Penname: Dimples [Contact]

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Member Since: 19/10/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

34 Y.O. Navy wife with one daughter.

I have been with the love of my life for 15 years and we have been married for 13 years.

My 4 Y.O. daughter is really 40 but trapped in a little girl body.

I love I/R stories because they speak to me because my marriage is I/R.

I have been read I/R for some time and decided to give it a try.




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Island Interlude by Junebug66
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 222]
Summary:

Island Interlude is the story of Gabrielle Hall, a young woman who teaches physical education and K.C. Whitfield an architect who comes to the fictional island of St. Sebastian. They meet and sparks fly but K.C. isn't who he seems and Gabrielle must decide if she can live with who he really is.    

island interlude                

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.  



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:No
Word count: 97729
Read Count: 235427
Published: 07/05/10
Updated: 01/02/11

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Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I just thought of something with his mother thing. If it wasn't rape. You said his mom is really smart did that guy use her to cheat on some school exams and she not know about it. That was just another one of my guesses.

As for the skank Tiffani she is going to be trouble. I can't remember if he told Gabrielle about her or not. Either way I think he should have told her by now. I hope Rielle can see through her act she is about to put on. Yeah she needs a good beatdown before Gabrille send her on her way.

That B had some nerve calling KC a freak because of his size. He can't help it that he is blessed in the groin area and had the nerve to call him gay.



Author's Response:

Hi Dimples, that's an interesting guess. Tiffani is trouble but nothing our girl can't deal with cause she's got the man. Some of us are blessed more abundantly than others and we just have to accept ourselves. She's just jealous! Thank you for reading and stay tuned.

 

 

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed
Date: 30/07/10
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I don't think Rielle will rat Fredrika out. Reille is deep into family and she knows Fredrika likes her because she said so but it will hurt her for a little while that Fredrike said she wasn't the type of woman she wanted with her son before meeting her.

Author's Response: Hi Dimples, no I don't think she will snitch either. We will see if Frederika appreciates it. I appreciate your reading and reviewing and I will update tomorrow. Thank you.

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed
Date: 29/08/10
Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

See people like Marus need to mind their own business if they don't know the whole story. With his view she should just get over it because KC is rich and treat her like a Queen makes me want to reach through the computer and punch him in the face.

I would love for Gabrielle's brother to develop a relationship with KC sister. That would be awesome to have KC go through what he is going through with them sleeping together. I know waaaayyyyyy off topic, but it still will be cool.



Author's Response: Hello Dimples. As I said to Bayoumomma I can see both sides of this situation. How would K.C. take it if the shoe was on the other foot? It would be interesting to see. Chris and Dani hmmm you know that idea has been running around every since Rielle and K.C. came off the yacht. Not off topic believe me. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed
Date: 08/10/10
Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Right now I think Reille have been trying to find a reason to push KC away since the beginnning of their relationship. She now have found it. She is scared because she has never loved or been in a relationship this deep before.

When she gets home I hope her freinds and family can help her see, what she is trying to do is wrong.



Author's Response:

Hey Dimples, Thanks for hanging tough with me.

Rielle's brain has found an out but her heart and body are on a different path. She is fighting a losing battle against love though.

Her Mom is already bing the voice of reason and Frederika being the lady that she was helped too. She'll be doing a lot of thinking on that long, lonely plane ride home and even though she did a good thing in telling him to support his Mom it was hard.

Thank you for reading, and reviewing I appreciate it.

 

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Date: 10/12/10
Lay Me Down by Missus James
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 247]
Summary:

Lay Me Down

 

Life is hard. James knows this for a fact in which she picked a bad time to quit smoking. Working long days as a housekeeper and taking online college classes just adds more stress. With a troubled childhood and a dark past looming over her shoulder, James is untrusting of others therefore lets very few people into her life.

That is until she stumbles -- literally -- into Tristen, a computer software engineer who won't take 'no' for an answer. He's different, kind, and fun. And French. He wants to get to know her, but will her past drive him away like the others and if he does stay, can he endure damage of her skeletons tumbling out of the closet?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: City of Lights
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 63166
Read Count: 67191
Published: 22/09/10
Updated: 06/08/11

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Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Credits

I like this story so far. I like James dry sense of humor. I already can't stand Pearl and I don't know what she did to James. As for pearl's man Charles I have a feeling he want James living with them so he can make a move on her and try to get her to take her mother's place in the bedroom.

I think Tristen is just what James need in her life, she just doesn't know it yet.



Author's Response: The whole situation between James, Charles, and Pearl will be hinted in chapter two, but further explained in future chapters. I agree with you that Tristen is exactly what she needs in her life, but she is afraid that if she lets someone into her life, they will take off running once they find out about her past. Thank you for your review! :)

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed
Date: 23/09/10
Title: Chapter 4: Why a Songbird Sings

So,basiclly Trigger is a product of a cycle. Don't get me wrong that don't excuse him for any of his actions. I broke the cycle in my family of having kids in my teens and dropping out of school. TY for the family history. Marvin do your thing to get rid of the to succibus. I don't think he should wait for James to ask, like the old Nike saying go: Just Do It.

Yeah James is going to have to tell Tristen about her past before he get hurt. She has to know that Trigger will go after him. All I hope is Tristen will be the man I think he is and not judge her for something that her so called mother and boyfriend made her do.



Author's Response: Wow, that's really inspiring! There has been a few cycles in my family that I broke as well, so I understand where you are coming from. Marvin might just take the situation into his own hands and 'take care' of Trigger. As for James, she is definitely going to have to tell Tristen about her past, but telling someone her past is like exposing a piece of her that she preferred to be shut off from the world. Thanks for your review!

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed
Date: 04/10/10
Title: Chapter 3: Snowball's Chance in Hell

I have a feeling she is going to have to get both Trigger and for mother(I use that term loosely) put in jail for life to get away from them and live the life she want.

I think she needs a new start with Tristen in Paris after all this is over.

I am waiting for Tristen ex to come to the US and TRY to cause some kind of trouble and I wonder if her uncle know she cheated on him because I have a feeling he didn't tell him because Tristen seems like a nice guy and wouldn't want her uncle to think bad of her.

I like the scene leading to the kisss as well as the kiss.

I have a feeling that place she told him to meet her is her freind's club and he will geet to see her sing. By the way what is James' major.



Author's Response: I've been debating whether or not Tristen's ex should come visit him and try to make amends, but if I were to do that she wouldn't come until much later in the story as I want to develop Tristen and James' relationship further. As for James' major, she is just giving a bachelor in arts for the moment though most likely she will change it. Thanks for your review!

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed
Date: 27/09/10
Big Girls Won't Cry by Suprina Frazier
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 923]
Summary:

They messed with the wrong woman this time!

FBI agent Subrina Rayelle is on a mission to take down the people that forced her best friend Leesha into prostitution and then beat her to death when she tried to escape.

Refusing to even cry one tear of grief for Leesha until all guilty parties are brought to justice, Subrina sets her sights on Nevada where the crime took place. If only she hadn’t met her soul-mate on this mission – a beloved nephew to the leaders of the suspected prostitution ring and who may also be among the guilty parties himself. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 210
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3441
Read Count: 79610
Published: 09/10/10
Updated: 09/04/11

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Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 68.5

Whoa Rae is beyond evil. I don't like Ricky but at les he has a chance of not having HIV.

Don't get me wrong I want him to sweat it out for the six week western blot test. In this time I want him to take a good look at his life and change it for the better.

Blaine is never going to change and I want him under the jail never to be seen again.

I hope Vicki is Ok.



Author's Response:

I don't wish any kind of sickness/disease upon anyone either, but unfortunately some folks sow into certain things (hint-hint).

Thanks for commenting, Dimples!

Reviewer: Dimples Signed
Date: 05/02/11
Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 68.3

I don't want him to beat Ricky because whatever Rae got I have a feeling he has it, because I still don't think they used a condom. So I don'r want C man anywhere near his blood.

I do think he should show Ricky the tape because he would leave Bree and C man alone because he don't want to be disowned by C man's aunt.

Rea is going to try to go back to Ricky and he is going to dump her behind so fast her head will spin. That is when her evil behind is going to delight in telling him she give him something that he will be carrying around like luggage for the rest of his life.

Jon is finally coming out of his Ricky induced high. He is finally starting to see he needs to stop huff up Ricky's @$$.



Author's Response:

Dimples, I like that you're thinking ahead about C's safety in case Ricky got that package.

As for Jon, we'll see how clear his head gets.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Dimples Signed
Date: 04/02/11
Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 68.2

So Rae's ex have HIV/AIDS, Herpes, Hep what? You can tell it is something you carry around like luggage and can pass on. OMG she had sex with Ricky, did he use a condom.......Dum dum dummmmmm

That is right Ceaser good for you not trusting her.



Author's Response:

Stay tuned, you'll see what Rae has. And yes, Ricky was so dumb for getting involved with her again on any level.

Thanks for commenting!



Author's Response:

Stay tuned, you'll see what Rae has. And yes, Ricky was so dumb for getting involved with her again on any level.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Dimples Signed
Date: 03/02/11
Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 75.2

I feel you Pmgayles.

As for his so called father family call they have some real nerve to all of a sudden remember he has another kid.

C man will help becuase that is the kind of guy he is. Especially since he didn't forgive Rae and now she is gone he will blame himself. 



Author's Response:

You're on point with your assessments, Dimples. Very sharp!

Thank for commenting!

Reviewer: Dimples Signed
Date: 27/02/11
Title: Chapter 207: Chapter 93

C stop being a big baby. I mean really be the man your mother raised you to be.

I wonder if Leesha is not saying yes until she knows Bree and C are back together again. I have a feeling she is blaming herself for the break up.

I know Ms Avolon is choppin at the bit with excitement about being a grandma. She seems like the type of person who loves to brag about becoming a grandma.



Author's Response:

He really is being a big baby. As for Leesha, you're on the right road about her (spoiler). And yes, Avalon is very excited about being a grandma. She's been itching to talk openly about it for months. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

 

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed
Date: 08/04/11
Title: Chapter 208: Chapter 94.1

All of us is like pick up the phone.

Bree is getting everything she wants if she would just pick up the darn phone.



Author's Response:

lol. Yes, everything is within her grasp right now and she doesn't even know it.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Dimples Signed
Date: 08/04/11
Retired
Heartbreaker by SeoulSinger
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 335]
Summary:

Kwan is one fifth of Korea's most popular idol group, and a dedicated, card carrying heartbreaker. But what happens when he is confronted with the girl from his past? the one that got away? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 65707
Read Count: 69302
Published: 06/12/10
Updated: 15/11/11

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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I think Soup can and Dee are so cute. I not sure if I will like her cousin when she find out who Kwan is. I have a feeling she will have case of sour grapes. I really believe she was going to have a try at Kwan when she said it on the plane.

I still want to get rid of Jinyung partner. So I was hoping you could give Jinyung his own story (please please please with sugar on top). By the end of the story I want his partner broke. He just lose everything he hold as important (the mighty dollar) all because of his closed mind opinoin of the woman that T4L date.

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed
Date: 08/12/10
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

That update was worth the wait.

Audra needs to get herself together and stop trying to push Kwan away. She needs to tell him how she feels soon. I hope she is on birth control because that love scene was to hot to not have planted Kwan's seed.

As for Kibum please don't Scracth Rochelle because I like her but I do agree maybe a revamp with Kibum character is in order to make the story flow the way you want.

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed
Date: 30/01/11
Silent Assassin by Renee Banks
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

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FBI Special Agent Adele Granger is in search of her father's killer. She will stop at nothing to see this person brought to justice, so she follows the clues half way around the world against the better judgement of her family. Revenge is her only guiding force and nothing will keep her from finding out the truth; even if that means putting her driver, the ever-content Ryuu Abe, in harms way. Her mission starts out simple enough, but she soon discovers the Land of the Rising Sun plays by its own rules.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Renee Banks. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9570
Read Count: 2206
Published: 07/12/10
Updated: 07/12/10

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Title: Chapter 4: The Merciful One

Mommy dearest is about to turn her evil @$$ daughter over to the police or to another family to do her dirty work for her.

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Date: 07/12/10
Three's A Crowd by Valhalla
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 61]
Summary:

 

Just when Georgina Akande thought she had rid herself of her creepy ex-fiance, he strolls back into her life in the worst way possible.

A misguided attempt to assert herself leads to some painful home truths, but, also, the opportunity to grow and love again.



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Love Is...
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 37015
Read Count: 8026
Published: 18/01/11
Updated: 31/05/11

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Title: Chapter 7: Holier Than Thou

I always thought Hulk and Rach had a thing for each other by the way they were always fightings.

Is her sister on drugs or something. The she camein like nothing happened between them. Giving out invites to a wedding that no one in that house will be going to. That smirk she gave when they saw her ring. you know I give her marriage 2 years tops. in the first year she will catch him cheating but will hung in there for another year because she don't want Geoge to know she was right about Pat. Does Pat freind has a thing for Celeste. Only ask by the way he reacted to Pat talk about all the stuff about Celeste and when he told her he would make sure she didn't get hurt.

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed
Date: 06/02/11
Title: Chapter 4: Murphy's Law

I knew this was coming. I saw it a mile away. That jackass is going to use anything to stay in George life even her sister.

I have a feeling her mother is pleased as pounch.

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed
Date: 21/01/11
Play Date by mocasoul
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 62]
Summary:

 

Panther Williams hated her life as a celebrity kid. She knew some people would kill to have her place and her money, but it wasn’t the glitz and glamour people always thought it was. She was basically 17 being treated like she was 7 and in the limelight of her parents career when she was trying to come out with her own career. Yeah, she would kill to have an ordinary life.

 

She yearns for that ordinary life more when her parents set her up with two of the wealthiest siblings in Hollywood, the Worthington duo Prima and Rider, in order to get their father to invest in her father's production company.  She overhears something she shouldn't have and has to deal with the duo and being a pawn in a twisted game.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Femslash, Incest , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 12645
Read Count: 15023
Published: 17/04/11
Updated: 30/08/11

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

All I got to say for the chap is EEEEEWWWWWW.

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed
Date: 24/04/11