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The Girl with the Tattoo by Thespiandiva
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

A Oneshot by Thespiandiva

Those innocent eyes,

That smile on your face makes it easy to trust you,

If they only knew, the girl with the tattoo, like i do....



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2798
Read Count: 2795
Published: 17/01/11
Updated: 17/01/11

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Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Good looking cast

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Date: 05/02/11
Voyeur by puertaobierta
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

The best part was that he could see down onto the patio of her home from his corner apartment.

Her curly hair pulled up into something he couldn't quite make out in the insufficient light. It had a mind of it's own, he liked to think, always fashionably messy and due to the heat, most days up. Also as most days she wore a tank top of some feather light material and no bra. One of the thin straps teetering on the edge of her shoulder. A skirt, probably vintage, hung on her slim hips and danced just above her knees as she shifted her weight from one bare foot to the other.


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Breakdown
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14261
Read Count: 10809
Published: 24/03/11
Updated: 14/04/11

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Title: Chapter 2: Introductions

I loved how his watching the couple was told, I joined in voyeuring with him and it was intriguing.  Also, it was highly erotic the voyeur's reaction to his watching!  So i wonder all sorts of questions about why he peeps, does he have a problem with the ladies and what is the problem?  I'm not condemning is voyeurism, just curious about him!

I am just dying to know who each of these three characters are!

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/01/12
Title: Chapter 3: Angel

I wouldn't be surprised if the next door neighbor, Hanna, that boon has been peeping on may be an exhibitionist.  it's likely she knows Boon is watching her have sex on her patio.

 

 

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20/01/12
Title: Chapter 3: Angel

I think possibly Hanna is an exhibitionist, she has to know Boon's been watching her having sex on her patio.  Anyway, she is truly very Beautiful; whatever her activities are on the patio she deserves to be watched.

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Date: 20/01/12
Title: Chapter 4: Invitation

It does appear that hanna is doing a little seducing but, i'm also beginning to wonder is she a little over sexed because she's been after him initially.

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Date: 20/01/12
Title: Chapter 4: Invitation

I want to add this comment to my previous review:  I loved the description of creating a wood sculpture synonymous to how you mold your hearts desire into the type of lady you want her to be and that she also loves only you.

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Date: 20/01/12
Title: Chapter 5: In the Box

POWERFULLY EROTIC!

Also, I think both Aster and Hanna know that Boon watches them fucking on the patio.

I felt so sorry for Boon when Astor came to the gallery and took Hanna's attention immediately; Boon became non-existent to Hanna!

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Date: 21/01/12
Title: Chapter 6: Churnings

good update.

possibly Baal is really a man or a lesbo. Hanna pays Baal with sex??

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Date: 21/01/12
Title: Chapter 8: Opaque Conquest

I enjoyed their love making and I think Boon appears a good lover, possible a true competition for Aster.

Nice ending to this story; Boon finally getting real sex from Hanna for himself!

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Date: 21/01/12
Old Love by readlover
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

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Grandpa Amethyst and Grandma Kendra have strong love, and vow after an incident to make love to each other for the rest of the lives, even now in their old age. When they have to take care of their four year old granchild, their love life is being challenged. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Family, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3252
Read Count: 5249
Published: 22/04/11
Updated: 22/04/11

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Title: Chapter 2: Love Forever

Thank you very much for this story!  Very well written.  LOL, the grandchild was sure a nuisance! The couple are people who very evidently have a lot of wholesome love, to have such loving patience with the child.  

All the characters were well drawn by you because, I could clearly see all their actions and even their nuance of emotion, including the child.

I am an elder widow and still wish for love in my life.  Not sexual love but, that warm platonic, best friend love, hand holding and a few cuddles, and plenty of hugs.  If sex arrives, okay and if not that's okay too.  For me its that best friend and true love in a mate that at these 60 plus years of my life;  would be greatly treasured.  So reading that this elderly couple also experience very active sexual life, was a good reading for me, to see that indeed we oldsters are still very much part of this romantic world! 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes the oldsters are still very much a part of the romantic world. 

 

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/11/11
Two Man Stool by puertaobierta
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Part II of Voyeur. Boon, Hanna, Aster and Baal find themselves embroiled in unstoppable series of events that lead to an inevitable outcome. Are you ready to hear the facts in the case of the Two Man Stool?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Psychological
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Breakdown
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 3172
Read Count: 1217
Published: 23/04/11
Updated: 02/12/11

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Title: Chapter 1: Boon (POV)

I'm glad Boon and Hanna are together, he's finally won a place in her heart, along with others of course, especially Aster.  But, somethings better than nothing, LOL;

Their lovemaking was really HOT!

I love the flow of this story (both Parts one and two); it is smooth and actions, thoughts, reactions are quick like life, but still filled with meaning important to the character.

Dialogue is also good, and natural.


 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/02/12
Title: Chapter 2: Baal (POV)

WOW!  So Hanna is a little bi-sexual but, I strongly believe her major leaning is toward men and that's good!    

Baal is a dirty disgusting lesbian and I wasn't surprised at her agressiveness to dominate Hanna.  I'm so glad Hanna let her know she would beat the skin off her funky ass if she didn't leave her alone.  But, I'm sure Baal has no intentions of giving up.  

Unfortunately, dangerous violent consequences could result because Baal has the character of the sewer.

I think Boon will be the real help to Hanna if Baal ever returns; Aster is too self-absorped and never really around.

Seems Hanna may have a slight mental problem, that hatred she screamed at Baal included association with her mother in that she used the word mama, one time.

I'm starting to feel worry for Hanna!

Thank you Puertaobierta for the great Updates and looking forward to more installments!

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Date: 02/02/12
I Can't Make You Love Me by Thespiandiva
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

 



Just a Short Emotional piece inspired by the Tank Song



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 439
Read Count: 934
Published: 01/07/11
Updated: 01/07/11

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Title: Chapter 1: Mornin' will come

Interesting drabble and thank you for sharing your talent!

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Date: 01/02/12
Full Bloom by Elizablu
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 385]
Summary:

FullBloom2--Banner

 

Tabby and Jace met for the first time at a family member's wedding and decided to take advantage of the company and island scenery. What they didn't expect is that their paths have crossed before. It's funny how the past can come full circle.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Full Bloom is an original work of fiction, please do not post or copy this story to any other websites.   

Full Bloom © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11685
Read Count: 102544
Published: 02/07/11
Updated: 10/07/17

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Tabby and Jace love making is so HOT, like a volcano! I loved it and knew they would be Dynomite together!

AH! Shucks.... CoCo almost turned into a voyeur coming accidently upon a wonderful sexcapade out in the bushes. The Blonde must have wanted the guy BAD to suffer all those mosquitos.  

It was HOT and I wonder who the mystery man is?



Author's Response:

Glad you like the fireworks! I giggled on the comment about the mosquitos. Thanks for reading!

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/01/12
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

great update, I feel the power between Jace and Tabby for determined sex and i really hope they get it on!



Author's Response:

Don't worry those two will be gettin' it on. Thanks for reading!

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Date: 23/01/12
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Jace and Tabby really getting erotically stuck on each other at first time meeting, I think they will not and possibly should not avoid just getting it on for a ONS.

Afterall, you only live once and seems they are in a extreme strong electricity vibe to each other!

Jace description sounds like he is irresistibly handsome/sexy!

 



Author's Response:

Jace is yummy. So glad that you are enjoying this. Thanks for reading!

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Date: 23/01/12
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

You are very welcome!

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 23/01/12
Title: Full Bloom

Great cast pictures, Tabby is gorgeous!



Author's Response:

Tabby is gorgeous!

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Date: 23/01/12
Title: Full Bloom

WOW!  That's some messed up crap!  Tabby's pregnant and her beloved fiance has been having a deep sexual affair with the White woman for years and she sends Tabby pictures of their sexing that makes Tabby have miscarriage, that's a horrible way for Tabby to find out her fiance, Benny's, infedelity but he sure lost out bigtime in the end.



Author's Response:

Yes that was a horrible way for her to find out about Benny's cheating ways, but like you said he sure lost out big time. Thanks for reading!

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Date: 23/01/12
Title: Full Bloom

Great update, so glad Tabby and Jace getting together again!

And their kiss was sweet!



Author's Response:

So glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading.

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Date: 23/01/12
Title: Full Bloom

Since Jace knows Tabby is Tony's sister I wonder why its so hard for him to find her.



Author's Response:

None of Tabby's family is giving up her location and she really doesn't have much paperwork on her other than what his detectives found out on her. Thanks for reading.

 

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 23/01/12
Title: Full Bloom

Great cast photos!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/01/12
Title: Full Bloom

GAWD!  Jace and Tabby are a great couple, I'm glad they gonna have a baby and get married! I really did not think they would become a couple and in love with each other since it started from a ONS but, from reading this story it's believable that two people can accidently meet and find, after responding to intense mutual compelling sexual attraction, that they really do have personality and other psychological attributes that are a soul complement to each other, that they have accidently met their Soulmate.  In real life, although possible, I'm sure just a very tiny percentage of the population but, if I were one of that tiny percentage i would know and feel myself Divinely Blessed!  True Real Love is a Divine Gift, especially when it answers to the heart while also the libido or just sensual, if you meet that special someone very late in your age when libido demands for intense physical expression are far less.

I also foresee a possible happy union for Coco and Mal if Coco relents and so wants.  Coco will be a very hard conquest for Mal and only time will tell if they should actually be together!

I really Love this story!.. all characters are so very Real, actually bigger than Life, evidencing the Excellent writing and dramatic skills of Elizablu whom I thank so much for taking me on this exciting and heartfelt journey with these characters.  Exquisitely sharing their life with them!

 



Author's Response:

I always heard horror stories about one-night stands and the dreaded morning after, so I decided to do my own version with drama, lots of hot sex and of course my take of a fairytale ending. Thanks so much for reading!

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/01/12
Title: Full Bloom

I Loved the wedding dresses and know Tabby looked just heavenly beautiful in hers!  I'm glad Coco tooks her braids out for the special occasion and let her own beautiful hair flow.  Also, it was sweet to have the deceased father, Calvin West, to have his spirit, make a moment's cameo appearance at the wedding, seen only by Moma Lundy and husband.

Thank you so very much Elizablu for this wonderful thrilling story that also deeply touched my heart, many laughs too and the pleasurable exciting erotic as well!  YEAH!  This story had everything, also some fighting that was Real, yet, also gave me some more laughs.

Anyway, THANKS AGAIN, SO MUCH, ELIZABLU!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you enjoyed my lil' baby!! Full Bloom was my first story that I actually completed and posted anywhere. I have grinned so hard at your reveiws and it feels my heart with joy that you and plenty of others have fell in love with the West Sisters and their crazy family. And I hope that you will love CoCo and Mal's story (it's a tad different...more action) also I hope that you will enjoy my other ones as well. Thank you so much for reading!

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/01/12
Stereotypically Yours by Brenda1257
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 398]
Summary:

 

Stereotypically Yours

Matheson felt that VaLysia was just another angry black female when she brought her grandmother to dinner at his mother's request. VaLysia thought Matheson was just another uppity white prick. Neither of them expected the sparks to fly!

 

Stereotypically Yours is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2010 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 45
Completed:Yes
Word count: 171682
Read Count: 300000
Published: 05/08/11
Updated: 26/09/11

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Preconceived Notions

WOW!  I like the explosive jump off of this story, seems to promise excitement!

Valysia in her first meeting with Matheson came rough and insulting, I like that he took control and bested her!  I also felt a little sorry for her when in reaction he called her "ugly' although she is not and he did not mean it but she was just so irritating.

I think Val feel's inferior to the standard usually applied to women, which is White, so I understand her defensiveness, but her attitude is so strong it kind of betrays that she is in protective mode.  I also think Val is actually very attracted to this White boys extreme good looks and is fighting it in herself, feeling she is betraying "race pride" by her feelings.

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/01/12