Penname: pmgayles [Contact]

Real name: Pam gayles

Member Since: 10/10/09

Membership status: Member

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I just love to read.




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[Reviews - 43]
Summary:

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Tom and Christina fight there way back to each other and do their best to over come a few obstacles that are thrown into their path.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Christina Hawthorne
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 84299
Read Count: 6731
Published: 19/09/11
Updated: 02/11/11


Title: Chapter 8: The Truth Will Hurt Us Both - Torn but not completely apart

Tom you are so wrong and stupid.  Christina made a mistake two years and has since tried her best to make your marriage work.  SHe even faced a difficult pregnancy and you repay her by cheating.  I had a bad feeling when she was introduced into the story.  I was hoping that Tom would remember what it felt like to be cheated on, but he still fell for the bannana in the tale pipe.  He needs that tell ho that it's over and stay away from her.  She needs to get fired!!!  Or better run over by a mack truck!!  Christina and Tom are both stupid thus they are both perfect for each other!!   Kudos I love this chapter even though it pissed me off!!!   Be a man Tom!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 22/09/11

Title: Chapter 9: Temptation Runs Deep - Moment of Turth

Why oh why can't these get it right?  Tom, why couldn't you just talk to Christina after the kids birrthday party?  That is an experience as a father that you will not back.  Your stupidity is going to cost you your family.  When you will you two get it together?  Will get my HEA?  I hope that that ho didn't get pregnant, that would destroy Tom and Christina!!!  These characters are killing me!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 23/09/11

Title: Chapter 10: His Dirty Little Secret - All the wrong decisions

I knew that that bitch was trying to get pregnant by Tom and he dumb self fell into her trap.  He needs to make sure that she is really pregnant and that the baby is really his.  I wouldn't put it past her to inseminate herself with sperm from another man to pass it off as Tom's.  HOw much can their relationship take before it is demaged irrepairably?  I am still pulling for these two deeplu flawed people.  What will it take to get rid of Jessica? Have her die in a accident of some sort after her lie is discovered.  I know that there is somthing fishy about this pregnancy, Tom has no memory of that evening.  That doesn't come from simply being drunk.  I think Jessica drugged him after getting him back to her place.  That ho makes my teeth and ass itch!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 24/09/11

Title: Chapter 11: Knowing your Boundaries - An unexpected visit

FIrst I need to say that that Jessica bitch is crazy, I mean the type of crazy that would require institutionalization for eons.  But she is in complete control of facialities and should be placed under the jail.  I still think that she's either faking a pregnancy or the baby is someone elses.  On to the good stuff I am so glad that Tom followed her to Virginia Beach, she would have kept on avoiding and nothing would have solved.  I am glad that she found it her heart to forgive and work on their relationship again.  I was so happy that she said that she wants them to leave Richmond as a family.

Jessica makes my teeth itch, please kill her off!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 27/09/11

Title: Chapter 11: Knowing your Boundaries - An unexpected visit

YOu didn't mention that Jessica was wearing any gloves, so hopefully if the Crime Scene officers did there job they would print the knives and the broken glass from the back door.  I wonder how many other men has that heifer stalked and harrassed?

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Date: 27/09/11

Title: Chapter 12: Secerets Unraveled - If i knew then what i know now

For such educated people they make some dumb decisions.  When detective Le'Shay mentioned Jessica they should have told him about Tom's affairs and Jessica's subsequent pregnancy.  I don't understand why they didn't tell it, oh why why didn't they tell the police about that letter?  Hello when they ho got pregnant you didn't sleeping with after having a drink, so why would you drink something else in her presence?   My teeth are itching here!!!  I can't wait to read more, I hope that this ends with the death of Jessica and her goons!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 28/09/11

Title: Chapter 13: The Calm Before The Storm - When danger becomes worse

Wow, I can't believe that she didn't call the detective when she found out that Tom didn't come back to work.  I am so pissed at Christina, they both deserve each other.  I hope that they put a tail on her, and I not believing that Jessica is pregnant.  I do know that she is crazy and that the detectives will need to watch her like a hawk. I want her so dead.

I read one of the other comments by another reader and she is write this story would be a better read if it were reformatted.  It is hard to follow as it's typed now, I found myself rereading lines over and over again, it's starting to really irritate my eyes.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 29/09/11

Title: Chapter 14: Missing in Plain Sight - A mile in her shoes

I am so glad that Brenda had enough sense to call the Detective LeShay about the photos and map to find Tom.  DId the police tell Christina not to alert to hospital to Tom's disappearance?  When are they going to put out an APB on Jessica?  The know that it's her, so what is the hold up?  The format is a lttle bit betterand I was able to follow the flow of the story better.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 01/10/11

Title: Chapter 15: Who Stole the Cookie, Caught Red Handed - Only on prime time

Yes they got Jessica, that ho dersserves to spend the rest of her life in prison.  I can't wait for them to find out that she isn't pregnant.  I know that that crazy ho was lying!!  Another great chapter.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 03/10/11

Title: Chapter 16: Sweet Revenge Lies With You - There Are Other Ways for Him Say I Love You

Wow, Tomif angry with himself for falling for Jessica.  That was your choice Tom, not the hospital staff.  Not Christiana's, just you felt ignored you made the decision to begina relationship with Jessica.  Get help Tom, before you Christina too far.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 10/10/11

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 96]
Summary:

 

 

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Augustus and his Sydney

 

Check out the BrownStone

http://cyncyn333.blogspot.com/p/mineaugustuss-and-sydneys-brownstone.html



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10715
Read Count: 23659
Published: 29/09/11
Updated: 16/10/11


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5

Sydney Augustus is still the same just more special.  I need more of this story please update!

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Date: 06/12/13

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I love any story that cast J Hud as the female lead.   I am loving Augustus and Sydney, they are so in love with each other.  So what them so long to acknowledge there feelings.  Who is the crazy ho Jessica, were she and Augustus married?  Me likey, please continue!!



Author's Response:

Thank you soo much for the review and yes lol Jessica is a ho ...working on chapter 2 right now it's going to be from Augustus's point of view, hopefully i will have the answers to your questions in that chapter i hope to have it out tonight if not first thing in the morning thank you and keep an eye out for chapter 2

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 29/09/11

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Thank God he was on using the ho for sex, to bad that she doesn't know the difference!!  I love Augustus, so he has had feelings for Sydney for 7 years and she has been feeling him as well.  Alright then, bring on the smoking hot sex!!!  Such a wonderful story!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 30/09/11

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Chapter 3 was sexing as hell!!!  I had to fan myself!!!

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Date: 30/09/11

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

This was so awesome!!  I had not ideal that this was going to be a shifter story.  I just thought that beast was the name for his slong!!  I love it!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 01/10/11

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

That was hot!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 10/10/11

Title: Chapter 6: author's note

OKay Cyn, I am waiting patiently!!



Author's Response:

i'm sooo sorry ..i hope to have next chappie up soon cyn~

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 10/10/11

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5

I love it Augustus is the man!!!  Sydney, you love Augustus so just embrace all of him.  Hell you have had the hotest sex of your life with Augustus.  Give your relationship a chance, he is all that you have.  Accept his love and allow him to love you his way!!!

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Date: 16/10/11

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

When Sloan Cassidy is given the opportunity to work as an assistant to a world renowned fashion photographer in New York City her dreams of becoming a supermodel finally feel within her reach.  Dean Delucia has burned through ten personal assistants in three months and the second he lays eyes on the cheery Sloan Cassidy he is sure she won't make it to the end of the day.  As a favor to his brother he gives her the job, anyway, and unwittingly opens a door he swore he would never open again.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 8440
Read Count: 6104
Published: 05/10/11
Updated: 06/10/11


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story is hilarious I laughed out loud!!  I hope that Dean gives Sloan a second chance.  The fire wasn't her fault it was yours Dean!!  I can't wait to read more.  Most excellent!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 05/10/11

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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

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Two broken hearts...

Lots of alcohol...

...and the city that never sleeps.


What if after a night of drowning your sorrows, you woke up married to Hollywood's Most Eligible Bachelor?  Well, that's what happened to Jackie Smith.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 11222
Read Count: 11678
Published: 19/10/11
Updated: 09/11/11


Title: Chapter 3: Two

Brooke is a hot mess but Sam has got her number.  I love those two!!  I love how Sam introduces the mister to his missus!!  Fabulous!!!  Please keep it coming.

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Date: 22/10/11

Title: Chapter 5: Four

I have so been waiting on the update for this story, and I so happy.  Color me, thrilled!!!  Sam and Brooke are so hilarious and Dolly she had me hurting myself laughing!!!  I can't wait to see the feelings develope.  There is obviously a connection between these two, it wasn't just the alcohol.  The alcohol made them each receptive to each other.  I hope that they don't let past hurts get in the way of what they are feeling!!  Ryker never loved Jackie and neither did Jenna love you Jordan.  YOu are both with the person that was meant for you, embrace it and enjoy!!  You have made my day!!!  Hooty Hoo!!!

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Date: 09/11/11

Title: Chapter 4: Three

Brooke is a hot mess, now Jackie getting drunk and marrying is a good thing because it's Jordan Armstrong.  The heifer is off her rocker.  Those to need to sit down and talk.   Jordan needs to realize that he and Jenna (the ho) aren't meant to be.  I am truly hooked on this story!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 23/10/11

Title: Chapter 2: The Cast

I am not normally a fan of stories where Beyonce is casted as the lead character but I like this story.  Ryker is fine!!! I am curious to know how the newlyweds will meet again. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 19/10/11

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 185]
Summary:

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One night, an accident and seven years that never happened. At least, he doesn't remember them happening. 

 

*Banner by me, carolinaheart (it's my first try).

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35
Completed:Yes
Word count: 75229
Read Count: 169023
Published: 29/10/11
Updated: 23/12/11


Title: Chapter 26: 24 and counting

The wedding is almost here, and I am so glad.  I wonder did Scott being in that accident allow her to see that if he passed away without having children with her that all she would of him are her memories.  I hope so, because Scott deserves to be a daddy.  I know that she said that she would be have one child but I don't believe her.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 17/11/11

Title: Chapter 6: February 14

Deidre give Scott a break!!  Scott is having a rough time and he doesn't deserve you just using him for drinks.  It's like you are charging him to be your friend. That sucks Deidre!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 01/11/11