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Shards of Nightshade by Elizablu
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Benadette does the only thing she can to ensure her freedom.

...not all monsters have claws and fangs...Benadette  learned this lesson firsthand but now she can't afford to play the role of helpless victim anymore. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Psychological
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: The City
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 10
Read Count: 2180
Published: 12/12/11
Updated: 12/12/11

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Title: Chapter 1: A bitter cup of sweet tea...

Benadette is sure Beautiful!  I'm sure Bena poisoned her brute of a husband and I'm glad she killed him, if that was the only way she could escape.  Actually before she gave Tam the poisoned tea I had wondered why she had not sought to poison him since he prevented her from getting away from him, while he continued to give her brutal pain.

Tam was truly also a stupid brute; a person should never be viciously mean toward one they liive with because the victim can always use some subtle means like poison to gain their freedom or just retribution!

Excellent story Elizablu and my joy was in Tam's slow death!

I also wonder who the pale face man with the fedora hat was. I think he was her hallucination, a means by which she provided herself with the friend she so desperately needed!



Author's Response:

So Glad that you enjoyed. You will be seeing these characters again. Thanks for reading!

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/01/12
The Gift by Brenda1257
Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 41]
Summary:

 

 

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Christmas is a time of giving and Henrietta Young is about to give the perfect gift to someone who doesn't deserve it.

 

 

The Gift  is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The Gift
Series: New Beginnings
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3349
Read Count: 4861
Published: 21/12/11
Updated: 21/12/11

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW!  Henrietta has a very loving heart for the human race in general because, if I were in her shoes I never could have given a bone marrow donation to a biological father whom she has never known because he coldly abandoned her mother who had been a virgin, abandoned her and never looked back not even in thought after her mother told him she was pregnant.  And he had told her young mother that he loved her.  That surely made her mother's experience doubly painful because she loved Henry and believed he was in-love with her!

Very interesting idea for a short story Brenda1257 and thank you for writing it.  Interestingly, even for this just one chapter these characters and their history were very clear to me and I felt their personal feelings and thoughts, due to your good writing!

Brava!



Author's Response:

LOl Keep reading.  I'm updating this with every holiday.  Valentines will be up soon, but I haven't even started that yet.

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/01/12