Hope to do us proud.

Disclaimer:  All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9393
Read Count: 23420
Published: 14/07/10
Updated: 14/11/11


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Very nice start and I love the cast pictures. Sounds this is gong to be a really good read. Keep it coming

Author's Response:

THANK YOU Cali2mt406 for the review, 6 months ago. I kind of left it alone cause my brain was ceasing up on me. FORGIVE ME PLEASE. THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW THAT YOU LEFT.

I changed Trey, I wnated some other picture of him and could fine anything I like.  Seems someone else like him alot also.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/08/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Tandra and Kevin had a wonderful wedding.  Too bad the flu makes their honeymoon opposite of that when Tandra is sick.

Barely made it, but I did under 1,000 words....YAY!!!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Fluff
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: Tandra and Kevin's one shot adventures
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 944
Read Count: 3254
Published: 22/07/10
Updated: 22/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was really cute.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/07/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 30]
Summary:

 

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 People say that you’ll love only once in your life but that’s not true. Soul mates do not exist, true love doesn’t exist, I’m not even sure that love exists anymore. All I know is that love has hurt me. It has slapped me in my face, push me down a flight of stairs and worst of all, love has broken my heart.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 13035
Read Count: 2858
Published: 22/07/10
Updated: 24/07/10


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What a sweet update!

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Date: 25/07/10

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I can see Why Kyle would want to get the kids. To let children see such abuse is heart breaking. Would she still be with that fool if he didnt want to move on to someone else, but Like Tonya said the kids dont know him.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/07/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 51]
Summary:

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Wouldn't it be easier to just stay?

For Nene

Disclaimer/Credit: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Image(s) from gettyimages.com.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9465
Read Count: 17229
Published: 24/07/10
Updated: 10/09/10


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Stay

Whoo I was scared there for awhile, thought Noel was going to marry someone she didnt love. Nice story.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/09/10

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three: Forgive Me

Awe man did she still get married? Loved the update cant wait for more.

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Date: 08/08/10

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: You Glow

Very nice job. Cant wait for more.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/07/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 82]
Summary:

The Continuation of Possession  

Olivia is in love with a man that belongs to another. Sounds simple right? Well, he enjoys taking her to the height of lust, but can never remember a thing the next day. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Mystery, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 8814
Read Count: 17758
Published: 07/09/10
Updated: 03/10/11


Title: Chapter 4: Alive

Wow so Ethan thinks he is to damaged to love Olivia the way she should be loved? Or does he think he will be abusive? Great update.

Author's Response: he has a lot of shame and low self esteem. lets hope she can cure him of that.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/09/10

Title: Chapter 3: It all leads to this

Great start!! Keep it coming. Cant wait to see if she gets her man or moves on.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/09/10

Title: Chapter 7: The Breaking Point

Got all caught up!! This story gets better and better. So does Ethan have split personality or is he playing with Olivia. Love how Olivia told off Erica! Love the role reverse Olivia did with Ethan! Cant wait to read how that turns out. Ethan needs to dump Erica hes not in love with her, Its clear he has deep feelings for Olivia. Awesome update. Keep it coming.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 247]
Summary:

Lay Me Down

 

Life is hard. James knows this for a fact in which she picked a bad time to quit smoking. Working long days as a housekeeper and taking online college classes just adds more stress. With a troubled childhood and a dark past looming over her shoulder, James is untrusting of others therefore lets very few people into her life.

That is until she stumbles -- literally -- into Tristen, a computer software engineer who won't take 'no' for an answer. He's different, kind, and fun. And French. He wants to get to know her, but will her past drive him away like the others and if he does stay, can he endure damage of her skeletons tumbling out of the closet?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: City of Lights
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 63166
Read Count: 67188
Published: 22/09/10
Updated: 06/08/11


Title: Chapter 8: Caught Red Handed

Whoo I had to fan myself. That was freaking hot!! I loved the way Tristian threw James over his shoulder and carried her off!! So glad she admitted to Tristian that she had feelings for him and Tristian saying she was his woman to cute!!  Hmm wonder how James is going to take the I love you?I really missed this story. I love reading about these 2 and this chapter was well worth the wait. Awesome job. Cant wait for more.

Author's Response: When a man knows what he wants, he'll do just about anything to prove that he deserves it and get it. ;) Tristen is a perfect example. It isn't until now is he starting to display jealousness and ultra dominance, but that's because his feelings for her are bona fide. James' reaction to his confession will be touched in the next update. This story is halfway from being complete! Thank you. 

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/12/10

Title: Chapter 2: Life is hard

Like the Banter between James and Tristian! Great start. Please continue.

Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoy writing the dialogue between them though I thought it was going to be a little hard to write what a French guy would say and all, but I think I am getting somewhere, LOL. Update coming soon!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/09/10

Title: Chapter 5: Lesson Learned

Pearl and Trigger need to be delt with. They are lower then scum under someones shoe. Man how could a mother be so heartless to there own child. I love Tristian and I think he is who James needs. James should tell him everything and lean on him. What a emotional chapter. I loved it. This story is really gettng good.

Author's Response: Everyone knows a little about the histories of Melvin, Trigger, James, and Tristen, but I think the next chapter will touch on Pearl's background. Pearl and Trigger will get what they deserve in the end though for now all of the characters in the story have a purpose and those two's purposes aren't done quite yet. Tristen is an awesome character to write especially in his point of view! :) Even though he met James a total of three times now, he is really willing to protect her. Thanks for you review.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/10/10

Title: Chapter 6: Monsters, Songbirds, and Weaves

I just loved this chapter!! I hated that Tristian got up so bad and shot. I think it gave James the fire she needed to to do what she did to Pearl and I loved every min of it , I had to re-red it 3x :o) . Tristian got it bad for James, I hope he can hang in there until Trigger and Pearl go  . This story has been really fun to read, your doing and awesome job. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: It was kind of painful for me to write Tristen being beaten up and shot. :( But like you said, it was the fire that James needed to screw Pearl up and warn Trigger to stay away. Tristen does have it bad for James I gotta admit, LOL! Thanks for your review! 

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/10/10

Title: Chapter 9: Say It Again

So glad James admitted to her love for Tristian!! I love the banter between them both! Awesome update

Author's Response: LOL, thank you. It was a long time going but now that they've both admitted their love for each other, it's going to be a fun bumpy ride. Yes, their playful conversations with each other are fun to write! ;D

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Date: 23/12/10

Title: Chapter 10: Secrets and Complex Equations

I am Surprised that Tristian didnt tell James he was only there temperally. I like the direction this is going. James may need to excape to Paris to get away from her mom and Trigger. I just love babies so I love the whole baby thing. Awesome update. Look forward to reading more.

Author's Response:

He probably should have in the beginning, but he was too busy courting her. Time passes by so quickly when you're falling in love, LOL. I love babies too and this is going to be a fun journey because we all know that Tristen has some nurturing skills from helping raise his niece, but James do not have the slightest idea of what it takes to be a mother considering her mother wasn't really a mother to her. 

 

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/12/10

Title: Chapter 11: First Comes Love Then Comes ... Baby?

So glad to read an update! I missed this story. Glad James is going with Tristian.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I apologize for not updating soon enough. :)

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/04/11

Title: Lay Me Down

That chapter was short but very powerful. I hope the James is ok as well as the baby. Dang James has had a hard life. Awesome chapters.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I know the chapter is short, but I wanted it to pack enough punch to last until the next update because so much will go down! :) Thank you.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/04/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 923]
Summary:

They messed with the wrong woman this time!

FBI agent Subrina Rayelle is on a mission to take down the people that forced her best friend Leesha into prostitution and then beat her to death when she tried to escape.

Refusing to even cry one tear of grief for Leesha until all guilty parties are brought to justice, Subrina sets her sights on Nevada where the crime took place. If only she hadn’t met her soul-mate on this mission – a beloved nephew to the leaders of the suspected prostitution ring and who may also be among the guilty parties himself. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 210
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3441
Read Count: 79606
Published: 09/10/10
Updated: 09/04/11


Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 31.1

Subrina doesnt stand a chance!! That man is to sexy to refuse.

Author's Response:

No she doesn't stand a chance with C. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

 

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/11/10

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 7

Ricky is in for it now! Subrina is going to get his butt. Cant wait to see what happens next!!

Author's Response:

Oh Ricky is definitely on Subrina's hit list. She's gonna get up in him for sure!

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/10/10

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3

Glad to see what will be another great story by you. Love the cast.You do annoying characters so well. The twins my goodness. Salethia is a trip. I hope Leesha wakes up about Ricky before its to late. If not Subrina will be there for her. Cant wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Glad to see you following along with this latest story, Cali2mt406. You always leave such great comments. As for me writing annoying characters so well, that might have something to do with growing up in a large family. My siblings and I annoyed each other ALL the time. tee-hee.

Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/10/10

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 12.3

That kiss was hotness!! Showed Topaz not to mess with her. After laying that kiss on Caesar, Subrina better watch out he is going to be after her. Look forward to the chase.

Author's Response:

You're so right about Caesar coming after Subrina. It's on now.

Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/10/10

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 5.2

Glad Leesha knows Ricky's true colors. To bad she had to get hurt!! Yes I notice the freak from the other story should have know it was him when it said there was a man that loved it rough! Ricky is worse then I thought.

Author's Response:

So you DO remember Crazy Red from Treachery Among Diamonds. I hated him out of all my other characters/villians. There's another villian that comes in 2nd on my hate list in this new story. You'll see who he is soon enough.

Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/10/10