Penname: Divsionred [Contact]

Real name: Sharon

Member Since: 10/07/08

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I am not a writer but I love reading all the stories that have been posted on TST and FanFiction.



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Tiny, muffled footsteps bounded towards me. Faith stood no taller than three feet which I personally thought was petite for a four-year-old. Most of her cashew nut colored skin was covered by the oversized t-shirt she had draped over her shoulders. I giggled at the disheveled state that her dark brown hair was in. The curls hung loosely and frizzy all around her head; her curls extended at least a foot from her head. I briefly was reminded of Huey Freeman from The Boondocks. Some of her features matched mine exactly and some clearly didn’t. One feature was her big, smoky, blue-green eyes that stared up at me with innocence. They seemed to be framed with a few splashes of freckles. She would probably never know how much her eyes haunted me at times.


Sequel to And So They Fall . . Jake and Liandra's story continue.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 12638
Read Count: 10365
Published: 24/05/09
Updated: 28/08/09


Title: Chapter 9: Eight.

I hope that you will update the story soon.  I am not sure if you are still on this board but if you are please update.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/04/10

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Summary:

Sacrifices must be made.

An Evil Dead Fic



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Drabbles , Off Cannon
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Everyone Says I Love You
Series: Tales of the Boomstick
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1837
Read Count: 1880
Published: 26/05/09
Updated: 26/05/09


Title: Chapter 1: Tainted Love

ROFLMAO, I LO when the therapist said whose soul should I eat first in the mist of their argument and they looked at him liked WTF?  Oh my goodness, this was a great read.  Thanks

 

PS I think that I am going to go back and read the whole series so I can read this story again.  Thanks



Author's Response: Hey Division. So glad you liked it! This series is so fun to write, so I think I'll add another ;)

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/05/09

Title: Chapter 1: Tainted Love

I just love this story...they crack me up.  Especially Ash, how can she be mad at him...he is so crazy.  Thanks and now I have to go and see if you added another story.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/08/09

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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

For the "I love You" Challenge.

Spock tries to say I love you for the first time.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Film)
Classification: Cannon, Drabbles , General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff
Challenges: Everyone Says I Love You
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 101
Read Count: 959
Published: 27/05/09
Updated: 27/05/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks for the story...she just walked away before saying let me know when you are sure...oh snap.  Thanks

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/05/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 48]
Summary:

 

 

Tick-tock, tick-tock, tick-tock...welcome to the sound of the biological clock. It takes center stage in the lives of three families: The Whitmans, The Thompsons, and the Murrays. This is the story about love versus loss, dreams versus duty, fame versus family, and babies, babies, babies!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 32141
Read Count: 4852
Published: 28/05/09
Updated: 01/01/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Morning Sickness (2004)

You can kiss Jasmine goodbye you dog.  The problem is that I think that Jasmine is pregnant too.  Damn what a mess casanova has gotten himself into by leading with the little head instead of the big head the dog.  Thanks

Author's Response: LOOOOL! Div-red, Love that review! Woof Woof indeed! Thank you so much for reading :o)

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/09

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Whitmans (Present Day)

How in the hell did he end up marry to Destiny?  He was suppose to win Jasmine back.  And now Jasmine is married to one of his friends by the name of Bo...WTH?  ALso she is a big time writer and his wife finds out that Jamine and Bo just returned from Ireland and her come back is didn't a man from Ireland come into the library...WTF????Oh man, hood rat alert,,,damn poor thing so jealous.  I guess that she thought that she was getting a winner but oops not yet.  See that is what she gets for listening to her crazy ass mother and then they have another child on the way.  DAMN!!!!Sucks to be her and him right now...the Whitmans....Thanks

Author's Response:

Div-Red! Oh man, once again you have me rolling :oD Thank you for your reviews. You have many great questions which I plan to answer.

Poor Destiny is right. Jealousy is a bad, bad thing isn't it?? It can make you paranoid, and leave you open to evil whispering from bad-minded people - like crazy ass mothers :o(

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/09

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Young Love (1987)

Thanks for a great update,  I like Perry and Sakia.  I was stunned by the abiuse that Whitman endured by the hands of his dad.  That was very sad.  It seems that Perry's mother was a piece of work as well.  Thanks

Author's Response: Hi Div-Red. Yes, these two bonded through their not so great home lives. Neither one dwells too hard on it but it's had its effect on who they've become. Thanks so much for your comments and for reading!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/06/09

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Cancelling The Stork (2003)

I just read all of the chapters of the story and wow what an amazing ride they are all experiencing.  I am not sure why Perry and Suskia broke up...that makes no sense to me except for the fact maybe she is going crazy but to not tell her husband what is going on with her is unfair to him.  Shame on her for that.  She has a great husband that loves her and she just threw it all away.

As for Jasmine and Aaron, their relationship was a mess from the start to the end.

Now Aaron is married to the mother of his child soon to be children, how in the hell did that happen?  Why did he marry her?  Who still does that?  He married a stranger and her mother is crazy but probably ruight about him.  ANd wifey is jealous of Jasmine...who is now married to Bo.

What twisted lives these people have. Thanks



Author's Response:

Hi Division!  I'm hoping to answer all of your questions as the chapters go on. Things that have started out messy will hopefully get cleaned up, LOL!

It sure is a twisted ride. Each and every decision 'right or wrong' - that they make, is leading my characters where they are going. Sometimes it's not always clear right away how things got to the point they are at; it's like a big puzzle that has to be rearranged.

Anyway, thanks for taking the time to read and especially to leave feedback. I hope that you'll keep reading!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/08/09

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The Murrays (Present Day)

Thanks for a great update.  Jasmine is to funny.  to bad her and Bo are having such a difficult time getting pregnant.  Thanks

Author's Response: Hi Div-Red. Thank you for staying with my story. I love seeing your comments!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/08/09

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Summary:

 

 

 A Special Thank You to BlackMamba for the AMAZING banner

Suzette is a Diva in every way. From the way she dresses to the way she walks and talks. She is beginning to hate being the it girl and decides to take break to try this new spa retreat for some rest and relaxation. When her car breaks down on a country road she is more than happy to be rescued By Kyle a rancher and businessman.

Kyle is a mans man, he loves the outdoors and working with his hands. He is a cowboy after all. On one fateful day after doing some business in the city he is driving home when he rescues his destiny.

Suzette is a city girl in every way,in her high end jeans, expensive clothing and heels (who wears heels in the country?) but she was the most beautiful thing Kyle had ever seen he was a Big man and he loved a woman with curves, a woman who could handle a real man. From the moment he saw Suzette she was his.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9843
Read Count: 31662
Published: 29/05/09
Updated: 04/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start...I enjoyed her monologue and their conversation.  Thanks

Author's Response: Thank you for the review Im glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/05/09

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like her confidence.  As for the old hag and her daughter can anyone say racist and desperate. Thanks

Author's Response: Im glad you like her character Im trying to stay true to the Monique we know and love.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/05/09

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

His house sounds very nice and at least they are both on the same page about doing the horizontal mombo.  LOL Thanks

Author's Response:

No problem. thanks for the review.

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Date: 31/05/09

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response: thank you for the review!

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Date: 05/06/09

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

That was a very hawt update.  They seem to be real good together.  The horse ride read very sexy as hell...wow.  Thanks



Author's Response: lol it was a very easy chapter to write. Thank you for the review~

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/06/09

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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:

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At seventeen years old, Leah Henderson is homeless and pissed off as hell at the world. Pick pocketing is a trade she's become accustomed to and used as payment for what she thinks society owes her. However, her most recent victim is definitely no push-over or willing to let a "criminal" out of his sight until she is behind bars where she belongs.

Officer David Greenburg is a kind-hearted man with a loving temperament and wholesome family that, in his opinion, could use another addition and the young lady soaked to the bone sitting in front of him seems to be the perfect candidate. David's eighteen year old son is less than thrilled and more than happy to see her go, at least that's what he keeps telling himself.

Disclaimer/Credits: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Photo found on gettyimages.com



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 13411
Read Count: 22612
Published: 31/05/09
Updated: 22/12/10


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Great start to the story.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/05/09

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I can understand why he doesn't want her in his home after she tried to rob him.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/09

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

 


Three men that kissed Martha Jones. And one that didn't.


Written for the June "My Number One" Challenge



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Martha Jones
Classification: Cannon, Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Martha/Ten (Doctor Who)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content
Challenges: My Number One
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1437
Read Count: 3096
Published: 04/06/09
Updated: 04/06/09


Title: Chapter 1: A Spark to Pierce the Dark

Very interesting...I have to say this Master guy is very intriguing.  Thanks

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/09

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[Reviews - 59]
Summary:

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This is a prequel to It's All about You, a third installment to the series Love Bears All

Two local teens meet, as strangers and discover love ashore, thousands of miles away from home.  Their love was young, tender, and holding no expectations, but simply being.  A hidden truth denied them, anger delayed them, but fate intervenes and finds them nearly thirty years later.  Will they accept the pain of their past and forge a future or have time and change washed away the love they once knew?

Oh when I look back now
The summer seemed to last forever
And if I had the choice
Ya - I'd always wanna be there
Those were the best days of my life...

--*--

Oh and when you held my hand
I knew that it was now or never
Those were the best days of my life...

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Back in the summer of '69

Lyrics by Bryan Adams, from "Summer of ‘69"

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC). The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC), and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Graphics by SPAC 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Crossover, General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Challenges: Crash Into Me, Coming of Age
Series: Love Bears All: A Journey to Love
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 36311
Read Count: 9867
Published: 04/06/09
Updated: 31/07/09


Title: Chapter 1: The MUSIC

Great music list.  Thanks

Author's Response: Thanks d'red. This is not the last time you'll see the school kids revisit "1969".  Hang in there!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/06/09

Title: Chapter 3: School Daze - Detroit, 1969

Great start to the story.  Her friends are crazy...so where do they meet up?  Thanks



Author's Response: It's gonna take a miracle...but it's going to happen. You shall see.  Owe to Brett! That's all I'm spilling! Thanks for picking it up!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/06/09

Title: Chapter 4: School Daze - Warren, 1969

Thanks for a great update.  These boys are so immature there is always one friend that is just crazy.  Thanks

Author's Response: LOL. That's why I didn't date in high school...LOL...immature! But what would the memories of school daze be without them...they are the iconic 'crew', the loud festering sore always in the group! Thanks again for the great review!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/06/09

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 4

"Pat had one wish for her son, that he'd be someone she and his late father would be proud of." To late for that because he is a devil in disguise...sorry Pat, your assessment was correct you all didn't give him what he needed which was not to be an ass. Sorry!!!

Glad that Pat put 2 and 2 together to realize that Vanessa had an accomplice in her scheme. Thank goodness for good friends who are willing beat down your enemies with you.

Thanks for a great update.

Happy 4th of July

Author's Response: LOL...Pat and the gang did spoil baby J.  But wait til you see how he responds to them...awesome.  The scene is coming too! Pat is a smart gal and she's lived with a lot of regrets bridled in fear and some of that isn't her fault.  She was a young girl when she became pregnant.  Hope you had a great holiday! :-)

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/07/09

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 5

I liked the fact that Pat had the opportunity to mess Vanessa up.  Can't believe that she lied to John.  How did she pull off not being a virgin when they got married?  Thanks

Author's Response: Oh yeah! Couldn't let it slide, though I wanted to keep it real and so like Pat to be remorseful following.  She's really not that heifer Van is is.  She revenge sex with Rudy...he popped her cherry.   LOL! :-)

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/07/09

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 7

Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response: You are most welcomed...I'm glad you enjoyed.  I'm going to try to get this one finished before the 1st of August.  We'll see how that goes!   :-)

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/07/09

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 8

Oh this is so great the way thatit is coming out about the way that Vanessa and her henchmen did to keep Pat and John from each other.  Oh I am waiting for Brett's wife to swallow her tongue.  What will Brett's reation be to his wife role in this mess?  Thanks



Author's Response:

Hi Divisionred...

It's time to pay the piper.  The conclusion... 

 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/07/09

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 9

Finally they are getting divorced. I did feel bad for Beth because she was caught up in that witch's schemes...now almost 30 years later the truth is finally out. Vanessa had a lot of nerve fro blaming Marla for her down fall and that of her co conspirator in this farce that she created. What will John say when he finds out how she lied about having sex with him and why didn't he ever realized that she lied? He can't sit on the side lines and blame it all on Vanessa because he has been acting like his head has been in the clouds since his friend died in the Vietnam war.

Glad that Marla kicked the ish out of Vanessa.

Vanessa is down now but she ain't out yet, I am sure that conniving heifer has something up her sleeve...what will she come up with some terminal disease to keep John with her?

I am not feeling Peyton and Jonathan although I know that is the way that this story will play out.

Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response: Jonathan and Peyton--I'm going to toss them into a huge plot eventually and test them. I still haven't decided who is going where with whom. Now that I've added some chairs to this party...I have been thinking...thinking...and thinking. But I'll keep all of you guys posted here and on TST! Thanks for all of your support with the stories!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/07/09