Penname: pmgayles [Contact]

Real name: Pam gayles

Member Since: 10/10/09

Membership status: Member

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I just love to read.




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My Corrina, My Love by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 84]
Summary:

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Corrina Corrina told from both Manny and Corrina's point of view.  The first eight chapters follow the movie, the last twelve chapters are my creation and tells what happened after the movie ends.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners.  The original characters and plots are the property of the author. No copyright infringement intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:Yes
Word count: 69822
Read Count: 23167
Published: 30/10/11
Updated: 14/12/11

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Manny's Temptation

That was sexy. but I just can't Whoopie as Corina though.  LOl



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I've got to give Whoopi her due.  Hollywood loved her, but could never see her in a romantic role because she didn't meet the standards of beauty set by them.   I loved Corrina, because they did give her a try even though they still were'nt comfortable.  In fact, Ray really didn't kiss her on the lips in the love scene they just made it look that way.  That is why he kissed her point blank on the view because they wouldn't allow it in the movie (kisses on the cheek only).  Hollywood's mouth hit the floor when Patrick Swayse said that if he wasn't already married, he'd go after Whoopie and then he kissed her point blank!  Hollywood couldn't see her as sexy, but apparently plenty of men did!  LOL

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 31/10/11
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Manny's Honeymoon

That was sexy, Corrina let go anf just love your man and allow your man to love you his way.  Manny is not freak he just loves sex with the woman that he loves and that woman is you.  Just enjoy the ride!!!!

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Date: 09/11/11
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Corrina's Honeymoon

Lay it on her Manny!!  Make her speak in tongues!!!  Corrina don't listen to your sister Jervina anymore.  Corrina is about to experience sexual freedom and mind blowing sex, Whoo-Hoo!!!  Corrina ride that cowboy!!



Author's Response:

LOL  I think Jevina's voice faded in the background.  Jevina? Uh, Jevina who? 

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Date: 09/11/11
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Corrina's Secret

This is one of my favorite movies!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it.  It's one of my favorites also.  I'm updating this. I wrote it in 2009.  The first ten chapters follow the story and the last ten are my creation.  I will add more chapters tomorrow.

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Date: 30/10/11
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Corrina's Proposition

Jenny is evil, and I hope that Corrina tells Manny about their run in.  Jenny Manny does not want you, so let the man be.  I hope that Manny is ready to deal with the hate that they will encounter.  Thanks for another great update, Brenda.

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Date: 01/11/11
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Wedding Day

I give this two thumbs up!!  Please continue with honeymoon!!



Author's Response:

Oh it's coming....

Thanks for the review.

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Date: 04/11/11
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Corrina's Fear

Harold is going to allow himself to be used by Jenny.  I love that he lied to her about being divorced.  I really want Jenny to sleep with Harold and then find out that he is still married.  I want her humiliated and gossiped about by her so called friends.  Harold I just want be beaten with an inch of his life by Manny.  I love the Mrs. Singleton is on Corrina's side.  I can't wait for Jenny to find out, it will be explosive!!  Awesome!!!



Author's Response:

LOL   I only have two more chapters written, but I may continue this after I update my other stories.  LOL  the thought of Jenny being humiliate is very tempting...

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Date: 03/11/11
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Manny's Cousin Harold

I don't like Manny's cousin Harold!!!!!!!

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Date: 03/11/11
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Corrina's Confrontation

That racist heifer Jenny is on crazy B!!!    Why is it any of her business who Corrina is marrying or who Manny is involved with?  I don't believe that Corrina ever had good sex, Manny is about to blow her mind and her back out!!!



Author's Response:

Jenny is a woman scorned.  She can't accept the fact that Corrina won out over her.  She should move on, but she is a troublemaker.

No,Corrina never had good sex, but she's about to fnd out and yes, Manny will blow her mind.  When I wrote this in 2009, I stopped at the wedding due to lack of interest.  I didn't write the wedding night, but now I'm having second thoughts.  LOL

Thanks for the review!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 02/11/11
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 New Beginnings

That was awesome, I love this story!!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: 14/12/11
Retired
An Office Affair by Pen to Paper
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 61]
Summary:

James Derrien and Aubrey Lowry were two good friends in law school.  He was a privileged white frat boy and she was a hardworking black chubby girl from a broken home. They were always reminded that their friendship was unusual but it didn’t matter because the relationship had always been safe. When the friendship turned no longer safe, James and Aubrey realized that the consequences were lifechanging.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5235
Read Count: 10014
Published: 02/11/11
Updated: 04/11/11

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Title: Chapter 4: You Can Run But You Can't Hide...

 Please update, I really miss this story!

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Date: 23/08/14
Title: Chapter 4: You Can Run But You Can't Hide...

Aubrey is still stuck on stupid and glued to dumb, so James won't stand a chance.  Aubrey is dumb, dumb, ditty!!!  There is no words to describe the level of Heather's stupidty.  There is hope for Aubrey because her stupidty is based on being a sister living in America, Heather was deprived of oxygen for a very long time.  Heather is hopeless!!  I love this story!!

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Date: 04/11/11
Title: Chapter 2: Everything has Changed

Will you post cast pictures?

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Date: 02/11/11
Title: Chapter 2: Everything has Changed

Aubrey, is tripping!!  That kiss and her reaction to it scared so bad she's running away.    James what are going to do?  Are you going to let her run away or fight for woman?  I sure that he fights, and he should fight dirty.  Aubrey you're a punk!!!!

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Date: 02/11/11
Just Some Harmless Flirting by nickysparks
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary: It started out has a little harmless flirting, I never thought anything major with happen. After all Marcus was just a boy that I met at camp, I didn’t plan on seeing him again. But little did I know he would be the guy who changed the rest of my life.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1371
Read Count: 1054
Published: 05/11/11
Updated: 05/11/11

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

More please!!!

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Date: 05/11/11
American Horror Affair by PriscillaPal
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 37]
Summary:

Christian and Michelle Troy/Ben Harmon

Christian and Michelle Troy's marriage is already in deep trouble by the time they move into the 'American Horror' murder house. And unfortunately for Christian, Dr. Ben Harmon has taken a liking to Michelle-professionally and personally.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Michelle Landau
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Michelle/Christian (Nip/Tuck)
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43177
Read Count: 93323
Published: 25/11/11
Updated: 27/12/11

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Still trying to understand why Michelle hasn't done a search on the past owners of that house.  There are just too many strange occurrences for not to even be curious.  I don't want anything to happen to Wilbur because his parents are stupid.  Who is this Tate fool and why are they scared of him?  They are all dead now so he can't really be that powerful.  Michelle frustrates me!!!!

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Date: 03/12/11
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Michelle you have lost your mind!!!  Constance is crazy and dying didn't help cure her.

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Date: 19/12/11
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This story is really getting crazy!!!

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Date: 18/12/11
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This story didn't end like I thought it would, Michelle is still stupid.  When she and Sean left that house the first time she should have stayed gone, then the babies would have still been alive.  Now she's married to another rich man.  I am wondering is she capable of love.  Why did she send Wilbur away to boarding school>  I don't like her at all, she should have died!!!

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Date: 27/12/11
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow,  Ben sure made his move fast.  I am still trying to understand why Michelle is trying to make this farce of marriage work with a man ho?  He can't keep it in his pants, Michelle take your son and leave.  Please!!!

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Date: 28/11/11
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I am still stuck on the fact that they are still living in this house.  I hope that nothing happens to Wilbur because of his parents stupidty.   Awesome!!!

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Date: 14/12/11
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I honestly don't understand why Michelle is trying to make her marriage work with Christian who can't seem to keep his pecker in his pants.  Why would he invite the woman that his wife caught him cheating with to thier new home.  I am rooting for Michelle and Wilbur to come out of this alive.  I could less about any to the rest, whether they are living or deceased!!!  Thank you for the update!

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Date: 26/11/11
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh, why must everyone in this story be stupid?  Why would you move into a house and not do any research on previous owners?  I feel so bad that Matt died, why couldn't that ho Julia die?  That lying tramp wouldn't be missed!!!  Thanks for the update!!

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Date: 05/12/11
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

THe only person that I like is this is Wilbur, so please protect the baby.  Now that Michelle knows the truth about that house, why is she still there?  Is she stuck on stupid and glued to dumb?  I can't wait to read more!!

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Date: 11/12/11
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I don't know what to say about these people, but Michelle is so stupid.  As soon as all that strange mess started happening I would have been gone, as a matter catching my husband in bed with his ex would have been the end of our marriage.  Julia I wanted dead. but not Sean.  Now Christain is dead because of Michelle's stupid mistake.  This is not going to be a happy ending!!!

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Date: 24/12/11