Penname: Divsionred [Contact]

Real name: Sharon

Member Since: 10/07/08

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I am not a writer but I love reading all the stories that have been posted on TST and FanFiction.



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Summary:

 

 

 

 

A response to the songfic challenge.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Song Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2230
Read Count: 5443
Published: 31/07/09
Updated: 31/07/09


Title: Chapter 2: Do You Remeber?

OH this was such a nice one shot story.  I really enjoyed it.  It brought tears to my eyes...love so pure and simple but it really wasn't all that simple...how did they endure their time apart?  Who raised her when her mother died? How did they reconnect?  Are they married now?  Of course I want to know more about this couple but I think that it is better if I just enjoy what you have written and just imagine the rest.  Thanks so much for such a touching story.  Take Care.

Author's Response: I agree: the best part of reading (and even watching films and television) for me is imagining all the little things that the author/creator hasn't provided for the audience. That's probably what the allure of fan fiction is. Sometimes imagining those things is what leads to an original story!

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Date: 01/08/09

Title: Chapter 1: We're Going To Be Friends by The White Stripes

Thanks for the lyrics to the song.

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Date: 01/08/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

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 Ocean's Thirteen/Batman

"You either steal the diamonds, or you get somebody else to finance your drill."

My response to the Up in Lights Challenge and another story About Her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: Other
Classification: Crossover, Off Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Up In Lights Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2785
Read Count: 2529
Published: 12/08/09
Updated: 12/08/09


Title: Chapter 2: Five Diamonds

Thanks for a great short.  Loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/08/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 111]
Summary:

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"Never judge a book by its cover"

Sasha McPherson, 31 year old real estate agent has a dream.  A dream deeply rooted in the American Dream.  She wants to be a million dollar listing agent at Blitz Realty and make partner.  She's beautiful, charming, and with an otherwise open heart.

Pavlov Patrenko, 28 year old temporary resident from the Ukraine also has a dream.  A dream deeply rooted in the American Dream.  He wants to defect to the U.S., buy a home, and build a business in the land of the free.  But only a few things stand in his way-Sasha McPherson, her gilded suit of armor, and one huge 'f_ck off' sign spiked firmly on her forehead.

What happens when east meets west?

Surely Curves up Ahead!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC). The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC), and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Graphics by SPAC 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 22525
Read Count: 19051
Published: 14/08/09
Updated: 25/10/11


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Thanks for a great read.  Looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks divisionred.  More is coming!

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Date: 19/08/09

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I am a little confused.  Sasha had sex with Allen who used her to make partner and she finally realized what he did and now she is in the office trying to get a meeting with their boss who is basically ignoring her.  What does the guy at Club Blu with Sasha?  Why is Portia so excited?Thanks

Author's Response: I can only answer...Sasha is back at work for pennance--yes. Portia is happy because she thinks it's about time Allen got his due. Anything else...you'll have to wait and see. TY for reading.

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Date: 25/09/09

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Thanks for a great uodate so now they all finally hav emet...can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Much more interesting times will come.

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Date: 06/10/09

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Excellent update....I can't wait for her to steal the client that they want.  Yes because that Allen and Kink or whatever his name is are scum.  I like the scene at the bar and I can't wait to read Sasha's surprise when she learns that the bartender is the owner of the club.  Thanks

Author's Response: Things are definitely layering for complicated...but Paulie's got that immigration thing bubbling up. TY for reading.

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Date: 23/10/09

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Thanks for a great update...for a business woman Sasha is not to bright.

Author's Response:

Sasha lives in her head too much, too rational, overthinking etc.   But what will happen when she takes the bull by the horns, and follows with her heart, and the advise of her mentor/best buddy?

Thanks for reading Divisionred, I always enjoy your critical analyis.  Right on point. 

 

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Date: 19/11/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 14]
Summary:

 


 


Being Human


 


It doesn’t scare her, the forgetting.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Annie Sawyer
Classification: Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Fantasy, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: Annie/Mitchell (Being Human)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5088
Read Count: 3716
Published: 17/08/09
Updated: 17/08/09


Title: Chapter 1: The Constant

I started watching this show this weekend.  I find it to be very interesting.  I thought that you captured the essences of the characters well.  Thanks for the story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Division!

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Date: 17/08/09

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

This 5 part series covers the life and times of the Brewster/Squires family through 5 generations.Starting with Salomi Jane's miraculous birth in 1900 and ending with how the famous family survived one hundred years later.This family is mainly full of performers taking over music,stage and Tinseltown.But this family isnt perfect.Many believe that the family is cursed.Experience their trials and tribulations,births and deaths,love and hate,the scandalous and the innocence,the luck and the tragedies that make this family so great.

Book 1: Begins with Salomi's miraculous birth in 1900, her father's struggle for money and being a widow which leads him to a life of organized crime, the Titanic, silent films and burlesque clubs all the way into the 1920's, the Jazz Era.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Music
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: Until The End Of Time
Chapters: 46
Completed:Yes
Word count: 128534
Read Count: 180123
Published: 17/08/09
Updated: 15/09/10


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

WOW, thanks for a great story.

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Date: 18/08/09

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Thanks for a great start to the story.

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Date: 20/08/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 88]
Summary:

 

Katrina Sinclair lived a pretty charmed life in Manhattan going to one of the most elite schools for the rich and privileged and being a New York socialite, though some called her a party girl. Everything was great until her parents forced her to stay with her grandmother in Georgia for the summer after she wakes up in bed with Chuck Bass. Nate Archibald’s best friend…and if that wasn’t bad enough Nate was her friend as well.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television, Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:Yes
Word count: 35383
Read Count: 24889
Published: 18/08/09
Updated: 08/11/09


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I never watched this show before but it seems that they thrive on DRAMA.  Thanks for a great read.

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Date: 19/08/09

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Thank goodness that she wasnt raped but what a really sick thing to do to someone because you don't like them.  That guy could have gone to jail but I guess that is what they were hoping for.  Thanks

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Date: 19/08/09

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Nate has a lot of nerve to come to GA and expect to start a relationship with her because he told her that she wasn't raped.  WOW, thanks for a great read. 

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Date: 19/08/09

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thanks for a great read and it really is to bad that she likes this idiot.

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Date: 21/08/09

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So why does Nate even deal with these crazy people.  It is amazing that his Gossip Girl person has so much rule over these people.  Thanks

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Date: 21/08/09

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thanks for a great update.  WOW, the cousin attacking her because of what her father and mother did...makes no sense.  She is a child and the aunt shoulld write her sister a damn letter and complain.  Thanks

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Date: 01/09/09

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thanks for a great update.  I am not surprised that she is upset all the games that they play I can understand why she wouldn't trust anything that he has to say..the idiot.  Thans

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Date: 04/09/09

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Is her grandmother still sitting there while they plot and plan? thanks

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Date: 25/10/09

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I liked her poetry very good.  Thanks

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Date: 25/10/09

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow, that was great.  Thanks

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Date: 25/10/09

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I think that it is to bad that they are so focused on revenge.  I like her grandmother and cousin and I hope that they paid attention to what they said to them.  Thanks

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Date: 25/10/09

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh, oh...problems already...now she is drinking again...and that asshole pushed her into it and she fell like a lmab to the slaughter with Nate by her side...damn idiots.

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Date: 25/10/09

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Why are these people so stubborn and not listening to their parents.  I agree with her dad that she has to be very careful because these people are sharks and that was even more evident by dude pushing the alcohol on her. She is playing with Piranhas and she is a guppy.

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Date: 25/10/09

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Well, I hope that she is able to deal with these crazies.  Because I have doubts. Thanks

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Date: 25/10/09