Penname: Brenda1257 [Contact]

Real name: Brenda Anderson

Member Since: March 30 2011

Membership status: Member

Bio:

 


I am married with two adult sons.  I enjoy reading and writing fiction.  My stories will always have an underlying Christian theme, however I try to keep it real because even Christians do not live a perfect life, no matter what they try to portray to others! You can find me on Twitter as Preachabrenda!


 


September 16, 2014


Chambermates! 


Thanks for all of your support here over the years.  I've reached my dream of being a published author and I could not have done it without your encouragment. 


I will continue to support authors here any way that I can and I want to see other awesome authors here publish their work for the world to read long after we're gone.


Even though I'm not making a lot of money off of "The Preacher's Son" I am committed to my promise of using 20 percent of my profits from the book to help other Chamber authors.


I can be reached at Preacharomantic@gmail.com.  Please feel free to contact me here or on Facebook as BD Anderson, Richmond, VA.


Thanks guys!




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Lila's Thunder by Voices
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 359]
Summary:

  

 

Lila James knows that her friendship with seventeen year old Chase Almeida is extremely inappropriate, but she still isn't prepared when his older brother Jack decides to tell her just how inappropriate it actually is-- inadvertently igniting a fire that had been burning quietly inside of them for years.

*****Lila's Thunder has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 670
Read Count: 65030
Published: October 07 2011
Updated: September 09 2014

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Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow.  This was an excellent update.

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Date: May 10 2014
Title: Chapter 12: Lila's Thunder Published!

I am so happy that another Chamber author has been published.

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Date: September 10 2014
Life in High School by NaeNae1495
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

Dijnae Anderson is a full-figured high school junior. She's dealing with crazy best friends, a protective brother, her insecurities, and her attraction to the Co-Captain of the Football team. No one said high school was easy and she's definitely being put to the test.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 15199
Read Count: 15493
Published: October 16 2011
Updated: February 02 2012

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This was good.  Don't be too hard on yourself.  Can't wait for the update!

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Date: February 03 2012
Retired
This is all we need, right? by Inthenykoftime
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 81]
Summary:

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"Sex isn't good unless it means something. It doesn't necessarily need to mean "love" and it doesn't necessarily need to happen in a relationship, but it does need to mean intimacy and connection...There exists a very fine line between being sexually liberated and being sexually used."

    ---Laura Sessions

       The Family is a close knit group...Some may even consider it a cult. Its members unsuspectingly dedicate their entire beings to being one. They live a life under constant surveillence to ensure that they follow procedure and never break away from the group. To do so is unheard of and the consequences that follow are never questioned.

     Blaise Kincaid is a man who has grown up seeing the same faces of The Family without knowing their true intent. The time has come for their major plan to be put into motion, and Blaise has finally entered the stage in his life where they can entrust it to him. Once he enters his father's business, he'll be thrown into the doings of the group. He'll start to see everyone he has known all his life in a dfferent life...Even hisself.

     A young woman will entice Blaise and bring a new element to his life. She has admired a figurehead of The Family for as long as she can remember. When she gets a call telling of her life's dream becoming reality to work side by side with him, her only thoughts are to fufill herself and give her family a stable life that is well deserved.

     When these two meet, they ask nothing more than the physical from each other. They hope to provide an aspect to life that neither Blaise or Niamh have ever felt. What it is, they don't know.

     Once they start to realize it, The Family will war with their feelings, determined to never let it rise to its full potential and interrupt their agenda.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 79375
Read Count: 167912
Published: October 20 2011
Updated: August 17 2012

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Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 26

Wow!  Powerful update.  More please!

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Date: March 14 2012
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22.1

Boy, I so want Daniel to get his!  Also I'm a bit confused.  In the beginning you said that Naill was the firstborn and then later you said Blaise was the first born.  I thought Joe was with Lorriane first and she got pregnant  and he found out after her married Blaise's mother and Daniel refused to let him be with Lorraine.  Is there some sort of suprise coming?  Maybe they both were pregnant at the same time and then Blaise came prematurely???

Now evil Daniel is claiming his daugter to Blaise after he rejected her all this time!  I guess he's trying to get under Blaise's skin. 
I can't wait for the next installment!  Excellent writing.



Author's Response:

Uh oh, did I do that? Hmm I'll have to go back and check up on myself.

My intentions was for Niall to have been conceived during a "Final Tryst" and Niall should be the first born.

 

Woops.

 

Thank you for bringing that to my attention =)

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Date: January 23 2012
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 27

I don't understand why she has to put Blaise on hold, but maybe dealing with Daniel, finding out she was the product of rape and hate, and wanting back her family is just too much to handle.  

Also the thought of Joseph being her brother's father and Blaise being her brother's sibling is just too much for her to wrap her brain around.   Let's not forget her friendship with Daniel's other children and now she has two additional siblings also.   Whew!  What a mess!  And on top of everything else, she's asked to kill her father and save the world.  No wonder this girl's head is spinning!

Can't wait for more!

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Date: April 07 2012
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Well, well Ms. Darla....

I can see Blaise and Niamh getting closer...

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Date: November 08 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Cast

This is an "on the edge of your seat" story.  I'm loving it.  I guess Niall and Blaise are brothers, but who is his sister's father?  Hmmmm

Does Blaise know?  Does Niall?  I can't wait for the update!

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Date: November 07 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Wow!  Blaise knows that shes the one....I'm impressed.

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Date: November 09 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Wow! This was intense!   If Lorriane was in love with Joesph, how did she end up having a baby with David? Was it rape?  Did David do it to show Joseph he was in control.

This is all very intriguing.  More please!

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Date: November 12 2011
Title: Chapter 30: Note

I love this story.  (But you know this already).  I can understand when the muse is not being cooperative.  I will be patient.  LOL

 

Can't wait for all of this to come to a head!

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Date: April 07 2012
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15.2

OMG!  Daniel is such a jerk!  Why in the world is he angry about the daughter HE created???  I now feel like he must have taken advantage of Lorraine and then got pissed because he got her pregnant and then just wanted it all to "go away".

I would really really love it if that asshole would somehow need his daughter in the end and be at her total mercy!   Maybe he'd need some bone marrow or something where she'd be the perfect donor after he found out that Matthew and Darla weren't a good match!  LOL

This is a great story!  I eagerly await your next installment!



Author's Response:

I'm sooo happy you're enjoying this! Daniel is a sicko and just doesn't know what Niamh will soon mean to him. Big dummy.

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Date: November 15 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15.1

Wow!  This story really has me. Does Naill know that Joseph is his father?  Does Blaise know?  Does Joseph still love Lorriane.  In the beginning of the story it was said that the two, Niall and Niahm are "irish twins" less than a year apart.  Did Daniel take advantage of Lorraine right after she had Niall to prove a point to Joseph that he was "in charge?"  So many questions....and I can't wait for the answers!

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Date: November 15 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

OMG!  I was so happy to see the update and I had no idea it was going to turn out like this!  I am so into this story...so on the edge of my seat!  I feel so sorry for Joseph and Lorriane.  OMG.  I hope they work things out and that all of them can be a family and get back at Daniel and "the family"  for all the heartache and grief they have caused!  I pray tht Niall will forgive his father.  I can't wait for the next update! Now I'm going back to read it again for the second time!!!

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Date: November 21 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

Wow what a mess.  I can't believe Lorriane turned on her daughter like that. I know she's distraugt.  I hope that all this mess can be straightened out and the hate be directed to the one who caused all this chaos.

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Date: November 23 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

Wow.  I don't even know what to say about this chapter...

Except...Wow!

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Date: November 25 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19

Thank you! Thank you for the update.  I've been waiting and you didn't disappoint.  Daniel is just evil wanting someone that didn't want him and then forcing himself on her like that.  It also shows just how jealous he is of Joseph.   This is just too good of a story and should be a movie!  LOL.  Please update as soon as possible.  Merry Christmas!



Author's Response:

Waaaaaaahh....a movie you say?! That's EXACTLY how it goes on in my mind and there are so many details and other things that are hard to convey through words without sight. Ugh! Thank you very much and MERRY CHRISTMAS TO EVERYONE!!~~

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Date: December 22 2011
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20

Wow.  Matthew figured it out...how interesting.  NOw the family is advancing and I wonder if Daniel is going to try to knock all of Lorrianne's family off?  Can't wait for more.

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Date: December 22 2011
Title: This is all we need, right?

Hey there!  I've been patiently waiting for that update!  LOL.  I never thought that the government would be coming after you or anything like that.  When I first read your story, I really thought about  the movie "The Firm"  and I thought that it had  more of a mob mentality than terrorists.  Now they're making "The Firm"  into a TV show, so I think you're safe.  LOL  You didn't say anything that I would take to be an act against the government.  It is after all a story and there are terrorist stories all over.  However, you have to do what you feel comfortable with.

As I said before, I absolutely love this story.   It is fresh and different.  Sometimes I can't remember how to spell everyone's name when I type reviews because they are unusal for me, but you know who I'm talking about I'm sure of that.  

I love Naiim and Blaise and all the twists and turns with their family.  All the havoc that has been created keeps me on the edge of my seat.  I love her evil father and I want him to have to have to come for poor Naiim for something for his own sorry hide to be saved.  I want him on his knees begging his daughter.  Give her the power!  LOL and have Lorriane watching in the process!  I'd love for her and Lorraine to make up and her poor brother to bond with the father he never knew.  Of course, more twists and turns would be the icing on the cake.  

Lorriane has been through so much already and even though I didn't like the interaction between her and her daughter, I have empathy for her.  She has been on the run and full of fear of the family for years.  She needs justice.

There I've said my peace.  If you're really afraid of domestic terrorism and the government coming after you, LOL  you can always have them come in at the end and break up that terrorist cell.  I am sure that Obama will approve!

Again, Love Love Love this story.  No matter what I have said above, know that I am just venting because I'm so into the story.  My best advice is to follow your heart and the muse that is taking a nap.  

Fpr me reviews that are encouraging wakes up my muse and makes my mind start to work and the voices start to talk.  I hope that something I have said will inspire you to move forward with this story, which is by far one of my all time favorites.

Be blessed!

 

Brenda

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Date: January 13 2012
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21

I'm so glad that you were able to update today.  Daniel and his little tidbits he's been throwing out.  I just wonder if Niamh picked up on it.  I can't wait til it hits her that Daniel is her father.  

Thanks for the update!

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Date: January 14 2012
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 22.2

Oh I'm on the edge of my seat!  I so want Niahm to find out about Daniel being her father, but I don't want her to be hurt.  Lorraine,wake up!  It wasn't your  daughter's fault that you were raped.  I know that Lorriane is just trying to deal with all of the pain and betrayal, but her daughter needs her!

How will the poor child feel about being a product of rape, while her brother was a product of love?  I can feel everything coming to a head, or is it just my own imagination?  LOL.  Wonderful story.  I was so happy to see the update.

I wait anxiously and patiently for the next installment....

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Date: January 28 2012
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23

Wow!  A plan...Joseph has a plan....I pray that it works and that it all comes together and that Daniel gets whats coming to him.  

I am so on the edge of my seat.  Damn!  This should be a movie....

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Date: January 29 2012
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24

Excellent as always.  I guess Blaise didn't realize that they were being followed. I hope they get into the safety of their bunker before Daniel gets there.

I'm glad that he told Naihm about Daniel.  She should know.  

thank you thank you for updating.  I can't wait to see this play out.

 

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Date: February 12 2012
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25

Wow.  I'm on the edge of my seat.

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Date: February 21 2012
An Arranged Marriage To Satan by EvaJaye
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 131]
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Arranged Marriage- a marriage arranged by someone other than the couple getting wedded, curtailing or avoiding the process of courtship.

It's 2009 and Thea Malebranche could have sworn the archaic practice didn't occur here in America. But Apparently, she was mistaken. 

Definition Courtesy of Wikipedia && Banner Courtesy of the lovely Minx

 

 

 

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 6105
Read Count: 9625
Published: November 14 2011
Updated: May 17 2012

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Title: Chapter 1: The Arrangement

Wow!  Why does she hate him so much?  Did he do her wrong previously?  What is the mother's problem?  I look forward to the update.

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
Date: November 14 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.