"Scotty," she managed. "Oh, God, Scotty, where the hell are you?"Pain and guilt lancing his soul, he crossed the room in about a step. "I’m right here," he told her quietly. He wasn’t sure whether she’d let him touch her, so, for the moment, he just lingered by her bed."I can’t do this," she gasped, both physical and emotional pain clearly evident in her voice. "I can’t. I can’t go through this without you. Dammit, Scotty, please, please just show up."
Scotty was dumbfounded. Did she really not know he was there? He decided to risk touching her. The worst she could do was hit him or something, and he figured, after what he’d put her through, he deserved at least that much. Gently, he grasped her wrists and lowered them from her face, forcing her tear-filled eyes to meet his.
~~~~ My fav part, I almost choked up. Love, love, loved the hospital scene. I know what it’s like to be scared and alone; it’s no fun. Sure there were family members present but he wasn’t there so I totally empathize with her meltdown, very realistic. I’m glad she wasn’t tripping or acting a fool. Her demeanor and his support of her made for a nice moment Actually, the entire chapter read well and transitioned fluidly from each character’s perspective of past to present. (Excellent job!)
Interesting that Kat & Scotty are contemplating the meaning of their relationship; they’re both in denial. Be true to your heart people! Lol
Love how the characters – Vera, Jeffries, Rush, Boss, the crew – all relate to one another and the subtle yet effective humor injected throughout the story (I’m a sucka for hilarity, laughter’s good for the soul). Also, their emotions, expressions, even body language is written fabulously. Scotty’s reaction to fatherhood as well as his indecision or fear of walking through that door just captivated me. (Awesome!)
I’m in love with Scotty! He is such a great guy! How Kat hasn’t molested him, repeatedly, just blows my mind. I mean, a fine-ass virile man is in her bed every night!!! How can she not cop-a-feel or scratch that damn itch every now and then is beyond my comprehension. She’s a better woman than me I’ll tell you that but…, I understand and admire their devotion to the children and making their ‘family’ unit work.
You did it again Oucellogal…another fantastic update! So let’s have a baby…
Author's Response: Awwww, thank you! Yeah, Kat's one of those people who bottles it up and doesn't let anyone see how scared she really is, but times like this, you can't really hide stuff like that.
And I'm glad you enjoyed that she wasn't tripping! That's one of my pet peeves with books/movies/TV; women in labor are always allegedly screaming and swearing and threatening anything male. That's SO not how it is in real life, so I wanted to portray that. Besides, Kat's better than that. ;)
I'm glad you're enjoying the humor! That's one of my favorite parts of Cold Case, and I think, when you get right down to it, humor is my favorite thing to write. This story doesn't lend itself to ROFLs as much as some others I've written, but it had its moments. :)
Scotty is a great guy, isn't he? He's just so awesome. I have no idea how Kat has kept her hands to herself, other than she just hasn't thought of him in That Way. Much. And, you're right, they're both devoted to making their family work. I think, though, that they're going to have to face their feelings very, very soon.
Baby is on her way! Next chapter will be up soon! Thanks so much for such a thoughtful review!
