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 Beautiful Banner by Missus James

 

When Mia, a beautiful southern black lady, finds herself as the personal assistant to two of the most gorgeous white men she's ever met, she finds herself in an unlikely situation that will challenge everything she thought she wanted in a normal life. 

 

Mia Shannon struggles to adjust to her life in San Francisco after moving there from the south. It's hard being the only black girl at the company she works for and even harder when she's the personal assistant to two of the most wealthiest, gorgeous men white men she's ever seen. Mia finds herself having feelings for both her bosses and realizes nothing can ever become of them except to exist in her fantasies.

Kale and Aidan fell in love with Mia the moment she walked into their office for an interview for the personal assistant position. It took them almost four years to get close enough to Mia where she was comfortable enough to be around them as best friends. Now they want more and they are determine to make Mia the only woman in their life. 

Loving Mia was first posted on Fictionpress, then later transferred to The Chamber by KatherineMadison. Please do not copy and post my story to any other sites without my permission. Thank you! This story is an original fiction completely written from my overactive imagination. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 96215
Read Count: 229100
Published: 16/11/10
Updated: 16/02/11


Title: Chapter 23: Deception

Mia makes me want to slap her some times, because Jasmine has done enough shit to her to last a life time and she still puts herself in danger to run over to help her. I so hope Kale and Aidan get there in time, and Mia kicks Jasmines ass. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Yep, Mia is so busy trying to show Jasmine that she's her best friend that she gets herself in trouble. However,Mia doesn't know Jasmine is decieving her. All she knows is that her friend who she cares about is hurt, has a broken leg, and no one is there for her. So, she treats her like she'd wanted to be treated in her situation. If you read closely, you can see Jasmine is being forced to lie to Mia and Jasmine is trying to apologize to Mia in her own secret way while talking to her on the phone. 

 

Thanks for the review!  

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/02/11

Title: Chapter 17: Jealousy

Thanks for a great update. Aidan is not a happy guy and Mia is going to actually see how much she means to him. Andrew is a little stalkerish if you ask me. The man couldn't figure out that Mia was with Aidan/Kale. But I guess he is going to learn it the hard way.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Aidan has never shown this side and I think it is time that Mia see it because she will finally realize how intense Aidan truly loves her. It is a good thing that is was just Aidan, he has some restraint but not much, if it was Kale he would have punched first and moved Mia out of the way later.

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Date: 08/01/11

Title: Chapter 19: Meet The Parents

Naughty...Naughty Girl Mia is but Kale and Aidan's mothers deserved it. The one fainted and the other on in shock. I love it. Mia needs to be pregnant and with twins. One that will look like Aidan, and one that will look like Kale with carmel skin. LOL then the two dig bats will have nothing to say when it comes to Aidan, Mia, and Kale. That was pretty funny about the fish slapping Aidan in the face. It was almost like Kale was getting him back for almost destroying their relationship.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Date: 21/01/11

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Miss. Innocent meets Mr. Dangerous.

Who says love has to be soft and gentle?

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Caution is an original work of fiction written by C.C. Please do not copy and paste this story to any other websites. 

 

Beautiful banner by: The Queen, Missus James!!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: La Famiglia
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 165
Read Count: 136399
Published: 27/11/10
Updated: 21/06/11


Title: Chapter 9: The Date

I aint got no words for this chapter. But Candy you needs to stop playin with the hussy in me because if I were Kambree his back seat would have been were I lost my virginity.

That was some hot shit, and I loved how they made a connection, but it is very interesting how they both do things to keep from having to acknowledging those types of growing feelings. I think Kambree and Gianni are about to learn some things about each other that makes they draw closer together.

Kambree is a voilent type and I am sorry but that so turns Gianni on just like I think him calling her princess turns her own.  Gianni maybe one arrogant SOB but he doesn't look at her like she is a star nor does he care about her being a celebrity. And I think that is what pisses Kambree off.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for a great chapter.

Hussy Powers Activated and waiting for my chance to jump Gianni like a two dollar whore.



Author's Response: LOL!!!!!!! Ya hussy self! Gianni likes that type of stuff! LOL!

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Date: 03/12/10

Title: Chapter 15: To Do Or Not To Do?

OK, So I kicked Kammy out of this chapter and inserted myself but in my fantasy he took me several times on the floor. LOL

HOTT DAMN!!!

Look at what I see the gentle giant is actually putting someone over the needs pof Gianni Junior. he really truly cares about Kammy like he has never cared about anyone before. He admitted she was his girlfriend and that he doesn't cheat. which to me is the biggest step of all. Because sure he was with many women, but not once has it been with multiple partners at the same time. He would "release" one before hooking up with a new one.

Not only that but he couldn't take her virginity from her like that even if she was beggin him for it. I swear Gianni is showing that side of him that makes you truly love him more then one could. He is a dominate personality with a heart that truly cares about women that care about themselves. Maybe that is why "Denise" Skank #1 with no self worth what so ever was no important enough for Gianni to remember her name. She is throwing her "goodies" and Gianni is sending that shyt back in a trash bag.

He is getting too close to Kammy that I think he will try to back away from her or try to get with someone else that he won't be able to do it.

Kammy showed Gianni several parts of herself in this chapter and I think until Gianni can admit to her how he truly feels he won't be able to take her "goodies" . Kammy wants to give them to him, but is she really ready for what it will mean. Does she believe that this will keep Gianni?? Because for some reason Kammy has to answer those questions before she is ready to give her "goodies" to Gianni and she too has to be honest with Gianni.

Thanks for another great chapter. Looking for what comes next.



Author's Response:

Only you would say some mess like that, LOL! LOVE IT!

But you are so right about a lot things about Gian!

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/12/10

Title: Chapter 29: A Night Out And A Little Queasy

That was a very intriguing chapter for so many reasons, the relationship between Kassie and Chris is something I will be keeping my eye on. They have a very natural chemistry with each other.

I love the relationship between Gianni and Kambree because even though he wanted her he knew how sore she was and he just watched her sleep. I loved how he babied her because she didn't feel well.

I loved how Kambree was having a ball at the basketball game. She seems to love to hang out with her man and their friends more then anything else. I wonder if we will get a chapter with her visiting him at the tattoo parlor. :)

These two have come a long way and the fact that they love each other so completely for not liking each other so much is a wonderful thing. I hope that Lamar doesn't hurt Kambree because I would not want Gianni ending up in jail. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

We shall see how it plays out lol! :)

K/C, hmm, we shall see about that one! ;)

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Date: 24/12/10

Title: Chapter 17: Fade To Black

This was a very intense chapter.

I am glad Kambree seems to pull strength from being with Gianni. She needs him right now just as much as she needs him since she seems to be the only thing that seems to be able to calm the beast in side him. I love the fact that he almost took Derek's head off because fact is Derek should have kept his mouth shut and just been supportive and not say a world. Love that the menz were together all of their fine azzes in one spot. :)

I think Tony and Gianni are about to F*** Up Lamar's world that prick isn't going to know what hit him. He might want to change his looks and get gone before they find his weasel ass and slice and dice his not so manly hood.

I am pissed that Kambree is suspended but hey if that means more time with Gianni until the heat cools down. I love how Gianni was honest with himself and how he said that Kammy meant more to him then the bet. And in essence his freinds and family know the truth, I think they are just waiting for him to admit the truth because once he does, it is going to be an interesting time. He truly cares for Kammy because if he didn't I don't think the beast would be willing to bust out. It had nothing to do with Gianni and everything to do with Kammy.

Looking forward to the next couple of chapters and Lamar finding out what a real man looks like. Gianni you needs to tell kambree how you feel and the truth, and Kammy you need to do the same. I love that in the beginning it was all about themselves and now its about each other. Plus the characters have stayed true to form. I think Lamar might want to watch out for Kambree because she isn't weak, I think once her anger gets the best of him, Gianni might be holding her back.

Another ramble for another great chapter.



Author's Response:

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS!

You said it right, Gianni is seeing things clearer now and reacting like he should. She is probably the only one who can calm his beast or monster and she's the only one who awakes it. The situations that they are running into seem to bring them together. She needs him just like he needs her!

God bless Lamar because we all know what happens when Gianni and the De Luca's get angry!

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Date: 12/12/10

Title: Chapter 8: One Date

Candy, I think you hit it out of the ball park with this chapter.

OK, unlike Kambree asking Gianni where his clothes were, I would be asking him where is bed room was. LMAO don't judge me. He is sweatin, he is willin, and he is available.

All I can say is, GAME ON!!! ;) ;) ;)

Kassie, is either one evil sister, or she likes playin wit some fire because I think she knows something is going on with her sister when it comes to Gianni, just like Chris knows his brother. Roomie and I were like Kassie and Chris might just be one very interesting pairing. lol

Looking forward to the next chapter. And lookie there I am almost speechless with this chapter. :)



Author's Response:

Ya damn hussy!!!!!!!

& don't you dare suggest something like about Kassie and Chriss lol! You'll get my m ind going again!!!!!

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Date: 02/12/10

Title: Chapter 8: One Date

neneburge  This is just my opinion but I think you have to remember one thing about the Gianni character he is a dominate personality so his cockiness, and arrogance is apart of that. Kambree isn't submitting to him, nor does she not see who he is but he intrigues her just about as much as she intrigues him. The game that I feel is being played right now is that they both want to prove something to the other person. Its a game of wills, if you will and Gianni, isn't going to roll over from his views when he still has a preceived notion about Kambree. But you have to realize also that every move that Kambree makes pulls him in further.

Author's Response:

You are absolutely right there!

 

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Date: 02/12/10

Title: Chapter 7: One word or Two?

Candy, you are too much. I loved this chapter.

Gianni with his mother and grandmother were very interesting. He doesn't want to disappoint his family and I admire that about him, he is the gentle giant even if only tends to show most that he is the giant is someone that is worth getting to know.

I would hate to be in his shoes if Frankie had to be called, so I don't think Gianni is going to do anything to disrespect himself or his family. Maybe its me but I don't think he is judging Kambree as much as he is putting her in that sterotypical box when it comes to celebrities. Because it seems to me that his idea of who she is, is dissolving even if she called him a prick. I still stand by loving the arrogance of him, there is something about that is just a turn on. Looking forward to seeing his dominance in this story.

Kambree got the flu and a surprise "No Comment" got to love it. What did she want Gianni to say, the denial would have been much more damaging. She needs to Thank Gianni because now she will be the center of attention. And maybe that is just what she needs to become a little more unsheltered and live just a little. Looking forward to what she has to say to him. LOL

Sorry for the ramblings, but I really liked this chapter.



Author's Response:

He is a gentle giant but he can be an ass as we know! :)

He's lovable I think lol.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/12/10

Title: Chapter 7: One word or Two?

One more thing, I find it very interesting that both Kambree and Gianni have this big ol' denial thing going on and they both seem to get under each others skin. So this tells me that they have connected more then either of them know, realize, or even want to admit.

And why are my sister hussies hatin on my Gianni, he is a man with a blind side to real women. He likes to keep women around that don't think and just do. So with Kambree is going to be an interesting change, plus I think his dominance is going to come into play in a different form. Which I really will like.



Author's Response: I have to agree with you one that! ;)

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Date: 01/12/10

Title: Chapter 6: Price Of Fame

Candy, you are one twisted hussy but I love you for it.

Kambree and Gianni protest to much for me. LMAO looking forward to the next couple of chapters because me thinks things are about to get really interesting. Gianni is pissed that she made him look like an ass and he is going to work ten times harder to get her in his web. But who will get caught in it. I'm thinking both of them.

And Kambree is wishing to escape and be someone else. Can I say I am hoping Kambree does go wild, because maybe just maybe she wouldn't be so uptight about arrogant asses steppin to her and calling her spoiled. And I might be the only one but I kinda agree with Gianni that she is a "little" spoiled...maybe spoiled is the wrong word. Maybe I need to use Sheltered because I feel like Kambree isn't really living, she is following her dreams but is she following her heart????

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

LOL!!!!!!!!!! Let's see what those two will get into next!

Kambree could be a littl sheltered. She hasn't put on her big girl panties yet lol!

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/12/10

Title: Chapter 19: Trouble

This was a great chapter as well.

I am glad Kammy told her mother that she had to let her fly. She held her own with Matt, and the one thing I truly love is the fact that she can keep her head held high. She loves her family, friends, and Gianni and she also loves herself for setting the record straight.

There is only so much she can handle and to be thrown for a loop like this and still be able to stand with her head held high is a great thing, and it shows the strength of the character. I just have one question more like an observation. I love how Kammy was thinking about Gianni and the next thing he was on the phone, he helped to calm her nerves and I think he gave her the strength she needed to go forward with the interview.

Whenever those two really need each other no words need to be spoken because some how they just know and they are there for each other. I am glad Kammy is going away and wants to take Gianni with her, she needs a break and some cuddle time with her man.

Thanks for another great chapter looking forward to the next chapter. The Hussy in me was like when Gianni was on the phone, I would have asked me to meet me somewhere so we could get a quickie in .



Author's Response:

LOVE THIS AS USUAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ya damn hussy, no mens!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 13/12/10

Title: Chapter 5: First Meeting

I don't know what to say about this chapter. For some reason I can't get into this Kambree.  I think you spoiled me with the other Kambree that I am not seeing Kambree as a Broadway Singer and singing to kiddies in a Bell costume.

And I have a question about Gianni, maybe 2 questions? LOL Does Gianni have a job or is his full time job tryin to get Kambree, Because I feel a little uneasy about a grown ass man showing up at a playhouse without a kid. Stalker comes to mind when I think about it. LOL I don't mind him stalking me because my ass is straight up a HUSSY but he is creepin me out a little.

I guess you spoiled me so much before that I am just so intently waiting on the Heat of the characters that I can't get into these two at the moment. But Gianni can still get into me. (Hussy card activated in few force.) I liked the first story because Kambree and Gianni met more so by accident, and here is he seeking her out and it looses somethinhg for me.

Hope you don't take this the wrong way, I love your stories and the character but I guess I am just not intune with this Kambree and Gianni just yet. Thanks for a great update even if I was unsure about it.

 



Author's Response:

Kambree has not changed a bit. She is still the same woman you met in the previous stories, she just has a new profession. She was never really rebellious in the other one, she wasn't a bad girl or anything of that nature. This is the same woman.

We are only on chapter six, this story hasn't even began to move so, you're jumping the gun a little bit with Gianni. There were adults there also and when I said playhouse, I met a place where plays and musicals are shown. He's not a sicko or anything.

As for when they met, I felt it was an accident here. She saw him, she wasn't interested. He saw her, she thought he was an arrogant ass. In Strength, she knew he was an asshole but this time he is just more upfront about it. I wanted Gianni to live up to his full potential this time. I moved to fast in trying to change him, I want him to change on his own this time around. I want the love to just come natural.

They are very much the same characters. :)

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Date: 30/11/10

Title: Chapter 4: Two Different Views

OK, I feel bad for liking this bet but I guess that is what happens when it comes to be a hussy, I feelike the bet is going to teach them all a lesson in love.

Looking forward to what is about to happen. I can't wait to see what happens between Kambree and Gianni, they both are about to get a wake up call because they assumed some stuff about each other.

Kambree believes Gianni to be arrogant. which to me he isn't so much arrogant as he is cocky since no one else has seems to hit him in the heart to make him change. Gianni believes Kambree to be all about herself and her career. Which she might be but I think Kambree hasn't met a man that could put up with her career and her last name.

The game is on and i am getting ready for rhw ride. Until then I still believe that chris and gianni can keep my company. ;) LOL



Author's Response: LOL! YA DAMN HUSSY! HOW MANY TIMES HAVE I TOLD YOU TO STAY AWAY FROM THE MENS!?

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/11/10

Title: Chapter 3: Who Better Than Me To Do It?

I was a little turned off by Gianni's age for some reason but I loved this chapter just the same. The family connection was very important in this chapter and I love how both Kambree and Gianni are both family orienated.

My favorite Chris line was : "Clawd have mercy! The Lord is my shepard, he knows what I want."  He is just like his brother if not a little worse because the stuff actually comes out of his mouth. LOL

I am looking forward to the development of this story because it is very interesting to see how everyone plays a role in the story. Candy you amazes me how you transform each story into something different and make it new and refreshing.

Gianni seem to think he is about to teach Kambree something and I think they both will end up teaching each other something, And I think that is what I am looking forward to the most.



Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/11/10

Title: Chapter 3: Who Better Than Me To Do It?

BTW, I agree with everyone else, I love the new title. Unlike some I think Gianni better watch out. Kambree might want to caution her self to Gianni, but Gianni might want to caution his heart to Kambree. And that is why the title fits so much better. Looking forward to what you come up next.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)

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Date: 27/11/10

Title: Chapter 3: Who Better Than Me To Do It?

@pmgayle _ the bet wasn't about Kambree but Gianni getting back stage that is why Chris paid him the $200.00 well that is how I took it. I think if the bet was about Kambree Chris would not have paid up so easily before hand. I think Candy is trying to portray Chris and Gianni in the light of two young men never been in love and playin the field until someone comes in and turns their head to see how to truly treat a women.

Author's Response: You got it right! :)

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Date: 27/11/10

Title: Chapter 2: Opening Night

I don't know what to say, I am speechless at the moment. I have to get used to this new version because it was way different then the last coupld of version, Renee is still the same. Gianni is still the same. The brothers relationship is still the same.

The Tyson clan is way different and I like he fact that Kambree has her mother and sister with her and that she is a broadway singer. I am looking forward to how Kambree and Gianni meet.

I feel like the relationships between the two families are going to be very interesting/ Can't wait to read the next chapter.

P.S. I will be patiently waiting for my Pebbles return thank you very much but until then. I am taking this story as it comes and loving it so far.



Author's Response: I hope you like this verison as well!

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/11/10

Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue

That was an intense ending and I have to say I like it more then the last time. This was heart breaking and almost had me in tears. (Until I realized that I could help Gianni until Kambree returns. A Hussy always knows when she is needed. LMAO) I love that Gianni wanted her to lie to him to make it ok for him letting her go even though it was going to kill him. Kambree wanting to run away was because she is hurt and she doesn't know how to deal with that emotion especially when she has to see it in Gianni's face as well. This is a sad ending but I have to say Kambree and Gianni are so meant to be together and I am glad you decided to end it differently.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! :)

It was a tear jerker. & LMFAOOOOO! I knew you were going to go there, lolol.

Gianni almost needed for to lie to him. He needed it or he couldn't have done what he did. He has completely lost it.

You are so right about Kambree. You really hit it home there.

They are one couple that is meant to be. I will say that. They are a special kind of couple.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/06/11

Title: Chapter 16: Lies

OK, I think I have anger issues but Lamar would be ball-less by the end of the day and then I would tie his has by his baby stuff and make him tell the truth.

Kambree wants to have sex, but she isn't ready for it. Gianni has been with skanks that give their stuff over because they lack self respect. But I think if this was about the bet he would have gone through with it but because he is fallingfor her, truly falling for her he can't do that to her or himself. But I think when he lets the best out on her, he might just be surprised by his reaction.

Gianni is about to beat Lamars ASS, and once his grandparents find out about this I think Lamar might want to find a hole and bury himself. I am looking forward to the next chapter because this will be the test of how much he truly cares for Kammy. Lamar got paid 2 million but he is going to need all that money to get his "pretty" back.

I feel bad for Kambree and she might need her mom but she is going to have to fix this for herself if she ever wants to become a woman. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

LMFAO!!!!!!!!!! You are killing Lamar up in here!

Let's see how Gianni handles this mess, oh, lord! Do we really need an angry G?!

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Date: 12/12/10

Title: Chapter 28: Can't Hold Us Down, Part 3

This was a very interesting chapter. I loved the interview that kambree and Kassie gae because it shows how close of a family they really are. I am glad Kambree has decided to take time off for herself and her relationship with Gianni.

All I can say is I hope whatever Lamar is planning back fires and gets his ass kicked De Luca style. He wants to hurt Kambree because she didn't love him the way he wanted her to love him, what is he a baby whining because he didn't getto suck his momma's tit to long. I hope someone teaches Lamar the meaning of loving a woman, and being loved by a man. I get the feeling Lamar is about to go way to far and wnd up being someone's bitch.

I hope the "D" in that conversation is not Derek, and if it is, he gets some common sense and tells Gianni whats going on before it is to late. Or maybe something else is going on and knowing Candy, I can see her doing exactlly what I think she is doing, and if that is the case, I will worship at her feet. :) 

I am looking forward to the next chapter/



Author's Response:

Lol, we shall see what's going on!

LMFAO @ suck on his momma's tit LMAO! You just about killed me with that one!

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/12/10

Title: Chapter 27: Can't Hold Us Down, Part 2

That was so HOTT SHYT!!!!

Those two sure know how to do it and do it good. I need a cold ass shower and a smoke after that one, and a ice cold drink to go along with it. I swear Gianni and Kambree are made for each other because Kambree may have that innocent personality but she is truly a freak behind closed doors and she knows how to get her man, good, hard, and ready for action.

Gianni knows how to hit it, and hit it good. And even though he regrets how rough he can get with her, Kambree is the only one that I think can truly handle him. He knows when he goes to far and I think that right there shows how much Kambree truly means to him and can get to him. He love kambree so much that he sometimes need to possess her and I think that scares him. But then again he likes to get burned by it also,

So I see they "forgot" to us protection, so does that mean a Baby....our Pebbles... is looking to be coming into her parents orbit again???

I just would like to say that this was another HSOA chapter. And I am enjoying the front and back action. LOL



Author's Response:

Ya hussy!

Kambree knows how to keep her man interested! She is this shy thing but when she's with her babes, she something else!

Now, Gian, oh lord, he is tearing it up left and right, jeez lmao! I have to agree with you on Gianni, it's like he needs to be possessive and alpha maleish.

& oh, lord, we'll just have to see what is happening with those two, they weren't think smart, they got caught up in the moment again!

LMFAO, YOU DAMN HUSSY!

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/12/10

Title: Chapter 31: Becoming One

I loved this chapter because Gianni's heart wanted to protect Kambree but his soul wanted to be with her. I am happy that Chris went with them because he had to be the reasonable one. I am glad that Gianni went to be with Kambree because she needed him a lot more then Lamar needed an ass whippin.

My mom said that she would make sure that lamar felt like the bitch that he truly is, but having him gang rapped, up the ass several times. I would have to agree with her because he hurt the girl and the cops are just "La De Da" about it, she has a bruise on her face and her wrist might be fractured, even if you can't prove the rape, assault can be proven. I swear to many times you don't have the crime reported and when you do report it, the cops act like it can't be proven.

I loved Renee and her needed to tell her son that Kambree is pregnant and him looking at her like Webster, "What you talkin about Willis??" kind of ways. If he finds out that Kambree is pregnant and Lamar tried to rape her, pitch black will not be the color Gianni sees when he is beatin Lamars ass.

I hope Chris called a "Code Blue" because Kambree is going to need Gianni and I believe she isn't going to want to leave his side because he is the only one that truly makes her feel safe and right now that is what she needs to feel safe. So I say Chris call Frankie and let him do his buzinezz because Lamar is going to wish his momma never birthed his ass.

 Loved the chapter and looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Chris is like the only one who can ever get through to Gianni.

We still see that Gianni is still battling with his beast and his soft side, he wants to hurt any and everything that hurts Kambree but you are right about his soul.

& your mom is a hoot lol, I already love her!!!!!!!

We shall see how the De Luca's/Patterson's/Tyson's handle this mess! ;)

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/12/10

Title: Chapter 30: Things Happening

Candy,

That was so mean of you to leave it right there. I hope you have a great christmas.

So Kambree is pregnant well HOT DAMN pebbles is coming back. Yaya!! for us. I hope she and Gianni get to discuss her being pregnant because they both have been avoiding the subject even though it was a possibility because of the fact that they had not been using protection. Gianni and Kambree have both grown and that fact alone will make them very interesting parents.

I liked the conversation between Gianni and Derek,  Derek got to tell him what he felt and Gianni told him the truth, he had grown from a boy to a man. He changed for the better but inside he was still same asshole that he has always been. The difference is he has someone that loves that asshole in him and sees to the heart of who he is. Derek should have kept that part about wanting to sleep with Kambree to himself. I am glad Gianni told him that family would have never done what he did. Derek needs to think about his actions and then go from there.

Denise and Lamar, how did I know??? Easy Denise is the type that gives it up easily and since Lamar was willing to try and take it from Kambree, it goes to show that he and Denise where probably doing it. Lamar is a piece of scum that I can't wait for him to learn the meaning of being someones bitch. Gianni is going to teach him De Luca style and then I need Nick to teach him a lesson as well. I am glad Kambree kicked him in the nuts and that she got away before anything serious happened.

I hope when Kambree gets to Gianni that he takes her to get checked out first before he goes and handles his businezz on Lamar's ass.

Great chapter looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response: Nice review! :) Loved it!

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/12/10