“If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.”
~Jon Stewart
This is not your mother's Alice in Wonderland. hee
I...love..this
It is such a departure and a wonderfully done departure. Your words just draw me into the story.
On a shallow note, Arthur is a freak. But I don't think he's prepared for Alice. I think Alice will teach him a thing or two.
Alice's father's motives may not be what she thinks. Although, that step-mother seems like a horror.
Not sure about Chessa. What will she do to prevent Arthur from getting his clutches on Alice.
I hope you update ofte. A very engrossing read.
It takes twenty-one days to form a habit, but it was only supposed to be one night. And what happens when that habit is no longer enough?
"You'd be amazed at what you find out when you eat a woman's pussy right."
WORD. *picking my jaw up from the floor*
ITM, gurl, you got skittles... mad skittles...
DAMN, that was good!!!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed The best part was that he could see down onto the patio of her home from his corner apartment.
Her curly hair pulled up into something he couldn't quite make out in the insufficient light. It had a mind of it's own, he liked to think, always fashionably messy and due to the heat, most days up. Also as most days she wore a tank top of some feather light material and no bra. One of the thin straps teetering on the edge of her shoulder. A skirt, probably vintage, hung on her slim hips and danced just above her knees as she shifted her weight from one bare foot to the other.
I knew Aster knew that Boon was watching. But the big question is, did Hanna know?
Boon might be a perv but he seems the most "normal" of all these freaks. I still say run, Boon, run. These folks are not be messed with. Boon has no real clue who these people are.
You are too smart for words. I'll just answer your question, no Hanna didn't know. Yes, is is the most normal so far. And I think you give very good advice.
:)
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
alrighty... love this... the wolf, yeah, unclear if he's a user or is it just the voyeur's perspective. The voyeur is...umm...wow. I'm speechless. DAMN... this is really interesting, different, addictive, well written, and I'm lovin' the hell outta it. MORE.
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you! Things will become more clear in a murky kind of way. ¡Gracias compañera!
So, our little voyeur is Boon and the object of his obsession is Hanna. And the wolf is perhaps, Aster. Wonder if Boon has ever considered that just as he can see her, perhaps she can see him? And if so, what, oh what, has she seen him doing? hee
Boon sounds pretty fine to me. Wonder what Hanna thinks of him.
And now he's agreed to let her draw him. That can be an intimate proposition. How will Boon be able to handle being so close to Hanna. Can't wait.
btw, will this story continue to be from Boon's perspective? I like knowing what he's thinking.
Boon is a pretty cool character. Hopefully you guys will be able to understand him better by reading the next chapter. I my mind Boon is hot, but you know hotness in the eye of the beholder. And Aster.....
What does Hanna think of him. Hopefully that will be revealed more in the next chapter as well.
And yes, this whole short will be from Boon's perspective. The POV will probably change from one short/one-shot to the other though. Still thinking on that.
Hasta luego.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed "Please come if you can, but don't make me any promises just in case you can't keep them."
This was sad. How many people have disappointed Hanna in her life. And that mother of hers. gah. Jealous, yep that does happen but she went overboard. Poor Hanna.
As to who's seducing whom... interesting, I can see how Boon was using his hair to great effect. But Hanna went BOLD. So, right now, I say Hanna - 1, Boon - 0 in the seduction department. Unless, she already knows that he's been watching her and gave him a little show just before she came over, I'd give her extra points just for that.
Hope he attends the showing. I hope it goes well for Hanna considering what she went through to pursue her dreams.
Another great update, Chica.
I think you are on to something there. Definitely, about this time it should feel like there may be a struggle going on. Soon another one will be added as well.
Thank you for keeping up with the story.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed The Wolf seems to have a bit of the exhibitionist in him. Still not sure about him. He does seem arrogant. How did Hanna get mixed up with him. Is Hanna just a booty call? At some point Boon will find out more about The Wolf and I can't wait. Boon seems focused on The Wolf because he is doing what Boon wants to do with Hanna. And yeah, he needs to get off this rollercoaster.
Wonder what's the dealio is with Baal.
Hola Chica!
You are not the first one to make that observation about Aster. You guys maybe on to something. Boon is a mixture of jealousy and concern. I think he's a nice guy who happens to be fixated on something that is none of his business. But that is the result of watching. No?
Baal, you'll get another dose of her.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed There is something seriously wrong with Hanna and I don't think Boon realizes what the hell he's getting himself into. What was Baal and Hanna doing? This is the first time that Hanna has creeped me out.
Run, Boon, Run.
Boon, Boon, Boon, smh. I know you wanted her badly. But it's almost like you were sleeping with Aster considering they just "cooled it". All's I could picture when they were doing it was a fly being snared in a spider's web. I guess it's too late for Boon to RUN, NOW!!!
Good way to end this part. Poor Boon.
Oh! I like your description of what is happening. Thank you!
(2nd part is here)
:)
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed 
Some people seem to believe that when our body dies our soul lives on forever and we are reborn again into another body. We are recarnated to relive our past lives differently. To fix our mistakes of the past. We encounter the same people that we once did in our other lives.
As for Alexandra and Shane there is a sense of a familiar connection to these mere strangers could it be because they lived a past life together.
Memories of an Ancient past... is not you're average time story. This is with a little Biting blood twist.
I like it.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed Armed with binoculars and a view from his bay window, Hollywood bad boy Knox Beau Bloom stakes out his new MILF neighbor as she spends hot afternoons and warm evenings bent over in Daisy Dukes weeding wayward flowerbeds with little success. Watching her is about the most exciting thing Knox has experienced while on community service lock down in Waterfall, Arizona on trumped up drug charges. Lucinda “Lucy” Esperanza has moved to Waterfall with Ally Grace, her too wise nine-year-old daughter, to start over after a past that she is not proud of and a bad marriage and divorce from one of the NBA’s most revered players. She had heard good things about Waterfall and that is what she needed, good things to happen.
Friendship, love and lust blooms, not necessarily in that order, when Knox decides to act as the neighborhood Welcome Wagon by greeting her with a confident swagger, sexy smile, mesmerizing eyes ocean blue eyes, and cold bottled water.
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Knox had me rolling. BDD can be a mutha.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed This is beyond good. The ending was heartbreaking. I would've loved to see the journey that they would take in married life, but it was not to be. There's a bitter sweetness to how their life together ended. But at least he was truly happy with Lorca. It will be interesting to see how she copes with the lost of Liam. I fell in love with him after reading this chapter.
Well done, Chica, f'in well done. *misty-eyed right now*
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed This is still sad, but there is a glimmer of happiness with the news of a new life growing in Lorca. Hope she sees this as a blessing. Will his family share in that new life? I hope so.
Hard to believe you haven't been writing for ages. You are amazing.
Integral to Voyeur, Sweet Tea gives a peek into the mind of Hanna.
Hanna and her art.
Hanna and her papa.
Hanna and her mother.
DAMN!!! At first I thought it was Papa. But it was that freak of a wife of his. Hanna needs some therapy. And Baal, who is she? How did she get Hanna in the position to participate (if that's the word) in what seems to be a very destructive relationship for Hanna when Hanna supposedly escaped the one with that so-called mother of hers. They both need their comeuppance. Baal and the step-mother are both sickening. This explains a lot.
Author's Response:
The father would be the obvious choice yes. And yes therapy would be good. Baal will be explained more later. Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed 
Panther Williams hated her life as a celebrity kid. She knew some people would kill to have her place and her money, but it wasn’t the glitz and glamour people always thought it was. She was basically 17 being treated like she was 7 and in the limelight of her parents career when she was trying to come out with her own career. Yeah, she would kill to have an ordinary life.
She yearns for that ordinary life more when her parents set her up with two of the wealthiest siblings in Hollywood, the Worthington duo Prima and Rider, in order to get their father to invest in her father's production company. She overhears something she shouldn't have and has to deal with the duo and being a pawn in a twisted game.
Will Rider be able to corrupt Panther? This should be most interesting, but creepy.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed Emery Harris has her hands full running the Beckenbach family for the past 7 years and she's loved every minute of it. So throwing the surprise 35th anniversary party for her employers is hardly a chore. But rather than worrying about the guests and the band, Emery finds herself fretting about the arrival of the prodical son. For the first time in 3 years Nick Beckenbach will be stateside. As much as Em has tried to convince herself that she's moved past her feelings for him, she can't be sure until this weekend is over. But there is more than just her feelings for Nick to contend with. One thing is for sure, the party won't be the only surprise this weekend.
Em, Em, Em. *smh*
Will you really find the "right" woman for Bas? I want to see how it goes with the party. Will there be a woman whom Em thinks is for Bas? Or will she find something wrong with each prospect? Or will she set him up with someone only to discover that she doesn't like it one bit? And what about Bas? There has to be some reason someone as fine and kind as him is without a love interest. something to make you go hmmm...
I tell you what, if Em don't want Bas like that, I'll take him off her hands. I don't believe in wasting a good man.
I look forward to your updates.
Oh honey if I could write the perfect man into existence and he'd actually come to life, I'd never have to worry about money again. I'd write all day long. Green eyed cowboys, six foot plus cops, yummy dark haired guys with charm. I'm sure there would be plenty of women willing to take them off my hands.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed I truly like this story. I'll refrain from stating a preference for who Em should be with, but I will say that I like Bas a lot. Very supportive and sounds as fine as an aged wine. Wonder what Em would do if Bas found someone? How would she react? Nick's appearance should put some clarity on the situation. I'm interested in getting a clue as to whether Bas has feelings other than "besties" for Em.
Honestly I don't know Em would react if Bas was the one bringing a girl around. I mean do any of us want to share our friends? I sure don't always like to.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed Ah Bas, did I see a glimpse of maybe some not too friendly feelings for Miss Em. I think I did. And he seems to be a tad pissed at her right now. And watch my girl not have a clue.
Em might like Cady in spite of herself.
Oh yeah, this is going to be really interesting. btw, I loves me some Bas. Nick is fine too, but Bas, YUM. still waters and all.
Thank you for the update.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed I'm going to start calling her Clueless Em until she buys one. :)
Yeah, there's something wrong with Sebastian (I love that name), he's pining for your clueless behind. Will Libby hip her to that or has she not noticed either? The plan of CE is bound to work out REAL WELL ;)
I so love this story. I look forward to each update.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed Finally!!! And who would've thunk that it would be Nick!!! who clues Em in!?!??! This was priceless!!! Now let's see what she does with the info. Nick gave her some sage advice, fish or cut bait, Em.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
Teresa has to spend her weekend completing her assignments for her Major British Writer’s class. What happens when stress, wine, and sleep deprivation are mixed together? Nothing good…
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Who knew that the classics could be so stimulating and hilarious. This was inspired. Well done.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed How can one night of passion and pain lead to two lives being changed forever?
I'd say YES.
A note, Kristen might want to run for the hills. Alexander is not the one to mess with.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed Can two people overcome the incredible darkness that seems to hover over their lives, to find the goodness and love that live in each other? Can they be each other’s sunshine after the storm?
Poor Casey. She does need to move on, but she shouldn't marry Brian if she's not in love with him. At least not yet. How would that work in the long run? Would she begin to love him the way he deserves? Or would she still pine after Reed?
Reed does not seem to be ready to REALLY get his life together. Caleb gace her some sound advice and she needs to heed it. Reed is reacting selfishly right now. And Casey has put her emotional life on hold. That's no way to live your life.
Enjoyed the update. Thank you.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed They know each other??? Wow??? I like this. Is the baby's Caleb's? Can't wait.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed