Penname: BellaChica [Contact]

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Member Since: 26/12/09

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If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


~Jon Stewart




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Summary:

 

 

Miss. Innocent meets Mr. Dangerous.

Who says love has to be soft and gentle?

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Caution is an original work of fiction written by C.C. Please do not copy and paste this story to any other websites. 

 

Beautiful banner by: The Queen, Missus James!!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: La Famiglia
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 165
Read Count: 136399
Published: 27/11/10
Updated: 21/06/11


Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue

When I first saw your AN, I was like, what more could there be. Well, my dear, you delivered. And big time. Kambree and Gianni are my favorite and this chapter just made me miss them even more. This was so well done. It explained some things that I wondered about. And it closed out this chapter in their lives quite nicely.

On a superficial note, Gianni is one fine ass man. You really picked a good picture to characterize who he is. DAMNNNN!!! *I need a bib, 'cause I'm over here just droolin' like a damn newborn*

Well done, Chica.

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/06/11

Title: Chapter 13: Maybe A lot

"She's my girlfriend, of course I care." He said out of no where and flinched.             gotcha!!!

"Good because she'll probably be the one who steals your heart."            ding, ding, ding.

Their interaction with their friends and family is always a hoot.



Author's Response:

LOL! He needs to accept his feelings or something lol.

You gotta love the De Luca family and friends!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/12/10

Title: Chapter 17: Fade To Black

Yeah, Lamaze will be sued. But we need some De Luca justice. And that calls for gramps to get into action. There are things that can be done to Lamaze that no one would be able to prove who did it. Maybe, not right away, 'cause we want to make sure no one can connect the cause and effect. But Lamaze needs some physical hurt done to him that he won't EVER forget. And if gramps can't handle it, I know some people....

Gian is all protective of Kammy and I love it. Oh, those two are in love.

I fear that Lamaze does have a tape, a fake one, but a tape nonetheless. Where's a woodchipper when you need one?

Drake almost got his ass whupped. Doesn't he know by now that Gianni does not play? I loves me an Alpha male *growl*

I'm with Tony, we needs to squad up and handle some bizness.



Author's Response:

Lol. he is about to get it!!!!

Love the Alpha male in Gianni! :)

LMAO, YOU ARE ABOUT TO POP OFF UP IN HERE ON LAMAR!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12/12/10

Title: Chapter 14: Make Believe or Is It Real?

"Please! You are so far up her ass that you probably taste everything that she eats."  I almost choked on this. Damn, Chris is crazy as hell. Speak, my brotha.

This is not real, goddamn it." He spat.  Yeah Gian, you keep saying that. You'll probably be saying it as you propose to Kammy on bended knee. This is priceless. The hunter's getting captured by the game, so to speak.

Author's Response:

LMFAO, HE STAYS ON GIANNI!

Oh, lord! God help Gian!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/12/10

Title: Chapter 25: Week Later

Kammy might need to put her mother in check. That chick in the parlour had me wondering if maybe she wasn't wired.

And Renee needs to stop hitting Chris upside the head; something might come loose with all that smacking.

Loved the convo between Nana Lil and Gianni. She really knows her grandson.

So Kam and Gian did the DO without a raincoat? I miss Pebbles. ;o



Author's Response:

Everyone misses Pebs lol! We shall what is going on!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21/12/10

Title: Chapter 12: Opening Up

It's good that Kammy has Lola. She can be her defense when Kammy feels like peeling Gian's clothes off. LOL... although, I don't think a dog would stop me from jumping Mr. De Luca... *growl*

Kam and Gian are growing closer. Her confiding in him was quite sweet. The kiss was intensely fiery. *steam is coming from the monitor right now*



Author's Response: Hussy self lol!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/10

Title: Chapter 11: First Outting

This was nice. Gianni is slowly falling. Will she go over to his place? we shall see...

Author's Response:

Yes, we shall! ;)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/12/10

Title: Chapter 26: Can't Hold Us Down, Part 1

ahhh hell... Big Daddy is about to set it off up in this apartment. Kammy will not be the same after her punishment. Tie me up, tie me down...

Chris is a straight up fool. Gian's peeps knew to get the hell outta the room before he saw that vid. Had me rolling.



Author's Response:

I JUST CRACKED UP AT THIS LMAO!

Chris and Shane were like aw, nah, let me get the hell up outta here!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/12/10

Title: Chapter 10: E! News Report

ahhh damn... this is not good... Gianni has no idea about how public his life is about to become. The media is going to have a field day with the skeletons in his closet. This will really make any kind of meaningful relationship with Kam almost impossible. She's going to think that Gian set this up.

Author's Response:

Let's see how it goes!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/12/10

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Summary:

Kwan is one fifth of Korea's most popular idol group, and a dedicated, card carrying heartbreaker. But what happens when he is confronted with the girl from his past? the one that got away? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 65707
Read Count: 69301
Published: 06/12/10
Updated: 15/11/11


Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

This is priceless!!! Baby Kwan in the oven. Love it.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27/10/11

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Summary:

Everyone in South Creek, Arkansas knows to stay away from the Dixon farm. No matter how tattered and worn the property may be, no matter how long its been since the true owner was shot dead on his own door step, no one dares to step on that land.

Some say a fierce heathen spirit watches over that plot and not a soul can pass its gates without being known.

Sadly, for Elwyn Connor, he has no choice.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 6914
Read Count: 8127
Published: 24/12/10
Updated: 26/02/11


Title: Chapter 1: Have a Little Mercy

Wow!!! This started on with a BANG, so to speak. ;-)

I thought she had shot him!!! I'm liking this, but that goes without saying since I love the way you tell a tale.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24/12/10

Title: Chapter 2: Second Chances

Damn, that lady is a tough cookie. I read this chapter with my jaw dropped. I was like, Harris, you need to remove your fingers, 'cause this woman is not above pulling the trigger and before I could finish the thought, BANG!!!

I can see this is going to be a rip roaring exciting tale. Good job, chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/12/10

Title: Chapter 5: And I'll Show You Mine

I've missed this so much. I think Esme is more angry with herself than with El.

Author's Response: yeah, my brain kinda went on hiatus in general. lol but i should be updating this more often now. and you are on target.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23/01/11

Title: Chapter 6: Regret

An update!!!! Yay!!!

And what an update. I was concerned that you had decided not to continue. So glad you did post. This chapter, whoa, glad El got there when he did. Esme probably carved that bastid to the point where he was unrecognizable. No lost there.

This is raw and not for the faint of heart. But I'm really enjoying it because it's always a surprise as to what's going to happen next. Was Esme apologizing for not only sleeping with Elwyn but maybe that she's starting to have feelings for him? I get the sense that she made a vow to herself not to let another man close to her and now she has. And not only did she like it, she might want more of Elwyn.

Don't be a stranger, Chica. Great update. By the by, I'm missing me some DeLeon. ;)



Author's Response: get out of my head! or more accurately, Esme's. and be on the look out for a Penny update this weekend. i miss DeLeon too!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/02/11

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Summary:

Abigail was excited to be a part of the Gentleman's Advocate,a mentoring program that aided in "fixing" the delinquent boys of Ravendale Catholic,an all-boys boarding school in Connecticut. Only problem is she didn't realize the boy she was assigned to would be one of the worst and one she couldn't overlook. 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 16414
Read Count: 8242
Published: 16/01/11
Updated: 03/11/11


Title: Chapter 2: Lesson in Strategy

Margaret is kinda skeevy.

Jung Su is a real handfull. I relly like this story.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22/01/11

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Summary:

 

Just when Georgina Akande thought she had rid herself of her creepy ex-fiance, he strolls back into her life in the worst way possible.

A misguided attempt to assert herself leads to some painful home truths, but, also, the opportunity to grow and love again.



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Love Is...
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 37015
Read Count: 8026
Published: 18/01/11
Updated: 31/05/11


Title: Chapter 4: Murphy's Law

smh at that trifilin' ex-fiancee and the equally triflin' sister. I would expect the ex to pull something like this but for that sister to do this is unbeliveable. She's kin, the last person you would expect to hurt you. This chick needs to be loved from afar. George should treat her with a long-handled sppon, as they say; that is after she's stomped her azz in the ground. Matter fact, she needs to love that toxic mother from afar, too.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22/01/11

Title: Chapter 5: By Accident on Purpose

George needs to let that sister of hers make her own mistakes.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30/01/11

Rated: Teen or Above
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Summary:

After years of pain and betrayal, Kenya Nomenyo has decided to be on her own. She would work hard and prepare for her future. To avoid future pain, she has vowed to stay away from friends, family, or close relationships of any kind. Too bad a certain outcast, football palyer, and the universe have different plans for her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 12829
Read Count: 26284
Published: 20/01/11
Updated: 16/03/11


Title: Chapter 5: Insults

that "counselor" was totally clueless. Kenya is one strong young woman.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/02/11

Title: Chapter 4: Resisting

Amazing that Kenya is still standing with all that has gone on in her life. Emily is a piece of cake compared to what Kenya has endured. Yeah, Page is a chatterbox but I think she will eventually wear Kenya down to where they become friend in spite of Kenya. Hope Kenya does not ignore the pain in her chest. Could the symptoms be tied to her nightmares? And with heart ailments, she really needs to make sure she gets enough rest.

She really needs someone to talk to. Wonder if Tristan will be that someone?

I like this tale a lot. Thanks for posting it.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13/02/11

Title: Chapter 6: Miracle

Kenya's life has to start looking up eventually. Once you've died, how much worse can it get?

What makes me think that they found Tristan's number on Kenya.

Poor thing. Great update.



Author's Response: Kenya's life has been full of nothing but crazy drama and heartache so far. And you're right about the fact that once you've died, you can only go up. I will try to update again within the next 5 days. Thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/03/11

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Summary:

She slept on through the night, even as he left.  He only looked back once as he walked out of the door. And when she awoke again in the morning, she found a diamond choker wrapped around her neck and an angry, red scratch on her breast. But he was gone.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: Storm/Ororo Munroe
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 23616
Read Count: 14097
Published: 25/01/11
Updated: 11/04/11


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I really like this story.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I do too. It's still dominating my brain. I cannot write anything else but this write now. So more is on the way.   :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/02/11

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Of the pairings that I've read for her, Sabertooth/Victor is second only to Gambit for me. I like this A LOT!!!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/01/11

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

My first impression was of gentleness. It was throughout the chapter in the way that he handled her. A very sensual chapter but one with much tenderness. Who knew that Vic could be that way.

Loved this chapter. well done, Chica.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I really wanted Victor to be capable of something other than viciousness. And I wanted this to be something he shares ONLY with Ororo.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/03/11

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Summary: Their choice of career doesn't leave much room for developing and maintaining a healthy relationship.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Welcome to Harlan County
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1197
Read Count: 1128
Published: 11/02/11
Updated: 11/02/11


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah, I like this short. well done

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13/02/11

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

 

Justified:

Raylan Givens' return to Harlan County creates more complications than Rachel Brooks has bargained for. Choices will need to be made and honesty about all the games that have been played will be required.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Welcome to Harlan County
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 14234
Read Count: 39063
Published: 11/02/11
Updated: 15/08/11


Title: Chapter 2: Intro

love it.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13/02/11