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Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 301]
Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

 

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34040
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015


Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

You are spoiling me.  After a long day at work, getting the kids to bed and then doing homework, this was a pleasant surprise.  I'm glad Roxie is taking small steps and doesn't seem to be going overboard.  3x/wk is good for right now and she seems to still eat so I am not concerned with that.  Can't wait til Griffin comes back and see's this new and improved banging body, all for him ;).  His dad is too cute.  Uh oh, Brody is coming.  Woohoo!!  Looking forwards to more updates.

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Date: January 22 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

I think he needs an intervention with Grams and Dad coming for a visit and listening to these two slick f*ckers talk because even though Griff is grounded he hasn't dealt with sleaziness this slick.  Adult help is needed ASAP.  

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Date: December 22 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Roxie, you most definitely have to speak to Griffin about all of these feelings but Griffin is also ignoring his gut instinct that things aren't what they seem.  He noticed her smile didn't reach her eyes and he have to begin to see things himself.  He didn't hear/see what TMZ and other news places are trending.   He is aware of how he felt when he found out about that site she had and others were looking and why she did that.  Everywhere she turns she is being hit with subtle jabs about her size and he doesn't realize this. 

Also Griffin, the event that would happen for Roxie to be taken care of is DIVORCE!!  Do you PLAN on doing something that would end in divorce.  I don't need to be taken care of if you don't plan on doing something.  Regardless, without the prenup she gets more not less.  Are you thinking clearly, Griff?  He need to listen to his hustling friends who can spot game when they see it.  Griffin despite his maturity is blinded by his trust in Mark or whatever the heck his name is and that will lead to his downfall with Roxie.  He is placing the issues on other dude's shoulder but he can't do anything without approval from higher up right?

Can't wait to see how this shapes up?  I wonder what is going to happen when his dad arrives, I think that might be the beginning of some wake up calls for both of them.

 



Author's Response:

I LOVE all of this! Griff needs to keep that team of support nearby. Rough waters are defintely ahead! Thanks for your comment. Loved it!

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Date: January 21 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

It has been a great ride and so happy they have learned from their mistakes and willing to put practices in place to prevent it from happening again.

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Date: February 23 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 67]
Summary:

 

What happens when you begin to second guess the gift you gave to someone? Do you ask them for it back? Or perhaps you just take it back? Maybe that gift was fine for then, but holds no value now. Five years later, Teddy considers re-gifting but Tanner is worried that it is the same old tired shit just wrapped up in a shinier package. *Sequel to “The Gift of Goodbye”



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10569
Read Count: 7347
Published: January 23 2014
Updated: February 19 2015


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yay!!! It's back and congrats on the beauties you now have.  I can't wait for more chapters and see how Teddy is about to handle this.  Teddy is a natural predator and territorial so now that he has seen her, touched her and know she still creates that buzz inside of him, all bets are off.  Now my question is will he place Tanner as a mistress or get rid of Angela and go after his girl.  He can't expect Tanner to be the side chick.  Also Tanner is gun-shy with him after he broke her heart and how he went about doing it so our boy will have to truly step his game up.  Sex alone I don't think is going to do it.

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Date: February 17 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Sounds like neither one is over the other and settled in their current relationships because it is safe unlike their relationship and just because someone is safe doesn't make them the ONE for you.  If he has matured and gotten some help why can't they try again, outside of the significant others but I feel if they are around each other that heat will erupt again and feelings will really re-emerge.  They are both more stable and successful and aware of themselves.  That is a good start.  I look forward to seeing if they find their way back to each other and those great 6 months before his issues emerged.



Author's Response:

Me too lajack1! Me too!

Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: January 25 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh shoot.  That wasn't the first time huh.  Sorry lackluster sex life is a no go.  I can't be tied down to no orgasms for life, no matter how NICE, GENTLEMANLY you are.  You need a sex ed class or something.  So I guess Trent is on the Angela bandwagon.  Curious how everyone's family had an opinion.  Does Trent not realize it was Teddy's abusive ways that destroyed the relationship and wasn't on Tanner.  Does he think if he gets back with Tanner he will return to his old ways?  That is his choice on how he acts.  My thing is once he got himself together why didn't he look for her?  Why be possessive now when she is back.  I think I would like them to develop a friendship first and see if their communication has improved.  That could be the test if a relationship would work.  Either way she needs to find someone who can ring them bells as well as be good to her and treat her right.  Why can't she have it all.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: January 29 2014

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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High school is a time of friends and foes, first crushes and broken hearts. And somehow, class reunions have a way of bringing that all back to life once more.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: A Sandwich, A Soda, A Snippet
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 10589
Read Count: 19569
Published: January 23 2014
Updated: February 16 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Deja Vu

Does Michael think that Evelyn is a woman for an affair.  She would be the mistress.  If he cares so much for her why would he put her in that position.  Would be nice to see his thoughts.  Sorry cliff, I don't think she has any romantic feelings for him, at least at this point.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: February 16 2014

Title: Chapter 6: The Countdown Begins

I am reading this story and I am still slightly confused about the main characters for the romance will be.  Why am I thinking Evelyn and Michael with Cheryl and Cliff.  Am I thinking along the right lines or completely off base?

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: February 07 2014

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 359]
Summary:

 

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All Paula wanted was a normal life after such a tragic beginning left her without family or friends. She never planned on an alien and a human predator to shape her life so drastically.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Horror, Romance, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: ~Love, Near and Far~
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 52365
Read Count: 48972
Published: January 26 2014
Updated: April 29 2014


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

I am speechless regarding this chapter so I will keeping simple.  "Smiling :)"

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

I haven't commented before on your story though I stalk this site looking for an update and as soon as I do, a smile just lights up my face.  I love your story, the plot, the characters and all.  I feel like I am in the garden with them and have a front row seT to their love.  Just had to share after this wonderful update that you are writing so well and I look forward to the next chapter and those beyond.  Great job.

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Date: February 15 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

OMG, I was not going to read this at first but I am sooo happy that I did.  This is going into my favs list.  I am hooked already with the dynamic of ALL the characters and how this will play out.  Waiting, attempting patiently for your next installment.  Shaping up to be a wonderful story. 

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Date: January 28 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

I am absolutely in love with this story.  I am so happy that she is really thinking about staying and has anyone else caught him repeating his mate every time he talks about her.  I am enjoying your writing, I am literally stalking this site everyday for an update and have re-read it to keep myself satisfied to the next update.  Norse completely validated her thoughts that he slept with Setara to have Kyan break up with her.  Also who the heck is that boy's father since he is an Athenian.  Is he a prince and the Queen set his mother up with that ridiculous specimen.  Wouldn't that be interesting.  I bet Setara would try to seduce him also.  Can't wait for the festivities.

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Date: February 28 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Who doesn't want to be wanted



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 4460
Read Count: 3107
Published: January 30 2014
Updated: April 23 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Once you have written more and I can understand who she is, why she must relax and get an overall feel for the story I can provide a better review but you do have me intrigued with the guy on the elevator and her next meeting with him.  If nothing else, he knows what floor she stays on.



Author's Response:

Lajack1 thanks for that I won't disappoint 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: January 31 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

 

He knew the day would come, he just didnt know it would be so soon 



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: Serendipity
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 741
Read Count: 1202
Published: January 30 2014
Updated: January 30 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was such a cute and touching story.  Wonderful the understanding the soon to be husband had in regards to her fathers feeling.  That will go a long way to the father truly loving him.

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Date: January 31 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 35]
Summary:

Two people falling in love by unexpcted circumstances. Showing their love through one of their eyes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9683
Read Count: 8029
Published: February 06 2014
Updated: June 24 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would suggest keep going.  Why is he fighting for his life, is there a chance for him?  More reflections while she waits.  How old are they now?  Loved this one chapter.

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Date: February 06 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

I am crying right now, like literally need to blow my nose and everything.  It was a wonderful story and one that had to come to that end.  I love their relationship and it makes me want to have one just like that.  I appreciate you sharing it with us.  It was sad, uplifting, enjoyable all into one.

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Date: June 24 2014

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 179]
Summary:

They were drowning in debt and three days from eviction when a blessing fell into their laps.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: ~Love, Near and Far~
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 29004
Read Count: 25999
Published: February 06 2014
Updated: April 15 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two

Oh my God, I am so in love with your books.  If you ever go professional writer make sure you notify me directly when released because I will be the first to purchase.  Your characters are so alive for me and I will now be stalking this site for this and Vipers bite.  I can't wait until Parker's get what is coming to him, the egotistical bastard.  She doesn't want you, that doesn't mean you get to destroy your livelihood.  Rat bastard is too good of a description for him.  Rat turd is better.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: March 11 2014

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

 

Underneath

Rumors on top of rumors, all built on a crumbling foundation of lies. Vanessa Freeman has heard a lot about Christian DeMount, but tonight she’ll know the truth. What is underneath?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Un-betaed
Challenges: 3 Random Things
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4488
Read Count: 2366
Published: February 15 2014
Updated: February 15 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Underneath

Awww, that was so sweet at the end.  I would love to read some more about them.  These one-shots are like trailers, makes you want to watch the whole movie.  More please.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 15 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

He's tall. He's handsome. He's funny and charming and sweet. He's everything that you could want in a man. But, he has a sweet tooth... and it might just be for you.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Horror, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13191
Read Count: 5122
Published: February 19 2014
Updated: March 22 2014


Title: Chapter 3: The Kill

Damn, is all I can say.  She is going to rot in prison and maybe get the death penalty because she loved him.  She won't even raise her baby.  He needs to be tortured with guilt.  Just damn, damn, damn

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: March 22 2014

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 284]
Summary:

She was only a debt to him... or so she thought.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 26251
Read Count: 78182
Published: February 23 2014
Updated: July 08 2015


Title: Chapter 14: Fourteen

I sometimes forget just how young she is compared to Noah.  Despite her fathers abhorrent parental care, she is still very much naive to men and life in general.  The reason she is so volatile in her emotions despite pregnancy hormones is her age.  Definitely Noah doesn't help by not speaking much but I am curious to learn more about his childhood and how that has shaped him.  I really think that is what she needs to hear to start to see him as human and not her captor.

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Date: January 22 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Six

Glad it's back, that you're back.  She will need to have some self esteem dealing with these tricks he's around.  Never let them see you sweat.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: September 04 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Seven

Now, did she really think Noah didn't have contingency plans on this first outing.  C'mon now.  Looking forward to how he handles her at home.

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Date: November 30 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Nine

Wow, he went there.  I would be second guessing about leaving him at least in the immediate future.  Can't say I would give up all hope of ever getting away if he continues to treat me like this.  Again, wow!  A little speechless.  I want to know if she is really bruised with sores and once she wakes up it may recede to a little stiffness.  Either way, without her agreement, that is a mental trip.  White man whips black woman as punishment for trying to run away.  Are you sending us metaphors here ;).  Hmmmmmm.   Wonder what he will do next?  Wonder what is in his mind right now?  Such a tender moment at the end.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 07 2014

Title: Chapter 10: Ten

Why do I think some chick burst thru.  Only a woman who thinks her va jay jay is gold is bold enough for that with Noah.  Damn, he was about to get him some action.  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.