Penname: toni174ever [Contact]

Real name: toni

Member Since: May 16 2011

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

After a rough Summer Alisha Easterly believes that it can only get better with the beginning of her Junior Year of high school... unfortunately sometimes what you want and what you get don't always coincide...

 

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 36862
Read Count: 38696
Published: February 03 2010
Updated: January 14 2014


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Twelve-Monday Misperceptions

Please good god woman don't leave for so long again I always enjoy reading this please keep it up 



Author's Response:

I won't... I promise! Well unless my muse decides to run off again. She has a bad habit of doing that when I really need her not to! But it seems that she might be here to stay for a while. :) Thank you for sticking with the story. It's very much appreciated.

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed
Date: October 21 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Ten- Kiss Me

I'm so freaking happy that your back been checking on this story for about a year waiting for you to come back really think this is a good read thanks for coming back with that killer tease 



Author's Response:

Ahhh thanks for sticking with this story for so long. I'm going to try and update at least once every two weeks or so maybe more depending on how real life goes. Thanks again for the reply and I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed
Date: January 02 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
Summary:

 

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When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214615
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

dont stop i need more



Author's Response:

Working on the next chapter now.  I hope to have it up real soon.

Thanks!

 

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed
Date: August 28 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 90]
Summary:
 

Aurora Dupree walked into Port Charles for one reason only:  To find her biological father.  But what she got in return was something that she in a million years would have never suspected.



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Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital
Characters: Original Character(s), Other
Classification: Alternate Universe, General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: La Bella Mafia
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 22539
Read Count: 16252
Published: November 09 2010
Updated: May 06 2012


Title: Chapter 12: Close Encouter

you need to keep this up

 

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed
Date: August 28 2011

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[Reviews - 419]
Summary:

Farewell

 

She didn't choose this Life. He chose It for her. And for that, he must pay the Ultimate Price.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:No
Word count: 92749
Read Count: 99692
Published: January 24 2011
Updated: March 20 2014


Title: Chapter 26: If You Set it Free . . .

i dont know if Bowie is a angel or something but this chick really does bring all the boys to the yard. thanks for updating and i hope that everything works out well for you just take that breath and do you thanks again love the story.

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed starstarstar
Date: July 10 2011

Title: Chapter 1: The Players

thank god your back woman love reading your story over and over yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed starstarstar
Date: July 10 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:

 

How could she love them? They destroyed everything...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4425
Read Count: 6947
Published: August 21 2012
Updated: August 25 2012


Title: Chapter 1: 1 - Storms on the distance.

Why isn't there more more more really enjoying this read thought she was gonna give it up in the kitchen I guess Elijah called

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed
Date: August 25 2012

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Summary:

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In desperate need to be loved, Camille Sullivan was willing to do anything... even if it meant sleeping with the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3430
Read Count: 49946
Published: December 12 2012
Updated: July 18 2019


Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

Gimme gimme more gimme more really diggin this so far don't keep us hanging  I wonder if ur gonna have green take x on a night on the down and that's we're he sees he and wants he sexy ass

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed
Date: December 12 2012

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Summary:

What's a girl to do, when she doesn't listen to her head but instead throws caution to the wind for one night?

We've all had an encounter with that guy, right? The one who knows that he is sex on two legs. That guy who you know should be avoided, but still manages to reel you in easily. That guy who is still in your bed, even though he is long gone.

No? You don't know him. Well, Ambi does. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 30393
Read Count: 47500
Published: December 29 2012
Updated: February 06 2014


Title: Chapter 1: The Party

Pretty damn nice anytime I think of Irish I see Mr.Norman Reedus with his sexy ass keep up the awesome work loving it.




Author's Response:

Thank you ma'am. Your guy is a sexy bi$#!. stay tuned!!

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed
Date: March 14 2013

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Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 287929
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 23: QUESTION

I say keep it as a side story I feel that it would take way from Val in all about her and I'm not trying to hear Henry's pov at the moment,period I feel that he's a selfish he wants Val only when it's Convenient for him,I know he has love for her put dude his just laying with her feelings,I'd love to hear his side but not in unguarded .But like you said it's your story ill love it either way but please let Val burn his ass,every good story doesn't always have to have a happy ending :)

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed starhalf-star
Date: January 26 2014

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18 pt 3

Fool me once shame on you fool me twice well ill still take it for the love of god Val can't catch a break ,I hope u have it mapped out that she burns Henry,that her dad  Introduce her so something like that and has it burning Henry up with jealous dude needs to get handled , I feel Val's pain because its soRealistic having feeling for a guy we have no right to because he the first person to makes you feel a goddess only to use you and hurt you I love this please we needs more :)

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed
Date: January 24 2014

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

For Elyshia Jenkins, one night will change her life forever.
If it is for the better or worse, only time will tell.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 16634
Read Count: 38113
Published: September 03 2013
Updated: January 03 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Proposition

Oh my how I enjoyed reading this can't wait for the updates I have a feeling that he might not have known that she was still a virgin,but that goes without saying.i really do enjoy it don't take too long we wants more :)



Author's Response:

you are possible, maybe...definately right actually, and I will try and explain in the next chapter when she interacts with Liam. You will get to see a hint of who he really is, don't know if that will change your opinions about him though.  I am glad you are enjoying yourself, that makes me very happy.  Hope I won't disappont!!!

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed
Date: October 28 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Freedom comes in many forms. In this case two sexy British men. But does that freedom come with a price?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 10238
Read Count: 7642
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: February 17 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ah shit what kinda magical stuff is gonna happen now which butthole broke up this naughty threesome,enjoying the realtic shock that Stephanie gets after she Realizes what she's done love it .put please for the love of god if you can't put up the pic of a Al or actors name :)



Author's Response:

First, THANKS A BUNCH YOU'RE WONDEFUL! Second, I dont know what's wrong with the picture thingy it's really starting to irk me. But here for you is: 

 

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-KGQLS0Q0oj8/T6n0DTjIq8I/AAAAAAAAAOA/JvR7l7oNjRU/s1600/sherlock3.jpg 

this is the link to the picture. 

Sorry for the inconvenience :)

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed
Date: January 18 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Woman dont you dear you have use wanting more,like you've noted it was a bit rushed but I'm digging it.dont know Stephanie had the Strength to lose both big Vs in one sit in but more power to her.please Continue I'm so enjoying so far and for your first time go you did well :).



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I promise the rushed beginning will make sense.

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed
Date: January 18 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hey hey hey now don't you dear start to be a tease and leave use hanging with more of these "?" What's happening did she train herself to forget who she and the sexy Brits are and I really hope you don't make this story go down crazy street. Im enjoying your work :)



Author's Response:

Oh don't worry I won't make it go down crazy street..... Ok maybe there's going to be a bit of lunacy but it's not going to be extreme I promise.

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed starhalf-star
Date: January 26 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Who doesn't want to be wanted



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 4460
Read Count: 5815
Published: January 30 2014
Updated: April 23 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you so much for your input it means a lot it's been forever since I've written and writing with a phone suck balls but I promise stick around and ill make it betta :) thanks again 

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed
Date: January 31 2014

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Summary:

It's gonna be a bumpy road!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 31436
Read Count: 43004
Published: February 08 2016
Updated: March 05 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was a fan of the fact that amella had a back bone that if she left she was being mistreated she'd call said person out not a fan of the slang talk but hey , I was really hoping that you have let her slap the taste outta dudes mouth for calling her a lair, an I'm hating that you made her weak to still stay on with the mother that left a bad taste I'm my mouth . Wanted to see the proof come out that she didn't lie and for amella to shut the door in his rich face make him beg her to come back and still say no ,but I'm not writing the story it was going good for me till I read the last few chaps

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed
Date: February 17 2016

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Summary:

 

COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 283800
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019


Title: Chapter 13: Tasty Offering

 

So sugar gets pergant (supirse if you didn’t see that coming) then Lance finds out what new girls been up to and tries to get sugar to hear him out 😒, I could have went without that interaction with her “twin”  just felt like filler and forced to me , we get it ur twins I’m not a fan of mollory or whatever is name is but that relationship felt more organic, but thanks for the update good to know lance wasn’t just verbally abusive but also enjoys hitting as well



Author's Response:

I'm sorry you feel that way, but thank you for the feedback. It's appreciated. 

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed starstar
Date: December 11 2017

Title: Chapter 19: Sour Surprises

Yasssss been waiting for this phones on 1% but it was worth the update 🙏🏾 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the next update.

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: May 07 2018

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Summary:

Ethan West has never been one to control his wolf, he let his instincts rule and they never failed him. Until his wolf insisted on marking Mia Kane as his mate. Maybe it wouldn't have been so bad if Mia wasn't a human. Ethan despised humans and taking one as a mate was the last thing he wanted to do.

Mia Kane should be living her best life, her music career took off, she won a Grammy for best new artist and she was selling out arenas all over the world. Life was perfect except for the fact that she tragically lost her family in an accident the night of the awards show. When the whirlwind was over her best friend and manager Elizabeth Jones forces her to take some down time at her parent's bed and breakfast. When Ethan shifts and bites her, her life takes an unexpected turn for the worst.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 28478
Read Count: 67083
Published: January 22 2018
Updated: July 08 2019


Title: Chapter 2: Bitten

Waiting for more



Author's Response:

Typing as fast as my fingers can go. LOL Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed starstarstar
Date: January 23 2018

Title: Chapter 4: The Change

Gotta dsay high five to Shawn way to be a friend and I don’t blame home girl if she has a steamy wolf moment or two with him , Ethan Ethan Ethan smh your an alpha you pack begged you to stay after you changed someone and you still bounced he deserves everything hoop he’s gonna have to jump threw. Can’t wait for your next update



Author's Response:

Shawn is amazing isnt he? What girl wouldnt fall hard for him? 

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: February 14 2018

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.