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If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


~Jon Stewart




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Summary:

Lay Me Down

 

Life is hard. James knows this for a fact in which she picked a bad time to quit smoking. Working long days as a housekeeper and taking online college classes just adds more stress. With a troubled childhood and a dark past looming over her shoulder, James is untrusting of others therefore lets very few people into her life.

That is until she stumbles -- literally -- into Tristen, a computer software engineer who won't take 'no' for an answer. He's different, kind, and fun. And French. He wants to get to know her, but will her past drive him away like the others and if he does stay, can he endure damage of her skeletons tumbling out of the closet?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: City of Lights
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 63166
Read Count: 67191
Published: 22/09/10
Updated: 06/08/11


Title: Lay Me Down

When I saw you A/N,I went ahh f*ck! Trigger. *my EXACT words*

If Tristen doesn't kill that f*cker, I will. That is all. Hell, that ain't all, Trigger needs to suffer before his ass meets his maker.

MJ, still love ya', Chica. Youse my dealer of fantastic writing.

 

 



Author's Response:

LOL! Trigger had to come back eventually, but he will make his official appearence sooner and later and he might just get what he deserves, but we'll just have to wait for the next installment! :)

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Date: 16/04/11

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 No regrets, just love.

When a family crisis forces Broadway diva Charise Leone back to her hometown in wyoming, she expects it to be the same country hell hole she left 11 years ago. What she gets however is one surprise after another. She was the girl who spent most of her teen years in tears. Who knew she would get a second chance at her teenage dream?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 4797
Read Count: 4775
Published: 29/09/10
Updated: 14/01/11


Title: Chapter 5: A Sweet Reunion

How do I feel?

ecstactic - that this story is back

intrigued - at the turn of events. Mom's got some explaining to do.

hopeful - that you'll update more often. *a gentle reminder, LOL*

More, please.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14/01/11

Title: Chapter 4: Feeling some kind of way,

Oh this could get mighty awkward if Char and Scott get together. Considering Mona says she still loves Scott. But does that mean she's still in love with him?

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Date: 10/10/10

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They messed with the wrong woman this time!

FBI agent Subrina Rayelle is on a mission to take down the people that forced her best friend Leesha into prostitution and then beat her to death when she tried to escape.

Refusing to even cry one tear of grief for Leesha until all guilty parties are brought to justice, Subrina sets her sights on Nevada where the crime took place. If only she hadn’t met her soul-mate on this mission – a beloved nephew to the leaders of the suspected prostitution ring and who may also be among the guilty parties himself. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 210
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3441
Read Count: 79608
Published: 09/10/10
Updated: 09/04/11


Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 44.3

I;m sorry, but I cackled like a hen when Caesar busted that fool in the mouth. Too bad they'll be able to save that doofus' teethfus.

Hope Bree lets C explain and is not too hard on him.



Author's Response:

I confess, BellaChica, it felt real good to write that scene. I wish it was MY fist busting Ricky in his big mouth. lol

As for Bree, this thing has her all messed up right now. She need some time to refocus and get herself back on track.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19/12/10

Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 39.1

Caesar's got mad skillz. Avalon is one tricky lady. Now she has her answer.

Bree was just fooling herself. Now she knows. She can't be without C.



Author's Response:

BellaChica, you're so right on all fronts. Especially about Bree. lol

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12/12/10

Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 39.2

Hope Caesar remembers this conversation with his mother when the sh!t hits the fan.

Author's Response:

If he doesn't, he will definitely be reminded of it. Trust!

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12/12/10

Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 44.2

Ricky is a real prick. He deserves everything that's coming to him.

You are doing a fine job with this story. I'm buckled up. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, BellaChica! And yes, you're so right about Ricky getting exactly what he deserves.

 

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Date: 19/12/10

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 8.2

That mother of Bree's makes me want to kick her in the teeth.

Author's Response:

You can have first-dibs at that. I don't mind. lol

Thanks for commenting, BellaChica!

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Date: 24/10/10

Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 16.2

Wife material, Ricky? Really? Really? You f'ing killed the last woman that was "wife material", you moron! gah! That fool is.., well... a fool. Amazing. Just Amzaing and not in a good way. And Blaine, what a bloodsucker.

Author's Response:

Love it! Love it! Love IT!

Your comment had me cracking up, BellaChica. lol. Thanks for the raw honesty.

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Date: 06/11/10

Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 46.1

Caesar is in for it if Bree's mood doesn't improve.

Author's Response:

You ain't never lied, BellaChica.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23/12/10

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 Beautiful Banner by Missus James

 

When Mia, a beautiful southern black lady, finds herself as the personal assistant to two of the most gorgeous white men she's ever met, she finds herself in an unlikely situation that will challenge everything she thought she wanted in a normal life. 

 

Mia Shannon struggles to adjust to her life in San Francisco after moving there from the south. It's hard being the only black girl at the company she works for and even harder when she's the personal assistant to two of the most wealthiest, gorgeous men white men she's ever seen. Mia finds herself having feelings for both her bosses and realizes nothing can ever become of them except to exist in her fantasies.

Kale and Aidan fell in love with Mia the moment she walked into their office for an interview for the personal assistant position. It took them almost four years to get close enough to Mia where she was comfortable enough to be around them as best friends. Now they want more and they are determine to make Mia the only woman in their life. 

Loving Mia was first posted on Fictionpress, then later transferred to The Chamber by KatherineMadison. Please do not copy and post my story to any other sites without my permission. Thank you! This story is an original fiction completely written from my overactive imagination. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 96215
Read Count: 229046
Published: 16/11/10
Updated: 16/02/11


Title: Chapter 14: Mama Ruth

Moms is going to find out sooner than later. hee

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14/12/10

Title: Chapter 12: Loving Mia Part Two

hot damn,,, well done, well done.

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Date: 07/12/10

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Miss. Innocent meets Mr. Dangerous.

Who says love has to be soft and gentle?

*****

Caution is an original work of fiction written by C.C. Please do not copy and paste this story to any other websites. 

 

Beautiful banner by: The Queen, Missus James!!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: La Famiglia
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 165
Read Count: 136399
Published: 27/11/10
Updated: 21/06/11


Title: Chapter 18: Coming Together

"There is no more talking, you don't fuck with people I love."

ah hell yeah!!!

Wonder if he realizes what he just said.

Yeah, let the Tysons handle it. But if they don't, it'll be Code Blue, all.damn.day!



Author's Response:

Lol, Gianni is snapping up in there!

I don't think he does, oh, lord!

Lmao, they don't need to go to Code Blue because they would be tearing up some asses!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13/12/10

Title: Chapter 21: How Do I?

You mean to tell me that simpleton hadn't planned this out? Yeah, Gian should just beat.that.ass on general principle. simpleLamar is going to be sipping thru a straw  for a very long time and certainly deserves it for what he's done and also for be dumb as a stump. And simpleLamar, if you hear Gian say, "on errthang I love", yo ass best get to steppin'

Now for the, ahem, festivities between Gian and Kammy. Since, this was her first time, Gian couldn't let the beast completely out. He needs to ease her into it. But, I'm sure Kammy is a quick study and will be a freak in no time. I have confidence in my girl.

On the real tho, this was a well written love scene. The fact that he could maintain some semblance of control is a testament to how much he loves this woman. Even this little bit of a peek at the beast had my girl's eyes rolling back in her head. This is just the tip of the De Luca style of loving. And yes, it is in the genes. *OK, I just got distracted by a vision of Chris, Nic and Gian in a room and someone looking suspicously like myself in the midst of them.. wow... where did that come from?*

Well done, CC. And I can handle anythang you bring, dontcha know? I'm the OH *original hussy*

 



Author's Response:

Lmao, Lamar is simple as hell!

Damn hussy self, LMAO!!!!!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/12/10

Title: Chapter 9: The Date

"I wish I had some holy water to throw on you, ya damn demon."  this had me cracking up. I like this back and forth between the two of them.

Hey Kam, not feeling Gianni, are ya? LMAO!!!



Author's Response: LMFAO!!!!! She was lighting him up!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/12/10

Title: Chapter 20: The Truth

Poor Gian, at least he told her. Clumsily. but he told her. Now Kammy is pissed and she should be. However, she needs to think about the reality of how Gianni has treated her. He has not acted as if she is just a bet. He's been quite gentle with her, if she but knew. And he could've had her numerous times and didn't. so marinate on that sistagirl. 

So, yeah, Kammy, make him squirm for a minute, but be aware there are a number of us who have a little for yen Mr. De Luca and if you wait too long, we will fight you for him. Just so you know.

That man is fione and not just physically. just sayin'



Author's Response:

So true!!!!!

lmfao, ya damn hussy!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16/12/10

Title: Chapter 29: A Night Out And A Little Queasy

As I said before, Pebbles...is...on...the way!!!

Gian is wearing my girl out. They'll make great parents.

Chris and Kassie? This will be too funny. Plus, I want to see who Chris is when he's in love.  Will they tease him as much as he teases Gian about being in lurve? LOL

Now Nick and Renee... their own story... 'can't wait, 'cause Ms Renee is going to be something else. Nick won't stand a chance.

 



Author's Response:

Let's see what's happening with everyone! :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/12/10

Title: Chapter 27: Can't Hold Us Down, Part 2

Pebbles...is...on...the...way LMAO!!!

 DAMN!!!



Author's Response: LOL! OH, LORD!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/12/10

Title: Chapter 28: Can't Hold Us Down, Part 3

simpleLamar is about to gt his ass jacked-up De Luca Style. And whoever the hell "D" is will have his ass in a sling also. Add if "D" is Derek, he's more simple than simpleLamar. How many times does Gian have to hem his ass up before he understands the danger in making that man angry?  These two are deficient in judgment, good sense, and intelligence... in other words, THEY BOTH FOOLS. And they'll be fools walking with their asses up in the air from where Gian has kicked them.

Author's Response:

Simple as hell lol!

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Date: 23/12/10

Title: Chapter 8: One Date

ahhh, the mating dance begins. This was too funny.

Author's Response: Lol, they are too much!

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Date: 06/12/10

Title: Chapter 7: One word or Two?

ahh hell, Kam is about to give Gianni a real tongue lashing. Should be fun.

Author's Response: LOL!

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Date: 06/12/10

Title: Chapter 6: Price Of Fame

yeah, Kam might wanna re-think being pulled into someone elses world. The setup is in place. Who will proved more wrong about the other?

Candy, regarding Strength, the last chapter I read was the one where Kam had the showdown with Gieselle after the baby was found.



Author's Response:

I'll send that to you, a.s.a.p! Just let me know your email.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/12/10

Title: Chapter 4: Two Different Views

Gian is just talking outta his arse... but what a fine arse it is.

Author's Response: LMAO! TOO FUNNY!

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Date: 03/12/10

Title: Chapter 3: Who Better Than Me To Do It?

"Clawd have mercy! The Lord is my shepard, he knows what I want." Chris said.  Chris is a hot mess. I love him. And Gian has no idea what he's in for. He needs to be brought down a peg or two.

Author's Response: He is a mess lol!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03/12/10

Title: Chapter 16: Lies

Gianni is going to tear.that.ass.up. Lamaze is a dead man. But I want his ass to suffer first.

on a shallow note, damn, that banner with Gianni on it, whew... he. is. tasty. 



Author's Response:

Violent self lol!

Ya hussy!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12/12/10