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To Love the Devil by Benny Jude Road
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 286]
Summary:

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Loving a man is hard enough try loving the devil?

 

How do you love a man that doesn't want to be love?

 

How can you care for a person who could careless about you?

 

How do you try to find a soul mate from a soulless man?

 

Jacqueline finds herself sold to devil she try's to unfreeze a heart that seems untouchable.

 

The harder she try's to love him the more lost she gets into the battle of loving the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 58549
Read Count: 113884
Published: September 24 2012
Updated: March 31 2016

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Title: Chapter 14: If Your Girl Only Knew

Very good chapter!

I feel like there is a wall between James and Jacqueline that they are not moving pass. For being so perceptive James is an idiot for not seeing why she didn't want to accept the gifts from him.

I would love love love if we saw some maturing from Jacqueline though. While I understand her need to fight James on every turn she's coming across a little too childish at times.

I do hope Ace tells James about that suprise visit. :)

 Reviewer: Rae Signed
Date: February 27 2014
Title: Chapter 13: Speechless

This is an amazing story but the grammar and spelling mistakes are very distracting. Please try and find a beta to help iron out those little kinks and take this to the next level. =)

 Reviewer: Rae Signed
Date: February 24 2014
Where'd I Put The Garlic? by SaraiDanielle
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Allyce St. Gomurie didn't believe in the supernatural. Vampires? Werewolves? Witches? Load of rubbish. So why is this punk kid standing in front of her with a touch as cold as death and razor sharp canines?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 3127
Read Count: 4103
Published: September 28 2012
Updated: October 04 2012

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Title: Chapter 4: Philadelphia

ooooo this is going to be good! I can already tell I'm not going to like Catherine.

 Reviewer: Rae Signed
Date: October 04 2012
Title: Chapter 3: 26 and on The Shelf

I like the story so far. Very interesting start.

 Reviewer: Rae Signed
Date: October 03 2012
To Err is Human; To Edit, Divine! by Blackmagic
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 31]
Summary:

 

Editing

 

 

Mia had been his editor from the beginning, and James said he would not work with anyone else.  What Mia would never tell him, though, is that she would cut anyone who tried.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 17304
Read Count: 5801
Published: March 03 2022
Updated: May 15 2022

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Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love this! I love their back and forth and the glimpses of their true feelings all the way up to Mia's confession. I also love that it doesn't have any unnecessary or over the top drama.



Author's Response:

THank you so much!  I wanted to write something light-hearted, the other story I write takes a lot out of me.  I plan to write more light-hearted stories in the future...Stay tuned!

 Reviewer: Rae Signed
Date: April 29 2022

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