Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-My Loves, my loss
Just read the last few chapters and alls I can say is DAMN!!! You are really penning an engrossing tale.
Caleb and Maya have similar issues in their lives. They both have siblings that are TOXIC. Jasmine hates Maya. Reed, I'm not so sure, but he does not have his little brother's best interest at heart.
I knew it was going to be Jasmine at the party. She did this deliberately, all to be able to rub Maya's nose in it that she screwed her sister's fiancee. I'm sorry, but I would be done after this, well, AFTER I. beat. that. ass. Maya is too nice for her own good. She needs to cut Jasmine loose. Just because someone is FAMILY doesn't mean you have to be around them and take the crap they dish out.
At least Caleb seems to have an inkling that being around Reed might not be good for him. But will he be able to distance himself? Either you'll pull him or he'll pull you.
This is such a good story and you're doing an excellent job of drawing us into the lives of these characters.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
Date: 11/06/11