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[Reviews - 133]
Summary:

Love and Prejudice

A Pride and Prejudice spin off. Five years after their marriage, Elizabeth and Fitzwilliam Darcy are made the guardians of Mary Caroline Farthington, a free black woman and the  heir and adopted daughter of Lord Matthew Farthington. When Colonel Fitzwilliam returns from Louisiana, fresh on the heels of a hearty defeat in the Battle of New Orleans, he visits the Darcy's for the Christmas holidays. When the soldier and the heiress fall in love, will love be able to overcome prejudice?



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Categories: Books
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 93045
Read Count: 100618
Published: 09/07/09
Updated: 18/12/10


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thanks for the update. It was nice to see that there was a new part. I'm glad the Viscountess' plan didn't work, but now there's that Mr. Evans to think about.  He seems like a real dirtbag.

Author's Response:

I don't think we'll see much of Mr. Evans. Mary has already had to contend with the Superior Cousins and the handsy Viscount. I think she deserves a bit of a break.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22/12/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 122]
Summary:

 

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Takeshiro "Shiro" Inoue is a star catcher in Puro Yakyū, the professional baseball league in Japan until injury forces him out. An old contact with the American Major Leagues has him returning to the States and to Lydia Holmes, one of the best pitchers he has ever faced and his best friend whom he'd met right before he'd started his career.  They have been close for eight years, the majority of which had been restricted to online interactions.  But now that they are on the same soil, his career isn't the only Shiro is interested in reclaiming.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 47035
Read Count: 17408
Published: 13/11/10
Updated: 02/03/11


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Interesting story, I like. I love who you chose for Shiro. I watch the show "The Event", and the guy you have for Shiro is on it.  I've been lusting after him, so it was nice to see him in a story.

Author's Response: I chose him from when I saw him on Charmed, I believe.  I said "who is that?" and Shiro piped up. :)  Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/11/10

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 Beautiful Banner by Missus James

 

When Mia, a beautiful southern black lady, finds herself as the personal assistant to two of the most gorgeous white men she's ever met, she finds herself in an unlikely situation that will challenge everything she thought she wanted in a normal life. 

 

Mia Shannon struggles to adjust to her life in San Francisco after moving there from the south. It's hard being the only black girl at the company she works for and even harder when she's the personal assistant to two of the most wealthiest, gorgeous men white men she's ever seen. Mia finds herself having feelings for both her bosses and realizes nothing can ever become of them except to exist in her fantasies.

Kale and Aidan fell in love with Mia the moment she walked into their office for an interview for the personal assistant position. It took them almost four years to get close enough to Mia where she was comfortable enough to be around them as best friends. Now they want more and they are determine to make Mia the only woman in their life. 

Loving Mia was first posted on Fictionpress, then later transferred to The Chamber by KatherineMadison. Please do not copy and post my story to any other sites without my permission. Thank you! This story is an original fiction completely written from my overactive imagination. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 96215
Read Count: 229046
Published: 16/11/10
Updated: 16/02/11


Title: Chapter 15: A Mother's Love

I knew Mama Ruth had a clue about what was going on. LOL Eventhough she doesn't agree with Mia's choice, I'm glad she's not causing any trouble for Mia and the guys. Thanks for the update, and I can't wait for the next part.

Author's Response: Yeah Mama Ruth knew better to cause trouble because Mia is her only child. LOL  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/12/10

Title: Chapter 14: Mama Ruth

Uh oh! I bet Mama Ruth was watching those hugs.lol Mama is suspicious and she's going to keep picking until she finds something. Can't wait for the next part.

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Date: 14/12/10

Title: Chapter 21: Prank Call

Thanks for the update. Kale's father is a straight up mess, and I'm glad Kale went at him. As for Aidan's father, I'm still leery of him, especially with the way he was looking at Mia.

I'm happy that they're engaged, but crazy Eric is running around and they don't know it's him to look out for.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/02/11

Title: Chapter 24: Eric

Aww, that ending part was very sweet. I loved that Mia got a good kick in before Eric did his damage, and I really like how Kale put a serious beatdown on him.

Sad that it's almost over, but thanks for writing it and bringing these characters to life.

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Date: 12/02/11

Title: Chapter 23: Deception

Damn! Mia is in some major trouble now. I guess poor Jasmine is probably dead. Yeah, Jasmine was a mess, but I still feel bad for her. Eric is just one crazy asshole, and I can't wait until the guys get there and take him down.

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Date: 10/02/11

Title: Chapter 25: The Miracle

Aww, sweet final chapter. I hope it's not the complete end though. :) I was never into threesome stories before, but I loved this story. As for who I choose between Aidan and Kale?  I think I have Mia's problem because I want them both. LOL

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Date: 17/02/11

Title: Chapter 13: Unexpected Surprises

Thanks for the update. Aidan knew everything was too good to last.  Mya's mother will probably be trouble for the three, but I can't wait to read about it.

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Date: 08/12/10

Title: Chapter 11: Loving Mia Part One

Damn, Damn Damn! That's all that was going thru my mind reading this. That was hot as hell. 

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Date: 04/12/10

Title: Chapter 7: Everybody Loves Mia

Great update! Thanks! Jasmine is a mess. I understand Aidan and Kale wanting to stop Mia from being around her, but I don't think telling Jasmine to stay away is going to work for Mia because I don't see her as some to drop her friend because her man/men doesn't like them.  I love how the guys want to protect her, and Kale makes me laugh wanting to be beat up everyone.

Author's Response: Nope they don't have the right to tell her that. Kale is pure testosterone lol

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Date: 22/11/10

Title: Chapter 8: A Night With The Guys

Oh Mia, Mia, Mia. The dilemma she's in. She knows she wants them, but being with them both is scary for her. It's getting to that boiling point, and I can't wait until they attack each other. LOL Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/11/10

Title: Chapter 16: Aidan's Plan

Thanks for the update. Mia's right, Aidan and Kale will wear her out if she's not careful. LOL

As for the guys wanting to protect her, that's understandable, but Mia's survived on her own before them, and they shouldn't scheme so much.lol



Author's Response:

I know, right now, it's all about Mia right now. LOL Nothing else matters.

They think she's just a country girl that doesn't know how dangerous the city can be, so they have to save her from herself because she's too clueless to do it. LOL Mia will have to show them. 

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Date: 22/12/10

Title: Chapter 19: Meet The Parents

That was great the way Mia told the mothers how she might be pregnant. LOL Thanks for the update.

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Date: 22/01/11

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Spock attends a Christmas party and decides to take a turn underneath the mistletoe.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Fluff
Series: Constellations
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1972
Read Count: 4012
Published: 30/12/10
Updated: 30/12/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, that was sweet. I always like your Spock and Uhura stories. As a matter of fact, reading your stories turned me on to them as a couple, and also made me want to see the Star Trek movie that came out in 2009.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/12/10

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[Reviews - 96]
Summary:

When Carla Jones makes a gruesome discovery at her neighbour's house one evening, life as she knows it takes a dramatic and unexpected turn. A modern retelling of Little Red Riding Hood.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Ostrander
Chapters: 24
Completed:Yes
Word count: 76580
Read Count: 30235
Published: 06/02/11
Updated: 16/02/11


Title: Chapter 7: Crave...

I always liked this story, and I'm happy to see it again.  Jason is really hot.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/02/11

Title: Chapter 24: Red...

Aww, this ending was always sad. I understand where Carla is coming from, but I feel terrible for Jason. I also felt bad for Isaac. He was crazy for killing all those women, but I understand his anger at his brother, especially since Josephine was innocent. 

 

Thanks for reposting this, and I'm glad you'll be posting the sequel.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/02/11

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Spock discovers Valentines Day.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1737
Read Count: 3322
Published: 11/02/11
Updated: 11/02/11


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was cute. Thanks for posting.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/02/11

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[Reviews - 96]
Summary:

 

 

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Augustus and his Sydney

 

Check out the BrownStone

http://cyncyn333.blogspot.com/p/mineaugustuss-and-sydneys-brownstone.html



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10715
Read Count: 23659
Published: 29/09/11
Updated: 16/10/11


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

That was a very interesting start.  I had a feeling Augustus had feelings for Sydney, just from everything he's done for her, but now I want to see what he wants to discuss.

Off topic, but that part about Thai food on Tremont Ave. made me think of an old show I used to watch. LOL

 

Please post the next part soon.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/09/11

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Thanks for the fast update.

Augustus's daydream was HOT and his feelings for Sydney were sweet. Can't wait for the next part and hope Sydney can cope with his "beast".

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/09/11

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

That was HOT!  Thanks for the update. I'm loking forward to what happens next with Sydney and Augustus.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/09/11

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I really like shifter stories. I was already enjoying this story, but this added part wil give it another plus for me.  Now, I can't wait to see what Sydney's reaction will be.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/10/11

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 41]
Summary:

 

 

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Christmas is a time of giving and Henrietta Young is about to give the perfect gift to someone who doesn't deserve it.

 

 

The Gift  is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The Gift
Series: New Beginnings
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3349
Read Count: 4873
Published: 21/12/11
Updated: 21/12/11


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was great! A very interesting premise.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/12/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 36]
Summary:

 

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Henry McDermont has regained his health, now he wants to regain his family.

Henry's New Year's Resolution is an original work of fiction. Please do not post or copy this story on other websites.  Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: News Year's Eve Challenge: The Resolutoin
Series: New Beginnings
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6553
Read Count: 75870
Published: 30/12/11
Updated: 30/12/11


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Henry's Quest

Great start!  I think I'm on Henny's side right now. What Henry did to Vanessa was beyond messed up and she jumped into bed a little to quickly in my opinion, but I can't wait to see how it all works out.



Author's Response:

Vanessa had no intention of giving in to Henry.  Henry didn't come there to seduce her, but once they kissed, all bets were off.  LOL.  Thanks for the review.  MOre is coming up with the next holiday or the next challenge.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/12/11