Penname: Divsionred [Contact]

Real name: Sharon

Member Since: 10/07/08

Membership status: Member

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I am not a writer but I love reading all the stories that have been posted on TST and FanFiction.



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Baby of Mine© by SparkApCider
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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Sequel to It's All About You. The second installment of the series Love Bears All

Baby of Mine is the story of a young man (Brian Keith Santi) and a young woman (Nicole America Mendes) growing preciously in love and looking towards the future of building a life together. Every thing seems to be going well until tragedy strikes the young family. Brian finds himself standing alone in the face of fear and uncertainty but rises to the challenge of fatherhood and dares anyone to doubt the woman he loves and the family few believe is even worth it.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC). The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC), and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Graphics by SPAC 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: Love Bears All: A Journey to Love
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 55656
Read Count: 18498
Published: 23/04/09
Updated: 26/03/11

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Ok I am confused about what Vanessa did...she stole Brians; dad from a woman that has his child who is Nicole's ex? A BABY SHOWER!!!!YEAH!!!! Thanks

Author's Response: No...No...d'red, not Nicole's ex, but her dead ex's best friend. He was kinda sweet on her. Nothing happened. I'm happy to say.  

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Date: 03/06/09
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

 am surprised by Jonathan.  His mother is so nice and he is nothing but the devil.  I can't believe that he spke the way to Peyton what an f...ing idiot.  He does need someone to kick his sorry behind the foll.  I want his POV for the reason why he is acting this way.

As for Vanessa I guess that blood is thinker than water for her son to forgive her crazy ass.

I hope that Nicole and the babies will be ok and that Brian will survive this.

Thanks for a great read.



Author's Response: Thanks DivsionredFor reading and reviewing. Jonathan is a brat, overindulged to compensate for the absence...and a little of the poor me syndrome. He's such an ass. He likes Peyton because she doesn't take his crap. He hasn't mastered the rudiments of communicating with a pretty girl you like.

Author's Response: Thanks DivsionredFor reading and reviewing. Jonathan is a brat, overindulged to compensate for the absence...and a little of the poor me syndrome. He's such an ass. He likes Peyton because she doesn't take his crap. He hasn't mastered the rudiments of communicating with a pretty girl you like.

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Date: 23/06/09
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Please, please please, do not kill her off...that woukd be so unfair to Brian and the twins.  Thanks for a great read.  Glad that at least the twins are doing ok.

Author's Response: All will end well. Don't worry. Nicole is resting and doing some real spiritual healing! :D

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Date: 27/06/09
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Thanks for a great update.  Glad that Peyton told off Liz...but what the hell is she doing kissing Greg?  Now that is so not cool.  Thanks

Author's Response:

LOL.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Peyton hates Liz.  She wants to walk up and down her like Nancy Sinatra...fer shur!

Not cool...pain can come.  They have relationships...they love their best friends who are indeed having an emotional spin cycle going on...but again hurt and pain could come from moments of pleasure.

Hmm...details to come! :-0 

 

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Date: 03/07/09
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Thanks for a great update.  Way to go Brian step up to the plate.  Take control of the situation.  He dealt with his mother very respectfully and made sure that she didn't move Nicole's things...good for him,  Kind of sad when you can't trust your own mother.

Brian's talk with Greg was on point.  Greg needs to stop trying to be with Paige,  And Paige needs to remember that she is married.

Nicole needs to come back to the living she can't be with Rob anymore because he is dead.

Thanks



Author's Response:

LOL.  Brian has a full plate.  And he's spinning more plates than he ever thought he would.   He has to keep Van on watch.  She's a pushy woman and he can't let her get to far out on her own.  She'll take over.

Greg needed a wakeup.  How much good it will do?  Still don't know yet.  Nicole's getting her stuff together.  She doesn't want Robbie.   She wants a promise that no one can give her...that she won't suffer anymore loss.

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Date: 07/07/09
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Yes, I really did enjoy the update...thank goodness Robbi showed her what she would be missing.  Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response: Yes...she fastened her sights on the losses and forgot about the gifts...she's home now...let's see what is up next! :-)

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Date: 09/07/09
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Thanks for a great update.  So there is history between Jonathan and Peyton.  I am glad that the pediatrician allowed Blake to go home with her family.  That was nice of Peyton to get Johnathan to talk with their pediatrician.  I am not sure if I want to see a Peyton Jonathan hook up.  But what will be will be.  Glad that their grandfather was their to see the twins and the rest of the family except for the mean grandma.  Thanks again.

Author's Response: Thanks divisionred for reading. Yes there is some serious love hate going on with Jonathan and Peyton. Yes! PawPaw got to hold his grandbabies.

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Date: 14/07/09
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

This was a great update...poor Brian suffering because he couldn't get over the fact that he thought that Nic wanted to leave him.  I can't believe that we are down to the wire on this one.  Thanks

Author's Response: Yes...Brian loves so hard. True to his zodiac! Yep we're approaching the end...and it's been great sharing! ;-)

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Date: 17/07/09
Title: Chapter 19: Wedding Invitation & Program

Thanks for the invite.  I will be there with bells on. 

Author's Response: Glad to know it! It's a three day event...and then our couple leaves for their honeymoon! ;-)

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Date: 22/07/09
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

Nicole said it she fought Brian all the way but he was determined to win her heart and he did.  Thanks for a great story.

Author's Response:

Boy did she! LOL! If I gave you guys the story which was intended to be Brian's Journal comparative to It's All about You, it would have done poor Nic no favors with you Divisionred...and I would have had to double this story to undo the damage.  But I'm glad you liked it and hopefully the couple is set on a good course with everyone.  Nicole's trip to Serenity was a must!  Prior, a lot of readers were skeptical that she wasn't fully giving herself to Brian, and she wasn't.  So that was as far as I dared to go with Brian's interpretation of their budding romance.  He wasn't use to a woman like her...she's so different than Liz who basically told him what their day to day would entail.  Nicole brings out the manly in him...makes him want to run a little faster, work a little harder, etc.

They're a good match!

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Date: 24/07/09
Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue

Thanks for a great read.  I really enjoyed the story.

Author's Response: Thank you divisionred! You are pure awesome! I'm so happy you gave Nicole a chance! See she's not so bad!

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Date: 25/07/09
Title: Chapter 1: The CAST

Great cast.  Thanks

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Date: 26/03/11
At Last by Realstone
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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Someone once said, "that you fall in love when you least expect it."  What they didn't say is what happens when that person can't love you back.

Special thank yous to BlackMamba for the fantastic banner and to Pashmina for her assistance as beta.  Their help made this story so much better.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5515
Read Count: 675
Published: 24/04/09
Updated: 24/04/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice story.  I felt her emotions and the reason why she left because she fell in love with Jacobs father, Vincent and he couldn't return the feelings because he hated her but she was the salvation for his son soul.  Thanks for a great read.  Well done indeed.

Author's Response: Thank you for understanding what I was trying to say.

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Date: 25/04/09
Loving Lane by Lina1890
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 

 

There’s love, there’s loathing and then there’s Lane.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Bookworm Beauties
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10543
Read Count: 7342
Published: 08/05/09
Updated: 30/04/10

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Title: Chapter 2: Late Spring 1997

Looking forward to reading more.  I felt bad for Lana her mother is so mean.  What a way to treat your child.  So what is this guy story.  I cna underestand his reluctance to marry but not all marriages fall apart. Thanks

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Date: 08/05/09
Title: Chapter 3: I love Lane

Can't believe that her parents are so heartless.  Thank goodness that her dr is so understanding and is willing to help her.  Thanks

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Date: 11/07/09
Title: Chapter 4: Oh, Brother

Thanks for a great update so now she is a published author and her brother has graduated high school, which is great.  Why did she give him 3 tickets to Japan?  Her story was great.  Thanks

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Date: 11/07/09
Title: Chapter 5: Out and About

Thanks for a great update.  SO is he the guy from the earlier post?  I mean her friend Mikey?  Thanks

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Date: 11/07/09
Title: Chapter 6: Fate Makes Her Entrance

Thanks for the update.  They meet at last.

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Date: 11/07/09
Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Good cast. Thanks

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Date: 18/07/12
Title: Chapter 2: Late Spring 1997

Poor Lane her mother is just mean. So for the guy at his brother's wedding he seems lost but determined not get married. Thanks

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Date: 18/07/12
Title: Chapter 3: I love Lane

How can a parent treat her child that way? Just sinful parenting. I really hope her father isn't as crazy as his wife. The best thing Lane's mother ever did for her was take her to the psychiatrist. She seems to be very kind and a cheer leader for Lane. Thanks

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Date: 18/07/12
Title: Chapter 4: Oh, Brother

Great update. Glad that Lane got from underneath her crazy parents. To bad her brother is still stuck there. She gave her brother a really cool gift. I was also happy that Lane us a successful writer. Thanks

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Date: 18/07/12
Title: Chapter 5: Out and About

I like her friend Mike. How lucky is she that another friend has bitten her a job. Thanks

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Date: 18/07/12
Title: Chapter 6: Fate Makes Her Entrance

I haven't read the other story yet but I guess this was Gabriel. Thanks

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Date: 18/07/12
Title: Chapter 7: Whistle While You Work...

Where is the rest of the story. Who is the crazy person Michael was talking about? Does Gabriel work for this company? Thanks

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Date: 18/07/12