Penname: Karmal [Contact]

Real name: Monica Keaton

Member Since: July 09 2011

Membership status: Member

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 489]
Summary:

 A Special Thank You to TokenBlackGirl for the AMAZING banner.

 One night in Vegas changes the luck of two strangers.

Grace is a good girl to the bone, though she loves her job as a teacher she wants some excitement and for her twenty-fifth birthday she wants to shed that good girl image. Not be predictable Grace but a sexy wanton vixen,so her friends take her to Las Vegas, where her life is changed forever.

Kevin is an NFL all star and all around player. He is in Vegas because he was told to lay low after sleeping with the wife of one of his team mates, he has to figure out a way to change his image and quick.

 Sometimes what happens in Vegas shouldn't stay in Vegas and in Kevin and Grace's case it wont.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 14996
Read Count: 61679
Published: June 07 2009
Updated: April 27 2013


Title: Chapter 1: What happens in Vegas!

I am so glad you updated this great story. Please update again soon. I love your writing. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: April 28 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 150]
Summary:

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Tara does something she never thought she'd do, save one of the living dead. Now she's being hunted by the Authority. Eric is the only one who can protect her-that's if she agrees to give him what he wants in return.

Takes place during S4E9 Let's Get Out of Here. JUICY LEMONS! Tara/Eric with a little Sam/Tara and Alcide/Tara flirting on the side (just because I can't resist a little Tam and Talcide)



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Tara Thornton
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge, Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 76043
Read Count: 48322
Published: August 28 2011
Updated: September 08 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Stop the Bitch

Love this story.  Can't wait for an update. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 03 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 219]
Summary:

Lieutenant Brady Sloane was a good man, but always seemed to finish last with women, until now.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 16076
Read Count: 24538
Published: March 03 2012
Updated: May 06 2016


Title: Chapter 4: Four

I love this story. Brady and Penélope are very passionate about each other. 💕

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: May 07 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

Love, loss and redemption are found in the most unlikely places.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active, Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 114
Read Count: 34090
Published: February 05 2013
Updated: March 15 2013


Title: Good Grief

This story is great. Pics of the characters would be great.  



Author's Response:

Hi Karmal- Thank you so much for commenting and rating. I've seen the other stories with images and think that is great. But I have no idea how to go about doing that. Any ideas? Is it just random photos I find online? 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 21 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 776]
Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108475
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In The Beginning

I love this story. More please. Love the way Jayden is fighting for his family. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 23 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

Everyone has that someone who made them feel perfect and brilliant. How do we lose sight of those great loves and what happens when they come back into your orbit? Amelia and David were college sweethearts who run into each other 2 decades later-after marriages, divorces, kids, and careers--can they still be crazy in love?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9837
Read Count: 16837
Published: April 17 2013
Updated: June 12 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1--I Used to Love Her

This is a great story. Loved it. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: April 17 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 70]
Summary:

Masks

 

“We understand how dangerous a mask can be. We all become what we pretend to be.” 
 Patrick RothfussThe Name of the Wind

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: The Masquerade
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6636
Read Count: 8474
Published: May 14 2013
Updated: July 08 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Those In Hiding

There is no need to feel insecure about your writing,  this is off to a great start. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: May 14 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

Sometimes things just don't go as planned.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Sexual Healing, Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3801
Read Count: 17973
Published: May 14 2013
Updated: May 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this. Interesting start. More please. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: May 14 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 417]
Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53958
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Facts

I love this story. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: June 10 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 77]
Summary:

For Jamie Watson, raising Alex was supposed to be a short time gig, a means to an end before starting her new life. But with it brings a type of love she never could have imagined with Alex's father Mitch. While caring for him brings them together, will doing what's best for him tear them apart? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 20139
Read Count: 54869
Published: May 20 2013
Updated: October 25 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am so happy this story returned. I'm really enjoying it. Keep the updates coming. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: May 23 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Cast

I loved this chapter. Way to stand up for yourself Sasha. Love Dimitri for not taking advantage. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I'm very happy to hear you are enjoying the story. More to come!

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: June 15 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

More please. That was great. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: June 03 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

I'm really enjoying this story so far. Great update. Keep them coming. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad your enjoying it! Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: June 02 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

No matter what happens, there's no crying in baseball. On the field that is. Skylar Rose Lansing tries her best not too anyway. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 10984
Read Count: 6910
Published: June 04 2013
Updated: June 14 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Off to a great start. Update soon please. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: June 04 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 64]
Summary:

 

10 years went by in the blink of an eye. Now eveyone was gathered in a tiny town for there highschool reunion. Sparks will fly as old 'friends' meet again.

Then enters two guys who have come with the intention of wooing the one girl they shouldnt have let go of in the first place. The only problem is there after the same girl.

On this unlevel playing field where hurt, love and jealousy run wild everyone is playing for keeps



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15228
Read Count: 10427
Published: June 22 2013
Updated: November 16 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Reunion

Great start. Can't wait for an update. 



Author's Response:

an update is on its way a few details to iron out.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: June 22 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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What happens when a werewolf refuses to follow his nature,does his wolf take full control or will the human side win the battle of wills...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Family, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 10355
Read Count: 3509
Published: July 13 2013
Updated: September 08 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great read. I can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

Thank you...

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: September 10 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

I am currently NOT working on this story and don't know when I will be again. Writing this takes a toll on me and I have kinda been posting other things here. Give them a looksie. :]

 

Kensington's battered body ached from abuse, each blow recieved slowly tearing her apart. She was drowning in the hell that once used to be her home until a mysterious stranger comes along. Will he be the one restrore Kensington's faith in the world?

Heads up: The beginning (meaning the first few chapters)  of this story is a bit DARK. If you are of a faint heart than I fear this story is not going to be appealing to you. 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 10114
Read Count: 12990
Published: July 25 2013
Updated: May 29 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it. More please. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: July 26 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

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A collection of romantic/erotic short stories based on black women and the men that loves them.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5911
Read Count: 4806
Published: August 05 2013
Updated: August 07 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Table of Contents

This is great. More please. 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoy. And there will be more soon!

Reviewer: Karmal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 06 2013

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[Reviews - 197]
Summary:

When Joss begins receiving anonymous letters, she has her suspicions as to who might be penning the ominous messages.  But as the list of suspects grows, will she uncover the author’s identity or stumble upon a greater truth?  *A response to the Random Letters prompt.*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46306
Read Count: 37786
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 17 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

More please. I'm enjoying this so far. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Karmal! 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: August 30 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

23 year-old Tasha Jackson took her fiance throne in the drug industry when he was shot and killed at a gas station. After he died, she became a emotionalless cold-hearted bitch, and was all about her money and her son. She trusted no-one, but the people in her cricle.

Trent Collins a 29 year-old rookie police officer who was ecstatic when he was given the opportunity to go undercover for the first time. His main objective was to take down a woman named Tasha Jackson not to fall in love with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Femslash, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: The Tough and The Gritty
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4833
Read Count: 11535
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: October 07 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start. Can't wait for an update. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! ツ

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: September 02 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

What's a girl to do when there are two after you? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Threesome+
Challenges: Give Me a Mountain Man Anyday!
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 6583
Read Count: 43900
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: July 13 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Great. Waiting for more. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: September 03 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

For Elyshia Jenkins, one night will change her life forever.
If it is for the better or worse, only time will tell.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 16634
Read Count: 38111
Published: September 03 2013
Updated: January 03 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Proposition

This is a great start. Would love to read more. 



Author's Response:

You got it dude ;)

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: September 03 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

 

Losing My Way Banner

               Thanks to LadySade for the awesome banner! :)

 

Landon Baxter was the perfect guy. He had everything any man or woman would kill for. He had his dream job, a beautiful family, the world at his feet. He was loved by any and everyone. His life was perfect, that was until he lost his mother.

Now he has a problem with that little white rock and he can't put down the pipe. Landon lost his way and he can't seem to find his way back to reality.

Would he ever be able to find his way back? or Would he be forever losing his way?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9784
Read Count: 5193
Published: November 11 2013
Updated: December 29 2013


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

this is great story so far. please continue.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I will continue with it. ツ

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: November 16 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 238]
Summary:

This is the sequel to Tess and Jay; they have been married for two years now, and are happy. However with Tess being very busy all of the time and Jay trying to make a name for himself in the company, sometimes they just don't have the time to be as close as they use to be. Combined with this and Jay's new beautifual assistant, Tess' old insecurities are beginning to creep in. Can this marriage survive the strain?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 52947
Read Count: 28571
Published: November 29 2013
Updated: January 18 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Brown Eyes of Green...

I absolutely love this story. It's better than a movie. Please Please update soon. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: January 09 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Brown Eyes of Green...

I absolutely love this story. It's better than a movie. Please Please update soon. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed
Date: January 09 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.