Penname: JazziePassion [Contact]

Real name: Jasmine

Member Since: 28/01/10

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Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 419212
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10


Title: Chapter 33: Around the Kinda Misery I Find Part 1

I like the friendship Nikolai has with Anatoly. They are good for each other and it's good for Nikolai to have a friend that cares about the things he cares about. A friend that he can trust. 

 

Stanislavsky's relationship with Nikolai is very special. The father figure he never had. I'm not sure how I feel about the story he told Nikki about his Svetlana. Though it is a possible outcome to Nikolai and Sunshine's situation, I hope with all my heart that they find a way to resolve this impasse that they are at. But at the same time, I don't want Sunshine to settle. You can't build a relationship on a lie, the lie in this case being that she doesn't know who Nikolai really is, because he is clearly not just a "fixer of shoes". (And I secretly want to know what he REALLY does too!)

His mother is something else! Her point of view makes sense though. I just wish she had found a way to let Nikolai know that she loved him instead of letting him believe that she didn't care what happened to him. At least now she's told him the truth. I'm glad she's happy for Nikolai and Sunshine. Hopefully she'll stay in his life now and that their broken relationship will mend.

 

In the case of the father, Nikolai extended the olive branch. He didn't accept it. Oh well...

I'm kidding!  I just hope that the father realizes before it's too late that alienating his only son because of his foolish pride, (When he was the real reason Nikolai was betrayed in the first place!) is going to cost him gravely.

 

Then Sunshine comes to the rescue, and comforts him the way only she can...sigh... Now for her to tell him she loves him too... 

In this update I saw another side of Nikolai. His relationships with the people he holds close to his heart. Now I know that he really is bad boy with a big heart.

 

I liked the structure that you put this update in. It felt like the story was more filled in because now we have more insight on how the key things in his past are influencing the future. 

I loved it Onimosity! Thank you. 

 

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Date: 13/02/10

Title: Chapter 40: I'm Gonna Get Up...

OMG!!!! I am literally sitting on the edge of my seat! I'm speechless! 

Please come back and post some more... Please, please, please with a cherry on top?? 

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Date: 11/03/10

Title: Chapter 30: By The Time You Make Up Your Mind

Another amazing update!

 

I have to say that I adore them together! I'm so glad that Sunshine decided to give Nikolai another chance! I love how he's always telling her he loves her now. He's really becoming a better person, which is not a bad thing at all. I'm just hoping and waiting that Sunshine realizes that she loves him as well, and that it happens really soon.

 

Thanks Onimosity!!! 

Reviewer: JazziePassion Signed
Date: 02/02/10

Title: Chapter 31: By The Time You Come Round to Me

If only you could have seen how excited I was when I saw there was a new update!!! 

Jetta. I absolutely adore her and I think Sunshine has found a really good and invaluable friend in her. I'm so glad that Jetta gave her "the talk" cause really, its not all about the "bouncing". I'm not complaining though, but I really feel like they are walking on egg shells concerning the other aspects of their relationship. Its as if Sunshine is just waiting to ask Nikolai that one question that will make her pack her bags and never look back. That's really freaking me out, because I love them together, but at the same time I think what Sunshine is doing, asking questions, is important.

 

I really don't trust Sergei. At first I felt kinda sorry for him, because it must be hard loving someone who doesn't love you back. But now, I've got a funny feeling that his obsession with Sunshine and "waiting" for her to rebound from Nikolai is not going to be a good thing. And I bet that it was him calling Sunshine while she was packing away Nikolai's things. I'm very suspicious. I hope he's not a wolf in sheep's skin...

 

I love how Nikolai is really putting an effort into showing Sunshine how much he loves her. Doing things her way, cooking for her, talking to her, listening to her, doing "normal" things like watching movies and even slightly imposing his way by bringing over his things. He's really showing her and opening his heart to her. He's like a bad boy gone soft, but only for her. I think what will make his happiness complete is the day Sunshine tells him that she loves him too. And I truly can't wait.

 

Love, love, love this story and I especially loved the update! 

 

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Date: 06/02/10

Title: Chapter 37: I'll Send You My Best Part 2

Absolutely LOVE this story!!!

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Date: 28/02/10

Title: Chapter 39: Or We Might Take it Differently

Sergei is a world class fool!!! All I can do right now is shake my head, I'm literally at a loss for words.

 

This chapter was very emotional for me. From being terrified that Sunshine would leave Nikolai for good, being touched by the affection between Sunshine and Benjamin as well as how attached Kostya is to her, and Stanislavsky and the fatherly role he plays in all their lives. However, the one thing I didn't see coming was Sergei. I'm almost too afraid to find out what happens next...

 

Thank You Onimosity. Can we please get another update before the weekend is over???  

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Date: 05/03/10

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Summary:

It's been six months since Reese Davies had a decent date and even longer since her toes curled and her eyes rolled in the back of her head. Desperate times call for desperate measures and she accepts a last ditch effort from her brother and her best friend for a new strategic partnership. Love match or total disaster?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26568
Read Count: 45966
Published: 13/06/11
Updated: 03/08/11


Title: Chapter 17: Throwing His Weight Around

Really enjoyed this! Thank you!

Reviewer: JazziePassion Signed
Date: 29/08/11

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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

Vincent Leonardo Battaglia the Fifth is a misunderstood person in just about every facet of his life. His family's name precedes him, gaining him automatic respect everywhere he goes. But with that respect comes a fear and assumed lifestyle he does not back up. Not fully anyway. When he meets Eden Jackson, he wants nothing more than to make her apart of his world, but disaster seems to loom at every corner he tries to take her around. But if there's one trait Vinny definitely has from his family, it's their determination. Even if Eden is fronting like she hates him from the day he was born.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: The Battaglia Influence
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 56562
Read Count: 16807
Published: 30/07/11
Updated: 07/08/11


Title: Chapter 4: Family Business

So the Battglia men have a record of messing up in their relationships, I just hope Vinny will be the one to break that mold. I love Eden. She's spunky, sassy, but on top of all that, she's got class. Vinny is definitely in for it. Love it!!!

Reviewer: JazziePassion Signed
Date: 31/07/11

Title: Chapter 1: Mixed Signals

*smiling for days!* These Battaglia men sure know what they want and how to go about getting it!!

Reviewer: JazziePassion Signed
Date: 02/08/11

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

 

Stereotypically Yours

Matheson felt that VaLysia was just another angry black female when she brought her grandmother to dinner at his mother's request. VaLysia thought Matheson was just another uppity white prick. Neither of them expected the sparks to fly!

 

Stereotypically Yours is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2010 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 45
Completed:Yes
Word count: 171682
Read Count: 298024
Published: 05/08/11
Updated: 26/09/11


Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 To Love and To Cherish

Amazing! Really enjoyed reading this story!

Reviewer: JazziePassion Signed
Date: 15/11/11

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Summary:

James Townsend is in paradise preparing to get married to the perfect man with her two closest friends at her side. It was supposed to be three days of fun in the sun as she lived out her last days as a technically single woman, but after participating in a traditional Despedida at the insistence of her closest girlfriend, James finds herself second-guessing just how perfect her life is to become.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13930
Read Count: 5193
Published: 28/08/11
Updated: 28/08/11


Title: Chapter 6: Libertad

I literally laughed out loud when I read about Herman muching on some fruit and as relaxed as can be while Javier's world was falling apart!

Cipriano and James, definitely would love to read more about them, both as individuals and as a couple.

Really enjoyed it I.T. cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: JazziePassion Signed
Date: 28/08/11

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Summary:

After avoiding what would have been the biggest mistake of her life, James Townsend is too happy to move on solo, excited, and free, thanks to one steamy night with a virtual stranger. But as James soon discovers, that night is to remain with her in more than one way and bring a whole new set of drama.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 14917
Read Count: 7301
Published: 29/08/11
Updated: 03/09/11


Title: Chapter 8: No Puedo Dejarte Ir

javier is in for a rude awakening. i'm seriously digging this!!

Reviewer: JazziePassion Signed
Date: 04/09/11

Title: Chapter 6: Un Solo Toque

That was hot!! She just needs to let him know...

Reviewer: JazziePassion Signed
Date: 29/08/11

Title: Chapter 2: Correr, Correr

I wonder what the thought was...

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: JazziePassion Signed
Date: 29/08/11