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Beast by Onimosity
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Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 419611
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10

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Title: Chapter 41: ...And Make My Life Shine

Wow this has been a journey not ready for it to end but Sunny and Nikki has been through some  things.  I think that Sunny see what Nikki can be when he is push and I also think she knew deep down that he could be that man that she saw.  But eventhough I think she loves him enough to keep on loving him no matter what. She has really change him and I think she knows that and she is willing to love him unconditional.  Sunny will also be Sunny the caring and compassionate person but she will learn to compromise and love Nikii with her whole heart.  I hope I'm not rambling.  It is time for Sunny to tell Nikki that she loves him..

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Date: 14/03/10
Title: Chapter 21: Cause I Am Me, the Universe and You

Great update as always. 

Sergei did he really find someone else or that juist a ploy.  If he did that really good but he still looking at Sunny with that look. 

Nikki- is ready to pop the question but with Pops being dead or hurt would that be a good thing.  You had me going for a sec when she felt the box in his pocket I thought it was the ring.  lol

I see that Sunny feelings for him for real she loves him awwwwwwww.

As soon as pops decide to do the right thing he get stab. 

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Date: 03/01/10
Title: Chapter 40: I'm Gonna Get Up...

This remind me of the song we only just begun our romance is not over I got so much love to give. 

All I can say is great chapter.  Dang cliffie

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Date: 12/03/10
Title: Chapter 22: You Know There's No Need to Hide Away

Pop is such a coward and took the easy way out.  Why could he not prove he was so call worthy.  AnywaY Moving on now Sunny can focus on her life with NIkki

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Date: 14/01/10
Title: Chapter 43: Shine - Epilogue

Thanks again for sharing this lovely story.  Yes thanks to you because you made the characters come to life with your skillfull writing.  Can't wait for the next in the series.

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Date: 22/03/10
Title: Chapter 33: Around the Kinda Misery I Find Part 1

Thanks for another great update. 

 

The flow of the flashback was a little confusing at first but then I had to reread and then I got it.  Then I realize that it was italized.  

Nikki father is somethg else even though he is dying he is still bitter.  Nikki went through alot because of his father.  I know Sunny wants to know Nikki secret life but I think he is doing good by not telling her but then again she might be able to handle it.  

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Date: 14/02/10
Title: Chapter 35: Around the Kinda Misery I Find Part 3

Well my lady this did convey what you wanted in my opinion.  I think in this one Sunny really got some good advice from Royce and really know that Nikki truly love her.  Even the person Allso told her that she have to live and learn through experience. 

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Date: 17/02/10
Title: Chapter 6: Wild is the Wind

well milady thanks for another great update.  I like the chemistry between Nikki and Sunshine/ I might with some wotk they can have a great relationship. Can't wait for the next update

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Date: 07/12/09
Title: Chapter 42: I've Made Up My Mind... to Let My Life Shine

I must say this was a great update and a very well craft story.  Thank you for sharing your talent with uS.

At time in this story I thought Sunny would have bolted but you kept us guessing on the edge of our seat and very disappointed with what you wrote.  I am happy that the story turned out like this.  Nikki and Sunny is truly a love story and not a fairy tale.  

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Date: 17/03/10
Title: Chapter 9: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

Thanks for the update love the dialogue between Nikki and Sunny.  I still think that Sergei might mistake sunny nicely for love. 

 

Cant wait for the story to continue. I do like Sunny and Nikki and I hope it is a real lasting relationship...

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Date: 11/12/09
Title: Chapter 10: When I'm cold inside...You are warm and bright

I was good to see that pop attend a meeting,  Thanks for the update. 

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Date: 11/12/09
Title: Chapter 12: The places you've been ...The things you have learned ...They sit with you so beautifully

Love the update.  I think pop knowing and meeting Darla is not a good thing.

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Date: 14/12/09
Title: Chapter 14: Making Holes in the Night

I love the way that Nikki took care of Sunny. 

Pops- Really need to do something and try to be a better father to Sunny. After all she have done for him he still didnt leran a thing.  Handlimg one addiction and not the other.   

I think that Sergei feeling is building and it is going to be explosive.

Sitting back and enjoying the ride. 

Thank for the excellent update

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Date: 20/12/09
Title: Chapter 15: I can feel everything you do...Hear everything you say

Well this one was a good chapter. 

Sunny and Nikki getting very close I like the way they relationship is going.  I think Nikki is falling hard for Sunny.  I love the part where he took her away on a vacation to make her happy.  Actions do speak louder than words.  Eventhough they relationship started the way it did it is developing into something very special.

Sergei is inlove with Sunny yes I said it.  It could get him hurt if he is not careful.  Sunny only likes him as a friend but he think it might lead to more. 

Darla Darla is going to start trouble she better watch her back because if Nikki finds out she might be eliminated.  I am a little surprise that he is not keeping tabs on pop ie his friend to know that she is sniffing around. 

 

Thanks for the update:  Have a Merry Christmas. 

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Date: 20/12/09
Title: Chapter 17: We Are Building Bridges Part 2

Nice update.. 

Sunny seems to be missing something I don't know if she feels that Nikki is not meeting a certain need.  I love they relationship but feel like they missing something they honest with each other but sometimes I feel it should be more.  I don't know if I looking for a deeper reelationship but that comes in time.  I feel that when Sunny loves she does that hard.  She have so much going on in her life she does not need anything more added but she is a fighter.

Now with the dream from her mother it seems like mom is trying to prepare her for something or maybe remind her of her  strength. 

 

That all my rambling hope it made some sense.  Thanks again for the story love it.

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Date: 22/12/09
Title: Chapter 18: A fire burns... Water comes

Thanks for the update

Here my rant.  I am so mad at Nikki for what he is doing to pop.  I know that he love Sunny but he does not need to self destruct pop.  pop can do it by himself. With Nikki interfering he is going to cause a riff between him and sunny when she finds out.  Then he goes and involve Darla.  How stupid is that.  Darla is out for one person and that is Darla.

I know when love is involve things can get murky but in this situation of their relationship.  If he wants to keep her after five years then he needs to thread lightly.

Dont get me wrong pop needs to get his act together on his own

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Date: 25/12/09
Title: Chapter 19: Even When You're Miles Away Part 1

In the begining of chapter I thought that was Sergei talking but then in the middle to the one it seem like the little boy Kostaya.  AM I wrong. 

I was mad last chapter at NIkki but  pop certainly did not need his help.  He is on a collision course heading for diaster.  

I Know Nikki love Sunny but it seems like he wants to wait to propose marriage but maybe he should lay all cards on the table or set her free.  DON'T TRY to get her pregnant since he like kids.. 

 

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Date: 27/12/09
Title: Chapter 20: Even When You're Miles Away Part 2

Pops O Pops it seems to be an everending down hill for him.  He seems to be just going down hill over and over and nothing seems to work for him not even being in jail.  I guess Sunny had no choice to leave him alone. Even Darla seem to help Pops and he don't seem to want it.   It seems like Peanut and POPS are on they way to get themselves kill.  I hope Nikki have nothing to do with this.

Sunny and Nikki seems to be getting closer by the minute.  I like the chemistry.  Are they still in Russia what make me mention that was the part about his parent.  If I am wrong I will go back and reread. 

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Date: 29/12/09
Title: Chapter 23: When You Are on Your Own

That was so nice of Nikki to take care of his Lady love.  He is so inlove with her he is showing it for all to see.  Great chapter.

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Date: 16/01/10
Title: Chapter 25: I'll Be Long Gone

Eventhough Sunny Left all good relationship have ups and down.  Eventually it would have come out whether now or later so I say get all the bad out of the way and work on the good. 

With this out of the way it give them a chance to work on their rekationship. whether it is starting  over and building something solid. 

 

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Date: 20/01/10
Title: Chapter 26: Gotta Make My Own Way

This was a great chapter.  I love the scene at the apartment with them mirroring eachother at the door.  The love is there now they just need to take it slow.  I just now Nikki can romance her and show her that he really love her and only her. 

Sometimes we make mistakes but Nikki deserve a second chance

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Date: 22/01/10
Title: Chapter 27: Today Is a New Day

Great update....

This was such a sweet chapter.......

I'm glad that Sunny put Sergei in his place but I am not sure that he got it by the comment that he made afterward. 

I like the fact that they are going to go out on a date and do normal couple things.  This will get them to know eachother outside of their sexual chemistry. 

I think Nikki might need a date for dummies book he sound so cute when he said I gotta do that.  He probably don't have a clue.  lol

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Date: 23/01/10
Title: Chapter 28: Different From Tomorrow You'll See

I love the introduction to the chapter with Jasmine telling Sunny the different between out of sight out of mind.  That cause Sunny to deal with Nikki in a different way.  I think that eventhough Nikki don't want to tell her eventually he is going to have to.  Loving someone means knowing that person the good, bad and indifferent.  Nikki have to let Sunny see that parts that he wants to hide. He has to trust in her love and they love together and open himself up to her in that way.  Enough of my rumbling.  Excellent chapter as always. 

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Date: 26/01/10
Title: Chapter 28: Different From Tomorrow You'll See

@ Introspection-  I agreed with your deduction of Sergei.  I feel he is up to something.  Also with the hints dropping that he gave Jill.  HMMMMMMMMMMMMM

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Date: 26/01/10
Title: Chapter 29: I'll Be High Flyin'

I love this chapter. 

I also like the fact that Sunny and Nikki are working things out and Sunny is going to stay at her apartment.

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Date: 30/01/10