Penname: Vita Consuelo [Contact]

Real name: Victoria

Member Since: January 18 2011

Membership status: Member

Bio: I love to write and I love to see strong, smart, and beautiful black women portrayed in written and cinematic forms. When that happens, and the networks and writers aren't afraid to let the essence of our sisterhood shine in all it's glory, something truly magical begets an experience that no one can forget. Long live The Chamber and all the wonderful stories that have been told and are yet to become.


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*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 167127
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014


Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

Well, hot damn. What an update! What a story. What a bastard Donald is. But what happened with them to make him so bitter. Can't wait to find tha out. More importantly I hope Kendra is okay. I know in theory she will be, but a sista cannot catch a break!

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Date: July 10 2011

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Taylor found her at a hotel while he was on a business trip. She was in desperate need of help. He was in desperate need of an assistant. He thought he was doing a good deed by taking her in. He had no clue the woman who started out depending on him, would end up making him depend on her in more ways than one.  

Kaitlyn thought her life was finally over when he ex-boyfriend left her to defend for herself at a hotel.  Completely out of money and nearly starving, she realizes she would end up on the streets.  However, when a handsome man approaches her offering her a job and a new life, she finds herself "kept."

Despite Taylor being arrogant, demanding and a man use to getting his way, Kaitlyn falls in love with him. Can she get him to stop seeing her as his little pet and start seeing her as his soul mate? 

 

 

Kept is written by Katherine Madison. My story, please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 85624
Read Count: 242784
Published: January 21 2011
Updated: May 30 2012


Title: Chapter 16: Taylor's Fury

Damn!

Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed
Date: September 10 2011

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TLAL 

It happened one night. No biggie. Right?

Until Moliere Baker realizes her one night with Simon Ford has repercussions that affect not only them and those they care about, but a brand new life as well . . .

Now there's a wedding approaching and time to come clean is running out. Is there enough love between two friends to last a lifetime once the secret's out?

Gorgeous Banner by Valhalla



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 50743
Read Count: 78126
Published: March 27 2011
Updated: May 01 2016


Title: Chapter 13: Man Eater

I love the story, but then again I love all your stories but please repost the Jake and Taria Series, I came back from a hiatus to see if you updaded the latest chapter and it was gone!

But back to this chapter. Wow, what a doozy. I actually thought that it was going to be a lot worse than what it was, the secret that coop was hiding. I feel so bad for him but I can understand why Simon would be upset. I mean he broke a pretty important code in the friendship book which is not to covet your best friend's love interest, especially to the point where you are willing to sabotage their relationship. Even Moliere and Simon weren't dating yet, he knew how his friend felt.

And I hope Mae is alright. She's a fighter. I know she's going to make it. 

 

As for that bitch Amber. Oh, she's gonna get it alright. Cooper telling the secret was the best thing to take the power away from her. Now that heffa can look dumb.

Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed
Date: December 09 2011

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Ellie finds herself living the life that she could only imagine in her dreams. She has graduated from college with a degree in accounting, she is with the man she loves who is just as succesful, if not more than her, and he has just asked her to marry him. What more could a girl ask for? What could go wrong? Everything begins to change once she meets his family and realizes they dont like her. Can this break up their relationship? What is she to do? What about their "family" business? Will their marraige go on? After being on top the only place left to go is down, and Ellie is sure on her way there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: Mafioso Series
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 50333
Read Count: 88317
Published: May 20 2011
Updated: May 28 2014


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 7

OMG. I know you it's hard to let go od someone you love. And this kind of stuff happens everyday. But unless Nico is trying to help turn his family legit I do not see how homegirl could stay with him knowing she is pregnant. I am so intrigued with this story. Can't wait to read the rest. 

Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed
Date: June 17 2011

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10 pt 1

I feel so bad for Ellie but she did the right thing. Nick has to figure out what is more important in his life. Being a criminal with the rest of his low life family (I don't care how much power and money they have, selling drugs and weapons knowing that innocent people WILL get hurt in the mix is not classy) should not take precedence over the woman who you are getting ready to call your wife. He went to college and could easily become legit. 

Ellie is hurting now, but her walking away should be a wake up call for Nick to get his shit together so they can get back to building their lives as a family. 

Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed
Date: June 17 2011

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This is the first story. It's about Sonya's background and her life growing up as a Palminteri.

Being the secret adopted daughter of a mafia boss Sonya's lived most of a protected life away the family business. She knew what the family business was and didn't see the world through rose colored glasses but her reality wasn't bad like everyone would think. When her eldest brother SJ comes back from college unexpectedly it seems reality comes crashing down. With all of Sonny's three children back home it's time to pass the torch. It's not until she's stuck in the cross fire that the rumors of the mafia become true. She never saw her zii as criminals or murderers. It didn't matter that her father was the ringleader of it all. Or that the loves of her life are next in line. What'll hurt most is that the man she will ride for will be the one to pull the rug from under her and turn her protected world all the way upside down.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Incest , Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: A Tale From the Bronx
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 21382
Read Count: 16729
Published: November 11 2012
Updated: December 20 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Shopping and Fighting

I have to say you got right to the meat of the story amd it's interesting. I love A Bronx Tale. Who doesn't around these parts? But your writing structure leaves me a bit confusd. I feel like I don't know what 's going on and that even if I reread a paragraph, it's still not making sense to me who is who and what is what. I don't want you to give up on this though. I'm only on the second chapter! 

 

So is Sonny NOT with Angelina (Sonya's Mom?)



Author's Response:

No Sonny's not actually with Angelina's mom but because he is Sonya's "father" and helps take care of them she is considered one of his women.

Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed
Date: November 25 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.