Megan was the type of woman to pray for another's demise and her second problem was that whom she prayed to.
An innocent night of fun ruins the lives of two people who realize they are screwed without each other but especially with each other.
"My body is your party"
OK. So I am loving this story first off. Loving the Cast as well.
In response to your questions:
1. Yes I think that TJ's rant does hold some value but she may not know TJ that well either. At times it is good to get an outside perspective, though one that comes from someone that may want to be with you may not hold much value. I fell like I am talking in circles.
2. Toby travels back and forth between Germany and France, and mow he has an emergency trip to Russia...hmmm? Then a group of SWAT-like men coming in to comb through his office and mention of the Family? My first mind tells me to say that he is a mob boss but the creativity in me wants to belive it is just a family run venture that he was left to run by his father/grandfather. Maybe Johnnes is Toby's father and he is mad that Grandfather left Toby in charge? Hmmm?
I guess you will ahve to keep giving us lovely updates to find out.
Just so you know, this is by far the longest review that I have ever written for any story.
I just may be inspired to write a story of my own.
haha awe thank you for the review! and go ahead write a story!! you can do it
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I know that I am 1000% percent in. Yes I did mean to put a thousand. This is a wild ride and i am in it unti lthe end.
Ride or die, I like that! :)
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed Finish this please. That is all I have to say.
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Beck hates his job. His model boss, Heather, is a complete bitch. The only upside to working there is looking at her in the little shorts stomping around the house. However Beck's luck on the job just may change when the opportunity arises to tame the beast.
Cameron is really teaching Heather. Loving this story.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed Shanna's car craps out on her in the middle of now where. In all honesty her poor planning is what has got her into this predicament but the rude yet goregeous guy that is helping her out of has something about him that she just can't shake.
I have missed this story. Please come back and continue.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed Can a beauty ever truly love a beast?
Ok so what are they??/ Please continue.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed More more more is what i think. I will wait until Friday I guess. LOL.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed It takes a strong, confident woman to allow a man to take the lead. It takes an even stronger man to be able to take her where she needs to go.
Please come back soon. Loving this story.
I'm trying to divide my time between Follow and Veiled...but it just seems that the characters are fighting to make their voices/stories heard. I'll try not to leave you hanging for too long :)
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed A race of aliens need females to survive.
This is defintely diffrent and I like it. I am a die hard Trekie so I am all into this. Please continue.
Thank you
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed I didn't come to HBB just for the coffee...
He was exactly the way she designed him...
I am interested. Is this a futuristic story where you can order your perfect mate?
Yes it is.
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Response to the Made to Order challenge!
interesting twist wit hthe prime directive. Loving this.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed Loveit.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed Alfred is ready to get down and shake the sheets. So he is there to find her a mate not be her mate. I am liking the direction thus far. Please continue.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed Snippets into the lives of different characters. A foray into emotions and interactions.
*Revamped and revised version of former story The Assistant*
Marissa Jacobs is the assistant to her tyrannical boss Ron Kincaid who is going through a bitter divorce. As the holiday season approaches, her will and sanity is tested by Ron. When Ron shows up at Marissa's apartment drunk, Marissa makes it her mission to help Ron see there is more to life than just being bitter and mean. Of course, she wasn't expecting to fall in love with him.
Oh my. I figured it was coming but not in this chapter. Thanks for the surprise. Merry Christmas to them.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard. The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot.
In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees? Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?
Go Home Anthony.
Thanks Qsmommy!
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed Hurry back
I did. Next chapter's posted. Thanks Qsmommy!
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed Brody has been in love with his best friend Jordan for years. Technically she is bi sexual so he is hoping he has a shot. She's only dated women since forever so the shots in hell but he is willing to take it. Because he has 2 weeks to get her to give them a chance at being more than friends.
Please come back soon with an update. Brody has jumped and I love to know if Jordan is with him.
I think Jordan is going to take a little more finessing than a steak dinner.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed Jill Nzinga has grown up in a United States that is very different from the nation that we all know and love. Due to a large scale war and a terrorist attack that wipes out the entire government the United States falls under the leadership of a totalitarian government that has managed to swallow up the world with it's massive strategic military. The United States is now the United Continents (UC), and Jill Nzinga has been trained from a young age to become a lethal soldier in the the International Corps., a death squad that does the UC's bidding. Due to the UC taking all that Jill holds dear and a mental break, she escapes from the International Corps. and goes on to take a different path. Jill knows all too well the horrors her country has been responsible for, however she has no idea of just how grand the scale of evil she once belonged to really is.
I am ready to read more. Please continue.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed She was only a debt to him... or so she thought.
How far will you go when you're lonely?
I love long sagas as weel. Iwill be on the look out for PArt 2
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
