Penname: Artamiss Caine [Contact]

Real name: Artamiss Caine

Member Since: October 24 2011

Membership status: Member

Bio:

soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo....about me...I live south of nowhere, just fifteen minutes east of desperation....Oh you want something a little more non-fictional.. Ok, I'm a 26 yr old mom of two. Attended FSU!!!! Yes, I bleed garnet and gold. I love life with my kids and hubby. Reading and writing are large parts of my soul. I'd go crazy if I didn't put the voices in my head down on paper. :) I hope you enjoy my stories as much as I enjoy writing them. Oh, and I'm also on The Twitter follow my mindless ramblings... http://www.twitter.com/artamisscaine


 


Update: April 10, 2014


 


While I am home recuperating from surgery, I have decided to go ahead with Nerds On Words. The first review has been posted. http://nerdsonwords.webs.com/ Check out the sight when you get a


chance. 


 


 


Update: April 16, 2014


 


Nerds on Words has moved!! I finally got blogger to cooperate and it is doing the most right now. I know I said that about webs...but I feel like we will reach a bigger audience with Blogger that and it links directly to my google+ account and gmail making responding easier. Remember that the email for NOW is Thenerdsonwords@gmail.com and the new site is www.nerdsonwords.blogspot.com



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On Hiatus: No

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[Reviews - 114]
Summary:

 

Wren Blue didn't do mornings...

 

Especially when she found herself as the fourth victim in a twisted killer's game.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Female/Female, Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Femslash, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 19929
Read Count: 15723
Published: November 09 2011
Updated: February 26 2012


Title: Chapter 9: Strike Zone

Here comes the fated crackhead scratch that comes along every time I read one of your stories....simply brilliant!

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Date: January 04 2012

Title: Chapter 10: Fear Factor

ahh greatness!

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Date: January 09 2012

Title: Chapter 11: The Final Threads of Sanity

How I love thy updates let me count the ways 

1) you draw me into the Sick world and make me want to stay

2) you have me a like a crackhead itching for updates

3) Your chapters are always so well written and I'm running out of things to say except:

I can't wait for more!

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Date: January 21 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 131]
Summary:

 

 

Arranged Marriage- a marriage arranged by someone other than the couple getting wedded, curtailing or avoiding the process of courtship.

It's 2009 and Thea Malebranche could have sworn the archaic practice didn't occur here in America. But Apparently, she was mistaken. 

Definition Courtesy of Wikipedia && Banner Courtesy of the lovely Minx

 

 

 

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 6105
Read Count: 9620
Published: November 14 2011
Updated: May 17 2012


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

You are mean as hell for leaving me hanging like that! LOL LOVE IT!

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Date: May 04 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 265]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, MD and into the life of Devyn McKnight. Jewelry designer and entrepreneur, Devyn McKnight, thought she was secure in the shell she built around her life, made of family, friends and her jewelry business but an unexpected encounter challenges all that she is and all that she believes she wants to be.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 91963
Read Count: 104070
Published: December 11 2011
Updated: January 07 2014


Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29

Who knew them damn Westmore peeps were so gangsta!!!!!

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Date: December 09 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

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"Usually, when someone says that a person is going nowhere, he or she is generally referring to the act of standing still. Not moving. Not passing go. Not collecting 200 dollars. And certainly not crashing and burning at the lightning speed. But that's exactly what I was doing. I was going nowhere. Fast. And then I met him..."

Brielle Blackwell-March lives in a whirlwind of sex, drugs, and self-deprecation, taking life by the steering wheel and slamming hard on its gas pedal. She'll do anything to make people see her as more that "That Indian Girl," even if it means riding in Danger's fast lane. But when a graduation night celebration goes awry, that ride comes to a screeching halt. Literally. Seeing Bree's accident as a cry for help, her parents send her to her grandparents' farm in Oklahoma, a Native American farm where she is forced to confront a side of herself that she hates. Brielle is determined to turn a windstorm into a blizzard, but there's one thing that she didn't count on: that the animosity growing between Aiden Poway, her grandparent's delivery boy, and herself would scorch her wintry veins. And we all know that when things boil over, they sometimes spark flames.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 10638
Read Count: 2236
Published: December 15 2011
Updated: February 03 2012


Title: Chapter 4: And All the King's Men

loving where this is going!



Author's Response:

Thank you much Miss AC! Stay tuned, because the ride has only just begun.

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Date: January 05 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Take away love and our earth is a tomb ~ Robert Browning

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 5754
Read Count: 22961
Published: December 19 2011
Updated: February 27 2012


Title: Chapter 4: III. Vulnerability

DO I look like a crack head begging on a street corner to you? So why did you leave me hanging and scratching like a fiend? LOL! I totally love this! It's mint! I wish you would finish...

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Date: January 04 2012

Title: Chapter 5: IV. Beneath the Surface

OMG!!! As always, I love your updates! Poor Vivi, I want to give her a hug. :( Give her a gf of her won to ease her ache lol. Anyways, I am waiting for the next update!

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Date: January 23 2012

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Summary:

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Sometimes when it comes to family and their issues, a lie is more acceptable than reality.

 

Acceptable Lies is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 93404
Read Count: 94661
Published: December 23 2011
Updated: January 19 2013


Title: Acceptable Lies

LMAO!!! SO I love this chapter for so many reasons....Dancing Boy is probably my favorite nickname. I passed this story onto a friend of mine and she keeps calling Gabriel " Tutu Magoo" LOL! She keeps asking if I have seen any updates for the Tutu Magoo story LOL



Author's Response:

LOL.  It's closing here at work so I haven't had time to update yet.  Most likely I will be the weekend.

I like Tutu McGoo also.  LOL.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

TUTU MCGOO!!!!THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR PUTTING IT IN THERE!! You have no idea how happy I was. I rolled off the couch and hit my head laughing! and OMG!! Thant scene in Albert's office!! That was the bnusiness! GO #TEAMSUGAR!!!! Thanks for the update. I was superb! Now waiting for the next chapter LOL

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

Have I mentioned how much I love it when you update? Or how I love that Tutu Magoo is so possessive? LOVE IT



Author's Response:

Thanks Artamiss:  I'm still working on putting that "tutu Magoo"  in the story.  Let's see who's gonna call him that....LOL

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Date: January 09 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

I loved this update! Great job as usual! I was on the floor rolling around and laughing the whole time! can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thanks Artamiss.  I tell you, your story is in my head so bad that I didn't even realize that I had named them Wainright just like yours.  Maybe they're distant cousins or something.  I really loved your update also.  Happy new year!

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Date: December 28 2011

Title: Acceptable Lies

I love this story! I can't wait to see where it is going to go. 

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Date: December 27 2011

Title: Acceptable Lies

As always you blow me away! I loved the scene with Honey's father and Trevon.....ohhhh don't get me started...I've been drinking...LOL!!! I love me some of him! His attitude has definitely landed him on my YumYum2012 list LMAO!



Author's Response:

Artamis, you are so funny and you are my inspiration.  Remember Tu Tu McGoo?  LOL.  Whatcha drinking? Don't get a headache now.  LOL

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Date: April 14 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

AHHHHHHHH I want Sydney to get kicked in her teeth by Honey....ok maybe that wouldn't go over so well at family reunions...LOL Another great chapter! Thanks for the update.

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Date: January 30 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

Is it bad that I want to stan that heffa Syd in the neck?? ....Of course AFTER she has the baby...lol. Excellent update as usual. I love the twists and turns and my usual fix of my tutu magoo!!

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Date: February 29 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

What to say when I know that you know that I know you are brilliant?....More!!!! Lol

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Date: June 05 2012

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Summary:

I will act out. I will overreact. I will cry. I will throw tantrums. I will cling to him. I will be a fool over him. I will love him until I get a Piece of Reese. But how far will she go?



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 13000
Read Count: 5720
Published: January 16 2012
Updated: March 06 2012


Title: Chapter 1: The Diary

I like the overall idea of your story. The summary grabbed me that's why I decided to read it. The concept is interesting but the POV's and structure are kind of all over the place. You might want to consider revising and editing some more. It can get a bit distracting to the reader. I had to re-read a few lines before moving on and it jumps all over the place. I get the need for mystery and the switching of the POV.. a lot of ppl are comfortable doing that and thats fine but it has to come through as seemless. Just another note, be careful of listing/leading the reader too much.. You want to paint a picture and let their imagination do the rest. Like the dinner scene in the first chapter...Its not necessary to list like "and I ate this first, and I ate this next, and I ate this last." Get what I mean? You could sum that up by saying "I made quick work of the asparagus and hamburger and choked through the applesauce making a mental note to warn Cade off of it next time." It sums up what you are doing without actually listing it one by one. It stunts the voice of the narrator when you do that and interrupts the fluidity of your story. 

That being said, I love Cade's relationship with his sister and how he took her in and was real to her. Their relationship is real organic and I'm looking forward to reading more.  Good job so far. I just felt that from writer to writer, I should drop some pointers and advice that have helped me before. :) Good luck on the rest of your story!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for that feedback. I appreciate it and will revise and make sure it's good. Cade's relationship with Mariah is much like that of what I hope me and my brother's will turn out like when we're grown up. A little private info: When my brother and I get to joking, it's more about pointless things, and he's not much into sexual-based jokes that my sister and I tell each other. He's a little prudish since he's only ten, but then again, I keep on forgetting that he's only ten and that I need to be mindful of that. As he plays violent video games, it becomes even more clear that he's growing up and that he's a boy. And when he comes home from a tackle football game or practice, he's always trying to tell me these stories that you know, don't really catch me, but I listen all the same because I realize that he is an awesome little kid and he needs attention like you and I. Wow. What a mouthful and pointless information. I guess I got carried away with talking so much about a sibling relationship that I didn't realize I was responding to a review. Anyway, thanks so much for reviewing and recognizing the things I didn't. ♥

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Date: January 18 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

 

Dr Vanessa Sharpe has just been offered the job of a lifetime, to work for a Japanese owned pharmaceutical company joining a successful research team headed up her former mentor.  This is her chance for a new start and to rebuild her confidence, she just needs to ignore her intense attraction to her sexy boss Takeshi and focus on her work that should be easy right?

 

Takeshi Yaguchi is the CEO of PharmaChem and heir to Yaguchi enterprises, he values Family and Honour and with his good looks, money and power he has dated many beautiful women but always ones that his family approves of and are considered acceptable for his position and has never deviated from this so why does he find himself drawn to Vanessa?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2742
Read Count: 11088
Published: January 18 2012
Updated: January 18 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Let me start by saying that your story has a lot of potential. I am looking forward to seeing where it is going. That being said, I think that you should consider editing the chapter for punctuation errors. You are missing transitional and ending punctuation at the end of your quotes and its distracting to the reader's eye. You have nice imagery and you don't list very often which is a huge plus in your favor. Also consider your paragraph structure. Those are the main things I see detracting from the story thus far. Quite a few people are beta readers on here. If you are new to story writing then you might consider asking around. Other than that, good job on your first chapter. I enjoyed the character interactions and can't wait for more. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the tips, are you a beta reader or could you recommend someone?

I will try asking around.

Thank you!

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Date: January 18 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

All of me is less of youand I still want you here tomorrowAnd when the sun is out and I am wholewe'll see if you're still around tomorrow

Read more: XIMENA SARINANA - TOMORROW LYRICS Copied from MetroLyrics.com 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1531
Read Count: 863
Published: January 19 2012
Updated: January 19 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this chapter. I can't wait to see more of what you have in store. I love the relationship between Vince and Jamie such a delightful bromance between cousins. LOL. I kind of want Callie to kick Jamie in the face for being a douche though.LOL. Otherwise, it was very well written. Great first chapter!

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Date: January 19 2012

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Summary:

Lieutenant Brady Sloane was a good man, but always seemed to finish last with women, until now.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 16076
Read Count: 24536
Published: March 03 2012
Updated: May 06 2016


Title: Chapter 1: One

you are mean as hell for leaving me ...I mean US hanging like that LOL!

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Date: March 05 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 

 

 

 

Sometimes there's more to a person than meets the eye...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4518
Read Count: 1909
Published: March 04 2012
Updated: March 04 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

As always you leave me with an awwwwwwwwwww at the end! I love it! You are the best!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 05 2012

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 29]
Summary:

 

 

*Response to the Love is Blind challenge*

 

I've been living so long with my pictures of you...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1176
Read Count: 4435
Published: March 04 2012
Updated: March 04 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Pictures of You...

YOU ARE EPIC!!!! that's all I need to say.

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Date: March 05 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 71]
Summary:

*Response to the Take Me Please Challenge*

Five miles outside of hell and a few meters from the devil's doorstep, Mari finds her favorite kind of challenge, a pretty boy with a big stick.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Take Me Please!
Series: Southern Gents
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9399
Read Count: 20093
Published: March 07 2012
Updated: March 08 2012


Title: Chapter 2: 1. Bear

You know you are three layers deep in foul for leaving this here lol!

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Date: March 07 2012

Title: Chapter 3: 2. Mari

you know whats needed? the next chapter!!! lmao! thanks for the quick post!!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 07 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.