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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 558]
Summary:

Madison DuMont, English by birth but raised in New York, has returned to England to pursue her dream of being a top ballerina with her best friend and fellow dancer, Dante Palmer. After encountering the same racial issues with being a black ballerina in a predominantly white field she experienced in NY, Madison invests her inheritance in opening her own ballet company. A chance meeting with Matthew Bradley one night leads her down an unexpected path where she battles her personal perceptions of interracial relationships and whether they are worth it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26
Read Count: 118048
Published: May 11 2014
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Lovers' Dance

God, I wish Madison would stop with these childish fantasies with Dante.  Regardless of how he perceived how long he has been in his relationship he hasn't left her.  He has allowed this woman to continuously talk down to her.  Now all of a sudden he want to be in her business because Matt realized the gem that she is and has laid claim.  Don't fall for the okie doke Madison.  This man only cares for you as a friend otherwise he would have made a move before now.  She really needs to let his behind go, otherwise she will jeopardize her real relationship.  Even if it wasn't Matt, move on to someone who recognizes your worth.

Now I am tired of Nathan's behind.  Everyone is acting like she 12.  Did they forget that Princess Diana was married at a young age and everyone was like Awww.  True love and caring doesn't come with a certain age restriction or income requirement.  That is probably why most of those marriages have adultery and unhappy kids running around.  If he found the love of his life why begrudge his friend the same.  You have his back, end of discussion.  Wish him the best.  I hope he does marry Madison so they can all shut up.  So freakin' tired of that mess.  Their are HS sweethearts who have been married for 50 yrs.  when you are with the right one, it's good.

Matt is walking a fine line with this Kincaid character and I hope him and Maddie don't get caught in the crossfire.  I understand he can't tell her especially with her naïveté, she would go to lunch blurting everything because she trusts this man.  What she needs to do is her own homework on him.  Loved how Matt put that Trick Louisa in her place.  Curious to what Grandad said to her.  She needs to stop listening to people who do not have your best interest at heart and learn to listen to her own heart and let that guide her.  The last thing Matt needs to do is step in the ring ready to knock MF's out and his corner is empty with the one who he is fighting for,m his purpose.  

Sorry for the long review, but had to comment, good job and can't wait for your next chapters.



Author's Response:

I love your take on my story & hope you continue to enjoy it!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Hey, I was about to comment on one chapter and saw you posted another.  You sneaky devil you.  Enjoyed both.  Matt is getting a little taste of how Maddie feels when she is around his friends and family.  Not understanding the lingo etc, the difference is Maddie is aware of it and helps him out and Matt is more self confident than Maddie.  Now Jenny can take a flying leap.  I don't understand why Jamal don't say anything nor David.  At this point despite the so-called LOVE they show her, they obviously have always made her still feel like an outsider in their inner circle.  No one can offer her praise until they need some money.  Does she not see this at all.  Since Aunt Cleo is this strong woman and can yell at Maddie from overseas and TELL HER how she should run her life, what the hell is happening at home with Jenny.  At this point they all seem like users and I don't care if they like Matt and neither should Maddie.  Hell, she broke like the rest of them.  I would be singing 2 songs:  Donna Summer " I work hard for the money" and then one line from Gwen Guthrie song "Ain't nothin' going on but the rent". My line "you got to have a J.O.B"

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 15 2014

Title: Lovers' Dance

Why do I have the feeling that the gentlemen she does business with is going to bite him in his luscious behind.  My goodness, even now with understanding just how horrible Madi felt emotionally in your home you couldn't even chastise your own daughter and truly admit your mistakes.  If this is family, who the hell needs enemies.  I have family backstabbing me every single chance they get, downplaying my happiness.  No encouragement whatsoever.  If Madi was so special why treat her like dirt underneath their house.  Why sell her mother's property and then have the gall to act like HER money from HER mother was somehow wrong.  Good riddance to them all.  Tell you lazy ass daughter to get a freakin' job or a loan and she can pay her own way thru school. 

I am happy Madi told Matt off a little because this wasn't about him.  He got the situation brought out in the open and because of her love for him and how he has shown her how to be treated, allowed her to truly face the issues she was running away from.  Interesting how no asked Madi, WHY?  Why did you tear up the check?  What happened prior to this?  No one gave a damn about her feelings at all.  Loved  how one word from Matt had them all shut the hell up. 

Oooohhhh, I was heated reading that chapter.  You had me about figure out how to digitize myself like Tron and kick some ass on her behalf.  Don't look worried now that you gravy train is gone.  Little too late.  Let see how they cope without asking her for more money. 

You can see Matt's conviction in his love for Madi and guess what, we never know someone else 100%.  We are entitled to have something of ourselves to ourselves.  Matt can't change who he is.  Can't change he white, can't change he's rich but he can control how he treats Poppet and that is what Aunt Cleo and family (scathingly) should be concerned about.  He can't change others thoughts or perspectives and he'll go crazy trying.  If he gets the patriarch on his side then everyone else will follow. 

Can't wait for more.  Wow, didn't realize I typed so much.  Just how much I was into these latest chapters.  Now on to see how gramps, parents and best friend are going to respond.  Hmmm,  has anyone really had her back in her life since her parents died?

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Date: August 28 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 14]
Summary:

boat dock

 

 

 

Based on my true (and still evolving) story..

 

His eyes and mine locked and I knew that he could possibly be my forever but what is taking him so long to realize the same?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 5062
Read Count: 3527
Published: May 14 2014
Updated: May 26 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Is anything happening because I just don't see it progressing.  I hope he wasn't asking for her roommates number and does James like Ian or secretly likes Tiffany.  Curious that James doesn't have a girlfriend.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: May 19 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 105]
Summary:

Five years ago, Breezy Collins, left Baton Rouge, Louisiana and vanished without a trace leaving everything and everyone behind in order to save herself from further heartbreak from the only man she has ever loved. Breezy's sister Phoenix is the only person who knows her whereabouts but not her secrets. It's her sister's wedding that brings her back home for a week. She can only hope that she can avoid running into the man that still haunts her dreams and owns her heart.

Jace Bennett, has spent the last five years searching for something that he knows doesn't exist anymore. His Heart. He's colder and more distant. All the things that use to give him joy now only bring him misery because of her but a promise is a promise and he'll uphold his end of it no matter the cost. But when a chance encounter brings him face to face with the one woman who holds the key to his happiness, he'll do everything in his power to ensure that she never leaves him again. By any means necessary, he'll try to convince her to give him Just One More Try.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19790
Read Count: 28701
Published: May 20 2014
Updated: September 13 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh that Bish!!  See it is time for some putting down roots and whipping a bish ass with my limbs until she crying.  Now I want Breezy to fight for her man.  Don't let this heffa get away with this manipulative crap.  So I am guessing from this conversation that he married Sara because he thought she was pregnant with his child when she was actually pregnant with someone else's child and now that decision to marry her and most likely have slept with her while with Breezy has Breezy running for the hills.  At this point I feel sorry for Jace.  He has 2 stubborn women in his life.  One he wants to get rid of and One he wants.  Hmmm, wonder how he will resolve this because no matter what he says, she will only think he is saying it to get into her pants.  His best friend is going to have to help him.  Paul and her sister will need to help him so he will have to appeal to them I think, otherwise I don't see her staying in the same room as him for 5 seconds.  Can't wait for the next chapter tomorrow.



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much for reading. Yeah, Sara is a piece of work. Jace has got his work cut out for him. Right now everybody is upset with him.

Breezy has a lot to think about. Its hard for her to trust people. Her circle of friends is very small and very protective of her. Right now, she does not want a thing to do with Jace. She just wants to get through this week with as little drama as possible but now she has to deal with Phoenix and now Jace.

Stay tuned. Tomorrow we'll get her take on this situation.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 09 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Kassidy is a Senior at Summerville High School in Southern Florida. She has an overbearing mother who is only interested in Kassidy becoming the next olympic gold medalist in Track and Field. Akira has had a crush on Kassidy since they met 3 years ago. Will he be able to break through Kassidy's personal barriers to help her find her real self and finally have enough courage to tell her how he feels.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Female/Female, Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 8462
Read Count: 7205
Published: June 06 2014
Updated: June 18 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I am confused by Akira, what did he expect her to do.  He never claimed he liked her in a non friendship way, she obviously feel if he could sleep with a girl in Japan and then get a blowjob while she is in the house that this screams I like you.  Ummm, no, it screams the opposite.  Was really getting that head job worth losing out on her.  Kinda disappointed in Akira.  Let's see what the next chapter brings.



Author's Response:

I think Akira is really disapointed in himself.  Next chapter will be explanations and confessions, we'll see what comes out of it. Thank you for reading it and reviewing.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 18 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

   In the year of 1648 B.C, the Nubians reigned over Pharaohs army and won with victory over the territory of the West Nile. In celebration King Kladon communes a marriage for his daughter's hand.


   Princess Kira is a highly trained warrior of the Nubian Kingdom, alongside her boisterous brother, Keitou. When she is told that she is to marry the Royal Lords son, Akisou, she is furious and rides away from the Nubian Palace. However, Kira finds herself caught in a trap when her and her party are ambushed by Pharaohs soldiers.

   Pharaoh Raad is a stoic and tenacious king who shows no mercy when it comes to slaying his enemies...all except one. Only trying to prove vengeance against the Nubian King, the mighty Pharoah himself cannot deny his budding desire for the beautiful, yet dangerous Queen to be.

   War will sprout...love will flow...who will be the true winner of the Nile.


WARNING: Graphic violence, and much nudity.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Historical
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 49658
Read Count: 32914
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: October 15 2014


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

These priests are ridiculous.  How can you practice being closer to the Gods and you allow one of your own to defile an innocent young girl and do nothing but turn your heads and spill lies and atrocious comments towards her.  They all need to be beheaded including Sap.  Someone who was there to protect one of their own and you want her put down.  That is your ignorance, jealousy and hatred.  They had no disputeagainst hte statements that Pharoah Raad put to them.  Now we have 2 women coming into the  household and he is more than aware that Kira is not someone to sit idly by.  She will be ferocious in her need to stay away from him to keep her sanity before she ever places herself as second or mistress.  I feel this is when she will truly miss being at home and possibly marrying the other guy because at that point she would have the respect of a wife.  I think if he decides on marrying one of these girls, he will have to send Kira home to Nubia.  I think I would rather be away and have some semblence of sanity vs being hit with reality daily of what cannot be.  Looking forward to your next chapter.  P.S.  They should have let her cut off his pleasure stick first. 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2014

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 UPDATEEE

So her uncle was taught by someone with sense.  What happened to Kladon then?  Is her mother also a warrior?  Can't wait for more details.  We know for sure there will be an uproar on both sides.  Will Merikki be able to stand tall and support her daughter or fall when faced with both Kladon and Keitou.  i do hope Keitou comes to his senses.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 10 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 155]
Summary:

Banner by: Sienna Gray

 

All Camryn Clifford wanted to do was live out her dream. She had made it out of her dead end town but her old life wanted to pull her back in.

Richard Hammonds wanted Camryn and he would have her. He has skeletons in his closet that he needs to keep from her to win her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 68991
Read Count: 54115
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: May 24 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Oh Annabelle is going to be a problem.  She helped him with getting out of shape because she didn't want anyone else with him but she wanted to dip in other waters.  Now he has found someone who fascinates him and she is jealous.  Camryn better watch her back because Richard canceling routine Friday plans is not going to go over well.  Let's see how these dates compare.



Author's Response:

Oh no! Not well at all! lol!!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 29 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Something smells like a set up from Graham and Annabelle.  Hope Camryn doesn't fall for it.  What got Richard into BDSM?  I expected he pulled Annabelle in like he is trying to do with Camryn.  Also what does Graham want with Camryn in the BDSM lifestyle.  Is he ready to try his hand at being a Dom vs Voyeur?  Let see what Wednesday's Masquerade madness brings!!!!   

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: July 15 2014

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Okay, as the story continues, I understand more on why he didn't tell her.  She is not comforting at all.  He probably would have gotten a cold reaction by telling  him to forget about it and grow up or something.  I can't imagine her acting the same way as Camryn.  He respected her and he felt lust for her but I don't truly believed Richard really loved Annabelle and maybe she knew it and recognizes the fact he is well and truly in love with Camryn.  At this point as a grown ass woman, Annabelle needs to let this ish go.  Why are you so bent on attempting to get back in his arms when he has clearly, simply stated he don't want you.  Go find the f*uck buddy you had for Christmas. 

Anywhoo, I can't wait for her momma's reaction when she show up with Richard, a white dude after that speech about her oldest son's girlfriend.  Momma a trip.  At some point you have to want the best for your children and listen to your children.  Camryn has told you numerous times she doesn't want ol boy.  Stop telling him her personal business before you get your daughter physically hurt with his can't take no behind.

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 07 2015

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

That was a great story and very happy all of her brothers and sisters got a happy ending.  Dang the Donald Jr moved just as fast as his dad did.  They don't play around at all.  Now I can see why him and Richard got along.  Both are dominant men. Annabelle, I actually hope she finds peace and someone to love like Rich and Cam love each other.  Sometimes it takes that to make you understand that you would have settled if you stayed with the other person.  I did have one question.  When Cam was taking about the kids staying the summer with the grandparents, are Bishop and Nora together in a relationship or was Cam just referencing in the vicinity?

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: May 24 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 480]
Summary:

Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.

Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.

What happens when both of these two get together?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 50520
Read Count: 110030
Published: June 24 2014
Updated: August 25 2017


Title: Chapter 21: Breakdowns

I hope they pull through and let her get thru this internship and have Jamison fix Mason, Martin whatever his name is...he is getting on my nerves.  The dude that is so frakin entitled he can't handle ONE woman telling him no...please I feel there is more to it than that.

Now I thought the ValentChamber was here to express interracial couplings with the heroine being black unlike 80% of the books that are published in mainstream...am I mistaken, please let me know because if so I am unsure about the complaints.

Regardless I just want the woman to be a POC, because we do not get the benefit of being the "love interest" stories, we're typically more of the "love interest, sassy, loud mouth, single best friend" in movies and books. 

Whatever you write, I will read.



Author's Response:

Yeah his name is Mason lol. 

When I first joined I was specifically looking for a site like this so I'm guessing it's New readers. Thanks for yourinput 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 27 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Sounds very dominant, I like!!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 23 2014

Title: Chapter 13: Beach Confessions

Nice chapter.  Get well and Ace those finals. Can't wait to see what is in store for these two.  Hopefully Elise is serious about being all in.  Boy when Jameson finally do get the chance to make love to her, she is going to be sore and tired, I  hope.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 07 2014

Title: Chapter 19: Ball of Fire

Okay, this chick will not give up for anything.  There aren't any other rich, handsome guys she could have.  Obviously she isn't ugly or anything in the looks department so why soo strung out over a guy that doesn't want you.  You are aware his parents don't tell him what to do that he is a grown ass man who makes his own decisions so this stunt won't work because he will not touch you again and he will want a paternity tests and you need to have that delivery on point if you even hope to convince him.  She hasn't thought this thru I don't think.  Anyway Elise just stay by your man and not let this heffa have him easily because you already know the deal.

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: May 31 2015

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 205]
Summary:

 

Janet Taylor has one thing on her mind, and that is to become Dr. Janet Taylor. However, a certain Andrew Beck, Miami General’s resident womanizer and top surgeon, is messing with her plans.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:Yes
Word count: 79974
Read Count: 87073
Published: June 29 2014
Updated: September 02 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Character Pics

Damn, Andrew Beck is Fffffiiiiiiiinnnnnnneeeeeee!!!!!   Who is he?  Need a new screensaver.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: July 06 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

He hasn't realized that him getting laid with any and everyone is what is pushing her away from him.  He needs to keep it in his pants so she will maybe take him seriously that he is truly trying to get to know her.  Just like a man doesn't want a hoe for a housewife, the same can be said for women.  The last thing she will want to face is going to work and realize more than half the women have seen her man naked and know what he is working with.  Obviously there are some trust issues or something based off that Rich reception debacle.  Let's see what is in store for these two.  But then again, I am a nurse and haven't seen a doctor that looked that good. ;)

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Date: July 06 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Was it by chance that they met? 

 

This is an introduction to two people, Justine and Mikkel, and how their lives will intersect from their first meeting. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4570
Read Count: 1979
Published: July 02 2014
Updated: August 03 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He is now making his move.  Ahhh, he has been eyeing her for awhile hmmm.  I like it. Is he some kind of dominant male or is that just what she thinks.  Is our girl in trouble?  Is he a rolling stone and she will be in too deep?  Looking forward to more chapters.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: August 03 2014

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Sometimes Minerva 'Minnie' Washington questions her sanity when she interacts with her boyfriend. Behind the handsome face and sexy voice lies a goofball that always manages to say the wrong thing at the wrong time. After four months, she'd think she would've been left him--especially when he's always asking for favors.

This time he's asking her to babysit his nephews for a few hours while he's out. She thinks it'll be a walk through the park, but she's about to find out how wrong she is. Three boys; one's playing an intense game of truth or dare, the other is obssessed with aliens and the last keeps trying to kiss her. Laugh as Minnie has the experience of a lifetime!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Family, Friendship
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 12454
Read Count: 6171
Published: July 04 2014
Updated: July 22 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OMG!!  I would drive them kids to that party and leave them there with Blake then say we are finished.  He knew how his nephews were and he was purposefully misleading about them.  Plus is Blake on some BS.  He's pulling off the adorable quirky absentminded look beautifully but as an architect major is he really that absentminded.

 I want her to trust him until something otherwise becomes known and as her roommate will be there she can give Minnie any dirt that she sees but I have a side eye to Blake.  He better not hurt our girl Minnie.

  I'll order a pizza and I would give Tobias some weed or Valium, lock Mason in the room with a slew of vin diesel, the rock or Jason stratham movies.  Then let Tobias watch eat pray love or some dear john movie until Blake came and got them.  I can't wait for more chapters.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 07 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

At this point, Blake can take a hike.  He is just like a previous commenter stated, immature, inconsiderate and selfish exactly.  To place a person who he suppose to care about in this position is ridiculous.  Even if he had faith in her abilities to blindside her is inappropriate.  To make a bet like that with his friends and can't tell his ex no, not out of the fact Minnie is a warden but out of RESPECT for my relationship with her.  He didn't tell her at first about the location of the gig because he KNOWS it is wrong on so many levels.  Continue to listen to your friends and watch you will be alone or with a girl you clearly broke up with for a reason.  You can't smell SET UP.  I hope Minnie tells him to get lost when he comes to pick up the terrible trio and never speak to his behind again.  She needs a man who doesn't let serious discussions, situations just fall to the wayside.  I hope he steps out of pocket tonight because I will be right next to Minnie helping her to whoop his behind like it was Madea's I can do bad all by myself re-enactment.  I am so waiting on your next update because I am dying to know what is happening at this party.  Someone will spill the beans if not his ex.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 23 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG!! Blake is too much.  He will cause her to go prematurely gray.  He better not do anything at this party with Renee while she is at home with the kids because at that point as the saying goes, I see his ass as grass by Minnie.  I wonder what attracted him to Minnie and his feelings or thoughts about their future.  Minnie we can see from this chapter loves her some Blake (hope he putting it down in the bedroom for all of these shaninigans).  I am interested to see how baby sitting is going to go that night.  Looking for more.  Great first chapter, mission accomplished.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 69]
Summary:

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Four adopted brothers who share a bond closer than any natural DNA  come home after being summoned by Evelyn Mercer, their mother.  This is the story of the Mercer Men and the women they love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 36
Completed:No
Word count: 98148
Read Count: 23927
Published: July 08 2014
Updated: July 24 2014


Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Irrational Behavior

I don't know why but I am not feeling the pairing of Justin and Theresa but both wrong for keeping it a secret because that smells like betrayal.  I wonder what Justin is going to do when she finds a boy she likes and starts having those feelings.  Will we hear the you need to wait and you are too young for a boyfriend if the shoe was on the other foot.  Theresa needs some counseling and I think JuJu is just a strong willed girl and Justin has always been laid back.  I think seeing her mom work to take care of them and then sounds like marrying a non dominant male will be hard to see Justin in a new light.  It sounds like they have always been a core of three and now that is changing.  Must be difficult during hormones and life changes.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: July 18 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Today was Ryan and Zeke's wedding. It went without a hitch. Thanks to the people supporting them. Was everyone else satisfied? find out what happened before the nuptials took place.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 6251
Read Count: 3204
Published: July 15 2014
Updated: September 12 2014


Title: Chapter 5: "I Do"

I'm trying to figure out when Farah is going to boil over.  Will it be the wedding or the reception?  I am not sure about her and Rowan's relationship.  Feel like someone else is out there for him.  Do want Farah to have her own love because it has to hurt for this to be in her face everyday, all day.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 14 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 51]
Summary:

Keny is the lead singer of Fear of Self, and she's in love with her long time friend, Kirk. She wants to tell Kirk everything. Every feeling she has for him, but she's afraid of heartbreak and rejection. As Fear of Self goes to tour, she's glad she left everything behind. Until they come back to their hometown after a two month tour, she sees the former love of her life with another woman.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 35340
Read Count: 16914
Published: July 18 2014
Updated: December 28 2017


Title: Chapter 11: Bitch please

Is it me or does Hannah sound like she shouldn't be Kirk's cousin.  Why would you be mad at the fact that Keny captured his attention without trying.  You're his cousin, who the hell cares?  Anyway, is this chick for real.  He broke up with you on your WEDDING DAY in front of everyone.  If that is not saying, I DON'T WANT YOU!!, I have no clue what is.  C'mon Harley don't play yourself.  Is you dad saying stuff to you because I can't believe you really think this way.  As for all of these other heffa's, really, you will encourage her in these illusions.  Wouldn't you say to a FRIEND, forget that jerk,  he embarrassed you on your most important day, find someone else, you don't need him and his assholish ways.  I mean, really.  Can't wait to see how her seeing someone else does not affect him at all b/c he don't want you.  Can somebody send her the self help book,  "How to Get a Clue:  when the boy doesn't want you."



Author's Response:

Your review had me rolling on the floor laughing! Hannah's behavior is odd and will be explained. As for Harley, we all know why she really wanted Kirk, and she put it in her head that she won't stop until she's sunk her claws into Kirk.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 01 2014

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