Penname: Divsionred [Contact]

Real name: Sharon

Member Since: 10/07/08

Membership status: Member

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I am not a writer but I love reading all the stories that have been posted on TST and FanFiction.



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In the Closetİ by SparkApCider
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 20]
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A contribution to the Open Series Canterbury...the revisited 

Taylor Viceroy can't seem to stay out of trouble.  Where ever he goes, it's sure to find him.  Recently released from a six month stint for operating a blind pig, he's now agreed to take an apprenticeship with his uncle Harvell Kimpson, a local carpenter in the small town of Mt. Clemens.  Harvell is married to a young vixen, wannabe screen siren Marlene, who fancies the younger Taylor and together they stoke a plan to drive Harvell to the nut house and make off with his new found wealth- a bounty from the Power Ball Tri-State Lottery. 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC). The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC), and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Graphics by SPAC 



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Poem Fic Challenge
Series: Canterbury...the revisited
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9423
Read Count: 2784
Published: 09/06/09
Updated: 09/10/09

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Title: Chapter 1: The MUSIC & CAST

Good premise to the story.  Thanks

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. It's been a long time since I've updated this one. It literally fell off the grid.

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Date: 29/09/09
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

WOW, what a story and I love the way that you have written it like a poem.  Thanks

Author's Response: TY divisionred fro reading. I wanted to pay homage to the original. Glad you liked it.

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Date: 29/09/09
My Lover, My Friend by Suprina Frazier
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

Although Andre and Cindy grew up together as next door neighbors, they treated each other more like brother and sister. Years later when Cindy comes home fresh from a painful divorce, Andre suddenly discovers that his feelings for her have changed. Unfortunately, he has to hide his new feelings in order to help facilitate emotional healing in her life.

 

Just when Cindy begins to see Andre in a different light, a woman from his past returns and tries to sabotage their happiness. Will this ideal couple’s union ever materialize now?

 

 

My Lover, My Friend © 2002-2009 by Suprina Frazier

 

Latest revision completed: January 2009.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 44927
Read Count: 12285
Published: 20/06/09
Updated: 20/06/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

What a sad thing to happen to Cindy for her husband to tell her some mess like that and demand that she sign the divorce papers so he can be with another woman without feeling guilty...what the heck?  Thanks

Author's Response:

Yes, that was sad and so very, very wicked of her husband to do that.

You're welcome. And thank you for leaving a comment.

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I like Andre.  I think that he will be good for Cindy.  Thanks

Author's Response: Love me some Dre, too. He's the man!

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Mavis is to funny and her children are adorable.  I can't wait for Cindy and Andre to get together it seems that they both are seeing each other with a different perspective or view.  As for the woman that Andre was dating this Julia person good riddance to bad garbage...I am not saying that she is a gold digger but if the shoe fits than she needs to be wearing those gold digger shoes.  Thanks

Author's Response: LOL! The gold digger shoes definitely fits Julia. I like Mavis and the kids, too.

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

What a shame that her husband...what did Mavis call him the fair-skinned, wavy-haired beast.  What an idiot dude was and his family to make so many racist remarks to her it is a miracle that she stayed with the  fair-skinned, wavy-haired beast for so long.  She is a better woman that I am because he would have had to pay for what he did in some way.  Thanks

Author's Response: Mavis and you got Charles pegged right on the money. I personally would have left him a lonnnnnnng time ago. And believe me, Charles is gonna pay in this story.

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Great update and the fact that her parents apologized for not being there for her was great.  Every time the ex's name is mentioned there is more disturbing information about him revealed...what an idiot this guy was my goodness. 

 

I really hope that Mavis ' husband is a good husband I would hate for him to turn out to be a dog as well. 

 

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Author's Response: Charles = idiot. Sounds plausible to me. :) You'll meet Mavis' husband and also the idiot Charles soon enough.

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

That was a really nice update.  What a smart little girl/  As for ANdre's parents they seem to want Andre to be with Cindy.  Sounds like a good plan. Thanks

Author's Response: Everybody in town wants Andre and Cindy to be together. They're a great match! I'm routing for them, too.

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Cindy and Andre make such a good team.  I loved the story line about Mavis and her husband that was beautifully written.  Thanks

Author's Response: I agree with everything you said. It warms my heart to know that you're digging the subplot of Mavis and her hubby.

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

An event planner, that is a nice career for Cindy.  Thanks

Author's Response: Yep!

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

That party sounded like it would be a lot of fun...great idea.  The adults had as much fun as the children did, especially Andre...the fact that he finally admitted that he was in love with his best friend...the big other question is does she feel the same way?  Thanks

Author's Response: Andre is truly smitten. You'll see how Cindy feels soon enough. Thanks for keeping the comments rolling in.

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I like the way that they keep falling a sleep together and the fact that they are so supportive to each other.  I was surprised by the fact that Andre's bother eloped with his girlfriend.  Thanks

Author's Response: Tim couldn't wait any longer. tee-hee.

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Oh Cindy how blind can you be?  Thanks

Author's Response:

Her eyes will be open after while. They have to be.

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Oh poor Andre and yet so close...his ex has a lot of nerve.  My goodness, to walk into his home and to pick up the phone and say what she did.  What nerve, the heifer.  Thanks and Cindy needs o understand that he is not her ex.

Author's Response:

Heifer is the right word. Grrr... Don't like his ex at all.

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Great update and they finally admitted that they love each other and consummated that love.  I hope that they will not be to hard on themselves because they consummated their love.  They are two healthy young people that have been fighting their love for each other for awhile now.  Thanks for a great read.  Poor Melvin hopefully he will meet a new woman that he is attracted to after Cindy tells him about being in love with her best friend and apologize to Melvin for stringing him along.  Thanks

Author's Response: Everything's gonna work out fine, Divsionred. No worries.

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Oh no who let the devil in?  Please make her go away before she can cause chaos.  Thanks

Author's Response: Chuckle. :)

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Cindy don't let the devil win girl...you are stronger than you think and he is not your ex.  Thanks

Author's Response: It's good to 'see' you routing for Cindy.

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

She let the devil in...that is to bad...come on now...think Cindy, think.  Thanks

Author's Response: How many times we have to tell ourselves that - think. If we did more of it, we might avoid quite a bit of unhappinessness in our own lives.

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Shakes head in shame for Cindy for allowing this skeezer to make her think that Andre is cheating on her with that heifer.  Maybe he should find a woman that will believe in him.  Granted Cindy had a terrible marriage were her husband did cheat on her a lot but why would she think that Andre would do the same thing?  Doesn't she know who her best friend is....didn't she and her sister joke with him about being only a one woman man and now she can believe that he changed so quickly no baby he needs to move on.  I am very disappointed in Cindy.  Thanks

Author's Response: Cindy was clueless at times or rather blinded by her own past hurts.

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Thanks for a great update.  Poor Andre.  Cindy grow up. Thanks

Author's Response: She's getting there. Trying our patience on the way, lol, but getting there nevertheless.

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Thanks for a great update...at least Cindy is starting to wake up out of her comatose existence.  Thanks

Author's Response: About time, huh? Yay, Cindy!

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

This storm will not destroy any but the storm it self because if she lets as her sister refer to him as fair-skinned, wavy-haired beast if she allows him the privilege of causing her grief than she deserves everything that she gets.  Oh yes she does.  She has already allowed one devil in to disrupt her true path with a very giving and loving man and then she will allow this feces in to continue down the same path of destruction..?  I think not.

Author's Response: You ain't never lied. Thanks again for faithfully commenting along the way. It's very much appreciated.

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

I am so glad that Cindy finally took out her anger on her ex.  Also that Julia got her comeuppance the skank heifer.  Thanks

Author's Response: Both exes got their comeuppance. You should see me grinning. :)

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Too bad the family had to step in...but in the same vain thank goodness for family stepping in because these two would have never gotten back together without them.  Thanks

Author's Response: Sometimes family got to step in. Interventions aren't just for addicts, you know. Sometimes lovers need that helping hand, too.

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Date: 21/06/09
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Yeah, Cindy and Andre are married.  Thanks as for her ex...who cares about that devil in disguise, the idiot.  He got his comeuppance.  The idiot. I doubt very much if he (Charles)  learned from his mistakes.  The idiot.

Author's Response: *Big grin*

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Date: 21/06/09