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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 287628
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 24 pt 2

Awww, we are close to the end.  I can't wait until she runs towards Henry versus away and she really needs to break the hold George has on her b/c he could care less about her and is living his life without worries.  Have to agree with Madea:  you holding on to hurt and pain while the person who gave you the pain and hurt is living their life.  Too much power.  I hope Henry doesn't give up on her and start dating someone else because then she will be very hurt.

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Date: September 19 2015

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 77]
Summary:

For Jamie Watson, raising Alex was supposed to be a short time gig, a means to an end before starting her new life. But with it brings a type of love she never could have imagined with Alex's father Mitch. While caring for him brings them together, will doing what's best for him tear them apart? 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 20139
Read Count: 54768
Published: May 20 2013
Updated: October 25 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm sorry, you can cry all you want to.  That was a selfish act and you don't deserve to have forgiveness handed to you because you want it.   She should feel bad and feel remorse.  Then you will show up years later with a new husband and child you have been caring for.  Nawww, that is not cool.  Once you grew up, that was the time to find your child, not when she is about to be 23yrs old.  You would never be considered in the role of mother with her, poss in the future an, ya know what, I don't know.  Let  me get my math right.  You have been married for 10 yrs and have a 5yr old son, so you could have searched for her when she was thirteen or even when she was eighteen but nothing because of your guilt.  And thats what it is, her guilt kept her from being a grown ass woman and finding her child to make amends.  No, you are going to have to grovel for a long time for me especially when you have a family and living well, while I am attempting to work my behind off for mine.  Sorry, honey, no can do

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: October 03 2013

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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Hmmm, I am on the fence about Sasha going to his family dinner.  I think Dmitry needs her there for support in facing his father again vs the test to their relationship.  I also don't know what I want from him and his dad's relationship.  I wonder if his dad pushed him so hard because he was punishing him for his transgressions with Natalia.  Curious if his dad feels guilty about the affair with Natalia.  How the hell does Natalia know if their relationship was superficial.  What, because HE told you, did she have a conversation with the wife of the man she was sleeping with.  Why wouldn't he think she was a gold digger when she hasn't shown anything else to him.  YOU slept with a married man who had a child.  Even if you weren't thinking about the wife, what about the child.  You came in like a tornado and the next thing he knows is his mom is dad and he has two siblings etc.  Hell nawl, to a kid who is being pushed harder and harder everyday and his mom, who he adored is dead, bish you the enemy, period.  Stop trying to act like you didn't know.  Can't wait for next chapter, sequel, just everything.

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Date: August 02 2014

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

This meeting has brought closure to Sasha's past because she remembered how her mother treated her prior to her being given to the state.  It still hurts to know the one that helped give you life did not value your life so she must value her own.  I think she should forgive Dimitri and they can start dating.  Nothing too serious right now because he has his own demons to face, can we say sperm donator.  He needs to make sure he can be there 100% for her and has his own house in order if they are to build a solid foundation together.  This was her first level and now we need his.  Can't wait for more updates.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

I was soo excited to see another update and will be checking multiple times a day for another one* wink, wink*.  Curious to know if you will have them end up together or not.  I really feel like Sasha is beginning to learn about herself in the individual category and not a part of a friendship or relationship.  I think some reviewers are missing this was several weeks later and it is a cathartic experience for her, a turning point.  She owned up to her mistake when she spoke to him and apologized but yet didn't let him get away with how he spoke to her.  Regardless of how mad you are at me, you will RESPECT me at all times.  IDGAF about your anger, especially if you my man.  Oooohhh, would love if they came back into each others circles because she is like a top dog with a rival company and the boss is FOINE.  Everyone has different ways of coping and not everyone wants to sit and speak w/ a counselor.  Not every counselor is qualified to provide you with some insight.  Some individuals like to meditate, as simple as practicing positive thinking when you have soo many negative thoughts impeding your progress.  To each is own, I just want her to progress in a healthy way.  Sorry for the long review but I am LOVING it ( in my Micky D's slogan tone of voice)

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Date: December 18 2013

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

You know what, screw him and his wealth and messed up family.  She could do so much better.  Let her cry it out with Dina and Teagan and then let her get stronger.  Let her find her way and become successful and realize her self-worth.  When she deals with him or his family, how does the saying goes, Kill them with kindness.  I would not let any of them get underneath my skin reiterating how he is a non-factor in my life.  Realize she has survived all of these obstacles and remained successful.  He didn't know how to treat the jewel she was, I'm sorry IS or nurture her, let him keep hanging out with the b*#tches he was with before.  

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Date: November 18 2013

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Damn, Dimitri is putting it on her with the words and actions.  He is coming out swinging.  I like it.  He is the vulnerable one because it is her choice whether she returns to his arms permanently or leave him in the dust.  I do like Carter character as he provides her with sound wisdom and calm words.  He judges by what he see's and not what he is 100% told.  Now on to Slade and Dominic.  Honestly I don't want Dominic hurt.  I think he has been the most consistent and trustworthy of them all and for Slade to come back and poss win the girl would be a big insult to Dominic if he truly loves her.  How will  you manipulate their story so I don't hate Slade and ole girl. 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 27 2014

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

I have tears in my eyes about the ending of this fabulous story.  Wonderful chapter hell whole book.  You have really endeared me to Dimitri and I wasn't sure that was going to happen but he loves him some Sasha.  You have taken me through so many emotions I am sitting her like 😭😂😌😍a86;a039;😵😄

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Date: September 28 2014

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Actually I liked it because he was so vulnerable and showing her a side of himself she nor anyone else had ever seen made it seem real to me and probably sasha as well.  I think he will still have to continue to show her that he has changed but this opens up that possibility of having the CHANCE to do so vs her giving him the boot and him never being able to show her that he changed.  So I think it was right on time.  Will the sequel be about them or his friend Slade.  I would love to see how her and Dimitri turn out because he still has his demons to fight as she has conquered her final hurdle with her mom.  How will his Dad, step mom etc handle him with Sasha again.  Great chapter and love scene.  It wasn't too much or too little.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

I am going on a shopping spree for this holiday weekend to enjoy some good romance stories and I have added this to the list.  Love Sasha and Dmitry.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: November 25 2015

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[Reviews - 146]
Summary:

 

Quitting love is never easy; no matter the situation. That saying seems to follow Jake Ryder in the once vibrant form of Sierra Lewis. The cycle doesn't seem to stop, or maybe he just doesn't want it to.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: Impossible to Kill
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43800
Read Count: 20050
Published: June 08 2013
Updated: May 27 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Them.

I'm in agreement with Daddyprincess review. I think it would be good for Sierra to find someone new who won't throw her past in her face each time their is a disagreement or who she feels she has to constantly tiptoe around or kowtow to.  I like Maksim with her because I don't think he will ridicule her because of his past and will help her become a stronger person.  Who needs to be around people who don't want her to improve and will constantly remind her of her mistakes, just look at Finch's thoughts.  If they are thinking it, then their actions will begin to show that each time they hang out.  Everyone seems to forget for anyone it is always about perception, regardless of reality.  If you perceive someone won't understand that becomes your reality and Sierra's perception was completely off but it is what it is and everyone needs to either accept that as she is getting help or stay away and stunt her recovery.  Very good story pulling out all of our emotions and our On my way! perceptions.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28 2013

Title: Chapter 11: The Need to Know.

Okay, Finch was wrong, you do not tell business that isn't yours to tell.  Then he didn't even wait a day before blabbing his big mouth.  That is suppose to be your friend, hell naw, Jake was right, he wanted monica and she was obsessed with Jake so this way he gets her and if he does, I hope he feels guilty about it.  Yes, Jake screwed up but plenty of people in relationships have done worse and haven't fallen apart.  I am about tired of Everyone putting Sierra down.  Yes she was addicted to drugs and she did horrible things which people do when they are addicted to drugs and alcohol etc.  I want to see if she is trying to stay off of it which she did.  She went back to what was comfort in times of stress, again what we all do.  Don't we reach for that comfort food, routine or something if we are dealing with life issues.  She is trying to stop and never go back again, can someone provide her some damn support vs knocking her down every time she tries to stand up.  She needs to move out of that area because they will not let her forget her mistakes and that is the last thing she needs.  You don't want someone always bringing up your past mistakes that you have learned from, why do her that way.  She is going after Viktor because he has hurt her, Jake and now her last strongest supporter.  I still would like for her to be with Maksim because he won't judge her for her past.  All of them need Jesus.  Sorry for the rant but had to comment.  Good story.

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Date: March 08 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Them.

Monica is receiving hate because she spoke to Sierra not as Jake's friend but a jealous, insecure girlfriend.  Sierra has not been in contact with Jake since she got out of rehab so why are you in my face about his feelings.  You need to discuss this with yo man.  I don't have anything to do with that,  and all this drama is not good for me trying to recover and find myself.  I am so happy Sierra told her what she said, because the bottom line is I hurt myself more than anyone else including Jake.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading lajack1!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: September 03 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 64]
Summary:

 

10 years went by in the blink of an eye. Now eveyone was gathered in a tiny town for there highschool reunion. Sparks will fly as old 'friends' meet again.

Then enters two guys who have come with the intention of wooing the one girl they shouldnt have let go of in the first place. The only problem is there after the same girl.

On this unlevel playing field where hurt, love and jealousy run wild everyone is playing for keeps



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15228
Read Count: 10427
Published: June 22 2013
Updated: November 16 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Reunion

Oh, ho waiting for the reunion, please update,  already hooked

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: June 22 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Reunion

I don't even know how to express in words right now.  Absolutely loved it, just straight when FLOTUS on they ass and left like a Boss.  Take that.  I'm just smiling and crying.  She made me soooo proud.



Author's Response:

Lol. It's something i want to do in real life. She is the Boss and she is going to continue to kick there asses. Figurativly of course.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: June 25 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 189]
Summary:

An innocent night of fun ruins the lives of two people who realize they are screwed without each other but especially with each other.

 

"My body is your party"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 44180
Read Count: 56975
Published: July 07 2013
Updated: October 04 2013


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Maybe I am sadistic but I would like her to find out about her family and become a new breed of cold-hearted bitch and take out his mom and uncle.  The meeting with his mom should come after she has more of a sense of self-worth or something, where I feel she won't be intimidated.   But keep it coming, can't wait for more



Author's Response:

You're reading my mind ;)

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: July 30 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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What happens when a werewolf refuses to follow his nature,does his wolf take full control or will the human side win the battle of wills...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Family, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 10355
Read Count: 3509
Published: July 13 2013
Updated: September 08 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please continue,  I would really, really like to see how their relationship goes from this animosity to hopefully love.  Laughing at the wolf.  I can just imagine he's like " Nora, who?"

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, I like your take on the wolf, he knows what he wants. Alex is Alex...Lol. I will update in a few days, busy changing a few things.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: July 13 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 353]
Summary:

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Paris finds herself on a deserted highway out of gas.  Little did she know that her life would be forever changed after that.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways, Love In Hard Times
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 558
Read Count: 82568
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: August 27 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story has brought tears (happy) to my eyes.  It is a wonderful read that I could see myself reading over and over.

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 16 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 26]
Summary:

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God forbid you be an ugly girl, 'course too pretty is also your doom, 'cause everyone harbors a secret hatred for the prettiest girl in the room.


Ani Difranco



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles , General
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3076
Read Count: 3536
Published: July 22 2013
Updated: July 22 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Who's Listening...

Thank you for the words "irrelevant and useless", because there is beauty in all shades.  As a mother of 2 girls who have completely different skin tones and facial features, I want them both to feel beautiful and secure despite media definition of so called "beauty". Thank you for addressing this in a classy and tasteful way without the bashing of other skin tones.  I'm just jelly of the booty, I don't have :(.  Sorry for the long review.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: July 22 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 48]
Summary:

Roddrick Kennedy likes to think that a strong dose of worrying is good for her health, and keeps her in control of her life. When she finds herself taking on everyone and their problems, she sees that maybe she should turn her attention to herself every once in a while. When Milo Vitale comes along to teach her how life can be stress free, she discovers herself in for a whirlwind of change as he helps to flip everything upside down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Femslash, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 58790
Read Count: 46505
Published: July 23 2013
Updated: February 28 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww Milo, you den messed up now.  You dealing with a woman you don't want who has jacked up your chances with a woman you do want.  How are you going to convince her you were serious.  Might as well move on buddy because she is not going to give you the time of day.   Look how much work you had to put in for her to show up at the bar.  Boy that deserves the mama hit upside the head move right there.  I mean bringing it back from around the world and SMACK right in the back of the head.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

There's Milo baby.  Whew loved it.  Awe he was serenading her.  But okay she hasn't figured out yet after 3 mos why she is having cravings or getting bigger etc.  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 26 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay, you are back with this story.  I really want to see how Milo is going to break thru that wall Roddrick has about men because of her father and Brian.  Plus, doesn't his family realize the smothering only makes him want to escape more and is Lauren really comparing Roddrick to that skank that sunk Milo so low?  C'mon now.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 21 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I absolutely love Milo.  He is just too adorable when it comes to Roddick.  He is immature and from reading the story, the only relationship he has had was very toxic.  Hope they can become friends and share before going further.  Can't wait until they both realize they are living in the same building.  Ooohhh maybe they will be next door neighbors.   That would be nice.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 21 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please continue, I think things are about to heat up, can't wait to see how this dinner goes.  Ooohhhhh so looking forward to the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: July 28 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 88]
Summary:

Can a beauty ever truly love a beast?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 15551
Read Count: 72082
Published: August 04 2013
Updated: October 19 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's funny how everyone is mad at her and yelling when they didn't explain anything to her.  How do you expect her to do the appropriate action or believe you when you all look like liars to her now.  

Anyway, very interesting read and it has captured my attention to want to read more.  I would add a quick review before posting to make sure some words are how you would like it to appear/read.  I know if you type on these darn iPads and things that word correction stuff will drive you cray cray.

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: August 06 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.