Penname: Bredreaway [Contact]

Real name: LaDawn

Member Since: January 30 2011

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Summary:

*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168947
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014


Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43

so glad you are back...great update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10 2013

Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

I love the update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
Summary:

 

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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

& NOW KINDLE VELLAS TOP 250 FAVORITES LIST *

FIVE STARS ON AMAZON

When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 213852
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I am so glad you are back with this amazing story.   Great job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 26 2013

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Love your story...keep it up

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

great

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

great



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope you get a chance review the Chapter 10 (now posted).

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

great

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

pleasure

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I am truly enjoying your story, please continue updating



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I am working on the next chapter now.  I hope you'll keep reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I love this story and I am enjoying how you are able draw into their world.  PLEASE CONTINUE..

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Date: June 02 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

wonderful update, please update soon.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 26 2012

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Wow...good update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I love the update, please update soon

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 17 2013

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

What beautiful update...His father needs to get his act together



Author's Response:

You are right!  Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14 2013

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

I love the update



Author's Response:

Thanks! :-)

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 09 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 92]
Summary:

 

 

Like A Bee To Honey

 

Ares, The Greek God of War meets Irene Hart a woman who brings fire and her own brand of peace to his life. Can he win this battle and convince Irene that he's more than a fighter and a lover but a man to keep for all eternity?

Disclaimer:All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 141131
Read Count: 14558
Published: November 29 2010
Updated: January 21 2012


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

great



Author's Response:

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 287]
Summary:

new

"Power is the ultimate aphrodisiac.”- Henry Kissinger

 

In the game of social politics not everyone has power and some don’t understand the power they wield. The power to make and break lives rest in the hands of one man but be careful, he is always watching.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 36415
Read Count: 69890
Published: December 14 2010
Updated: November 09 2012


Title: Chapter 13: Building Bridges

Please

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09 2011

Title: Chapter 5: The Burden of Social Gatherings

kove it

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09 2011

Title: Chapter 7: You bait me...

great

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Date: April 09 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Consequences of the Obvious and Oblivious

great

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Behind Jade Eyes

I am enjoying this story

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09 2011

Title: Chapter 16: The Bargain

love it

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 28 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 111]
Summary:

Smiling got her through the deaths of her parents. Therefore smiling will get her through her guardian's wedding. Not that she loves him or anything...

 

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8390
Read Count: 18195
Published: December 20 2010
Updated: March 24 2012


Title: Chapter 6: Until We Bleed Part 2

Lord, Iam enjoying your story...please update soon

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07 2011

Title: Chapter 2: The Runner

great

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25 2012

Title: Chapter 6: Until We Bleed Part 2

Please, comeback we need you

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed
Date: May 04 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.