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“If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.”


~Jon Stewart




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Chasing Venus by ShanniC
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary: Photobucket

 

A chance encounter on an elevator causes two people to reevaluate the meaning of love and life. Can true love be met all while Chasing Venus? Can a wallflower change? Can a savvy businessman learn that love is the riskiest deal of all? Interracial romance. What happens when cultures cross, in-laws meet, and an unconventional woman faces a very traditional family?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 6587
Read Count: 6391
Published: 08/07/08
Updated: 20/06/10

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Ryochi is smooth, real smooth. I'm loving the banter between these too. My only problem is that the updates are so far between. I really like this story and have missed it. Please consider updating more often. I would love it so. *wink*

Nadia doesn't need the complication of Aoi in the mix. But it should make for some fun reading. I enjoy the internal dialog of the two main characters. Nadia is particularly fun to get a glimpse of what she's thinking. Ry won't know what hit him. I'm hoping Ms. Nadia takes him down a peg or two.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20/06/10
Any Given Thursday by ShanniC
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 68]
Summary:




Celina hates Jake. Jake hates Celina. Can two people, completely opposite from one another settle their differences and find love in the process? How can you be in love with someone whom you are diametrically opposed to? An interracial romance.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 49555
Read Count: 14147
Published: 11/07/08
Updated: 29/08/10

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Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Over the phone, Jake? Really? LOL   You haven't heard the last of that chick.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/09/10
To Be Desired by iheartng
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

CSI: Miami fic.

They’re close. She staring into hazel eyes she knows so well, slightly scared of what she sees. His breath brushes her cheek as he gives her a chaste kiss and her hold loosens on the paper. “I promise, Alexx.”



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 914
Read Count: 2368
Published: 22/08/08
Updated: 22/08/08

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ahhh, the possibilities.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/05/10
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Ki Fashions by Quania2004
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 204]
Summary:

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Serena Davis is a shy young lady that has had a crush on her boss Mr. Ki, king of jerks, for 2 years. Mr. Ki, in order to stay the head of his family company must marry. What happens when he suddenly asks her to marry him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5022
Read Count: 49841
Published: 27/08/08
Updated: 28/07/16

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Title: Ki Fashions

I have really missed this one, but it was so worth the wait. You did good, chica. Serena really laid it on Ki.

Hope Serena doesn't go back to the States without Ki. That Soo-Sun chick is a real bitch and evil. Wonder whether she'll succeed at bringing discord between Ki and Serena? Maybe for a while, but hopefully not permanently. Ki's brother turns out to be the fool. Ki really dodged a bullet with that skank.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/06/10
Hooked by rogueprinzess
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Spin-off story from Bonded (not uploaded yet but will be) featuring Nolan and his search for love.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 734
Read Count: 976
Published: 23/10/08
Updated: 23/10/08

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Title: Chapter 1: Preface

Sooo, ummmm.... Bonded is finished [and it was wonderfully done].... we should be seeing Nolan's story take off pretty soon, ummm... right? *crickets*

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/09/10
The Second Temptation of Alexx by iheartng
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

It starts with a small favor and ends with a large regret. (Prompt 6 – Hate) Companion to To Be Desired.

 

A CSI: Miami fic.

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1041
Read Count: 2701
Published: 13/01/09
Updated: 13/01/09

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Title: Chapter 1: The Second Temptation of Alexx

this was great. I've become addicted to the possiblity of Alexx and Ryan.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/05/10
A Little Persuasion by curiouslyamused
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

 

              A simple story: girl meets boy and they want each other.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11211
Read Count: 3664
Published: 15/01/09
Updated: 15/01/09

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Begining & The End

well done, chica. a wonderful read.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/07/10
The Heart of the Matter by Reese
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 97]
Summary:

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Pathologist Alexx Woods has been widowed for well over two years now.  Promoted to Chief Medical Examiner, she’s flourishing professionally.   Friends and colleagues at Miami-Dade’s CSI department have been wonderfully supportive, especially bad boy CSI Ryan Wolfe, who, to the surprise of everyone, has gone above and beyond the call of friendship in his quest to ‘be there’ for the team’s favorite ‘mother’ figure. 

Yet as Valentine’s Day approaches, life is about to change once again for Alexx.  It all starts with a misunderstanding and the arrival of an unexpected visitor.  The startling revelations that ensue compel her to delve into long suppressed emotions, confront rigid societal conventions and her own deep seeded fears about loving again.

 

 

A Story Written for the 100 First Kisses Challenge

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Crossover, Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: 100 First Kisses Challenge
Series: Rylexx: CSI Miami
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 41347
Read Count: 15303
Published: 27/02/09
Updated: 11/08/09

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven

Looking forward to the next installment. Ryan is soooo intense and Alexx thinks way too much.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/05/10
Second Chance by Variety
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 404]
Summary:

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To become King of the Lycans, Ulrich has to marry. Between two of his own kind, Sabine, a human, catches his attention and his heart. except on the night of their marriage,she is murdered. 500 years later, Sabine is alive and no longer human but that is only just the beginning of their problems...

*banner by me* i was lazy on the first one and wanted to remake it...

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 45707
Read Count: 60681
Published: 01/09/09
Updated: 17/09/10

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Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yep, she's feeling things she hasn't felt since being turned. Salvatore has a lot to answer for. I'm glad you updated and though, short, very effective. So, since she never died, does that invalidate his marriage to the skank?

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22/06/10
Title: Chapter 15: a visit

This is my first time reading this story and boy was I missing something special. I really like this. I was so sad that Sabine was kidnapped and turned. But it makes for a very interesting story. And Ulrich ain't no joke. I'm looking forward to him destroying Salvatore. And Vanessa best watch herself. Sabine is not the scared little waif she was so long ago. I'd love to see Sabine beat that b*tch down.

You got me hooked.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20/06/10
Into The West by brookmeade
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 127]
Summary:

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"This time and place, as I look upon your face..remember as long as you live,

                                                       it was my love  to give"   

                     -except from It Was My Love to Give by Barbara LaBarbera

       ~//~

Sally Parker had heard talk of Indian or "Injun" attacks out West, but that was just talk from around town. Right? Wrong.

Sally embarks on an enthralling, and often dangerous journey when she is kidnaped and taken into the Comanche Tribe. However, the journey isn’t easy, between battles with the increasingly, dedicated, hard-nosed, "war chief," Nakotah Quanah, and trying to fit into a strange society which she feels she doesn’t belong.

Just when things begin to look up, what happens when an enraged mistress wants her servant back and will go through all costs to get her back? Will this kick-off the beginning of many battles for the Comanche with the Texan government or can Sally defuse the situation in time?

Either way Sally is going to have make a life-altering decision that will not only affect her, but maybe for the ‘ayashe’ as well.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 8442
Read Count: 6587
Published: 23/10/09
Updated: 29/05/10

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Title: Chapter 5: July 2, 1847

Hopefullly, her "Abductor" will help her. Sally is about to learn a much needed lesson. Not sure if she thought out her escape plan.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29/05/10
Beast by Onimosity
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1636]
Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 419639
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10

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Title: Chapter 35: Around the Kinda Misery I Find Part 3

This is sage advice and so true...  “Sometimes we revel so much in the freedom of love that we forget the responsibility.” Royce says. “When you love and are loved in return we have an obligation to take care of ourselves, better care of ourselves for those we love.”

And this..  “Unfortunately, love isn’t something you deserve"... “It just is.”

 And this... ” He says harshly. “It does not matter at all when compared to you. Not at all. I love you, Sunshine.”   gives me hope that Nikki will be willing to give up the activities that could put Sunny in so much danger. 


Nikki is a man who has known little or no love in his life; so for him to freely say those words and often say them is huge. He is a man who not only is IN love but who loves. That is probably the biggest change.

I had to read this chapter multiple times. It was chocked full of tasty goodness. Each chapter seems to show Sunny and Nikki evolving more and more to who they should be separately and together.

Even though this trip was to an unsafe place, I now understand why Sunny needed to do it. But for this trip and the distrubance, she might not have had the conversation with Royce that I think clarified a lot for her. He was the perfect person to give Sunny a much needed perspective.

“Yes, Nikki.” She rolls her eyes. “you were right about many things. I’ll see you soon.”  

This had me grinning because it makes me wonder what awaits them in Paris; could it be that the words will come?

Omni, this is a story that I will read often. Just saying it's good doesn't seem to be enough. So, I'll just say, thank you for penning such an engrossing tale. You should be very proud of your child. 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/02/10
Title: Chapter 19: Even When You're Miles Away Part 1

I hope Nikki doesn't do something stupid like getting Sunny pregnant without her knowledge. I don't think Sunny will forgive him when she finds out that she gave her father money even though he didn't cause her father to relapse. He knows he's wrong in what he's done in continuing to "keep" Sunny. How can he trust any feelings that she might have for him since he is almost her "captor"? That is why I'm still not sure how she really feels about him. And Nikki knows that any proposal would be tainted by their current situation. Yet, he can not let her go. He seems afraid that she will leave with the quickness.

I am so impressed with Sunny's strength and wisdom at the tender age of 21. She has bended but not been broken. Nikki will break before she ever does. I wonder if he realizes that? ;-)

She knows Nikki a lot more than I think he even realizes. She seems to care for him; but that may be only because of her sweet nature and how she views people in general. I love the fact  there is some ambiguity regarding Sunny. She's an open book; yet she isn't. 

One of fav stories.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27/12/09
A new.... by kellyklue
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 158]
Summary:

Ethan “Dax” Daxton and his wife Dr. Zaire “Zhay” Daniels have drifted apart due to tragic circumstances. Dax awakes from a coma and has a case of amnesia not remembering his wife or current life. But, the minute he looks into Zhay’s eyes he falls in love all over again. The love that Dax and Zhay once shared was honest and sweet, but of late, it proved not enough to cure the hurts of the past, that they need in an effort to move forward.  Both must learn to forgive and love each other again, and that life is to short and precious not to include those whom you hold dear.


They are given a second chance to rediscover their love and what they do with it is completely up to them.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 47806
Read Count: 56567
Published: 19/02/10
Updated: 13/01/11

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Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - I'll marry you, on one condition...

Glad he knows they're married, but the difficult part is coming up with the explanation of why they weren't together at the time of the accident. This could be quite sad.

Thanks for the update. I've missed this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. The revelation of their seperation could be sad but it caould also bring about their reconciliation; you'll just have to keep reading to find out :-).

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14/01/11
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - I have nothing left to give

Zhay made a terrible mistake that resulted in the death of her children. I feel really bad for Dax. I wonder has Zhay changed. Would she be so arrogant the next time? Hopefully, she's learned something from this experience. Not sure that I want them together until it's clear that she has.

You are truly writing an emotional story. My heart really went out to  Dax.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting. Yes this really is an emmotional read and you know starting out Dax was the real arrogant character but we see that Zhay can be just as head strong; but at the wrong time. We will see if they both have change over the course of the story. Stay tuned for more.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26/06/10
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

kel, you are writing the hell out of this story. You evan had me feel a little sorry for Dax's mother. Now that's some feat. LOL

Dax and Zhay can't catch a break. This is so emotional. I'm looking forward to see if Dax feels a pull towards Zhay while he has amnesia. 

I'v really missed this story.



Author's Response: I am glad that you liked the update! Thanks for reading. Zhay and Dax will find their way to each other.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/12/10
Foolish by mocasoul
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 124]
Summary:

It’s 1993 and Cynthia Hamilton is the house keeper to one of the biggest rock stars of that year, Caleb Murphy. The trouble with him is he’s a drug addict, a drunk, and a womanizer…but she loves him.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 51000
Read Count: 36549
Published: 28/03/10
Updated: 28/03/11

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

The title is so apt, 'cause Cynthia is all kinds of foolish in being around this junkie. And a manipulator at that. good that she's going to get away from him. Let's see how long that last.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 22/06/10
~*The Zodiac*~: Book 1: Capricorn by Butterfly
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 57]
Summary: Adena Capricorn is a successful and highly organized 23 year old. Shes an art dealer at one of the most prestigious art galleries in Manhattan. This Capricornian has it all- a great job, great girlfriends and a loving husband. Until her world crashes down when she finds lipstick on her husbands shirt and finds help and solace in the most unexpected of places.How would a Capricorn handle this situation?

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Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: ~*The Zodiac*~
Chapters: 21
Completed:Yes
Word count: 55413
Read Count: 77163
Published: 02/04/10
Updated: 09/05/10

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Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Missy needs to slap that back-stabbing skank. Kim feels no shame in what she's doing. What a bitch. She never was a friend to Adena. She and Taye deserve each other. Adena needs to drop her like a bad habit. Im glad Adena knows. Kim is not worth the drama. So Taye has a job now, I'm it's the love of a good woman that gave him the confidence to get off his lazy ass and get a job.

Author's Response: Yea they dont really need Kim anymore now that they know where her loyalty lies. That is a good point, maybe Kim's good for him in more ways than one. Sad how they came to know that however. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it!!!!

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/05/10
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oh damn... Adena is going to turn to drink. And that skank might just get a beatdown for this. The sh#t is about to hit the fan.

Kim has gotten on my last nerve. If I was Adena I'd re-think that so-called friendship. I like Missy, she's a hot mess.



Author's Response: Hhahha, she kinda already has started drinking more! There's going to be a lot of changes once the shit is cleaned up! Thanks for reading!!!

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30/04/10
LV Choppers© by Denita585
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 233]
Summary:

             

 

After being betrayed by her best friend and being cheated on by her boyfirend, Aiyana Kendricks has decided to leave her hometown of Rochester NY behind. Moving to Las Vegas, she finds herself happy with new friends, a great party planning job, and a new boyfriend named Mark. But what happens when her past comes into her life again? Will the new couple be able to stay together when so many forces are trying to pull them apart?

~*~

Life's like a road that you travel on
When there's one day here an' the next day gone
Sometimes you bend, sometimes you stand
Sometimes you turn your back to the wind

~*~

LV Choppers Playlist

Something To listen to while reading LVC. All of the songs have inspired me in some way when it comes to the story and characters.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s), Other
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 34
Completed:No
Word count: 70063
Read Count: 32183
Published: 19/04/10
Updated: 19/01/11

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Title: Chapter 28: Calm Before The Storm

This...
“It represents royalty, nobility, friendship, sharing, wisdom, sympathy, and sophistication. It’s one of my favorite colors and it’s…”  

had me almost choking. Yep, that trick knows what the color purple represents, however, she's a stranger to the concepts.

Phil has not only cheated, she's causing Dave to question all the relationships he has with her circle of friends. And the fact he's thinking about forgiving her. That bitch will lie and apologize and continue to do the same thing. PHIL IS NOT SORRY. She's only sorry that peopele know... wait a minute, she doesn't even seem sorry about that. It's easy to apologize, but it means nothing if it's not true repentence. Dave will be a chump and a willing chump if he believes this incarnation of Phil. I'm so pissed at that chick, I could spit.

And Ricky, not only is he a sleaze, he's dumb as a stump. That fool has given Sophia so much ammunition. Sophie might grow a conscience and spill, who knows. But she might get more leverage with this info. These folks are completely rotten. Makes me want to take a shower in bleach. good job....

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/05/10
Title: Chapter 31: Get Gone

Dave knows that Phil can't be trusted. He needs someone who can. I still hate her guts. Just because now she supposedly knows what she wants, Dave is suppose to take it. I think not. What about the next time and you know there will be a next time.Maybe Phil needs to be by herself for awhile and try to figure why she's such a triflin' skank.

And that mother, she needs her ass kicked. However, oddly, I don't feel sorry for Ana.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28/12/10
Title: Chapter 33: Mommy Talks...Mommy Walks

I can't believe that Dev let that witch of a mutha talk to his wife like that.

good update.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19/01/11
Blood Sugar Sex Magik by Outlawstar615
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Experiencing phantom limb is nothing compared to phantom sex. She could feel his breath on her neck even though she knew he was miles away, hear him whispering the words in her ear, telling her to repeat them. She could only hope he was feeling as crazy as she looked. Writhing in her bed, messing up the sheets, labored breathing, the whole nine. She could even feel his long sweaty hair on her, tantalizing her.......now she understood the meaning of the lyrics to Blood Sugar Sex Magik.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10740
Read Count: 5186
Published: 28/04/10
Updated: 06/08/10

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Title: Chapter 3: The Greeting Song

Yep, I like the peppers and yep, I've seen the tube sock and yep, wow... June is in for it.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01/05/10
Nice Guys Always Win by Renee Banks
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 113]
Summary:

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Jonathan Denson isn't what you'd call the life of the party but when he enters a room, he commands attention. The only problem is, the attention he craves isn't the attention he's getting. It's just too bad that the only person he ever truly wanted isn't ready for what he has to offer. Left with no other option, John decides that he's sick of leaving romance up to fate and takes his love life into his own hands.

Disclaimer: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended    

Huge shout out to KKMonroe, formerly CPM09, for my title. This story would have been called something I wasn't completely satisfied with if not for her genius. Thank you, lovely lady :)



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 12160
Read Count: 25795
Published: 03/05/10
Updated: 22/12/10

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Title: Chapter 1: The Cast of Nice Guys Always Win

I can't believe that I haven't reviewed this before. old age. anyhoo, I love Jonathan and he deserves someone who loves him for the good man that he is. I'm not feeling Ms Rochelle one bit. Her attitude seems to be that she don't want him unless someone else shows an interest. ugh. This is one damn fine man and there are plenty of women out there that would give their eye teeth for a chance with him. Maybe, you need to see what you've taken for granted. I hope Kalessa is just what he needs.

I really have missed this story and am glad that you've updated. I want more. *hint, hint*

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20/06/10
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Rochelle is psycho. John would do well to just let the romantic feelings go, but that's kind of hard when it's been 20 years! There's something wrong with this picture. I'm concerned for Kalessa. She could be hurt by John. Especially if he's not sure about leaving Rochelle behind. I definitely don't want to see him use her to get over Rochelle. Kalessa best listen to her first mind and treat Rochelle with a long-handled spoon, as my mom would say.

Love how you write from each person's point of view. Although, listening to Rochelle makes my teeth itch. I can't abide that phoney azz witch.  'cause you know she hates Leesa and when she discovers that John might be interested in her, she's going to try and destroy Lessa. She might be in for a surprise, though. Lessa don't seem like the shrinking violet. bring your worst, b*tch; Lessa will handle that.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19/10/10