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Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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High school is a time of friends and foes, first crushes and broken hearts. And somehow, class reunions have a way of bringing that all back to life once more.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: A Sandwich, A Soda, A Snippet
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 10589
Read Count: 20026
Published: January 23 2014
Updated: February 16 2014


Title: Chapter 6: The Countdown Begins

I am reading this story and I am still slightly confused about the main characters for the romance will be.  Why am I thinking Evelyn and Michael with Cheryl and Cliff.  Am I thinking along the right lines or completely off base?

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: February 07 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 359]
Summary:

 

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All Paula wanted was a normal life after such a tragic beginning left her without family or friends. She never planned on an alien and a human predator to shape her life so drastically.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Horror, Romance, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: ~Love, Near and Far~
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 52365
Read Count: 49379
Published: January 26 2014
Updated: April 29 2014


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

I am speechless regarding this chapter so I will keeping simple.  "Smiling :)"

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

I haven't commented before on your story though I stalk this site looking for an update and as soon as I do, a smile just lights up my face.  I love your story, the plot, the characters and all.  I feel like I am in the garden with them and have a front row seT to their love.  Just had to share after this wonderful update that you are writing so well and I look forward to the next chapter and those beyond.  Great job.

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Date: February 15 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

OMG, I was not going to read this at first but I am sooo happy that I did.  This is going into my favs list.  I am hooked already with the dynamic of ALL the characters and how this will play out.  Waiting, attempting patiently for your next installment.  Shaping up to be a wonderful story. 

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Date: January 28 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

I am absolutely in love with this story.  I am so happy that she is really thinking about staying and has anyone else caught him repeating his mate every time he talks about her.  I am enjoying your writing, I am literally stalking this site everyday for an update and have re-read it to keep myself satisfied to the next update.  Norse completely validated her thoughts that he slept with Setara to have Kyan break up with her.  Also who the heck is that boy's father since he is an Athenian.  Is he a prince and the Queen set his mother up with that ridiculous specimen.  Wouldn't that be interesting.  I bet Setara would try to seduce him also.  Can't wait for the festivities.

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Date: February 28 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Who doesn't want to be wanted



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 4460
Read Count: 3200
Published: January 30 2014
Updated: April 23 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Once you have written more and I can understand who she is, why she must relax and get an overall feel for the story I can provide a better review but you do have me intrigued with the guy on the elevator and her next meeting with him.  If nothing else, he knows what floor she stays on.



Author's Response:

Lajack1 thanks for that I won't disappoint 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: January 31 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

 

He knew the day would come, he just didnt know it would be so soon 



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: Serendipity
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 741
Read Count: 1223
Published: January 30 2014
Updated: January 30 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was such a cute and touching story.  Wonderful the understanding the soon to be husband had in regards to her fathers feeling.  That will go a long way to the father truly loving him.

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Date: January 31 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 35]
Summary:

Two people falling in love by unexpcted circumstances. Showing their love through one of their eyes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9683
Read Count: 8058
Published: February 06 2014
Updated: June 24 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would suggest keep going.  Why is he fighting for his life, is there a chance for him?  More reflections while she waits.  How old are they now?  Loved this one chapter.

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Date: February 06 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

I am crying right now, like literally need to blow my nose and everything.  It was a wonderful story and one that had to come to that end.  I love their relationship and it makes me want to have one just like that.  I appreciate you sharing it with us.  It was sad, uplifting, enjoyable all into one.

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Date: June 24 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 179]
Summary:

They were drowning in debt and three days from eviction when a blessing fell into their laps.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: ~Love, Near and Far~
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 29004
Read Count: 26300
Published: February 06 2014
Updated: April 15 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two

Oh my God, I am so in love with your books.  If you ever go professional writer make sure you notify me directly when released because I will be the first to purchase.  Your characters are so alive for me and I will now be stalking this site for this and Vipers bite.  I can't wait until Parker's get what is coming to him, the egotistical bastard.  She doesn't want you, that doesn't mean you get to destroy your livelihood.  Rat bastard is too good of a description for him.  Rat turd is better.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: March 11 2014

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

 

Underneath

Rumors on top of rumors, all built on a crumbling foundation of lies. Vanessa Freeman has heard a lot about Christian DeMount, but tonight she’ll know the truth. What is underneath?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Un-betaed
Challenges: 3 Random Things
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4488
Read Count: 2458
Published: February 15 2014
Updated: February 15 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Underneath

Awww, that was so sweet at the end.  I would love to read some more about them.  These one-shots are like trailers, makes you want to watch the whole movie.  More please.

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Date: February 15 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

He's tall. He's handsome. He's funny and charming and sweet. He's everything that you could want in a man. But, he has a sweet tooth... and it might just be for you.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Horror, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13191
Read Count: 5150
Published: February 19 2014
Updated: March 22 2014


Title: Chapter 3: The Kill

Damn, is all I can say.  She is going to rot in prison and maybe get the death penalty because she loved him.  She won't even raise her baby.  He needs to be tortured with guilt.  Just damn, damn, damn

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: March 22 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 297]
Summary:

She was only a debt to him... or so she thought.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 26251
Read Count: 78782
Published: February 23 2014
Updated: July 08 2015


Title: Chapter 14: Fourteen

I sometimes forget just how young she is compared to Noah.  Despite her fathers abhorrent parental care, she is still very much naive to men and life in general.  The reason she is so volatile in her emotions despite pregnancy hormones is her age.  Definitely Noah doesn't help by not speaking much but I am curious to learn more about his childhood and how that has shaped him.  I really think that is what she needs to hear to start to see him as human and not her captor.

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Date: January 22 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Six

Glad it's back, that you're back.  She will need to have some self esteem dealing with these tricks he's around.  Never let them see you sweat.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: September 04 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Seven

Now, did she really think Noah didn't have contingency plans on this first outing.  C'mon now.  Looking forward to how he handles her at home.

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Date: November 30 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Nine

Wow, he went there.  I would be second guessing about leaving him at least in the immediate future.  Can't say I would give up all hope of ever getting away if he continues to treat me like this.  Again, wow!  A little speechless.  I want to know if she is really bruised with sores and once she wakes up it may recede to a little stiffness.  Either way, without her agreement, that is a mental trip.  White man whips black woman as punishment for trying to run away.  Are you sending us metaphors here ;).  Hmmmmmm.   Wonder what he will do next?  Wonder what is in his mind right now?  Such a tender moment at the end.

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Date: December 07 2014

Title: Chapter 10: Ten

Why do I think some chick burst thru.  Only a woman who thinks her va jay jay is gold is bold enough for that with Noah.  Damn, he was about to get him some action.  

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Date: December 08 2014

Title: Chapter 11: Eleven

Wooooaaaahhhhh!!!!  That was intense.  This doesn't appear to be a fling for Noah.  I wonder if he knew about her long before she was really aware of him.  He staking claim on the vajayjay though!  Wonder how the rest of her days are going to be like since he's tasted the goods.  Curious to what happened before this b/c he was a man on a mission and didn't take time to truly prepare her and Noah isn't a novice to lovemaking or a woman's body.

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Date: January 17 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Twelve

Her behind is going to be pregnant with all of this sexing they doing without protection.  Is that Noah's plan?

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Date: January 20 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

A "one shot".

Happlily married couple can't seem to get anywhere on time but a wise woman always has a plan!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2367
Read Count: 1879
Published: March 22 2014
Updated: March 22 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was too cute and funny.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: March 22 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 52]
Summary:

 

Warrick Mungo was a senior in college at Wolfpax University. Son of the Alpha Rex, or Alpha King, he enjoyed all of the benefits of his position as Royal Enforcer and Captain of the Claw Ball team. He was the youngest of fourteen sons. Why did he have to be the one to receive the Alpha Rex gene, anyway? It was always the eldest son of the Alpha Rex and his true mate. Everybody knew that. Warrick just didn't understand how his parents expected for him to put any effort into locating his mate so that he could settle down, when there were so many interesting flavors still left to sample. Then there was The Problem. The one that seemed to unnerve even his father. Everyone thought that if he just found his Regina, his balance, The Problem would be automatically under control. He isn't so sure that just meeting his Regina will make everything right. What if she fears him, too? What if his responsibilities put her in danger? All he knows for sure is that he's not ready to meet her...yet.

 

     Thandie was in a category all her own. A certified genius of geniuses, she had come to the university on a mission to find her purpose in life. You'd think that four PhD's would have done that already, but no. She was bored again, and a bored Thandie was a terror that her Alpha simply could not allow. So when she turned eighteen, he sent her to the territory of the Alpha Rex while she attended Wolfpax U. Socially awkward, overweight and haphazardly dressed, and then there's The Other Part that shall not be named outside of the pack house. Let's just say that she had always stood out. Her pack, and her Alpha, always loved and protected her tender and loving heart. The Alpha even sent fifty Enforcers to University with her just for her protection from...well her own clumsiness for starters. They were also in place to stop others from discovering...well, The Other Part. How will she cope with leaving home to go away to school for the first time ever, without her beloved brother, Theo? How will she cope with the path she must walk to get there? Moreover, is she ready for the possibility that she will finally meet her mate?

 

*Note: When I finish it, This Book Will Be Published. If someone offers me a contract, I will not finish posting it online. I'm sorry for any disappointment this may cause, but I really believe in this story. I hope you guys will support me, anyway, and help me to polish it until it shines.



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, Supernatural
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: A Scientific Rejection
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19523
Read Count: 9576
Published: March 31 2014
Updated: May 09 2014


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: How An Uther Became An Alfie

Wow, I love this story more and more as you update.  I can envision every scene as if I am watching it and love we will have a backstory as reasons for decisions made in the future.  I really can't wait until they meet.  All of the characters are likeable.  Really enjoying and can't wait for the next updates today.  



Author's Response:

Awww. Thank you! This made my day!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 09 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: James, Theo and Eli

This last chapter had tears in my eyes because it was like a going away, becoming an adult celebration and all of the parents are realizing their young ones are now all adults.  It was touching without being overly emotional.  I feel sad for James as he really wants Thandie as his mate.  Hopefully he will meet his mate the same time as she meets hers.  She is one powerful wolf so whoever fate has in store for her would need to be very powerful as well. "Wink!wink". Eagerly awaiting your next update.  Just so you know, when you publish, I will buy.



Author's Response:

Anyone who has experienced that moment when you have to stop holding their hands knows how these parents feel. Thank you. I try to have a light touch, and not become too maudlin. I think James has a bigger role to play in the story. His character is far more complex than I had initially made him out to be. He will definitely be powerful. The next update should be next weekend. Thank you so much! That means the world to me.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 10 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 137]
Summary:

What do you do when your best friend you've secretly loved pops up and tells you about his pending nuptials to another woman? Kerri DuBois keeps it moving as if her heart hadn't been ripped from her chest. She's loved her best friend and will need to get over him and soon. And there is someone who can help her do just that.

 

Black sheep, Brandon Wesely, returns home after a long absence to hear of "Saint Kerri" and is instantly enamored. When he looks at her, he can see her pain and wants to help her get over his little brother…and he selfishly wants to keep her for himself.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13930
Read Count: 25209
Published: April 09 2014
Updated: April 13 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Mark can kick rocks.  You want to deprive Kerri of what you are seeking for yourself with Quen.  She is suppose to wait on the sidelines while you have a family with Quen.  As a true friend you made the decision to PROPOSE to someone else.  You have no rights to jealousy from YOUR decisions.  He is a entitled, spoiled brat who doesn't love nor care for her feelings, otherwise he would wish her well and just warm Brandon not to play with her emotions that he is so good at doing.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: April 11 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I would like to see Marks viewpoint again.  Why didn't he want Kerri and what was it about Quen that made him propose in 8 days.  Honestly that would hurt me the most and what I couldn't get over.  In all honesty, I probably would have distanced myself from the whole family and found a live interest outside the family not to be surrounded by Mark's dumbass.  How unworthy do you think I am that you proposed to someone you just met after 8 days.  It seems like she was always the back-up.  What do they say, always a bridesmaid and never a bride but he wants to keep her from becoming a bride. Men, and they say women are complicated.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 12 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

If nothing else wakes her up from any of Mark's temper tantrums it is the fact that out of all the years of knowing him and basically being a girlfriend he CHOSE another woman over you and I don't care, NO woman deserves to be second choice.  We all deserve to feel that we are the best.  I hope Brandon is real bad truly wants her at his died and not just a girl to sex.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: April 12 2014

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