Penname: Rae [Contact]

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 199]
Summary:

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Loving a man is hard enough try loving the devil?

 

How do you love a man that doesn't want to be love?

 

How can you care for a person who could careless about you?

 

How do you try to find a soul mate from a soulless man?

 

Jacqueline finds herself sold to devil she try's to unfreeze a heart that seems untouchable.

 

The harder she try's to love him the more lost she gets into the battle of loving the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 58549
Read Count: 87595
Published: September 24 2012
Updated: March 31 2016


Title: Chapter 14: If Your Girl Only Knew

Very good chapter!

I feel like there is a wall between James and Jacqueline that they are not moving pass. For being so perceptive James is an idiot for not seeing why she didn't want to accept the gifts from him.

I would love love love if we saw some maturing from Jacqueline though. While I understand her need to fight James on every turn she's coming across a little too childish at times.

I do hope Ace tells James about that suprise visit. :)

Reviewer: Rae Signed
Date: February 27 2014

Title: Chapter 13: Speechless

This is an amazing story but the grammar and spelling mistakes are very distracting. Please try and find a beta to help iron out those little kinks and take this to the next level. =)

Reviewer: Rae Signed
Date: February 24 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Allyce St. Gomurie didn't believe in the supernatural. Vampires? Werewolves? Witches? Load of rubbish. So why is this punk kid standing in front of her with a touch as cold as death and razor sharp canines?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 3127
Read Count: 3959
Published: September 28 2012
Updated: October 04 2012


Title: Chapter 4: Philadelphia

ooooo this is going to be good! I can already tell I'm not going to like Catherine.

Reviewer: Rae Signed
Date: October 04 2012

Title: Chapter 3: 26 and on The Shelf

I like the story so far. Very interesting start.

Reviewer: Rae Signed
Date: October 03 2012

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