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Our Story by carolinaheart
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 185]
Summary:

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One night, an accident and seven years that never happened. At least, he doesn't remember them happening. 

 

*Banner by me, carolinaheart (it's my first try).

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35
Completed:Yes
Word count: 75229
Read Count: 169085
Published: 29/10/11
Updated: 23/12/11

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Title: Chapter 9: Date One

Creative date, very thoughtful.  It showed that she’s special to him. Loved it!  Loved the light banter and the 21-questions.  I can guess what his biggest fear is but I’ll let Scott reveal it.  Ready for date two…

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Date: 05/11/11
Title: Chapter 18: Still Home for the holidays

Weaving their past and present within the story is done well...sometimes the past is revealed in one chapter and then other times it's the here-and-now with a touch of history in the next update; the flow is fantastic, I love that!  Deidra and Scott's dialogue guide the audience along their journey to discovery.


I'm curious about something...does Deidra and Scott have a kid(s)?

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Date: 12/11/11
Title: Chapter 5: Bowling

I can so see these two being attracted to each other...the banner captures their personalities perfectly. I love his flirtatious manner with James. Speaking of the lady in his life...how could she not fall for Walker?  The guy is charismatic, fun and keeps her on her toes...not to mention fione as hell!

Looking forward to reading more.

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Date: 31/10/11
Title: Chapter 28: Without a Hitch

Loved their vows, especially Deidra’s. She isn’t the typical warm-fuzzy, starry-eyed leading lady – actually she comes off kind of cold yet there’s a vulnerability about her that makes the female she is likable. She’s definitely guarded; a wall surrounded her heart for some time now but Scott certainly broke through that barrier didn’t he.  One thing that’s really telling about her persona is the fact that children love her…and she loves them; she’s just scared about becoming a mother – not exactly sure why that is – maybe it’s because she career-driven, I don’t know but perhaps there’s more to the story as yet to be revealed.


Their wedding song was so a Scott-thing-to-do and very appropriate. Loved it.


Looking forward to seeing what Scott thinks about all that he’s learned, what he thinks of the wife he just met compared to the woman he ‘knows’.

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Date: 20/11/11
assUme by TheSouthernScribe
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

 

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When you assume, you make an ass out of you not me.

 

A first date to be forgotten.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: While We're In Love
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2401
Read Count: 4098
Published: 16/12/11
Updated: 16/12/11

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Title: Chapter 1: Assume

'Opposites attract' is the perfect description for Dennison and Lulu.

Me likey!

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Date: 17/01/12
Take Two by TheSouthernScribe
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

 

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True or False - You never get a second chance to make a first impression?

 

Lulu Marx and Dennison Lord are back in this family focused adventure leading to their second date.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: While We're In Love
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7749
Read Count: 14733
Published: 16/12/11
Updated: 16/12/11

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Title: Chapter 2: I. Parental Words of Wisdom and Wisecracks

Sounds like Dennison has totally misread his father's angst.  Ellis is angry because the son he wanted - his golden-child [Dennison] - didn't follow in his footsteps.  It says a great deal about who Dennison really is instead of what he should have been. 

Love the mothers, they are a mess!

As for the two very interesting, very diverse lovebirds...I hope to see more of them relating as potential couples-for-life - or - not.  LOL

Great start Scribe!

 

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Date: 17/12/11
Title: Chapter 4: III. Pounding of Fists and Gnashing of Teeth

Heath is an ass! A jealous one at that!! ugh..major turnoff!  And I'm sorry but, did Tahnya just covet her brother-in-law, even in its smallest measure?  I think in spite of it all, Tahnya and Lulu may become...um...something similar to friends - passing acquaintances perhaps. Anyhoo, Dennison needs fresh eyes to educate him on handling his emotions and he could return the favor in reacquainting Lulu to the machinations of the male anatomy. *wink, wink*

Nice chapter Lady!

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Date: 17/12/11
Title: Chapter 3: II. Poetry in Motion

Me likey again!

Love, love, loved that the ASSumed tables were turned on miss uppity-butt, I was impressed with his residence as well.  Also, Lulu reading the alluring passages of literature was sexy, sensual, I liked it.

I'm digging the intelligence of the characters.  Well, not so much their intellect but the sophistication through which Lulu and Dennison are depicted that captures my attention and thus, keeps me coming back for more.

Very nice!

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Date: 17/01/12
Title: Chapter 5: IV. Permission to Please

The man was a riddle she would never solve.

...but she could spend a lifetime trying couldn't she? lol  Cool statement. I love that kind of man.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17/01/12