Penname: Flicker and Sparkle [Contact]

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Member Since: 31/12/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm not really sure how long I've been writing. I write poetry, songs, fan fiction, and I'm trying to write fiction itself. If someone would be willing to give me help with my writing, I'd appreciate it. I'm still trying to learn.  I'm also trying to get new themes into my writing besides just romance.


I listen to many differnt music artists. I think I might be inspired by the music I listen to in a way.   


 




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Island Interlude by Junebug66
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 222]
Summary:

Island Interlude is the story of Gabrielle Hall, a young woman who teaches physical education and K.C. Whitfield an architect who comes to the fictional island of St. Sebastian. They meet and sparks fly but K.C. isn't who he seems and Gabrielle must decide if she can live with who he really is.    

island interlude                

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:No
Word count: 97729
Read Count: 235792
Published: 07/05/10
Updated: 01/02/11

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This is really interesting. It's different to see actual meals, at least it kind of is to me; I liked it.

Author's Response: I love all things food. What can I say, unfortunately live to eat not eat to live and it shows in all kinds of ways.

 Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18/05/10
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This chapter was really good. Your characterization and plot development seem to be going to pretty good.

Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate your the time it takes the readers to not just read but also review.

 Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18/05/10
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This was another good chapter. Your writing is pretty good. I also like your writing stlye.

Author's Response: Thank you I appreciate your typing that.

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Date: 18/05/10
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

That was really interesting. I like it.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it keep reading.

 Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18/05/10
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This story seems interesting.

Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate you reading the story.

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Date: 17/05/10
A Wife Scorned by Suprina Frazier
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 38]
Summary: Connie thought she wanted revenge on her cheating husband. She got more than she bargained for.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 995
Read Count: 9976
Published: 07/07/10
Updated: 07/07/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was interesting. I wasn't expecting actually.



Author's Response: Flicker and Sparkle, I'm glad you found the story interesting. Thanks for commenting!

 Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/07/10
Retired
An Unconditional Love by cimmy1
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 88]
Summary:

Noelle and Trey are two individuals looking for the same thing, in Washington D.C.'s highly competitive social scene, where power and money are king. Though they are both from different worlds they both want... An Unconditional Love.

    

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I would like to send a big shout out to JUNEBUG66 for all of her help getting this story off the ground. She was a literal Slave Driver. But because of her drive and commitment, I finally got the beginning parts off the ground. So THANK YOU,  Sister girl. For helping a newbie like me :0). Hope to do us proud.

Disclaimer:  All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9393
Read Count: 23573
Published: 14/07/10
Updated: 14/11/11

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Interesting update. I would like to see where this goes.

Author's Response: I am interested in seeing where this goes also. Thank for reading.

 Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/08/10
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

The Good: The is really good. I think you are a good writer. The plot seems interesting. I'd like to see where you go with it.

What Needs Work: Your formatting for dailogue is off according to what I know. I that in different areas different ways of doing dialogue are taught. So, if you are unsure of what to do for dialogue, I would suggest doing a search on writing dialogue or maybe dialogue format. Or I can even help you.

Other comments: You seem to have your own style of writing, which is good. I think it's great to have your own way writing something as long as you probably follow proper spelling, grammar, and etc. 

Also when you changing character perspectives. For example, when you the switch from your male character to your femal character. I would suggest putting in som kind of symbol to the let reader. It makes a lot less confusing, at least for me. Here are some example of breaks that I've used and seen I think:

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You can even come up with your own; I just would suggest not doing anything to complicated to outrageous.

 

Well, that's all.

Keep up the good work, and this story seems interesting.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for the information ,will take it under advisement.

Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17/07/10
In Sickness And In Health by mocasoul
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Tandra and Kevin had a wonderful wedding.  Too bad the flu makes their honeymoon opposite of that when Tandra is sick.

Barely made it, but I did under 1,000 words....YAY!!!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Fluff
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: Tandra and Kevin's one shot adventures
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 944
Read Count: 3306
Published: 22/07/10
Updated: 22/07/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was sweet. I liked it.

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Date: 24/07/10
Slowly, Surely. by Thespiandiva
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

 

A Yeardly Girls Story  

 

Claudia is just starting to pick up the pieces of her crumbled life. Will she soldier on? Or will she collapse under the weight if her own grief? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Un-betaed
Series: The Music of the Yeardly's
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 821
Read Count: 1366
Published: 16/09/10
Updated: 16/09/10

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Title: Chapter 2: I Walk away from...

Wow. That was quite powerful. It was pretty good. There were a few mistakes, but it's not anything to really fret over. Keep up the good work.

 Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18/09/10
Only Temporary by Renee Banks
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 64]
Summary:

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Advertising tycoon Alandra Meyer wants a child. The only problem is she doesn’t have any prospects, nor does she really want them. She’d rather cut off her left arm than rely on a man to do a damn thing for her. Men equal distractions and distractions just aren’t an option in her world. The only person she can depend to conceive the child she so desperately wants is herself…and possibly her oldest friend, Julio. However, before he agrees to be her humble donor, he has a favor of his own to ask. After a tug-of-war between the two, Alandra obliges her best friend's request. Hoping for the best but expecting the worst, she awaits said request to walk through her door that Monday morning, unbeknownst to either of them that his presence will change both of their lives forever.

Disclaimer: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 16062
Read Count: 20573
Published: 08/11/10
Updated: 15/12/10

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Title: Chapter 3: Gainful Employement

I'm liking this. I thought the last part was funny. Keep up the good work. I would like to see where you go with this.

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Date: 09/12/10
Forty West by Renee Banks
Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

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Two troubled souls meet on a long stretch of highway and discover the road less traveled will lead them back to love.

A one shot for anyone brave enough to take a chance in life

Disclaimer: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2693
Read Count: 2960
Published: 09/11/10
Updated: 09/11/10

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Title: Chapter 1: The Road Traveled

That was really good. I liked it. I thought it was really cute too.

Author's Response: Thank you F&S! That was the desired response I was going for. The story is nothing special but it's been a while since I've written a simple love story with no intrigue, mystery, or complications. Just simply love. Glad you enjoyed!

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Date: 13/11/10
Just Friends? by mocasoul
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:


Sasha, a host of a late-night radio show; gets a intrigued when a listener calls the show revealing his feelings for his best friend, with whom he lives with. What she doesn’t know is that the listener is her best friend/roommate, Jeremy; a struggling cartoonist. With a little bit of meddling, their former roommate, Summer and her husband Mark, suggests that there is something between the two when they notice how close the two had become.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 14940
Read Count: 12722
Published: 29/12/10
Updated: 14/06/11

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This looks interesting. I like it. Good beginning.

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Date: 14/06/11
PDA by intellectual titmouse
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 43]
Summary:

It takes twenty-one days to form a habit, but it was only supposed to be one night. And what happens when that habit is no longer enough?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: You, Me, We, & Us
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3631
Read Count: 3882
Published: 24/03/11
Updated: 24/03/11

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Title: Chapter 1: Outside These Four Walls

That was cute. I think it was nice. 

 Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24/03/11