Penname: Insomniac Sioj [Contact]

Real name: Rachel

Member Since: April 28 2011

Membership status: Member

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World renowned reader and inconspicuous writer.




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[Reviews - 415]
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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

& NOW KINDLE VELLAS TOP 250 FAVORITES LIST *

FIVE STARS ON AMAZON

When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214452
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Hahaha, love it already. ;-)

I'm on the next chapter.

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed
Date: September 25 2011

Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Poor lockers always the victims of students physical abuse.

If that was me I would have already give up to my temptation a long time ago.

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Date: September 25 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 115]
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 Banner by Missus James. :)

 

"If you prick us do we not bleed? If you tickle us do we not laugh? If you poison us do we not die? And if you wrong us shall we not revenge?"- William Shakespeare

 

She didn’t believe in love at first sight, yet when she met Fabian she believed in anything. Even the belief of her death at the hands of her lover…

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 10873
Read Count: 20775
Published: December 28 2010
Updated: July 17 2013


Title: Con Te Partiro

Finally it arrived you did good L.A.

I'm on to the next one.

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 09 2011

Title: Con Te Partiro

I like it.

Gib mir mehr updates.

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Date: October 09 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 94]
Summary:

Evelyn Campbell starts her new job at a top property development company. She gets the shock of a lifetime when someone she thought she had left behind long ago returns to her life with a vengance; and he is determined to make her pay for leaving him.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 5238
Read Count: 12918
Published: February 28 2011
Updated: August 07 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start.

Up to the next chapter ^_^



Author's Response: Thanks :o)

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Date: February 12 2012

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Awww so short but good.

On 2 the next 1 ^_^

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Date: February 12 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Poor Evelyn :(

Mystery woman an Mandy are ugh! (I can't put words on that).

Woah...Make her pay O_o

Dude is mad.

On to the next chapter

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Date: February 12 2012

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Because of her previous relationship start of great and finished badly.She think the same thing will happen with Senna?!

What happened after the 2 years:

Why she came back?

What happen to her child(she didn't mention the presence of a youngster) or was there even one for begin with.Sometimes a woman can miss her period for different reason(psychology/physicaly).(like in Evelyn case stress could be a reason)

Hope one day you'll want to finish it and bring an answer(s) to my question(s)  ^_^

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Date: February 13 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 439]
Summary:

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Ellie finds herself living the life that she could only imagine in her dreams. She has graduated from college with a degree in accounting, she is with the man she loves who is just as succesful, if not more than her, and he has just asked her to marry him. What more could a girl ask for? What could go wrong? Everything begins to change once she meets his family and realizes they dont like her. Can this break up their relationship? What is she to do? What about their "family" business? Will their marraige go on? After being on top the only place left to go is down, and Ellie is sure on her way there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: Mafioso Series
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 50333
Read Count: 89293
Published: May 20 2011
Updated: May 28 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 4

The family interaction is a mess o.o I don't know how she kept herself composed.

 

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Date: February 17 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 3

Whoah at this rate I would've locked myself in the nearest bathroom X(

At least evrybody took the situation as adults...except for B****

I'm on to the next chapter

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Date: February 17 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2

Woah o_o

I see what you're trying to do; more depth and flaws in characters?

Hey it's not always sunny in "engaged'' couples life.

Other than little words missing it's alright a bit.

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Date: February 17 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 5

Everybody made it out alive!

Now Nick need to face the two important women in his life.

Like what i'm reading so far.

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Date: February 17 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I understand Ellie's thoughts about Nick's interaction with Gio's wife.

Being ''nice'' can only last so far XD one time she'll get tired of it.

On to the next chapter...In laws.

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Date: February 16 2013

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 10 pt 2

An old woman texting,l.o.l.I would have tortured Marta on the phone XD

That came quit fast, six months after and both parts are in the path of debauchery except Nick is all the way in it.

I don't know what will happen but there better be more drama XD

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Date: February 17 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I'm quite fond of the prologue.

Next chapt.

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Date: February 16 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 8

I did not expected that o.o but with Nick's mother, the business Nick is involved with plus him in jail must have got to her...I thought she was poisoned for second O_o

I don't think a woman would want to bring a child into this o.o well some woman o.o

 

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Date: February 17 2013

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 13

Ouch! That hurts :( What she'll going to do, runaway? I would!

On to the next chapter!

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Date: February 18 2013

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Cruella Deville is the one that wanted to hook them up and now she's putting a face O_o that woman is nuts!

Feels bad for Ellie's situation but Nick is determinated to make it work, aww.

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Date: February 18 2013

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 12

It seems that Cruella Deville wants Ellie and Nick together o_O

I like Ellie explanation.

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Date: February 18 2013

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

She wants to invite the family O_O O.M.G she got iron balls and a steel brain.

I'm on to the next chapter.

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Date: February 18 2013

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

He had a change of mind that was cute.I want to see how this situation will be handled without anyones being hurt X(

Now everybody knows she's pregnant O_O

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Date: February 18 2013

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 14

She's trying to be strong so much and failed everytime.

Nice to see each parts expressed themselves... XD

Go get the plan B, Ellie O_O

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Date: February 18 2013

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

No! Ellie No! Delia

Delia contacted Nick? O.M.G now Ellie is in trouble.

I'm on to the next chapter!

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Date: February 18 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

A one night stand many years ago is still on the mind of Chase DuPont.  Will he ever see her again??

 

Passionate Encounters



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 1529
Read Count: 11199
Published: June 12 2011
Updated: March 13 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1-Remember

I was reading about an owner and his client communicationg until an intrusion came in.

It's a HATE at first SIGHT between me and the ex-wife.



Author's Response:

How cool!!  Yes, hatred is in order cause girlfriend has ISSUES, according to my muse.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 24 2011

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Short and sweet.

Update soon at least.

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 24 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.