Penname: Brenda1257 [Contact]

Real name: Brenda Anderson

Member Since: March 30 2011

Membership status: Member

Bio:

 


I am married with two adult sons.  I enjoy reading and writing fiction.  My stories will always have an underlying Christian theme, however I try to keep it real because even Christians do not live a perfect life, no matter what they try to portray to others! You can find me on Twitter as Preachabrenda!


 


September 16, 2014


Chambermates! 


Thanks for all of your support here over the years.  I've reached my dream of being a published author and I could not have done it without your encouragment. 


I will continue to support authors here any way that I can and I want to see other awesome authors here publish their work for the world to read long after we're gone.


Even though I'm not making a lot of money off of "The Preacher's Son" I am committed to my promise of using 20 percent of my profits from the book to help other Chamber authors.


I can be reached at Preacharomantic@gmail.com.  Please feel free to contact me here or on Facebook as BD Anderson, Richmond, VA.


Thanks guys!




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Summary:

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Loving a man is hard enough try loving the devil?

 

How do you love a man that doesn't want to be love?

 

How can you care for a person who could careless about you?

 

How do you try to find a soul mate from a soulless man?

 

Jacqueline finds herself sold to devil she try's to unfreeze a heart that seems untouchable.

 

The harder she try's to love him the more lost she gets into the battle of loving the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 58549
Read Count: 113183
Published: September 24 2012
Updated: March 31 2016


Title: Chapter 8: Red Light

This is so sad.  Jac didn't bring any of this on herself.  She didn't asked to be used and abused.  I think James has gone too far and if he breaks her mentally he will only have a compliant body and not the fiesty woman he's come to care about.  I don't see how she can fall in love with a man so cruel like this, one who has all power over her.  It's going to be interesting to see how you work this story so that the reader would even want those two to be together.



Author's Response:

That's the one thing about, Jacqueline she keeps jumping back into her feistiness. It is some what her defense mechanism, especially after her father died when she was young and having to take care of herself especially with a mom like Katherine.

You also have to see it James side, his defense mechanism is to act ruthless he doesn't do we'll in voicing his feelings, which well be the main problem with them. The funny part is when you mention how can she fall in love with a man cruel like this she's going to be thinking the same thing.

How can she fall in love with a man such as him, how can she fall in love with a man who lives the way he do, etc...but she does and your going to love it.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: March 15 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Under the Bridge

I think James is building a cage of his own doings.  He has her lock stock and barrel, but the time is coming that he's going to want more from her than the physical.  He doesn't even realize it yet and that will make HIM her prisoner. He's so used to controling everything.  What is he gong to do when he can no longer control his own feelings.  He already has had a taste of it with the lack of sleep.  I hope that he doesn't rape her, but when he does have her I hope she rocks his world and has his mind tied in knots.

thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you, your so on the right trail he knows that his physically attracted to her, but he doesn't understand his emotions when it comes to her which well be both their battle in the story his battle well be more longer then Jacqueline. His not going to rape her that's not his style he likes playing games she's going to think his going to but he's not. His going to have sex with her but its going to confuse her emotionally. And there first time is going to rock both there world that James is going to be asking for more=]

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: April 10 2013

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Summary:

When recent college grad, Lily Taylor became the personal paralegal to the notorious lawyer of the stars, Aiden Hawkins, she never knew that she would have her hands tied with him...literally.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 66387
Read Count: 66266
Published: October 03 2012
Updated: July 30 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Hometown Glory

OK This story is so good that I went back and re-read parts of it.  LOL

First, Alex is upset because he thinks that Aiden slept with Blair when she was with him, but Aiden didn't know Blair came to the party with Alex.  What a sleeze!  Alex wants revenge but he needs to let it go!

Alex has figured out Lily is a virgin, but has Aiden?  He is already in over his head and I'm sure he wants to be her first and only!  I like the way Lily stood up to him and was about to quit and Aiden had to regroup and make her that offer.  LOL  Even though she's agreed to be his sub, I doubt if she just lets him walk all over her.

Owen is not going to let his sister be taken advantage of and I'm sure he'll get to be a thorn in Aiden's side if he doesn't behave himself!

Love this story.  I'm glad Lily read up on a few things so that she knew what she was getting into (sort of).  She already has Aiden's nostrils wide open and once he gets the real deal, he'll be hooked for life.  LOL. I'd love for her to come up with a few tricks that no other woman has laid on him and really blow his mind.

 



Author's Response:

Haha accidentally posted this as another comment-Adien is very in over his head, funny how lawyers are typically good at reading people at first glance, yet Aiden completely misjudged Lily.

 

 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: October 29 2012

Title: Chapter 5: Rolling In The Deep

I read this all the way through for the first time.  It is really good.  More please!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you like it :D

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: October 29 2012

Title: Chapter 6: Cold Shoulder


Damn Lily!  Damn Aiden!  What's wrong with you two?  I'm really pissed at Aiden's casual fuck.  I hope Lily doesn't do the same thing.  Aiden was so wrong for that and Lily is just hurt by his casual attitude towards her.

I hope that Nate backs off and Lily goes home and sleeps it off. I'm sure that Aiden will find out that she was with Nate, but after the way he acted, he has no right to be jealous! (Although I know he will be). 

When he said that he didn't kiss sub's, I was pissed!  She was ready to give that fool her virginity.  Maybe if Aiden saw her kissing Nate, he'll realize that she's more to him than just a sub. 

Loved the update!

 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: November 08 2012

Title: Chapter 10: Right As Rain

Aiden, Aiden....*SMH*

 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: June 27 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

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All she did was open the door... 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Mercedes Jones
Classification: Cannon, General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 576
Read Count: 2097
Published: November 09 2012
Updated: November 09 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very hot and very good.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: November 09 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 26]
Summary:

Monroe Fifer Moss is a aspiring graphic design artist who must land an internship as soon as possible. With 190 credit hours to complete, while working part-time at the local library she has no idea how she is going to pull this off.

That will soon change when she meets the arrogant, demanding, its his way or the high way, yet charming Druex Pierre Robinson, that will give her a offer that she can not refuse.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 2353
Read Count: 6053
Published: November 10 2012
Updated: June 26 2014


Title: Chapter 2: 1. Early Monings

Good start!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: November 12 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 198]
Summary:

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Solana Blue is a young African American woman, who comes from a line of an ancient race of humaniod wolves that evolved to be able to survive the modern human world. As a young girl ,she had to learn what was like to be an Alpha as her parents were murdered in a wolf raid. She had no choice but to fight to protect her younger sister Eris Blue. 

Now at the adult age of 18, she must leave her grandmother's home with her sister to live with her potential mate Matthew Cruz in order to create a pack of her own. As the Blue sisters with under the Cruz house, Solana has to soon choose to become one with Matthew before the first Full Moon. But Solana is not sure if she can handle the sudden adulthood. 

Disclaimer:All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:Yes
Word count: 68011
Read Count: 28725
Published: November 14 2012
Updated: August 03 2013


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

OK, I waited unti you wrote a few chapters and I had my coffee and sat back and read this.  Enjoying it thus far.  It's a good story and I'm anxious to see where you take it.  

Brenda

 



Author's Response:

I was wondering when you were going to pop up Ms.Brenda. But thank you for taking the time and reading this, I really appriciate it. I am happy that you are reading and enjoying this story. 

Thank you, Nsablo. 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: December 02 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 61]
Summary:

A young couple must face the damage and aftermath when one disappears without explanation and suddenly returns. While one deals with resentment at being abandoned, the other reveals their own shocking reasons.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 6061
Read Count: 35985
Published: November 27 2012
Updated: April 18 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Ch. 2: A Mother's Choice

Wow.  I feel this building.  I can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: November 29 2012

Title: Chapter 4: Ch. 3: Good Morning Heartache

Whatever happened to her, I wonder why she felt like she couldn't share it with the man she loves and who loves her.  Did she think he'd reject her?  No matter what her reasons for leaving were, it shows that she didn't trust him to love her regardless and that is why he's hurting so bad.  Now he won't be able to trust that she won't run when another situation comes up.  Regardless, what she did was selfish because she didn't consider how he would be affected, only how she feels. She woke up thinking about how SHE's missing HIM, not the other way around. Now she tells her mother she's not worthy of him, again she's making it about her and not about him.  She's made up in her mind how he'll react without even giving him a chance.  That's just not right. She needs to grow up if she really wants a relationship wit this man. 

It's going to be interesting to see how she digs herself out of this.  Thie first thing she needs to realize is how much her leaving affected HIM and do a hard self evaluation.

 

I look forward to your update.

 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: December 02 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Characters

So now it's all coming out.  Reading her thoughts I'm just wondering if she and Ethan were waiting and maybe hadn't consumated their relationship and now a person has come and taken what was rightfully his, her virginity.  Is this why she ran and why she feels that she's damaged beyond repair and no longer worthy of Ethan?

Still, she should have told him, though this scenerio would explain a lot.  I can't wait to see what comes next. If the rapist was a friend or coworker who Ethan warned her about, but she wrote off his concerns as him being paranoid and/or jealous then that would also put her running away into perspective.

I look forward to whatever direction you take this story!

 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: December 28 2012

Title: Chapter 7: Ch. 7: Flashbacks, Hurt Spirits

I'm so glad you're back.  Rape is such a horrible crime and it doesn't seem as if Danni has gotten any help.  Ethan is going to need some also.  I hope Sean gets thrown under the jail.  I'm sure she's not the only one he's done this to.

Great update!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: April 18 2013

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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Bastien wasnt expecting her and Cameron never wanted him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5158
Read Count: 9416
Published: December 03 2012
Updated: April 14 2013


Title: Chapter 1: The Touch of You

I like this story.  

I hope that the two of them are immediately attracted to each other even though they have these hurdles in front of them. 

I also hope that the brother talks to someone and gets some help.  I hope that he can tell his Dad about what that teacher did.  She shouldn't get away with this.  He has expereinced sexual trauma and is dealing with it through alcohol.  He's probably keeping quiet because there's a double standard for guys.  He's supposed to like the idea of the hot teacher wanting him.  He is confused and ashamed and needs someone to talk to.

 

Good story.

 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: April 14 2013

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Summary:

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In desperate need to be loved, Camille Sullivan was willing to do anything... even if it meant sleeping with the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3430
Read Count: 49942
Published: December 12 2012
Updated: July 18 2019


Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

Great update!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: December 26 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 216]
Summary:

31 year old self-made millionaire Dean DuPont has only one weakness--his wife Charlotte.  There is nothing he wouldn't do for her.

Nothing.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 21048
Read Count: 20101
Published: December 16 2012
Updated: January 02 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Four

Dean is fooling himself if he thinks that he won't get emotionally involved.  I really don't like Charlotte.  She's spoiled and manipulative.  Great Story!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: January 03 2013

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[Reviews - 117]
Summary:

Dr. Tyler Elijah Lenz Solomon Weber is a psychologist who works as the head of Human resources at a law firm. His life seems to be perfect. Not only he has the perfect job but he also is a visiting professor in many Universities for his innovitaive research in developmental psychology. He has a fiancée, Alexandra, who loves him unconditionatly.
However, under the surface lays a man that has been affected by his life experiences and cannot fully trust others. This is his story, and that of Alexandra, and Lucas, the man Tyler fears will take his woman away from him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 49503
Read Count: 16668
Published: December 26 2012
Updated: February 21 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Hate That I Love You

I don't know why, but I like Tyler.  He still needs to see a shrink though and knowing that he's going to once again mess things up gives me pain.  Still Lucas needs a chance I guess, but we all know that she doesn't love him like she loves Tyler.



Author's Response:

I like Tyler too, but if I were Alexandra I'd probably break up with him. 
Now I don't know whether she will learn to love Lucas as she loves Tyler or even more. We'll see about that.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: December 31 2012

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Fuck it! (I Don't Want You Back)

OK Tyler, hold your horses!  Do you really think she's going to come back to you by you accusing her of cheating?  Boy, you really do need a shrink!  Run to him fast as you can before you do something else stupid and lose Alex for good.  Run Forrest Run!!!

This is good stuff.  I feel sorry for Tyler but he's a train wreck about to happen.



Author's Response:

Apparently he believes that she will always come back to him. And he just might be right. But I think that in the future he will be stretching his luckuntil it breaks completely. 
I agree, he is indeed a train wreck. And he needs to go and see someone who is really good to help him sort out his life.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: December 30 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Against the Odds

This is a good start.  Why is Tyler so insecure?  Is Lucas really just a friend or does he have feelings for Lexi even if she doesn't have feelings for him or is this all in Tyler's mind?

Maybe Tyler needs to see someone professionally to help him change his behavior.

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you. You'll find out about Lucas real soon, and the same goes for Tyler's problems. Maybe Lucas feels something for Lexi, but I think that Tyler would be paranoid with everyone looking at his girl too much. He doesn't trust people, and in particular women. 
Yes, Tyler absolutely needs to see someone. I'm not so sure that he wants to do so, though.
Thank you very much for reviewing. I always read your stories and I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: December 26 2012

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Complicated

Luke is playing with fire.  He's going to end up hurt and then when she realizes that he has feelings for her, it's going to hurt her too.  Good stuff!



Author's Response:

Sadly, I agree with you. Lucas is indeed playing with fire. And it is going to be so painful when he'll loose hope. 

Thanks for reviewing. x

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: December 27 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Try Sleeping With a Broken Heart

How can she not know that Lucas wants her after the way they met?  Maybe she pushed it from her mind.  Tyler needs to get some help for sure or he will lose her.  Great update!



Author's Response:

I guess that's what she did. Pushing it from her mind once their friendship was established. 

Thank you for the kind words. :D

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: December 28 2012

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Something

This was a good chapter.  Tyler needs to remember where he went wrong with Lexi and not go back down that path.  I hope he keeps his promise and get the help he needs.  

I know some people want her with Lucas, but I don't want her going to him on the rebound.  He deserves a woman who will love him just like she wants Tyler to love her.

Great stuff!  More please!



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, thank you. :D

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: December 31 2012

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Keep Your Hands Off My Girl

Tyler is so clueless.  He really needs to get to that shrink and fast.  Did he hear anything Lucas said?  Did it sink in when Lucas told him, "yes I'm inlove with her, but she's in love with you."  Did that give him any reassurance that nothing is going on between those two.

I want Tyler to have an epiphany or something or I'm going over to team Lucas. I don't want him to keep hurting Alex because of his issues.  He needs to piss or get off the pot!

What will it take, a crack upside his skull to realize what he's doing to Alex?

Well, again I say, "Good stuff"  I look forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

I think he listens only to what he wants to. And that is why he still suspects.

He will have an epiphany but I don't know if he'll have it in time. We'll see about that. And yes, it will probably take the crack for him to realise that he needs to get over himself and love Alex like she deserves. 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: January 03 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: For You

Tyler has never dealt with his mother's leaving and has serious abandonment issues.  He will never get better until he deals with that because even though he loves Alex, his fear of abandonment is controling every decision he makes and most of them are self destructive.

I hope that he will be able to get better and Alex needs to face the fact that he may not ever get well if he doesn't get the help he needs.

 



Author's Response:

I agree with you. He never got over his mother's abandonment. And what is really annoying is that he knows all this, but is still afraid to go and get help. I guess his behaviour is a safety blanket but he does not understand that what he's doing will not protect him. It will only hurt him and Alex and what they have.
Hopefully he will get better. But probably not until he realises that whatever he might do in the future may lead to awful consequences.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: January 05 2013

Title: Chapter 9: The First Break-Up....and Make Up

This sounds like a vicious cycle.  Poor Lexi.  He really does neet to get some help if he wants a different outcome.  He is miserable and making everyone else miserable.  Somthings got to give.  

Good luck on your exams!



Author's Response:

Aww thank you! I needed all the good luck I could master on Monday and Wednesday.
This is, as you said, a vicious circle. Let's hope that it will be broken. 

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: January 06 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.