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Summary:

 

 

Miss. Innocent meets Mr. Dangerous.

Who says love has to be soft and gentle?

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Caution is an original work of fiction written by C.C. Please do not copy and paste this story to any other websites. 

 

Beautiful banner by: The Queen, Missus James!!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: La Famiglia
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 165
Read Count: 136397
Published: 27/11/10
Updated: 21/06/11


Title: Chapter 14: Make Believe or Is It Real?

I really loved this chapter.  This to me represent the begining of something new.  When you experience something that you didnt think could happen but it just creep up on you and hit you wham. 

Kam is realizing that even though that Gian started out as a jerk he is growing on her she gave him a chance without realizing that she let him in. 

For Gian in the back of his mind he is thinking that this is still a bet and he is fulfilling his end of it.  But somewhere within him Kam is starting to push in and shed a little light in a corner and he is becoming hoo, but he is trying to stay true to himself but that light is giving way to Kam. 

I like what Tony said about when she was with Lamar she was there for then and now Gianni makes her feel like a Woman and not a Little girl.  It is time for a new chapter in her life and Gian is it. 



Author's Response: You nailed it! :)

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/10

Title: Chapter 16: Lies

Lamar aint nothing like a dirty old dog.  He had the nerve to call Gianni trash.  He don't know gramps and he done mess with the wrong family.  It is definitely to take out the trash. 

Kam is going to need Gianni like never before and I hope that he really come through. This whole story is going to be the make and break between them not the lies but the press.  As we see in this chapter that Gianni is trying to get use to the press hounding him.  



Author's Response: Lol, god help us all!

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/12/10

Title: Chapter 32: Happy Endings?

Kam has to Woman up and take the Pregger test.  It is time to lay all cards on the table because the longer she wait the more doubt sets in.  Gianni has been there for her through out this whole mess and now it is time to seperate man from the boys.  Gian is a man and not a boy and ready for pebbles. 

I like in the insight into Nick and Renee now we see a little of her character and why she is always so strong and kinda forceful with her family.  She always wants to protect her family and always be on time before trouble goes down.  

As for Lamar he thought he getting off easy but CODE Blue can find you in Prison.  Don't drop the soap.  



Author's Response:

LMFAO @ DON'T DROP THE SOAP!!!!!!!!!!

But you are so right about G/K, they need to keep it together!

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/12/10

Title: Chapter 31: Becoming One

I am glad that you chose to go with unpredictable.  Why because sometimes we go off halfcock and the person that really needs us suffer.  IN this case we see Gianni being angry but internalize that anger to handle his business to give Kam the strength, warm, protection that she needed. 

I am really glad that eventhough Gabs didnt want to call Gianni that she finally did.  Being a parent sometimes we want to do for the child all the time and that can handicap them and that why we have to step back and let them make they own mistakes on their own.  I am glad that Gab let up enough to get Kam what she needs. 

Karma always come back and Lamar is in for it big time.  

(Gushing in anticpation:)I am so awaiting Renee and Nick I know that is going to be explosive.  



Author's Response: Love this review! :) As usual!

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/12/10

Title: Chapter 30: Things Happening

Merry Christmas to you Candy and your family.

 I don't know if Code Blue going to arrived on time Gianni is going to need a lawyer and Lamar a body bag.  Well Denise going to need plastic surgery and a orange jumpsuit.  

 

 As for Derek that to me was not a sincere apologize he still riding Gianni coat tail.  If you can't beat them join them that the message he was sending.  

As for Gianni he is definitely a man he has grown and he show his man hood strong before I think Gianni would have accepted the apology but Kam has changehim and I see him being able to handle Pebbles now(being a father and a stand man in his stanze).  Yes he is going to be shock but it will be a good surprise.  

Kam is in denial about her pregancy she can't believe that why she haven't really dealt with it.  Plus she might be sacred of what people may think and also Gianni but she will be surprise if she actually tell him.

P.S I was glad to see the post about Renee and Nick I can't wait some of my nagging paid off. lol



Author's Response:

Lol, you are very right!

Lol, Your nagging inspired me lol!

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/12/10

Title: Chapter 27: Can't Hold Us Down, Part 2

This showed the way that Kam and Gianni loved each other.  Eventhough Gianni was upset that Kam didn't tell him that she was making that Video that didn't make him love her any less.  They love is not complicated it is just them.  This was just another way of them expressing that love.  You also see  that Kam knows Gianni and knew that he would express that love through his extensive loving.

Author's Response:

You are exactly right! :)

Love this!

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/12/10

Title: Chapter 25: Week Later

Seems like there alot going on this chapter had to pay close attention to caught everything.  I am very proud of Kam for taking another step and showing the world that she has what it takes even though she been knock down.  I think even show herself that she has it to. 

That Girl in the tatoo parlor asking to many questions for me a little to much.  I must say  that Gian answered them like a PRo and with no hesistation.  

Gianni has really grown in his love for Kam and also in his relationship with Kam.  He is not petty for example even though she didnt respond to the text or phone call he didnt get like a little boy he handle it like a man strong in his stand.  LOl.



Author's Response: Lol, you just nailing!

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/12/10

Title: Chapter 12: Opening Up

Lamar seems to be acting like a man scorn and jealous.  He wanted out and got out and now wanna dish dirt. 

 I like this chapter the way things unfold between Kammy and Gianni.  I think that Gianni was really surprise at her admittance and it struck a cord.  Also I think that BET is going to be a down fall with them.  I hope it dont hit the press ears.I think it made Kammy more real and someone that he can really be with.



Author's Response:

He had to open his mouth, didn't he?! The hell is Lamar's problem?! ;)

Let's hope Gianni and Kam can get it together!

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/12/10

Title: Chapter 26: Can't Hold Us Down, Part 1

Yes I know this is backward but had to read Two before I write my review for one. 

I think that Gianni is more upset at the fact that Kam didnt share with him something so important.  After all is said the way is reacted is normal. If you love someone that they make a decision that is life changing without letting you know it graze a little heck alot.  I think Kam wanted to make that decision on her own to see if she really is strong and also see if Gianni can handle it.  Yes he can it is demonstrated in II



Author's Response:

You are completely right! :)

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/12/10

Title: Chapter 11: First Outting

I am glad that Gianni is getting to know Kam and Vice versa.  I feel like Gianni has enter into a world that is new to him and is trying to get a handle on it.  Kudos eventhough Kam keep throwing him a curve every now and then.  Great update.

Author's Response:

I agree! ;)

Thanks so much! :)

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Date: 08/12/10

Title: Chapter 10: E! News Report

I agree with Jovanbleu review.  Gian had this misconception of Kam and until he sees it for himself how will he know.  Sometime you have to live a thing to know a think.  Basically what I am trying to say is if you have not been through something you can't really say I've been there.  Gian think Kam is pamper and she is all about fame but she is just a woman trying to live in a world and do the thing that she love and stay out of the spotlight as much as she can.  Hope I didnt ramble on to much.

Author's Response: Love this review! :)

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/12/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 42]
Summary:
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When he left, it was the worst day of her life.  But he made her promise to always wait for him.  Ten years later, did she keep her promise?


Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 10532
Read Count: 5886
Published: 12/02/11
Updated: 06/08/11


Title: Chapter 2: Leaving Is The Hardest Thing To Do

This was great first start.  It shows the emotions and feelings of the two characters.  more please

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  More is coming up!

 

-Rina

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/02/11

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

C'est Magnifique banner by ladyjax

 

A queen in need of aid.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 628
Read Count: 2426
Published: 07/05/11
Updated: 07/05/11


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was great.  I always wanted someone to write a fan fiction for this show I never thought June but it was great.  I love this show Neal character is hot.  If you wanna write another fan fiction.  Choose the eppy where Neal had to check out some banks where this millionaire that played golf was doing the heist.  The character that played the Bank clerk could be his love interest.  lol

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/05/11

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Summary:

Can two people overcome the incredible darkness that seems to hover over their lives, to find the goodness and love that live in each other? Can they be each other’s sunshine after the storm?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 34142
Read Count: 65698
Published: 13/05/11
Updated: 30/06/11


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - the intro

Okay that was great you have to hurried and post the next chapter and soon.  I will be stalking.  What the heck happen between Caleb and Maya and I am thinking the worse.  I hope it is not.  Oh my goodness.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Updates will be up soon.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/05/11

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - prologue cont'd

Wow I was thinking the worse and it was the worst.  I would like to see the forgivenes and how it happened.  Looking forward to read more. 

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Date: 17/05/11

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Where do broken hearts go?

Oh wow I am proud of Maya and what she did by standing up to Jasmine she deserve that.  Jensen I have no words for him.  I was surprise that his parents really liked Maya.  I thought he only slept with her once but continually and wanted his father to fix it.  Wow that low. 

After that being said and how the story started I dont know how she is only to get passed what happened to her and let Caleb in wow.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/06/11

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Maya

This was great that you gave Maya back story.  It really showed her in a different light.  The life that she grew up in but it still kept her sweet and innocent.  Jazz is a pill and the chapter said all the adjective.

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Date: 09/06/11

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-Caleb

Wow those brothers been through some stuff,  I am surprise that after Caleb got out of jail and vow never to return.  I guess he got caught up in Reed mess and that cause him to get caught in violent.  Gotta go read the begining a gain.  Girl this is good. continue please.

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Date: 09/06/11

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-My Life

Even though Caleb had the best intentions Reed is still a pull or tempatation back into his old life.  If he really want to stay clean and on the staright he have to cut Reed off. 

Maya has so much plan and had such a hard life trying to make better.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/06/11

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-My Loves, my loss

Jasmine is such a tool.  I kinda figure that she was the one that was the stripper.  She probably can't wait to throw it in Maya's face.  Wow so much happen to Maya in such a span of time.  She wants what Maya have because she think Maya doesnt deserve it.  Jensen Jenson no words.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/06/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

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One-shot story.


Sadie Thompson returns to her hometown for her grandmother's funeral after being away for seven years and is forced to confront the very reason she left town in the first place.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7626
Read Count: 3056
Published: 20/06/11
Updated: 20/06/11


Title: Chapter 1: Unfinished Business

That was great I enjoyed it. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/06/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 26]
Summary:

Harry and Tina have waited till she graduated from High School to officially come out publicly in the press. Much to Tina's opposition since she would be attending her new University Syracuse. Something pops that may force Harry and Tina to speed their relationship to the altar.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Royally Yours
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 12201
Read Count: 14645
Published: 02/07/11
Updated: 03/07/11


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Pure Intentions

Great update and I like the little twist. 

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/11

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Sacrifices

Wow i wasn't expecting that at all I thought it was something like Harry had to serve again or the queen died.  That was a good one .  I am really looking forward to see what they going to do.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/11

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Royal Address

Tina is a natural with the press and I like the way that Harry and Tina relationship is progressing.  There always a snag somewhere or some dirty laundry that always wants to show it head. 

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/11

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The Press

Just this and I like it.  Thanks for sharing.  I like Harry and Tina hope they can make it through.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/07/11