Penname: Artamiss Caine [Contact]

Real name: Artamiss Caine

Member Since: October 24 2011

Membership status: Member

Bio:

soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo....about me...I live south of nowhere, just fifteen minutes east of desperation....Oh you want something a little more non-fictional.. Ok, I'm a 26 yr old mom of two. Attended FSU!!!! Yes, I bleed garnet and gold. I love life with my kids and hubby. Reading and writing are large parts of my soul. I'd go crazy if I didn't put the voices in my head down on paper. :) I hope you enjoy my stories as much as I enjoy writing them. Oh, and I'm also on The Twitter follow my mindless ramblings... http://www.twitter.com/artamisscaine


 


Update: April 10, 2014


 


While I am home recuperating from surgery, I have decided to go ahead with Nerds On Words. The first review has been posted. http://nerdsonwords.webs.com/ Check out the sight when you get a


chance. 


 


 


Update: April 16, 2014


 


Nerds on Words has moved!! I finally got blogger to cooperate and it is doing the most right now. I know I said that about webs...but I feel like we will reach a bigger audience with Blogger that and it links directly to my google+ account and gmail making responding easier. Remember that the email for NOW is Thenerdsonwords@gmail.com and the new site is www.nerdsonwords.blogspot.com



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On Hiatus: No

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 113]
Summary:


Nia Jones, an amazing designer at Sohma Graphics, has strong feelings for her boss. She doesn't think they'll ever be reciprocated. In fact, she thinks he hates her. They both realize otherwise when his suave older half-brother is abruptly added to their lives.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 20126
Read Count: 22677
Published: July 23 2012
Updated: May 26 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

yes he is a boss... I want one LOL

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25 2012

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

TEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE LOL

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Date: July 26 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 68]
Summary:

Noah Bianchi has been in lust for his new secretary Eliza from the moment he met her, but how will he introduce her to his dominant lifestlye? By bending her over his desk of course.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Chains & Whips Excite Me
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 7176
Read Count: 8075
Published: July 26 2012
Updated: August 10 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Come Into My Web

I can't stand you sometimes.....this time I really can't stand you because there is no continue button. LOL! This was hot, and tension filled. It flowed seemlessly and it was brilliant! I loved it. 

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Date: July 26 2012

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 193]
Summary:

Carmen Shelly preyed on married men and usually won her sought after prize. Business is booming until her partner sets his sights on her single sister.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 41535
Read Count: 39598
Published: July 29 2012
Updated: February 28 2016


Title: Chapter 8: Seven- Going off the deep end

So damn refreshing! What the hell can I say? I refuse to nitpick on the fewest grammer errors I have ever seen when the storybis so damn amazingly done. Can't wait to see ahat happens next!

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Date: March 21 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 282]
Summary:

 

Cara Nightingale had made the same mistake twice.  Could she recover from past mistakes and get her life in order?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 66737
Read Count: 81033
Published: August 07 2012
Updated: October 15 2012


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Paying the Piper

Oh how I love Mr. Cecil and his gun and how he backs up Ms. Joanne with it!!! Love the new story!!

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Date: August 11 2012

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 286]
Summary:

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Loving a man is hard enough try loving the devil?

 

How do you love a man that doesn't want to be love?

 

How can you care for a person who could careless about you?

 

How do you try to find a soul mate from a soulless man?

 

Jacqueline finds herself sold to devil she try's to unfreeze a heart that seems untouchable.

 

The harder she try's to love him the more lost she gets into the battle of loving the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 58549
Read Count: 113176
Published: September 24 2012
Updated: March 31 2016


Title: Chapter 8: Red Light

I can't believe I waited so long to read this!! AMAZING!!! I can't wait to see more. I am too stupefied to say more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much

 

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Play

I love this story and it has all the hallmarks of a 10. The story progression, character development,  flow are all great. The one thing that is holding it back is the grammar mistakes. There are quite a few. Please be careful.  You might want to go back with a fine tooth comb and do line editing. Ex. When she dropped the bowl,  you put bowel...distracts the reader. We can always expect some errors, no WIP or finished work is perfect but you have a but more than average.  I do love this story and can't wait to see what is next!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed
Date: November 19 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 136]
Summary:

 

Samara, a model/actress, is sucked into the world of BDSM as she tries to figure out who murdered her photographer best friend and roommate, Ana, who belonged to a BDSM club called Bound in which she’s involved with a dominant who has a connection to Samara…Justin, a model by day and a Bound BDSM dominant by night.  Samara tries to keep a level head as she tries to avoid getting completely consumed by this BDSM lifestyle.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Mystery, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 39
Completed:Yes
Word count: 52663
Read Count: 68606
Published: November 15 2012
Updated: July 03 2018


Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I have no clue why in the worlY I delayed in reading this! !!!!!!!!! AMAZEBALSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSNow gimme more! Please? Y(^_^)Y

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Date: December 08 2013

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

What's a girl to do, when she doesn't listen to her head but instead throws caution to the wind for one night?

We've all had an encounter with that guy, right? The one who knows that he is sex on two legs. That guy who you know should be avoided, but still manages to reel you in easily. That guy who is still in your bed, even though he is long gone.

No? You don't know him. Well, Ambi does. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 30393
Read Count: 47336
Published: December 29 2012
Updated: February 06 2014


Title: Chapter 3: I'm your naughty girl

HAHAHAHAHA!!! This was the jizzz...and I mean the shizzz! LMAO!! I loved it! Great work! I loved the build up and the tension.  The inner dialogue is well done and brilliantly placed. Perfection..Now I need a cold shower and an update! LOL



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOL......Thank you! I try...I'm working on my craft :-)

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14 2013

Title: Chapter 5: You Shook Me All Night Long

I desperately need this to go on forever and ever and ever!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you ma'am!! I appreciate your support. Be on the look out for the second part of their story. Happy reading & writing.

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 121]
Summary:

A sequel to Good Grief, Duplicity is full of mystery and intrigue. Will love conquer all things or are some things broken by nature?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 114
Read Count: 19931
Published: March 18 2013
Updated: May 14 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Note to readers

We will miss you dearly. I pray for your recovery and send positive energy your way. Hope everything gets better!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14 2014

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 286515
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18 pt 3

I NEED the next chapter.  I don't think you understand. .....This has me hooked!!

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Date: January 24 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 68]
Summary:

I never said I was the  good guy. I'm nobody's hero.

 

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 15545
Read Count: 8750
Published: May 11 2013
Updated: June 08 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Nagging obsession

Lady you slay me!!

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Date: December 23 2013

Title: Chapter 1: The first time I met her

I ain't too proud to beg comes to mind whenever I read your work!!! Lol but you should know that by now. I think you sooo nailed it!!

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Date: May 11 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196730
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I think you are definitely on the right path. I always consider these postings to be first draft....and for a first draft, you definitely delivered!!! There is definitely a more definitive cohesive flow and believability i the main character's actions and thought process!!! Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I;m very glad you are enjoying my story!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed
Date: June 02 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

I am definitely interested in seeing where this is going. I think that it has a lot of potential. I do see some things that could pose a problem. I think there needs to be a thought on the character's believeability. (did I just make up a word?) Sasha is supposed to be a wallflower, the unnoticed one. It is a little hard to believe that she would openly ogle her friend's date. I thought it would be something a little more gradual.. Some spark with Dmitri that would bring that out...something he did to trigger than in her.. (just a thought) ...Her friends seem to be more frenemies than anything. Considering she is supposed to be closer to Teagan, I would like to see more personal dialogue in there that alludes to the depth of their friendship itself. I do love the character of Teagan though. I just think that there should be more development in the relations to the characters. It is important that whatever characters you introduce as a part of the main cast somehow contributes to the progression of your plot and the development of your MC.

 

Like I said, I do want to see where this is growing. I hope that it just doesn't jump from him being with Teagan to being with Sasha..I hope that you are taking time to consider how that is going to develop and break out because remember...most of all whatever happens between Sasha and Dmitri.....Sasha will ultimately be breaking girl code...so I can't wait for the next updates.

(By the way, I hope all of my rambling was taken the right way. I don't want to come off as a know it all. i just mention things that I know I have seen in my own writing. And hope you can use them as reference points for editing. Best of luck!!)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your response. No, you are not coming off as a know it all. lol I look forward to reviews like these because they really help me with developing my story. I will take all your advice into account and I hope you continue enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed
Date: May 31 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

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Troubled FBI Special Agent Michael Wolfe knows his fair share of loss and pain.  As a criminal profiler within the Behavioural Analyst Unit, he has seen many horrors. But none more haunting than witnessing the death of his wife. Consumed with grief and guilt Michael drowns himself in work.  His partner Special Agent Patrick Kepler suggests a very unconventional form of therapy.  Will he take it?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Psychological
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3656
Read Count: 12838
Published: June 06 2013
Updated: October 14 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Xanax

For some reason this reminds me of Criminal Minds...when the Reaper killed Hotch's wife..I think it was the opening line. It also seems like a conversation Rossi would have had with Hotch. Is that what inspired you? If so, good job.

The only thing I would say is try to find your voice more because it is starting to sound more like a fanfic han an original piece.. I want to hear you that was inspired by the show not you imposing on it...I hope that makes sense.... anyways. Good luck. Can't wait to see more...

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed
Date: June 07 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Nancy returns from burying the last of her family. She's now all alone and has no one.  If only she could see them one last time!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Second Chances
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 500
Read Count: 937
Published: July 18 2013
Updated: July 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was so sad and sweet. Made me feel lonely for a while. Love how the transportation was nothing special but then the surprise was.

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Date: July 19 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was so sad and sweet. Made me feel lonely for a while. Love how the transportation was nothing special but then the surprise was.

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 19 2013

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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

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Natalie is finally in the collage of her dream couldnt be happier right? wrong! shes been rommed with not one but two boys ones a sweetheart and oness an asshole did i forget there russian and their bothers! what will happen will there be love between the three?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 3012
Read Count: 5495
Published: July 19 2013
Updated: July 22 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Just a few more notes after reading this chapter. I think you may want to rehink the progression of your story. The grammatical errors are still their so be careful. You are also moving the relationships too quickly. They have known each other how long and are already staking claim? Highly unlikely. You want your narrator to be believable or people will cease to be interested. Thats fine if you are doig drabbles or one or two shotters, but if you avtually want this to be an extended piece then you have to mind your progression rate and pace. Hope this helps.

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed
Date: July 20 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Just a few more notes after reading this chapter. I think you may want to rehink the progression of your story. The grammatical errors are still their so be careful. You are also moving the relationships too quickly. They have known each other how long and are already staking claim? Highly unlikely. You want your narrator to be believable or people will cease to be interested. Thats fine if you are doig drabbles or one or two shotters, but if you avtually want this to be an extended piece then you have to mind your progression rate and pace. Hope this helps.

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed
Date: July 20 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your story has promise. If you want it to live up to that promise, then I think some work needs to be done onn structure and fluidity. There are quite a few grammatical errors in this chapter. You want to be careful of that. Not every story is going to be perfect but you still want to be careful because it will turn your readers off and distract them. Secondly, the conversations between your chatacters aren't very organic. Its not uncommon to have male roomates. I myself had 3 guy roommates my sophmore year in college. Talke to some guy friends and run your senarios by them and see how the conversations go. Your stoy is your baby and you want to treat it as carefully as possible. Good luck. Looking forward to see your work improve.

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed
Date: July 20 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 41]
Summary:

"I wouldn't do that if I were you" is usually taken as unwanted advice. Sometimes, it's a mild warning. But once in a while, it's a threat.

 

Nikki James moved to Hopen Island as a way of burying her head in the sand after her life became one colossal fail. The one time she decides to throw caution to the wind may just be her last. Ever. Will she heed the advice so many other's ignored?

 

*** While working on the story, I listened to my Lorde station on Pandora (and a bit of AWOL Nation). The music totally set the mood for me, and it might do the same for you :) ***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Mystery, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 34050
Read Count: 72698
Published: July 20 2013
Updated: February 28 2015


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10 - Finally

Oh shit!!!!! So glad you updated. This is definitely my kind of story!! Brilliant! !



Author's Response:

It took me a while to finish it, but the entire time I was working on this chapter I was excited/nervous to find out what you all would think about the turn of events. Glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29 2014

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

So I decided to try this writing prompt because I had nothing better to do and someone keeps pushing me into writing more. I will not say her name...cough...cough...(Missus James), but I am usually the one that reads and reviews because who doesn't like to read and leave their ramblings. Si here I go....



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Lonely Highways
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1250
Read Count: 5498
Published: July 22 2013
Updated: July 30 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Woooo who that drivin that truck? Don't leave me hanging woman!!!!

Author's Response:

I hope your question was answered in chapter 2, but wait was that who was actually driving the truck. Hmmm??? Glad you are enjoying the story!!!!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

BOOK 2

 

Mayte is a woman reborn. It's been 8 years since she left the torment of high school and she is truly feeling herself. But when a bully from her past life stumbles into her place of employment, all of sudden she feels like a bullied kid again; she wants revenge.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: Hollywood Gems
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15464
Read Count: 14742
Published: July 24 2013
Updated: August 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I really like what I am seeing so far. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed
Date: July 24 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.