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[Reviews - 284]
Summary:

She was only a debt to him... or so she thought.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 26251
Read Count: 78182
Published: February 23 2014
Updated: July 08 2015


Title: Chapter 11: Eleven

Wooooaaaahhhhh!!!!  That was intense.  This doesn't appear to be a fling for Noah.  I wonder if he knew about her long before she was really aware of him.  He staking claim on the vajayjay though!  Wonder how the rest of her days are going to be like since he's tasted the goods.  Curious to what happened before this b/c he was a man on a mission and didn't take time to truly prepare her and Noah isn't a novice to lovemaking or a woman's body.

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Date: January 17 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Twelve

Her behind is going to be pregnant with all of this sexing they doing without protection.  Is that Noah's plan?

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Date: January 20 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

A "one shot".

Happlily married couple can't seem to get anywhere on time but a wise woman always has a plan!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2367
Read Count: 1864
Published: March 22 2014
Updated: March 22 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was too cute and funny.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: March 22 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 52]
Summary:

 

Warrick Mungo was a senior in college at Wolfpax University. Son of the Alpha Rex, or Alpha King, he enjoyed all of the benefits of his position as Royal Enforcer and Captain of the Claw Ball team. He was the youngest of fourteen sons. Why did he have to be the one to receive the Alpha Rex gene, anyway? It was always the eldest son of the Alpha Rex and his true mate. Everybody knew that. Warrick just didn't understand how his parents expected for him to put any effort into locating his mate so that he could settle down, when there were so many interesting flavors still left to sample. Then there was The Problem. The one that seemed to unnerve even his father. Everyone thought that if he just found his Regina, his balance, The Problem would be automatically under control. He isn't so sure that just meeting his Regina will make everything right. What if she fears him, too? What if his responsibilities put her in danger? All he knows for sure is that he's not ready to meet her...yet.

 

     Thandie was in a category all her own. A certified genius of geniuses, she had come to the university on a mission to find her purpose in life. You'd think that four PhD's would have done that already, but no. She was bored again, and a bored Thandie was a terror that her Alpha simply could not allow. So when she turned eighteen, he sent her to the territory of the Alpha Rex while she attended Wolfpax U. Socially awkward, overweight and haphazardly dressed, and then there's The Other Part that shall not be named outside of the pack house. Let's just say that she had always stood out. Her pack, and her Alpha, always loved and protected her tender and loving heart. The Alpha even sent fifty Enforcers to University with her just for her protection from...well her own clumsiness for starters. They were also in place to stop others from discovering...well, The Other Part. How will she cope with leaving home to go away to school for the first time ever, without her beloved brother, Theo? How will she cope with the path she must walk to get there? Moreover, is she ready for the possibility that she will finally meet her mate?

 

*Note: When I finish it, This Book Will Be Published. If someone offers me a contract, I will not finish posting it online. I'm sorry for any disappointment this may cause, but I really believe in this story. I hope you guys will support me, anyway, and help me to polish it until it shines.



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, Supernatural
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: A Scientific Rejection
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19523
Read Count: 9506
Published: March 31 2014
Updated: May 09 2014


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: How An Uther Became An Alfie

Wow, I love this story more and more as you update.  I can envision every scene as if I am watching it and love we will have a backstory as reasons for decisions made in the future.  I really can't wait until they meet.  All of the characters are likeable.  Really enjoying and can't wait for the next updates today.  



Author's Response:

Awww. Thank you! This made my day!

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Date: May 09 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: James, Theo and Eli

This last chapter had tears in my eyes because it was like a going away, becoming an adult celebration and all of the parents are realizing their young ones are now all adults.  It was touching without being overly emotional.  I feel sad for James as he really wants Thandie as his mate.  Hopefully he will meet his mate the same time as she meets hers.  She is one powerful wolf so whoever fate has in store for her would need to be very powerful as well. "Wink!wink". Eagerly awaiting your next update.  Just so you know, when you publish, I will buy.



Author's Response:

Anyone who has experienced that moment when you have to stop holding their hands knows how these parents feel. Thank you. I try to have a light touch, and not become too maudlin. I think James has a bigger role to play in the story. His character is far more complex than I had initially made him out to be. He will definitely be powerful. The next update should be next weekend. Thank you so much! That means the world to me.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 10 2014

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[Reviews - 117]
Summary:

What do you do when your best friend you've secretly loved pops up and tells you about his pending nuptials to another woman? Kerri DuBois keeps it moving as if her heart hadn't been ripped from her chest. She's loved her best friend and will need to get over him and soon. And there is someone who can help her do just that.

 

Black sheep, Brandon Wesely, returns home after a long absence to hear of "Saint Kerri" and is instantly enamored. When he looks at her, he can see her pain and wants to help her get over his little brother…and he selfishly wants to keep her for himself.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13930
Read Count: 24895
Published: April 09 2014
Updated: April 13 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Mark can kick rocks.  You want to deprive Kerri of what you are seeking for yourself with Quen.  She is suppose to wait on the sidelines while you have a family with Quen.  As a true friend you made the decision to PROPOSE to someone else.  You have no rights to jealousy from YOUR decisions.  He is a entitled, spoiled brat who doesn't love nor care for her feelings, otherwise he would wish her well and just warm Brandon not to play with her emotions that he is so good at doing.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: April 11 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I would like to see Marks viewpoint again.  Why didn't he want Kerri and what was it about Quen that made him propose in 8 days.  Honestly that would hurt me the most and what I couldn't get over.  In all honesty, I probably would have distanced myself from the whole family and found a live interest outside the family not to be surrounded by Mark's dumbass.  How unworthy do you think I am that you proposed to someone you just met after 8 days.  It seems like she was always the back-up.  What do they say, always a bridesmaid and never a bride but he wants to keep her from becoming a bride. Men, and they say women are complicated.

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Date: April 12 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

If nothing else wakes her up from any of Mark's temper tantrums it is the fact that out of all the years of knowing him and basically being a girlfriend he CHOSE another woman over you and I don't care, NO woman deserves to be second choice.  We all deserve to feel that we are the best.  I hope Brandon is real bad truly wants her at his died and not just a girl to sex.

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Date: April 12 2014

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 306]
Summary:

Liam Bates is a 30 year old man who wants nothing more in life than a child. Even if it means raising it by himself.

Clarissa Reeves has a goal she wants to reach in life but the only thing in her way is lack of money.

So what wrong with two people helping each other out with what they want? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 51105
Read Count: 64322
Published: April 13 2014
Updated: October 24 2016


Title: Chapter 12: Disappointment

Why was I laughing when Liam told her to shut up about Jasoer or he'll throw up.  He was like Bish please, I don't wanna hear about this dude you almost screwed.  I think she needs a few days to herself, in her place to just ruminate on the situation.  They are being honest at least Nate saying Jasper does not want you like you think.  Hope she realizes this, complete her contract with Liam and kinda move on from him.  As of yet I am not seeing any sparks between Liam and Clarissa.  I do wonder his thoughts about Jasper.  Would like to read a conversation between him and Nate about this.  



Author's Response:

Hey lajack1! How are you!? hahah I was laughing while I typed it, so I'm glad you laughed too. hahaha ain't nobody got time for that. I'm pretty sure if the roles were reversed, she wouldn't want to hear it either. Soo, you don't want them together in the end? Ahhh, very interesting. Don't worry, Jasper and Liam will have a one on one chat. Why!? How?! How do you always predict these things? I can't hide anything from you, damn! As always, thank you so so so so so much for reading and reviewing! J

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 01 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Kiss Me

OK, Liam.  C'mon now, you didn't just become an adult dealing with women overnight.  If this is just a business arrangement then it should have stayed that way from the beginning with her undergoing in vitro for conception.  If this was how you planned on sexing her up for a baby, that should have been laid out at the beginning to ensure no misunderstandings,  hence the situation we are in now.  No women or man for that matter wants to be considered a living blow up doll.  At some point that will have to take a toll on their psyche.  In his quest to get a baby the way he wanted, he lost the common sense God gave him and made her feel like an inanimate object.  That has to suck and she went seeking some solace from somewhere.  Now I hope she is too drunk and pass out before anything happens with Jasper and/or she wraps it up.  Maybe this isn't the best course for herself and she needs to find something else.  Since she has started this process with Liam she has lost herself in it.  He has remained put together while she has not.  I think a little breathing room will do her some good and get things in perspective for herself.  If he wants to have sex it is only within the period immediately after she begins ovulation and no other time.  She doesn't stay at his home or they don't watch t.v together etc.  I hit it and then leave back to my house.  I can be lonely in my own bed by myself.   Waiting for your next chapter and this time, let her set some ground rules with Liam's "trying to act brand new" ass.



Author's Response:

Hey lajack1!! How are you? Hope all is well. hahaha I know completely but the deal was to do whatever it took to have a child. You don't need to kiss to conceive. Kissing is something you do with someone you're dating or married to or a loved one or a regretted one night stand. Ouch. "Living blow up doll." That hurts (not me lol). Awww man, now that's sad. She can't pass out because she didn't drink. I never said she drank...did i? God, now I have to check. Preach!! That is very true. It's funny because I never looked at it like that, but you've opened my eyes about that! Wow yup! hahah, i'll see what I can do.

Thank you for this insightful review, lajack! I appreciate it :)

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24 2014

Title: It's My Baby Too

Wow, Liam, really.  This sentence floored me " I don't care about you, but I care about my child ...."  If that didn't wake her up I don't know what would.  OoooKKkaaayyy.  She need to stop wishing for intimacy from Liam and find her someone else and I don't mean sex.  She needs someone who will hold her, kiss her and actually think about her as a person and I think Jasper just might be what she needs to get thru this surrogacy. 

Then Liam, hold up, you can go on dates regardless if it was purchased.  What if you feel a connection with this woman, I am suppose to be stuck at your house while I see you going on dates and getting your freak on while I am on house arrest.  Hell Nawl, Homie don't play dat.  Cock-blocking SOB.  I hope Keith isn't an ass but also it seems like someone who is not intimidated by Liam and she needs that.  Now they need to go to the MD to confirm she is pregnant really before this mofo gets super posessive.   I am still in agreement that she needs to spend more time at her home than his.

Now Nate, absolutely love that man.  That lip gloss must be very important.  But that scene in the store was hilarious.  Please keep him on clarissa's side.  He right now is her only outlet it seem where she can relax and enjoy herself. 

Maybe if she starts giving Liam the impersonal shoulder as well that he will understand that you have a person carrying your child, not a machine to do with whatever then toss aside like trash.  Regardless that it is a business deal, like any business deal, that is a person on the other side of the table.

Wonderful story.  Whew I said too much.



Author's Response:

Hi lajack1!! Long time no hear :) How've you been!? I know I know!! It wasn't a very nice thing to write but it was all in the heat of the moment. Liam didn't mean it like that! LOL JAsper is what every woman needs. There's a huge difference between want and need and Jasper is exactly what Clarissa needs. So you are absolutely right (as per usual lol

Yeah it is risky but it was all in the name of charity and I can tell you now, nothing will happen but it could have been a probability and things would've gone really ugly. HAHAHAHAHAHAH omg that made me snort! For sure! lol. 

Lol lip gloss is important! Helps maintain healthy lips. 

Wow such true words. Liam cannot treat her so small. He needs to show her that he values her as a person.

Thank you so much and not at all. I absolutely love hearing what you have to say and everything you say is just so wise and so well thought. It's a pleasure for me to even read a sentence from you. 

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21 2014

Title: Chapter 13: Cast Pics

Love the cast!! Dang can Nate like not be gay and come home with me.  Anywhoo, what does Liam expect.  He has dates, tells her she is basically nothing but a transaction and now wants to be mad because she wants it to be a business relationship.  Dude, you kept putting this out there so you reap what you sow.  Happy she is taking this stance but when he finds out she is going for coffee with a dude who happens to be the ex, I don't think we have seen the last of crazy, possessive Liam.  



Author's Response:

Hi lajack1!! How are you?! You do? I'm so glad to hear that! Hahahahaha right?!? I will take him with home with me any day! lol right! Men *insert eyeroll here.* Yes! He asked for this and now that he's got it, he doesn't want it anymore. lol nope. Not yet! But that's why he has his dear friend Nate to guide him through it. Thanks for your review lajack1 and it's always nice to hear from you :)

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Date: December 05 2014

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

In the small southern town of Perry, Mississippi, an unlikely pair get much more than they bargained for when they fall madly in love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 24408
Read Count: 51674
Published: April 27 2014
Updated: November 27 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

What a way to lose your virginity!!!  Handsome, dominant man possesses you on the floor of the kitchen after smelling your wonderful baked cookies.  She just hit the jackpot to keep a man.  Can cook and is willing to be sexed anywhere.  Go Charlie. LOL.  Wonder what this conversation will be like. 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 25 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Well he tried to keep his cool and not hurt her feelings but she wouldn't shut up and now her feelings are all hurt.  If a dude tells you from the jump that you are only a f*cktoy don't get your hopes up that your pu$$y is somehow different and will get him on lockdown.  Obviously Gwen he has been putting it to you for awhile and he still wasn't committed to you.  Now the question is what is this dumb girl about to do to Charlie or Reese.  Have to admit I drooled and was in rapture when he said "Charlie is mine!"  Loved it!! (In falsetto)

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: May 11 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

My current expression :O

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Date: August 12 2014

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Summary:

Madison DuMont, English by birth but raised in New York, has returned to England to pursue her dream of being a top ballerina with her best friend and fellow dancer, Dante Palmer. After encountering the same racial issues with being a black ballerina in a predominantly white field she experienced in NY, Madison invests her inheritance in opening her own ballet company. A chance meeting with Matthew Bradley one night leads her down an unexpected path where she battles her personal perceptions of interracial relationships and whether they are worth it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26
Read Count: 118029
Published: May 11 2014
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Lovers' Dance

I love their interaction and I really want them to make it and just give a F*uck dat bish dance all across the floor at their wedding.  I am not liking how Adam and Nathan still don't consider her an equal or worthy to be on Matt's arm.  How do you like her but still carry that same BS thought.  It was quite interesting because I see that Matt is going to have to really set them straight on what he feels for his poppet.  I definitely see Louisa trying something at this ball on Sunday and I hope based off of the experience he has just had, he will keep any contact w/ her minimum and put her in her place.  I want to know what Grandpa thought after that dinner dressing down she gave him.  I am loving this story so much that I can't wait for your next chapter. 

Also, Madi, please leave Dante alone.  Why lust or long for a man who hasn't thought of you in a way that deserves more than the title of best friend.  I feel like Dante plays with her emotions for his own ego stroking.  She needs to let that fantasy go and deal in reality with Matthew.  After seeing him and Louisa she should understand how he feels with her and Dante.  Hope something happens to wake her up before she loses a good man for this. 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Hmmm, what he should have said was take their rumors and shove it up their behinds.  How do you expect her to act Matt when you constantly reinforce image and reputation on her when you are out and she does something.  She needs to take notes from Bella on how to keep herself at functions but still be herself.  What is he going to do now that he see's the change in her personality happen.  He fell in love with her because she was different but yet wants her to be the same.  A man as powerful as him should be okay against the small things she does.  She is feeling pressure Matt and she needs reassurances from you, not added scrutiny and pressure.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Aww, thank you for the honorable mention.  I continue to love this story.  Can I say, I can't wait for Thanksgiving.  Woohoo!!!  I am just all aflutter thinking about Matt and Aunt Cleo coming together in one room.  I do hope Matt rents a hotel room for them because I don't want poppet subjected to their derision and sure fire condemnation of their relationship while Matt isn't there as a buffer or a beacon of light in the shit storm i am sure is coming from her family.  Together they just work.  They expose each other to different things which will keep their relationship interesting in years to come.   Poppet keeps Matt from being bogged down in work 24/7.  I feel like if he did marry Louisa, she would let him work himself into an early grave and then rejoice in the money she had.  Whereas Poppet will make sure he eats and takes a break from working.  I don't know, I just love them and if you ever take this story off of the Chamber, I better be able to purchase it for my library.  I already have 2 other authors on here published works.  OMG, why am I daydreaming about them sitting down to thanksgiving dinner.  Gobble gobble.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

More great chapters.  Dante's behind needs to back up.  Yes, being friends sometimes means getting into the dirt with them but you at least temper it and continue periodically to at least suggest alternatives.  Hell now that Matt is in the picture, she could have sexed Matt up for the whole time without having to be drunk or high.  Loved how Matt took care of Bret real quick and shocked the hell out of all of them by speaking Spanish.  Damn, she can't get any of her friends to root for her relationship.  She surrounded by youngsters for real.  What the hell does age have to do with anything when there are 50% divorce rates with people who are closer in age.  Everyone needs to realize AGE doesn't guarantee happiness.  It is all of the other stuff that goes with it.  I was not feeling her friends from home nor am I any closer to being warmer to Dante.  Why the hell would you sleep in her bed when your ass got a woman.  That is disrespectful to your relationship.  IDGAF how close your friendship is, shit like that ends when you are in a relationship.  Now if Louisa as she thought or any other woman was sleeping in Matt's bed like that she would not be a happy camper.  Same goes for her.  I think Matt is questioning more so if he is strong enough to help her as he wants to do.  He has never been on the sidelines of something like this and his insecurities are being projected onto Madison.  I think he will reflect and come to realize thru the good and bad, she is the one for him.  At least I hope so.  Another great update.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Does none of her friends tried to tell her this kind of behavior is unhealthy and after all this time she needs to get freakin' help and stop enabling her with this behavior.  Matt is about to flip his shit.  Nathan condescending ass could have went back to work.  He just wanted to be nosy.  Bella would help and keep Matt under control.  Dante needs to be popped in his mouths because lo and behold it ain't either one of their freakin places, it is Madi.  He had keys bish so obviously it is like his place.  Nobody had to get up and answer the door.  I hope Matt tells her she needs to get her stuff together because this is not honoring her parents but instead having them looking down in disappointment that their daughter isn't strong enough to handle her grief even at 27 like an adult.  Feel sad, hurt etc, you are entitled to all of those emotions but getting drunk and high off your ass is not the way to do it (mourn).  Oh by the way, that damn game or tradition will be coming to an end if Matt has anything to say about it.   Feening for your next update.  Good work.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 20 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

My eyes lit up when I saw this updated and a huge smile came upon my face.  I have been stalking the site for an update and so happy to see one.  It was another great chapter and enjoyed the dialogue between matt and poppet.   I don't know if she realized it but Matt was able to get her to smile and laugh in less than 5 minutes and he is her other half, hence why he is able to know what she is doing and thinking.  Can't wait for future updates.

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Date: July 19 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Woohoo, I am always so excited to see this story updated.  They definitely need to have a talk about race because in Matt's circles where they will view her as different it will come up, the sly remarks like Mrs. Vanderbilt couched in politically correct terms.  Bottom line, the biggest issue everyone has with her is her race and then secondly it is money.  If they don't address it at home, they will not know how to respond at the events he will want her to attend with him.  Matt most definitely has to look at hidden meanings when people say things.  POC have to do it all the time.  Maddie has to be patient  with Matt because these are things that would fly over his head not being exposed to how they can hurt a POC.  I see some more enlightening conversations for Matt with friends and acquaintances in the future.  Still can't wait for your next update.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 07 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

I really like this story.  Matt and Poppet are hilarious together and I really hate the real world is about to intrude on their happiness.  I can see why her momma wanted Aunt Cleo out of their lives.  She needs to ask her grown ass kids for help.  I hope Matt can withstand the hate and manipulation coming his way.  I really want them to make it.  She needs to give up on Dante.  Any man who has been around you for as ling as he has and hasn't looked at you as more than a friend, let it go.  Deserve to be front and center vs an afterthought and wonder what he is going to do when this information comes out because I know he recognizes that she had a crush on him.  Matt is so perfectly flawed that it is great.  Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Madi need to get a backbone with Aunt Cleo because I wouldn't give a damn about her opinion when her kids haven't turned out like anything.  Where you gonna get the money to come here.  I ain't sending you none.  Matt was right because if his family said similar shit about her she would be offended and call them racist.  The shoe goes on both feet.  I hope she gives him the benefit if the doubt and Nathan as a friend need to just support his friend and stop with the snide, subliminal comments.  That is ticking me off.  He hasn't learned from dating his girlfriend.  His friend is happy and that should be what matters.  He bowed down to his family and he expects Matt to do the same.  You are spoiling me with so many updates.



Author's Response:

Lajack1, I must say you had me bursting out in laughter with your comment. Just love it. 'I ain't sending you none' That's just classic!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

OOOOHHHH Matt is trouble now.  Have the nerve to be ticked off when Dante touches her to him inappropriately but says nothing when Louisa touches him completely inappropriately and he became aroused.  At that point as a woman I have to wonder, if the opportunity presented itself could she seduce you and would you just go with it, claiming the whole I am just a man bit.  I am waiting for his answer.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19 2014

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