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Rated: Teen or Above
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Summary:

This is a story about a woman who keeps fighting to live despite the fact that life keeps showing her that sometimes it is better to be dead than alive.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2715
Read Count: 2737
Published: 26/07/08
Updated: 26/07/08


Title: Chapter 1: A Day In The Life Of.....

That was really tragic!  I felt deeply sorry for her losing her Acting job because, apparently it is a love in her life, perhaps her only worthwhile meaning for her.  And then to go on and read her horrible childhood; experiencing forced coitus at 7years of age because her drug addict mother sold her.  In America we really only believe such atrocities occur in starving 3rd world countires, so its shocking to see it happening here.

Story was very well written and character very well drawn and believable. 

TTHANK YOU! 

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Date: 14/02/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 348]
Summary:

Can two people fall in love after what is only suppose to be a One night stand? Nykia Walden and Antonio Bronson share a night that neither can forget. Was it only a one night stand or did these two share more than lust? 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 32454
Read Count: 42457
Published: 17/11/08
Updated: 11/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: The Kettle Woman

Good for Nykia, I'm proud of her, she kept her dignity during all that crushing pain while she took care of business.

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Date: 25/02/11

Title: Chapter 2: Results of an Abortion without Discussion

That's heavy, Antonio cancelled his intention to become engaged to Michelle because he found out she aborted their baby, and he did not know she was pregnant.  It's definitely true what he said:  that he did not love her nor she him, it was just a  suitable marriage for them both, almost a business arrangement with benefits.  Otherwise, he would not terminate any further relationship with her just because she aborted and without prior discussion with him.

But, he loves children and wanted them; also a business arrangement requires trust and she showed she could not be trusted because she did this very important action behind his back without prior discussion with him and she never even shared with him she was pregnant.  I understand his point of view about trust, what would she be like in a marriage.  So, best not to bind himself to her legally.  However, i also think he must been having second thoughts about marrying her before this surprise.

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Date: 25/02/11

Title: Chapter 3: The Bet

I would think Nykia would attract a strange man for a ONS, she does not merely look HOT, she's dressed a like a Slut, shouting COME AND GET IT!  However, a strange man would not know she is a lady, so she needs to watch very carefully the type of man she attracts as well as the type of behavior.  Glad that Melissa pulled her drunk ass out of that two man sandwich she was in and without someone to guard her if they got her alone they probably both would have taken the booty!

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Date: 26/02/11

Title: Chapter 4: Letting Go & Being Bold

WOW!  Nykia not only is dressed like a Slut but she is acting like one too.  I wonder if her ripped heart is driving her to destructive action, she had better be careful!

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Date: 26/02/11

Title: Chapter 5: His Little Red

Nykia has found her ONS in Antonio it seems, and I wish her the best time ever!!

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Date: 26/02/11

Title: Chapter 6: Sexual Healing

WOW!  That is one of the most beautiful sex I've ever read!!!  And LOL, I felt like I was a part of it!  Yeah!  Gotta find me an Antonio now!  But, it can only happen in dreams I think!  The dream that your writing MHLoveless is giving me!  

SO THANKS!

Antonio and Nykia gave me a great trip!  WOW!  What a sweet magic elixir worth more than money can buy they made for and with each other! 

I think they are gonna become more than a ONS! 

Excellent writing MHLoveless!! 

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Date: 26/02/11

Title: Chapter 7: The Morning After

YEAH!  I know Nykia needs to soak herself and her "stuff" in the tub a long time after all the good lovin Antonio put on her!!!

I know this auction is going to be a lot of fun and can hardly wait! 

Melissa is still a virgin!  DAMN!  How did she do that?! 

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Date: 26/02/11

Title: Chapter 8: Two Brothers

OKAY!  I know this is gonna be a way off the wall double date of Wilson/Nykia and Antonio's twin brother Adrian with his lady!  Because, Nykia is gonna be rocked:  thinking when she first see's Adrian, thinking he's Antonio!

This is a very exciting twist MHLoveless! 

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Date: 26/02/11

Title: Chapter 9: Just A Week Late

HOT DAMN!  Nykia is in a whole LOT OF TROUBLE!  I'm surprised she didn't take protection with her for that night!  It was her intent to have a ONS!.. or did she not fully intend to go through with it, then got caught out there being very high and meeting the super fine Antonio who blew her chemistry Sky High!

Anyway, it's so sad her predicament, the first time in her life she decides to walk on the wild side and get's super caught.  Also, makes things worse that she thinks she's met Tony again and he's just shunned her off like some kind of Nothing!  That has to be very painful for her!

Fantastic and very creative writing MHLoveless!  

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Date: 26/02/11

Title: Chapter 10: Mistakes

I adore this story!!!

Interesting that Nykia opts to keep the baby, many women would abort because, it came from a ONS. I guess she's of the group of women who cannot do an abort for whatever reason. 

Anyway, she can financially afford to have a baby and I'm happy for her because she already loves it, so she should have it!! Yayyy!.. Nykia! 

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Date: 26/02/11

Title: Chapter 11: Coming Clean

ALL HELL IS GONNA BREAK LOSE NOW!

Nykia should not have told Wilson! 

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Date: 26/02/11

Title: Chapter 12: The Right Man

Well, Michelle is in deep sh*t; she and her criminal father!

Antonio is one strong man, he makes up his mind and that's it.  WOW!  If he were to decide he loves Nykia that would be it too!!..HMmmm! 

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Date: 26/02/11

Title: Chapter 13: The Right Man Part 2

 

OMG!  I'm so happy for Nykia and Antonio, now maybe they will get together and that will be great also for the baby!

 Wilson's brother, Mark is certainly behaving like a piece of filthy trash.   Mark, is jealous of Nykia's femininity, especially with Chad's appreciative comments to her.  So he slanders his brother as being a homosexual and tells Nykia that Wilson does not love you he wants men but won't admit it.  Mark does not know if Wilson has chosen to deviate from heterosexuality!  Mark is typical in his viciousness, his family was evidently right to shun him and brother Wilson may regret he has not done the same!

 


 

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Date: 26/02/11

Title: Chapter 14: Oh What A Night!

OMG!  I am swooning!  Their love making was so very beautiful!  I am breathless!

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Date: 26/02/11

Title: Chapter 15: Miscommunication

YES!   Nykia and Antonio are in a  very sad predicament caused by their miscommunication; I feel terribly sorry for both of them.  Thankfully, dear Tony now knows he's the father but Damn if Kia doesn't through more zingers in this mess with her "farewell" letter! 

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Date: 26/02/11

Title: Chapter 16: Friendly Advice

Thank God both Nykia and Antonia have friends to give them good advice and have figured a way to bring them together and remove confusions. 

Glad to see Melissa and Nick are also going to meet again, I hope for romance. 

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Date: 26/02/11

Title: Chapter 17: The Proposal

The flowers from Tony and Nick were a beautiful surprise for the ladies and really showed the tenderness and respect that both regard them with, especially Antonio in his love for Kia.

I love Tony's proposal and it made Nykia so happy! 

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Date: 26/02/11

Title: Chapter 18: Unexpected Forgiveness

 

Great that Antonio's father has met Nykia and discovered for himself what a wonderful person she is, that his racist stereotype against Black people was wrong! He also loved her home made cookies; I thought that was so cute and his delight in them made my mouth water for a bite, LOL 

Nykia's going to have twins! MHLoveless, you've said there will later be a story about Melissa and Nick; I hope to see the twins in their story. 

This story gave me much enjoyment; very well written, lots of fun and beautiful exciting love making.  It also very realistically told how a ONS can really be the true love of your life.  Usually, it does not turn out that way but, in Nykia, the first Black woman Antonio ever dated, he discovered in her special attributes, racial and personality; a fulfillment and happiness to a depth of his being not previously experienced nor conceived possible.  And that is Love, it is a wonderful mystery that is self-defined! 

Thanks MHLoveless for this wonderful story; very creatively and skillfully told!

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/02/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

A young Irish gangster falls for an older woman with ambitions for musical stardom, in 1930's prohibition Ohio.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 12029
Read Count: 4812
Published: 15/12/08
Updated: 15/12/08


Title: Chapter 4: INTERLUDE

AWwww!  That was some beautiful love making!   And glad Eva also made love orally to his dick, Harry deserves this extra treat!! They're a great couple and I love Harry, a perfect man!

Absolutely loved this story Raven, thanks so much!!

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Date: 12/01/11

Title: Chapter 3: EPILOGUE

ALRIGHT!  Love that Eva!  She's always got her man's back, Yeah! she sensed something was up, so glad she killed Harry's attacker!  She and Harry are really well matched, Harry had good instincts the first time he saw her!

I'm so glad they have been able to have a happy ever after life! 

 

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Date: 12/01/11

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

 

That was a very frightening shootout /ambush on Eva that racist/jealous Rhonda setup! 

DAMN!  Interracial love in America sure is dangerous but, at least now this couple is where they can live their love freely as God intended!  YAYY!

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Date: 12/01/11

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love how this is written:  fast pace with a rhythm of its own and love the character of Harry, real earthy.  Love how Harry handled those wannabe rapists of Evangeline, also the fighting he did was believable, logical that a very experienced gangster such as himself, definitely could take them both down, as so wonderfully described.

This is some really good writing; descriptive, revealing REAL people and very interesting persons.  I've glimpsed several stories on this site and found very few that have this kind of creative, exciting and highly skilled writing.

LOL, Harry did a rush job on making his room look decent the way I sometimes have to do for unexpected company! Yeah!...,made me smile. 

The dress Harry bought Eva is beautiful and in good taste.  This story takes place in 1930's not too distant since Civil War ended.  Raven, I''m glad you have realistically included the racism for this very violent racist era instead of white washing it.

The sex is HOT!  but I'm real glad it doesn't happen between Harry and Eva during their initial getting acquainted, that would make it too much like "jungle fever"; by happening later it was two real individuals having a genuine interest in each other. 

  And Damn!  The sex is HOT throughout this chapter!  But Harry made love to Evangeline not just fucking; great lover and wonderful man-muscle he's got.  I also loved the Billy Holiday songs Eva sings and the gangster action.


 This is a long comment but, just love this chapter so much and there's so much life in it.  Really super great writing Raven! 

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/01/11

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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

I have always been alone and that was all I knew how to be. My mother and father only showed up on two occasions: my dreams and my nightmares. In my dreams, they were normal people who worked nine-to-five jobs. They were always there when I needed someone to talk to. We lived in a suburban area where all the neighbors watched me grow up. We were average people in my dreams, but in my nightmares, the truth came out. My mother was a city prostitute with a drug addiction. She slept with numerous men; consequently, my father had a name or a face. For all I know, he was just a quick [ rendevous ] to help her habit. I have bounced around from different foster homes, never finding a place that I was truly happy with or that was ever happy with me.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 18847
Read Count: 14219
Published: 04/01/09
Updated: 21/05/09


Title: Chapter 3: Intruders.

OH!  Damn!  Now I'm really lovin this story; another young vagrant, this time a Black girl.  Jake was ready to cut out back to being a vagabond but I think her surprise visit, almost strangling him cause she thought him a prowler may get him to stay, I think he thinks she's cute.

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/03/11

Title: Chapter 1: Jake.

Jake is fortunate, this is very unusual to find so much kindness in strangers to a vagrant such as himself, the elderly lady lets him keep the pastry he stole for his hunger, gives him a lift and offered him a job, that he turned down because he's too use to just being a vagabond.

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/03/11