Penname: SebineDareau [Contact]

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Mercy by shiree022000
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 203]
Summary:

 



Tragedy brings all the Mercer brothers back home, even Bobby who left town and abandoned his family for mysterious reasons. His return will shake up everyones world, including his ex girlfriend who is hiding a secrete of her own. Lives are changed forever when the truth behind their loved ones death comes to a head. Will the four brothers that are bonded by choice not blood pull together as a family, or will revenge tear them apart? Bobby/OC


Rated NC-17 : For extreme violence, language, and strong sexual content.


I want to thank idjunkie for a wonderful banner. Thank you chica!



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 70748
Read Count: 34649
Published: February 08 2009
Updated: July 30 2014

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Title: Chapter 2: Gone Baby,Gone

I have ALWAYS had a mega soft spot for Bobby Mercer.  Ya man is this BEES NEES!  I think I might go home and watch Four Brothers, fa real!

 

Keep this up Shiree.  Bobby and Baby are bound to be explosive!



Author's Response: Yeah Me to girl! I love me some Bobby!  Thanks 4 reading.

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Date: February 09 2009
Retired
Possibly Maybe by a_muse_me
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

banner

 

Can a chance meeting at an airport, a wedding, family and friends bring about love lost? Possibly, Maybe?

a romantic comedy

Banner by me.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 33261
Read Count: 48232
Published: December 27 2010
Updated: May 03 2012

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

Your banner drew my in, your character pics made me interested and now that I have read the story I love it. 

Cam and Phil.  Tension much?  I guess getting to the bottom of that well will be interesting. 

Your dialogue is on point and I am LOVING that you cast Cho marrying Tamala Jones.  I don't know why, I just do :)

Keep up the great work :)



Author's Response: Hi Sebine.  I love hearing that the banner drew you in because (I really probably shouldn't admit this) I tend to read stories that have an interesting banner to accompany the story.  I think it's because I'm so visual by nature.  I'm really in <3 with John Cho and Tamala Jones characters and think I'd like to do a spin off story for them.  IDK... it would be a while before I got to that.  Anyway, I really appreciate you reading and the feedback.  Thanks for that!

 Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 27 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two

Girl you are an idiot!! LOL!

That whole country Korean convo was CLASSIC!!!  My husband looked at me kinda funny when I was lughing while I was reading.

And the Camometer?  Really?  LOL!  I just couldn't get enough!

As for Cam and Philip, you got a sista wondering what happened.  Because for them to be besties and suddenly she can't stand the ground he walks on, something major had to have happened.

I am LOVING THIS STORY!  Until the next update!



Author's Response: Thanks! I can be rather wacky sometimes.  I'm glad you liked the country Korean piece.  I first enivisioned that scene in my head and thought, how on earth am I going to execute this?  I was belly aching over that but thought it could be read as weird and ridiculous.  Thanks for finding my corny sense of humor amusing!  Glad you liked the Camometer too.  I plan on elaborating on that just a little bit in a future chapter.  The Cam/Philip saga will start to unfold soon enough.  They both feel the same way about each other but neither knows.  Thanks so much for the awesome review.  I really, really, really appreciate it! :)

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Date: December 29 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four

Oh I need to know WHAT HAPPENED!!! 

Did bio-mom say something about Cam? To Cam?  How is all going to work out?  I mean really.

And what's with Cameron and Erin?  In Phillip never dated her, and there is tension then something must have happened right?  Do tell.  I'm nosey and I WANNA KNOW!

I loved this chapter as I do with all you're chapters.

Thanks for the speedy update!  Looking forward to the next one.



Author's Response: Hi Sebine! Questions, questions my dear.... (some I don't even know the answer too just yet!) The Cameron/Erin deal is coming up very soon and so will the root of the issue betwixt Cameron and Philip.  Side note: I <3 the fact that you're nosey, cause so am I.  I'm so impatient with stuff I really want to know details about.  Anyway, thanks again for your support and your awesome review! :)

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Date: February 02 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five

HEYYYYYY, you're back!  ANd not a moment too soon.  I was starting to think you'd abandoned us.

Loving this update.  Im glad to see Cam and Phillip will get some alone time.  Hopefully juicy topics will be broached.  Yes?  yes.

Can I say once again, I LOVE GREG!  He has been in love with Nina for a while.  They make me very happy. 

Erin is not looking too good at the moment.  The word 'Ho-bag' comes to mind. Imma really need homegirl to play her cards right. 

FABULOUS update!  Don't let it be too long before the next one.  AND BRING BACK MIMI!!!   I NEEDS my Country Korean Fix! lol!



Author's Response:

Hi Sebine... Glad you liked the update.  Cam and Philip will have some alone time very soon.  Greg is love.  I quite like his character and have a hard time not writing him, even if it's a tiny scene.  He just makes me happy!!! Erin is flawed but there's some reason behind it.  Mimi will be back soon enough.  I'm so glad you liked the country Korean talk.  LOL! I have a very special scene that involves Mimi coming up, hopefully in the near future.  Anyway, thanks so much for your kind words and the review! :)

 Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six

Ok, Cam...

Im gonna need you to 'Woo Saa' and finally for the love of ALL THAT IS HOLY, tell Phillip what the problem is.  Girl, you will end up with an ulcer or worse if you don't.

And where is my country Korean?  You promised me more MIMI!  I am not seeing her...

Bring on the next chapter (and hopefully some answers).  I don't think Cam's mental health will last much longer if she continues to bottle her issues up.



Author's Response:

I KNOW!! Cameron is just not dealing with it (partly to carry the story) but mostly for me to try to capture an internalized person.  Sometimes we can't deal with stuff on the outside until we deal with ourselves on the inside.  She's getting there though!  Mimi did not make her appearance in this chapter as promised but will be all over chapters seven and eight.  Should be fun, I think! :) 

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Date: April 24 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven

No sweat on the 'pep talk' deary.  All writers need encouragment from time to time. And...I GOT AN UPDATE!  YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!

On to the story--

The plot thickens.

Cam and Phillip were getting it on in HS but were super secretive about it b/c she is a PK.  Then here comes Erin saying she is pregnant and there is a possibility that it is Phillip's? 

Can you spell receipe for disaster?  Why yes.  Yes, I believe you can.

I can't wait to see how you pull this off dear b/c this is a doozy!

P.S.  My favorite country Korean was LIVE AND DIRECT!  I will never be able to get enough of her.  LOL!

Thanks for the wonderful update, dear!

 

 



Author's Response:

Sebine... Have I told you lately that you're AWESOME! :)

 

The plot most certainly thickens.  It's chaos for these two but everything will come out in the wash soon! And isn't Mimi the cutest thing ever? I have fun writing her, though it's rough sometimes.  I loved how she tried to check Nina.  That whole exchange made me laugh while I wrote it (Corny, Right?) Anyway, thanks so much for reading and your constant encouragement! I really, really appreciate it! :)

 Reviewer: SebineDareau Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22 2012

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