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Summary:

In the small southern town of Perry, Mississippi, an unlikely pair get much more than they bargained for when they fall madly in love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 24408
Read Count: 51788
Published: April 27 2014
Updated: November 27 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

What a way to lose your virginity!!!  Handsome, dominant man possesses you on the floor of the kitchen after smelling your wonderful baked cookies.  She just hit the jackpot to keep a man.  Can cook and is willing to be sexed anywhere.  Go Charlie. LOL.  Wonder what this conversation will be like. 

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Date: May 25 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Well he tried to keep his cool and not hurt her feelings but she wouldn't shut up and now her feelings are all hurt.  If a dude tells you from the jump that you are only a f*cktoy don't get your hopes up that your pu$$y is somehow different and will get him on lockdown.  Obviously Gwen he has been putting it to you for awhile and he still wasn't committed to you.  Now the question is what is this dumb girl about to do to Charlie or Reese.  Have to admit I drooled and was in rapture when he said "Charlie is mine!"  Loved it!! (In falsetto)

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Date: May 11 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

My current expression :O

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Date: August 12 2014

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Summary:

Madison DuMont, English by birth but raised in New York, has returned to England to pursue her dream of being a top ballerina with her best friend and fellow dancer, Dante Palmer. After encountering the same racial issues with being a black ballerina in a predominantly white field she experienced in NY, Madison invests her inheritance in opening her own ballet company. A chance meeting with Matthew Bradley one night leads her down an unexpected path where she battles her personal perceptions of interracial relationships and whether they are worth it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26
Read Count: 118106
Published: May 11 2014
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Lovers' Dance

I love their interaction and I really want them to make it and just give a F*uck dat bish dance all across the floor at their wedding.  I am not liking how Adam and Nathan still don't consider her an equal or worthy to be on Matt's arm.  How do you like her but still carry that same BS thought.  It was quite interesting because I see that Matt is going to have to really set them straight on what he feels for his poppet.  I definitely see Louisa trying something at this ball on Sunday and I hope based off of the experience he has just had, he will keep any contact w/ her minimum and put her in her place.  I want to know what Grandpa thought after that dinner dressing down she gave him.  I am loving this story so much that I can't wait for your next chapter. 

Also, Madi, please leave Dante alone.  Why lust or long for a man who hasn't thought of you in a way that deserves more than the title of best friend.  I feel like Dante plays with her emotions for his own ego stroking.  She needs to let that fantasy go and deal in reality with Matthew.  After seeing him and Louisa she should understand how he feels with her and Dante.  Hope something happens to wake her up before she loses a good man for this. 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Hmmm, what he should have said was take their rumors and shove it up their behinds.  How do you expect her to act Matt when you constantly reinforce image and reputation on her when you are out and she does something.  She needs to take notes from Bella on how to keep herself at functions but still be herself.  What is he going to do now that he see's the change in her personality happen.  He fell in love with her because she was different but yet wants her to be the same.  A man as powerful as him should be okay against the small things she does.  She is feeling pressure Matt and she needs reassurances from you, not added scrutiny and pressure.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Aww, thank you for the honorable mention.  I continue to love this story.  Can I say, I can't wait for Thanksgiving.  Woohoo!!!  I am just all aflutter thinking about Matt and Aunt Cleo coming together in one room.  I do hope Matt rents a hotel room for them because I don't want poppet subjected to their derision and sure fire condemnation of their relationship while Matt isn't there as a buffer or a beacon of light in the shit storm i am sure is coming from her family.  Together they just work.  They expose each other to different things which will keep their relationship interesting in years to come.   Poppet keeps Matt from being bogged down in work 24/7.  I feel like if he did marry Louisa, she would let him work himself into an early grave and then rejoice in the money she had.  Whereas Poppet will make sure he eats and takes a break from working.  I don't know, I just love them and if you ever take this story off of the Chamber, I better be able to purchase it for my library.  I already have 2 other authors on here published works.  OMG, why am I daydreaming about them sitting down to thanksgiving dinner.  Gobble gobble.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

More great chapters.  Dante's behind needs to back up.  Yes, being friends sometimes means getting into the dirt with them but you at least temper it and continue periodically to at least suggest alternatives.  Hell now that Matt is in the picture, she could have sexed Matt up for the whole time without having to be drunk or high.  Loved how Matt took care of Bret real quick and shocked the hell out of all of them by speaking Spanish.  Damn, she can't get any of her friends to root for her relationship.  She surrounded by youngsters for real.  What the hell does age have to do with anything when there are 50% divorce rates with people who are closer in age.  Everyone needs to realize AGE doesn't guarantee happiness.  It is all of the other stuff that goes with it.  I was not feeling her friends from home nor am I any closer to being warmer to Dante.  Why the hell would you sleep in her bed when your ass got a woman.  That is disrespectful to your relationship.  IDGAF how close your friendship is, shit like that ends when you are in a relationship.  Now if Louisa as she thought or any other woman was sleeping in Matt's bed like that she would not be a happy camper.  Same goes for her.  I think Matt is questioning more so if he is strong enough to help her as he wants to do.  He has never been on the sidelines of something like this and his insecurities are being projected onto Madison.  I think he will reflect and come to realize thru the good and bad, she is the one for him.  At least I hope so.  Another great update.

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Date: July 23 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Does none of her friends tried to tell her this kind of behavior is unhealthy and after all this time she needs to get freakin' help and stop enabling her with this behavior.  Matt is about to flip his shit.  Nathan condescending ass could have went back to work.  He just wanted to be nosy.  Bella would help and keep Matt under control.  Dante needs to be popped in his mouths because lo and behold it ain't either one of their freakin places, it is Madi.  He had keys bish so obviously it is like his place.  Nobody had to get up and answer the door.  I hope Matt tells her she needs to get her stuff together because this is not honoring her parents but instead having them looking down in disappointment that their daughter isn't strong enough to handle her grief even at 27 like an adult.  Feel sad, hurt etc, you are entitled to all of those emotions but getting drunk and high off your ass is not the way to do it (mourn).  Oh by the way, that damn game or tradition will be coming to an end if Matt has anything to say about it.   Feening for your next update.  Good work.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 20 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

My eyes lit up when I saw this updated and a huge smile came upon my face.  I have been stalking the site for an update and so happy to see one.  It was another great chapter and enjoyed the dialogue between matt and poppet.   I don't know if she realized it but Matt was able to get her to smile and laugh in less than 5 minutes and he is her other half, hence why he is able to know what she is doing and thinking.  Can't wait for future updates.

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Date: July 19 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Woohoo, I am always so excited to see this story updated.  They definitely need to have a talk about race because in Matt's circles where they will view her as different it will come up, the sly remarks like Mrs. Vanderbilt couched in politically correct terms.  Bottom line, the biggest issue everyone has with her is her race and then secondly it is money.  If they don't address it at home, they will not know how to respond at the events he will want her to attend with him.  Matt most definitely has to look at hidden meanings when people say things.  POC have to do it all the time.  Maddie has to be patient  with Matt because these are things that would fly over his head not being exposed to how they can hurt a POC.  I see some more enlightening conversations for Matt with friends and acquaintances in the future.  Still can't wait for your next update.

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Date: July 07 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

I really like this story.  Matt and Poppet are hilarious together and I really hate the real world is about to intrude on their happiness.  I can see why her momma wanted Aunt Cleo out of their lives.  She needs to ask her grown ass kids for help.  I hope Matt can withstand the hate and manipulation coming his way.  I really want them to make it.  She needs to give up on Dante.  Any man who has been around you for as ling as he has and hasn't looked at you as more than a friend, let it go.  Deserve to be front and center vs an afterthought and wonder what he is going to do when this information comes out because I know he recognizes that she had a crush on him.  Matt is so perfectly flawed that it is great.  Can't wait to read more.

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Date: May 11 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Madi need to get a backbone with Aunt Cleo because I wouldn't give a damn about her opinion when her kids haven't turned out like anything.  Where you gonna get the money to come here.  I ain't sending you none.  Matt was right because if his family said similar shit about her she would be offended and call them racist.  The shoe goes on both feet.  I hope she gives him the benefit if the doubt and Nathan as a friend need to just support his friend and stop with the snide, subliminal comments.  That is ticking me off.  He hasn't learned from dating his girlfriend.  His friend is happy and that should be what matters.  He bowed down to his family and he expects Matt to do the same.  You are spoiling me with so many updates.



Author's Response:

Lajack1, I must say you had me bursting out in laughter with your comment. Just love it. 'I ain't sending you none' That's just classic!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

OOOOHHHH Matt is trouble now.  Have the nerve to be ticked off when Dante touches her to him inappropriately but says nothing when Louisa touches him completely inappropriately and he became aroused.  At that point as a woman I have to wonder, if the opportunity presented itself could she seduce you and would you just go with it, claiming the whole I am just a man bit.  I am waiting for his answer.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

God, I wish Madison would stop with these childish fantasies with Dante.  Regardless of how he perceived how long he has been in his relationship he hasn't left her.  He has allowed this woman to continuously talk down to her.  Now all of a sudden he want to be in her business because Matt realized the gem that she is and has laid claim.  Don't fall for the okie doke Madison.  This man only cares for you as a friend otherwise he would have made a move before now.  She really needs to let his behind go, otherwise she will jeopardize her real relationship.  Even if it wasn't Matt, move on to someone who recognizes your worth.

Now I am tired of Nathan's behind.  Everyone is acting like she 12.  Did they forget that Princess Diana was married at a young age and everyone was like Awww.  True love and caring doesn't come with a certain age restriction or income requirement.  That is probably why most of those marriages have adultery and unhappy kids running around.  If he found the love of his life why begrudge his friend the same.  You have his back, end of discussion.  Wish him the best.  I hope he does marry Madison so they can all shut up.  So freakin' tired of that mess.  Their are HS sweethearts who have been married for 50 yrs.  when you are with the right one, it's good.

Matt is walking a fine line with this Kincaid character and I hope him and Maddie don't get caught in the crossfire.  I understand he can't tell her especially with her naïveté, she would go to lunch blurting everything because she trusts this man.  What she needs to do is her own homework on him.  Loved how Matt put that Trick Louisa in her place.  Curious to what Grandad said to her.  She needs to stop listening to people who do not have your best interest at heart and learn to listen to her own heart and let that guide her.  The last thing Matt needs to do is step in the ring ready to knock MF's out and his corner is empty with the one who he is fighting for,m his purpose.  

Sorry for the long review, but had to comment, good job and can't wait for your next chapters.



Author's Response:

I love your take on my story & hope you continue to enjoy it!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Hey, I was about to comment on one chapter and saw you posted another.  You sneaky devil you.  Enjoyed both.  Matt is getting a little taste of how Maddie feels when she is around his friends and family.  Not understanding the lingo etc, the difference is Maddie is aware of it and helps him out and Matt is more self confident than Maddie.  Now Jenny can take a flying leap.  I don't understand why Jamal don't say anything nor David.  At this point despite the so-called LOVE they show her, they obviously have always made her still feel like an outsider in their inner circle.  No one can offer her praise until they need some money.  Does she not see this at all.  Since Aunt Cleo is this strong woman and can yell at Maddie from overseas and TELL HER how she should run her life, what the hell is happening at home with Jenny.  At this point they all seem like users and I don't care if they like Matt and neither should Maddie.  Hell, she broke like the rest of them.  I would be singing 2 songs:  Donna Summer " I work hard for the money" and then one line from Gwen Guthrie song "Ain't nothin' going on but the rent". My line "you got to have a J.O.B"

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 15 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Why do I have the feeling that the gentlemen she does business with is going to bite him in his luscious behind.  My goodness, even now with understanding just how horrible Madi felt emotionally in your home you couldn't even chastise your own daughter and truly admit your mistakes.  If this is family, who the hell needs enemies.  I have family backstabbing me every single chance they get, downplaying my happiness.  No encouragement whatsoever.  If Madi was so special why treat her like dirt underneath their house.  Why sell her mother's property and then have the gall to act like HER money from HER mother was somehow wrong.  Good riddance to them all.  Tell you lazy ass daughter to get a freakin' job or a loan and she can pay her own way thru school. 

I am happy Madi told Matt off a little because this wasn't about him.  He got the situation brought out in the open and because of her love for him and how he has shown her how to be treated, allowed her to truly face the issues she was running away from.  Interesting how no asked Madi, WHY?  Why did you tear up the check?  What happened prior to this?  No one gave a damn about her feelings at all.  Loved  how one word from Matt had them all shut the hell up. 

Oooohhhh, I was heated reading that chapter.  You had me about figure out how to digitize myself like Tron and kick some ass on her behalf.  Don't look worried now that you gravy train is gone.  Little too late.  Let see how they cope without asking her for more money. 

You can see Matt's conviction in his love for Madi and guess what, we never know someone else 100%.  We are entitled to have something of ourselves to ourselves.  Matt can't change who he is.  Can't change he white, can't change he's rich but he can control how he treats Poppet and that is what Aunt Cleo and family (scathingly) should be concerned about.  He can't change others thoughts or perspectives and he'll go crazy trying.  If he gets the patriarch on his side then everyone else will follow. 

Can't wait for more.  Wow, didn't realize I typed so much.  Just how much I was into these latest chapters.  Now on to see how gramps, parents and best friend are going to respond.  Hmmm,  has anyone really had her back in her life since her parents died?

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Date: August 28 2014

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Summary:

boat dock

 

 

 

Based on my true (and still evolving) story..

 

His eyes and mine locked and I knew that he could possibly be my forever but what is taking him so long to realize the same?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 5062
Read Count: 3542
Published: May 14 2014
Updated: May 26 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Is anything happening because I just don't see it progressing.  I hope he wasn't asking for her roommates number and does James like Ian or secretly likes Tiffany.  Curious that James doesn't have a girlfriend.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: May 19 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Five years ago, Breezy Collins, left Baton Rouge, Louisiana and vanished without a trace leaving everything and everyone behind in order to save herself from further heartbreak from the only man she has ever loved. Breezy's sister Phoenix is the only person who knows her whereabouts but not her secrets. It's her sister's wedding that brings her back home for a week. She can only hope that she can avoid running into the man that still haunts her dreams and owns her heart.

Jace Bennett, has spent the last five years searching for something that he knows doesn't exist anymore. His Heart. He's colder and more distant. All the things that use to give him joy now only bring him misery because of her but a promise is a promise and he'll uphold his end of it no matter the cost. But when a chance encounter brings him face to face with the one woman who holds the key to his happiness, he'll do everything in his power to ensure that she never leaves him again. By any means necessary, he'll try to convince her to give him Just One More Try.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19790
Read Count: 29085
Published: May 20 2014
Updated: September 13 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh that Bish!!  See it is time for some putting down roots and whipping a bish ass with my limbs until she crying.  Now I want Breezy to fight for her man.  Don't let this heffa get away with this manipulative crap.  So I am guessing from this conversation that he married Sara because he thought she was pregnant with his child when she was actually pregnant with someone else's child and now that decision to marry her and most likely have slept with her while with Breezy has Breezy running for the hills.  At this point I feel sorry for Jace.  He has 2 stubborn women in his life.  One he wants to get rid of and One he wants.  Hmmm, wonder how he will resolve this because no matter what he says, she will only think he is saying it to get into her pants.  His best friend is going to have to help him.  Paul and her sister will need to help him so he will have to appeal to them I think, otherwise I don't see her staying in the same room as him for 5 seconds.  Can't wait for the next chapter tomorrow.



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much for reading. Yeah, Sara is a piece of work. Jace has got his work cut out for him. Right now everybody is upset with him.

Breezy has a lot to think about. Its hard for her to trust people. Her circle of friends is very small and very protective of her. Right now, she does not want a thing to do with Jace. She just wants to get through this week with as little drama as possible but now she has to deal with Phoenix and now Jace.

Stay tuned. Tomorrow we'll get her take on this situation.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 09 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Kassidy is a Senior at Summerville High School in Southern Florida. She has an overbearing mother who is only interested in Kassidy becoming the next olympic gold medalist in Track and Field. Akira has had a crush on Kassidy since they met 3 years ago. Will he be able to break through Kassidy's personal barriers to help her find her real self and finally have enough courage to tell her how he feels.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Female/Female, Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 8462
Read Count: 7345
Published: June 06 2014
Updated: June 18 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I am confused by Akira, what did he expect her to do.  He never claimed he liked her in a non friendship way, she obviously feel if he could sleep with a girl in Japan and then get a blowjob while she is in the house that this screams I like you.  Ummm, no, it screams the opposite.  Was really getting that head job worth losing out on her.  Kinda disappointed in Akira.  Let's see what the next chapter brings.



Author's Response:

I think Akira is really disapointed in himself.  Next chapter will be explanations and confessions, we'll see what comes out of it. Thank you for reading it and reviewing.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 18 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 139]
Summary:

   In the year of 1648 B.C, the Nubians reigned over Pharaohs army and won with victory over the territory of the West Nile. In celebration King Kladon communes a marriage for his daughter's hand.


   Princess Kira is a highly trained warrior of the Nubian Kingdom, alongside her boisterous brother, Keitou. When she is told that she is to marry the Royal Lords son, Akisou, she is furious and rides away from the Nubian Palace. However, Kira finds herself caught in a trap when her and her party are ambushed by Pharaohs soldiers.

   Pharaoh Raad is a stoic and tenacious king who shows no mercy when it comes to slaying his enemies...all except one. Only trying to prove vengeance against the Nubian King, the mighty Pharoah himself cannot deny his budding desire for the beautiful, yet dangerous Queen to be.

   War will sprout...love will flow...who will be the true winner of the Nile.


WARNING: Graphic violence, and much nudity.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Historical
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 49658
Read Count: 33557
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: October 15 2014


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

These priests are ridiculous.  How can you practice being closer to the Gods and you allow one of your own to defile an innocent young girl and do nothing but turn your heads and spill lies and atrocious comments towards her.  They all need to be beheaded including Sap.  Someone who was there to protect one of their own and you want her put down.  That is your ignorance, jealousy and hatred.  They had no disputeagainst hte statements that Pharoah Raad put to them.  Now we have 2 women coming into the  household and he is more than aware that Kira is not someone to sit idly by.  She will be ferocious in her need to stay away from him to keep her sanity before she ever places herself as second or mistress.  I feel this is when she will truly miss being at home and possibly marrying the other guy because at that point she would have the respect of a wife.  I think if he decides on marrying one of these girls, he will have to send Kira home to Nubia.  I think I would rather be away and have some semblence of sanity vs being hit with reality daily of what cannot be.  Looking forward to your next chapter.  P.S.  They should have let her cut off his pleasure stick first. 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2014

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 UPDATEEE

So her uncle was taught by someone with sense.  What happened to Kladon then?  Is her mother also a warrior?  Can't wait for more details.  We know for sure there will be an uproar on both sides.  Will Merikki be able to stand tall and support her daughter or fall when faced with both Kladon and Keitou.  i do hope Keitou comes to his senses.

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Date: September 10 2014

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[Reviews - 155]
Summary:

Banner by: Sienna Gray

 

All Camryn Clifford wanted to do was live out her dream. She had made it out of her dead end town but her old life wanted to pull her back in.

Richard Hammonds wanted Camryn and he would have her. He has skeletons in his closet that he needs to keep from her to win her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 68991
Read Count: 55846
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: May 24 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Oh Annabelle is going to be a problem.  She helped him with getting out of shape because she didn't want anyone else with him but she wanted to dip in other waters.  Now he has found someone who fascinates him and she is jealous.  Camryn better watch her back because Richard canceling routine Friday plans is not going to go over well.  Let's see how these dates compare.



Author's Response:

Oh no! Not well at all! lol!!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 29 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Something smells like a set up from Graham and Annabelle.  Hope Camryn doesn't fall for it.  What got Richard into BDSM?  I expected he pulled Annabelle in like he is trying to do with Camryn.  Also what does Graham want with Camryn in the BDSM lifestyle.  Is he ready to try his hand at being a Dom vs Voyeur?  Let see what Wednesday's Masquerade madness brings!!!!   

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: July 15 2014

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Okay, as the story continues, I understand more on why he didn't tell her.  She is not comforting at all.  He probably would have gotten a cold reaction by telling  him to forget about it and grow up or something.  I can't imagine her acting the same way as Camryn.  He respected her and he felt lust for her but I don't truly believed Richard really loved Annabelle and maybe she knew it and recognizes the fact he is well and truly in love with Camryn.  At this point as a grown ass woman, Annabelle needs to let this ish go.  Why are you so bent on attempting to get back in his arms when he has clearly, simply stated he don't want you.  Go find the f*uck buddy you had for Christmas. 

Anywhoo, I can't wait for her momma's reaction when she show up with Richard, a white dude after that speech about her oldest son's girlfriend.  Momma a trip.  At some point you have to want the best for your children and listen to your children.  Camryn has told you numerous times she doesn't want ol boy.  Stop telling him her personal business before you get your daughter physically hurt with his can't take no behind.

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 07 2015

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

That was a great story and very happy all of her brothers and sisters got a happy ending.  Dang the Donald Jr moved just as fast as his dad did.  They don't play around at all.  Now I can see why him and Richard got along.  Both are dominant men. Annabelle, I actually hope she finds peace and someone to love like Rich and Cam love each other.  Sometimes it takes that to make you understand that you would have settled if you stayed with the other person.  I did have one question.  When Cam was taking about the kids staying the summer with the grandparents, are Bishop and Nora together in a relationship or was Cam just referencing in the vicinity?

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: May 24 2015

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