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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 140]
Summary:

Ezekiel's parents took extreme measures to keep him hidden from his controling racist grandfather.  Ezekiel was adopted and raised by Rosa a black woman and his life is now about to take a drastic change.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 11832
Read Count: 39841
Published: November 06 2014
Updated: June 17 2015


Title: Ezekiel Black

Now that is just Nasty.  He should have known Zeke would never want a trick that has been with his grandad.  Does his grandfather have any morals.  You want a woman who is okay with you sleeping with both her and her daughter.   Ridiculous!!!



Author's Response:

Grandpa doesn't have a clue.  These are some of the 'finer things in life' he wants to expose Zeke to.  LOL

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: November 13 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 95]
Summary:

 

 

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Joss just knows this summer will change her life... If she can manage to tolerate her bunk leader 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 14449
Read Count: 16076
Published: November 08 2014
Updated: May 06 2016


Title: Chapter 10: Secrets Out

How many more weeks of summer left before they can be open?  I don't want Obie to lose his job but hey something's are worth it to the person and I always believe, if one door closes, God has another one opened that is probably better for you anyway.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 15 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Swim Test

I am interested to see how you plan on having Tobias help her overcome her inhibitions and become more confident.  I understand we want her to have an honest reflection and assessment of her body, values and goals but what will push her to that point.  Right now she is so entrenched in this altered view of herself that I am not sure even Tobias is enough to give her 20/20 eyesight, despite how drool worthy he looks and sounds (picturing Barry White voice when he speaks).  Great chapter.  I wonder if it is required of all campers to see a psychologist as part of their program?  I feel like their is one specific event in her life that really gave her this viewpoint that she can't shake right now.  Sorry, don't live in Portland but I can be a great pen pal ;).  Keep these chapters coming.

 



Author's Response:

As I said before I'm still figuring it out but reviews like this point me in a good direction. You've given me some things to think about for upcoming chapters.

All the campers do see Tobias but only as a nutritionist. Joss is the only one he's giving unrequested doc time to. Although if I ran a camp like this, all the campers would be seeing a psychologist.

I'm gonna be the loneliest kid in Portland so I might take you up on that penpal offer

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03 2014

Title: Chapter 7: First Things First

Go Rosie,  teach ole girl some moves.  Tobias won't know what hit him.  I absolutely love Tobias.  He is what she needs.  He understands her issues and will probably be one of the few boys who would have patience with her.  Can't wait to see how they progress in future chapters. 



Author's Response:

Tobias is perfect for her. I think she's gonna learn a lot about herself this summer.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

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Tara's got her bottle of gin but she needs guy advice from Joshua, her bandmate and friend. She may get more than she bargained for...

 

Banner by Elizablu (of course!)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: Of Steel and Silt
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4470
Read Count: 1468
Published: November 12 2014
Updated: November 12 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Lock Haven, PA

Hot!!  Did she say his name while she was dreaming or having an alcohol induced vision.  Whew, there is most definitely something there.  Nice to see a little backstory about them.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, lajack1. There will be more backstory to come!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 12 2014

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 128]
Summary:

There is such structure in life. But what happens when you break free? What exists beyond that prison?

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Accordance is a original work by CM and is intended for publication so please do not upload, distort, edit, or remove and place on any other site. Respectfully yours, thank you. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2400
Read Count: 97910
Published: November 23 2014
Updated: June 24 2019


Title: Accordance

I have just read the last three Hanami parts and I have to admit, I just didn't know what emotion to hold onto.  I was pissed and wanted to slap the hell outta his momma asking dumb ass questions.  Bish YOU and my freakin' sperm donor are the reason why I hate YOU. I am totally confused on how she thinks that Rae has anything to do with why he singing IDFWY as a reincarnated Big Sean.  Then this new chick trying to play the innocent role.  Bish, you don't force your way into his circle and then claim you just wanna be friends.  I've known you for 2 minutes and you already trying to be real familiar.  Sounds like a set up if I ever heard one.  Yes Roto, keep your eyes and ears open.  Don't trust the chick, don't trust the chick.  His parents, mostly his momma can see how Rae is innocent and think it is the innocence that Emi didn't have that attracts Roto when no Bish, it is her personality and the fact she doesn't WANT anything from him but him.   Ya know, being real, keeping it 100.  Instead you sending people who have hidden agenda's, he can see thru that.

And when I got to the last one and he shared just how low down dirty SOB's his parents actually are.  12, 12, seriously 12 and to send him to be violated like that.  I was wishing for an Oz remake with the house falling on that witch.  OOOO, my BP went sky high.  Lawd, I wanna whoop some ass and use that darn Kendo sword to do it.

Great writing.



Author's Response:

*falls off bed laughing* lajack1, you had me on the floor. I AM SO DONE. DONEEE I TELL YOU. BWAHAHAHAHAHAHHA. WOOO GIRL. YOU HAD ME FLAT OUT lol!!!! BWAHAAAA! Your review is like... everything like.... stop it lol!!! I love how real you keepin it~ <3 I agree with everything you've stated hehe. And girl I'd get me a bokken and join you too! BAM! Hiro was a baby and they made him do such disgusting things... UGH.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: April 13 2015

Title: Accordance

 I love this story and the teasers :).  I am just curious to Hiroto parent's goals?  I mean you want him to have sex with this girl for what?  Is this to marry her, then why not wait til marriage?  Doesn't she come across as a thot, sexing him for some money or position?  I mean did they expect for him to be happy with this?  Is this what happened between his mother and father and why continue the torture?  I really feel for Hiroto because yes, Rae was sent away by herself but it was out of protection and love while Hiroto has his parents presence in his life but he is subjected to greed, lies and poison.  I hope one day he can break free and your teaser gives me hope but I feel bad for the amount of heartbreak these two will endure.  

Ughh, they sold him for a month of the summer.  Really, really.  Ridiculous.



Author's Response:

hehe thank you lajack1 <3 You pose really good questions! What exactly is their gain and purpose for forcing his son to have sex with so many women??! Yes one day Hiroto shall be free but the cost for freedom in his life will be hard. Yeah his parents are disgusting. ABSOLUTE. 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: March 15 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 136]
Summary:

Dig

 

Avery "Hades" Jones is the number one producer in the metal and hardcore music game. She's more talented with any instrument she lays her hands on than most of the popular bands and every record she touches turns to gold.

Then why doesn't she have the respect she so rightfully deserves?

When her good friend Adam Nuro invites her to tour with his number one band to play with his band while featuring some of her songs, she hops at the chance.

But the opportunity presents more challenges than she was ready for, obstacles that threaten to break her.

Will Avery make her dreams come true? Will her adoptive band support her?

And what has been following them since day one?

 

Shout Out to Elizablu for the Banner



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Horror, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 23829
Read Count: 17737
Published: November 30 2014
Updated: February 14 2016


Title: Chapter 8: Old Black Crow

Whew, my mind is blown.  You have just turned this story up a notch and I can't wait to see what happens now. 

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Date: February 27 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Butterflies of Steel

Ohhh, so they have never, ever took it past a look.  Hmmm, things just got more interesting. 

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Date: December 03 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Only in Dreams

One word, Intense!

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Date: January 12 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Rumours of War

Wow, so she knew Adam was sleeping with other women but now it was in her face that it happened.  It is no longer over there, gray, it's Black and white.  I would sue Fader for assault and battery bitch and see how well you do on the inside for a month.  Happy they got their ass handed to them by the other members.  What the hell is Adam protecting her from.  He can't get mad when she turns to C.J. for comfort.  Wonder what went thru his mind to see them snuggled together, probably the same stuff that went thru her mind with him and the blond.  Think she may give into temptation one of these days with C.J.   

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 18 2014

Title: Chapter 2: Shut Up and Metal

Okay, it is interesting that they are each other's heart but yet they are not together.  I am not a metal head so this story will take me on an interesting and new journey.   Why do I think that CJ will become an issue as well as one of the women he may make love to will come to light.  I actually like to think that one of the other women will be someone Adam has seen consistently for needs met.  This will also hinder their relationship.  Why do I feel this tour will put their relationship thru some strain and if their feelings and hearts will survive.  This is me with evening imagination.  Looking forward to you expanding my horizons.



Author's Response:

Welcome to the ride! This is definitely going to be a huge test for Adam and Avery and it may push them into certain actions they may not like. We shall see what being on the road for two and a half months does for them. Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

He was a bad boy who was used to getting whatever he wanted.

She was the good girl who refused to bow down to his ways.

Together they clashed.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9292
Read Count: 10640
Published: December 01 2014
Updated: March 16 2015


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The argument

Darren and Natasha can get the deuces.  They both on some BS.  Darren wasn't giving Natasha the time of day until Callie said something and now he acting like she can do no wrong.  Please Darren get your life together.  She a bully because she won't let you nor Natasha disrespect her in any way.  Please let her go back to her gorgeous self, get her education and let them wallow in their own stupidity and let her start talking to another popular guy.  Let's see what Darren and Natasha say about that.  Please don't have her at the party and how the heck can she avoid Darren when they are in detention together.  Dumbass chick.  Ooooohhhh Darren and Natasha ticked me off this chapter.  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 17 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

haunted

Her eyes closed and she could see his face behind her eyelids. He was there smirking at her. He was in her blood, in her psyche taunting her and haunting her with every memory of every touch, every look.

The sound of his voice distorted, memories shifting and changing as they often do. Her hero, her love now her enemy and the one she loathes. He was out in the world while she was stuck in place.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1518
Read Count: 1038
Published: December 06 2014
Updated: December 06 2014


Title: Chapter 1: ghost.

Liked it.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 06 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Felicia Adams doesn't have a regular life. She's a single mother working two jobs trying to keep a roof over her and her son's heads. One of those jobs includes being a webcam girl. She does it all for guys who are too shy to meet girls in reality, from harmless flirting to sexual acts. She then meets Andrew Harper, the sexy mysterious billionaire. Andrew just can't keep a girlfriend. His dates are selfish gold diggers, and all they want is to shine in the spotlight. All he wants is a girl to one day marry, he can't possibly find a wife on Virtualdates.com, right?




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9176
Read Count: 18817
Published: December 21 2014
Updated: April 08 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bish please, he don't want you.  IDFWY theme song playing.  You'll probably try to bankrupt him in less than a year asking for stuff over and over again. 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Andrew gets a side eye for this chapter.  He was so protective of her with his assistant but pretty much sat on his hunches while this old pervert called her a whore.  Only a sex buddy and he condoned that crap b/c he didn't say anything.  He wouldn't of had to be forceful but say I am most definitely attracted to her but for more than the possibilities in the bedroom though we are in the beginning stages right now.  Now if she was to go anywhere with him, she will only be looked at like she is only a diversion before he settles down with the right one.  He just made his life that much harder and now she runs into assholy and bitchy after a brief interlude with madame bitchy.  She is going to leave Andrew in the dust and keep it moving.   When does she get her degree.  She was in her last year so she shouldn't have that many credits to complete and graduate.  Let her graduate and find a good job away from Andrew and his ilk. 



Author's Response:

Yep, Andrew isn't really a saint when it comes to money and business. But we'll see what happens in the next chapters.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 07 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary: Ginger Ross is a woman with a plan and that plan doesn't include any room for romantic entanglements. However, her plan undergoes some unique alterations when a fender bender causes her to cross paths with Jerry Medina, a widower who is trying to piece together a future vastly different than the one he had planned.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1092
Read Count: 1997
Published: January 17 2015
Updated: January 23 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Shop Talk

That felt like a teaser.  Want more?  What regrets?  He has 2 daughters, can't wait to meet them.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and more is coming. I finally figured out that the number of pages typed in my word processor is much less when posted online. That darn 16 point font fooled me good!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 23 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Fender Bender

Hmmm, let's see what he wants for reimbursement.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: January 17 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 44]
Summary:

Daniel has always been late for everything in his life. He's been late for puberty, dating girls, and even the "monkey in the bush". When he discovers his new neighbor next door is a woman, a very pretty woman, will he take a chance and ask her out? Or will his former bully, Nick Young, beat him to it?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 7978
Read Count: 10305
Published: January 23 2015
Updated: May 12 2015


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Okay, so Meela's mom is completely overbearing. She is talking to a gentlemen and you bring another man over.  I hope Meela doesn't just give in to her mother's pressures, especially after Daniel brought the courage and asked her out.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Okay, so Meela's mom is completely overbearing. She is talking to a gentlemen and you bring another man over.  I hope Meela doesn't just give in to her mother's pressures, especially after Daniel brought the courage and asked her out.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Okay, so Meela's mom is completely overbearing. She is talking to a gentlemen and you bring another man over.  I hope Meela doesn't just give in to her mother's pressures, especially after Daniel brought the courage and asked her out.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 10 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

sorry for the triplicate, had some trouble with computer and it decided to repeat the comment

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: February 10 2015

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[Reviews - 205]
Summary:

Not everyone gets a happy ending...

Hey guys,

Heart of Lies Book 1&2 have now been published under one of my pennames Alma Muerte.

FB Author page: Alma Muerte.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2951
Read Count: 32344
Published: January 27 2015
Updated: September 10 2015


Title: Heart of Lies

Arric is appearing very selfish right now.  His mating and having a son with another is doing nothing but causing her pain.  He doesn't want to listen to Thaddeus or anyone.  HE wants her home so she should be there.  I wish she would find someone to make love to and let her shields down so he can feel how she felt.  I hope there is someone who is truly 100% hers.  Hate that she doesn't have any options while he has many.  To feel an outcast in a place you thought was home, to feel loved and connected to someone who marries another and you FEEL them loving another and their happiness with the union directly.  I can't imagine Lyssa's pain.  Arric right now can go jump in a lake and drown for all I care at this point.  If he doesn't let her go, she will not be the person he remembers.

Now that you have mentioned one of my absolute favorite stories on here, please bring Maddy back.  Want to know if they make it for the long haul.

But back to the program at hand.  I am loving this and fascinated with how Arric thinks this is ok.  Lyssa is like I could give a damn about mating and wolves right now.  Bish I am a vampire.  Kiss my ass.

 



Author's Response:

Loved your review and I am working through the love-hate thing with Lovers' Dance at the moment, so hopefully I'll be back updating that story soon.

K.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28 2015

Title: Heart of Lies

I literally felt chills when I saw you updated because this story has me in a tight grip and I don't want it to let me go.  Goodness, if Soraya is his true mate why can't her wolf soothe him as it did before.  My question may be crazy but has he made love to Soraya since Lyssa has gone? If so, how come those times haven't soothed his beast to allow Lyssa to go free.  It seems something else is going on and Uncle knows.  I hope her uncle is okay traveling to these lands with this powerful coven.  I think if anything happens to her uncle is the day she might just die b/c so far he is her only solace.  By the way, how the heck old is her uncle?  Part of me wants Arric to suffer even more and part of me just wants Lyssa to have a HEA.  I don't know if that is Arric or not but if it isn't, I would be upset.

Thanks for the update.

 



Author's Response:

Hi Lajack1,

Can I just say I enjoyed the way you're thinking and the valid questions you asked. I understand your desire to see Arric suffer, considering the pain he has put Lyssa through. Chills? Gosh you made me smile with that. Thanks for reviewing.

K.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29 2015

Title: Heart of Lies

Oh no, please don't do it.  Don't let his actions dictate your life like this even though you are hurting.  Please bring Lyssa some peace.  So if Soraya isn't laying beside him, where is she?  What, now that he had a pup, is the wolf now wanting Lyssa again?  I am really curious to what the pack, his parents etc are saying about his behavior and Lyssa.  I know he stated "we miss you" speaking of the pack, do they really?  Shock to see he impregnated her first.  Sad that the baby didn't make it which makes it now triplely horrible for her.  I kinda hope she meets a decent vampire (if possible) and able to carry her own child.  i have no clue what direction you are going with this story but that makes it fascinating.  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.