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Summary:

Not everyone gets a happy ending...

Hey guys,

Heart of Lies Book 1&2 have now been published under one of my pennames Alma Muerte.

FB Author page: Alma Muerte.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2951
Read Count: 32344
Published: January 27 2015
Updated: September 10 2015


Title: Heart of Lies

Hahaha, the joke is on Arric and his wolf.  Punk wolf fell for the oldest trick in the book instead of remaining steadfast to his "true love" and now your behind is mated to the wicked witch.  Yes, you have a son but have lost your heart and soul.  Hmmm, was it worth it?  Hell nawl, Lyssa isn't coming back.  You have broken her down and she no longer wants to be associated with a beast who cannot control his urges b/c that is what it sounded like to me.  That euphoric feeling you described was felt by her and I can't get over that and I'm only reading it.  

Now I loved her uncle in this chapter because he was like "yeah, I appreciate all of your help but I'll be damned even more if I bring her home to this bullshit 3 ring circus y'all got going on here.   Boy, man up or sit your ass down somewhere."  They are concerned for their people and son and not for Lyssa despite calling her "our".  Lyssa and Arric was Odin's true wish and he went against it so now Arric you must reap what you sow and handle being in pain and misery.  Go back and screw Soraya for you have probably lost Lyssa.

Still funny how his wolf was like "noooo, I want the other one.  Bish get back, step away from the cage."

As always a wonderful chapter full of emotion and angst.  I did feel a smidgen bad for Arric but then it went away.  a86;a039;

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03 2015

Title: Heart of Lies

My girl was like "thanks for helping me but dude be gone now, your services are no longer needed."  This was an opening he was waiting for and he is not about to let her go.  I do think she needs to return to the pack but I am unsure about her position as well.  She is not Lupa and will never be so what is there for her.  Is there a vampire male who she can mate with and give her the proper position.  We all know, once she returns she will be subjected to Soraya attempting to exert her authority over her every day.  Part of me could understand Soraya's jealousy but honestly she knew from the beginning that he was Lyssa's and she thought her seductive wiles and wolf would bring him to heel at her feet but it didn't so a part of it is, you reap what you sowed.  Eventually Lyssa and Soraya will have to fight and I am not thinking Soraya would be a winner unless Lyssa doesn't want to end her b/c of the pup.

Can't wait until he catches her. ;)

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04 2015

Title: Heart of Lies

You know what I find interesting about your story is the parallels to real life in because he is a Lycan and she is a Vampire they are NOT suppose to be together and he should be with his kind and her with her kind but not taking into the fact that they LOVE each other despite those differences.  That is like saying a black woman and an asian man can't be together or any different races, we must stick with our own kind despite the love they could share.  Arric and Lyssa communicate, they teach each other, they are there for each other no matter what (thick and thin), they touch each other souls and not just the body, it isn't JUST sex.  Everyone has messed with their love for their own selfish reasons and then want them to be HAPPY about it.  His so called wolf queen manipulated his wolf to get a child and then expect him to be happy to be with her.  Eros and Annabelle USED her love of Arric to get her to agree to be a receptacle for Eros and now he wants her to SMILE at being used.  Like are you for real.  No, everyone is using their love for each other (Arric and Lyssa) in selfish ways and 2 people are hurting to the high heavens because of it.  So no, Eros doesn't get to be a love interest just like Arric's wolf queen doesn't either.  Why should they receive the love that they so callously hurt and tossed aside.  I hope that she doesn't fall in love with Eros and I hope Arric doesn't sleep with his wolf queen and have any more children and somehow they do end up together, even if it is in the afterlife because after all of this, THEY DESERVE IT! Everyone else and that includes her uncle can go jump in the lake as they say.

Sorry I just got real emotional about this.  Great story.j

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 21 2015

Title: Heart of Lies

It's kinda sad that for her entire existence she is to trust no one.  That feels like a lonely existence and this is what her sire wanted for her.  It was okay when the wolves protected his behind but now, no.  I don't understand her uncle and honestly I don't see her and Arric returning to anything close to what they were.  This new dark side and need for treachery and deceit it seems will place a wedge between them.  I am still not a fan of Eros because at this point, he is forcing her to his bed.  She has conceived and that was the true intent of the covenant so I wouldn't fall for him regardless that I carried his child.  I'll be that cold blooded bish.  At this point, she doesn't have anyone to trust only the Arric's beta who hasn't done anything to her.  We gotta go to the bottom of the barrel...hahaha

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Date: August 13 2015

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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

He wasn't Romeo and She wasn't Juliet. However it was a Love Story Nonetheless.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8126
Read Count: 2137
Published: February 23 2015
Updated: February 23 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Beau Ryan

This just brought me to tears.  I was not imagining that end.  Heck, I loved Beau Ryan myself.  I'm bawling.  Wonderful short story.

Wonderful, touching story.

 

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Date: February 25 2015

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[Reviews - 15]
Summary:

 

He was always known as "Just Iwase Hiroto's friend." But if you dug deeper, you'd find that he was much more than that. 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 6153
Read Count: 3378
Published: March 16 2015
Updated: December 21 2019


Title: Chapter 1: introduction.

sounds like it will be an interesting ride.



Author's Response:

For sure lajack1! Tobu's introduction is up and running so I hope you will enjoy it!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 16 2015

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Summary:

Lynne and Saul had been married for 25 years when he committed the ultimate betrayal. Lynne attempts forgiveness, but memories from her past make it hard to do that.  She loves Saul, but will she ever be able to trust him enough to take him back?  And when a new man enters her life, will she even WANT to?

 

This is a new version of the story I started earlier this month. In a comedy of errors I deleted the original version from my hard drive AND The Chamber.  I was depressed for a minute, but took it as an opportunity to re-work the story.  So here is the new, and hopefully improved, story.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 17066
Read Count: 48065
Published: March 19 2015
Updated: April 05 2015


Title: Chapter 8: The kids are NOT alright

Wow, that was some heartfelt, strong, emotional daggers his kids threw at him?  Cam asked some tough questions?  What was so special about Alicia that you threw away 25yrs of marriage, your family away for?  I'm interested in that answer myself.  A true, honest internal reflection from Saul on really, why did he continue to do it after the conference.  Loved Mal's words to him.  He basically called his dad selfish and that he never considered how anyone else would be impacted by this until now because stuff went to hell in a hand basket.  Part of me want Lynne to divorce Saul because I think for him to truly get it, he has to really lose her,  I feel like Saul is banking on the woman that Lynne was before this and the love she has for him to pave his way to forgiveness vs putting in work, true honest to goodness we down on the railroad tracks for 14 hr days work.  Working to get her back when she isn't tethered to you and others recognize her worth is different than attempting to get her to forgive when you know as long as she is "married" to you, she won't actively be with someone else.  Did Saul not think, what would I feel like if the shoe was on the other foot?

Oh and Saul the crying right now feels like a little to late to make a difference in any of your families lives.  Matter of fact where is Saul's family?  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29 2015

Title: Chapter 15: Cause and Effect

Hold up, wait a minute, dumbass Saul about to put his foot in it.  He sitting here thinking "may have, may have" been behind Lynne's attack, nah dude, she WAS behind Lynne's attack.  This isn't conjecture, the perp spilled the beans.  How many dudes would attack your ex-wife at her place of employment for how many years all of a sudden with no attempt at robbing or sexual aggression and know the name of your fuck buddy.  He need to wake up and smell the Folgers in his cup because this chick is crazy and at this point you have lost any chance of Lynne taking you back.  Maybe in 60 yrs when you both old and gray, and your little wiener can't get it up no more.  

I enjoyed Malcolm's character in these last two chapters because it reflected his maturity level and about focusing on whose the most important.  Lynne which should have been at the forefront of Saul's thoughts from the beginning and this wouldn't be happening because he would have never slept with said chick and gotten her hopes up.  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04 2015

Title: Chapter 2: The Call

Well S-H-I-T just hit the fan.  Wow, just wow.  Sorry about your story being deleted from the hard drive and on valentchamber but I must say your muse came out swinging in these first 2 chapters that I am hooked and will be checking daily for any and all updates.

Well Saul, you reap what you sow.  I love the fact that he has to not only face his wife after this betrayal but also his children and watch the disillusionment in their eyes about their father and that can be the worst for any parent who cares about their children to see.  Does Saul really think he can SAY anything that will improve this situation.  That he can TALK his way out of this.  Seriously Saul, saying sorry isn't going to cut it.  As the infamous line by Halle Berry " Love, should've brought your ass home".  I hope in this story line they still get a divorce because at this time, I don't feel he is sorry.  If he was, he would've told her what happened after the first time instead he was NEVER going to say anything.  

Can I say I loved how Lynne gave him the hands and how she shut Alicia down quick.  Oooohhhh Saul, you just lost a real woman for a thot.   "shakes head while sticking tongue out saying oooooooo, you in trouble".

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20 2015

Title: Chapter 2: The Call

Well S-H-I-T just hit the fan.  Wow, just wow.  Sorry about your story being deleted from the hard drive and on valentchamber but I must say your muse came out swinging in these first 2 chapters that I am hooked and will be checking daily for any and all updates.

Well Saul, you reap what you sow.  I love the fact that he has to not only face his wife after this betrayal but also his children and watch the disillusionment in their eyes about their father and that can be the worst for any parent who cares about their children to see.  Does Saul really think he can SAY anything that will improve this situation.  That he can TALK his way out of this.  Seriously Saul, saying sorry isn't going to cut it.  As the infamous line by Halle Berry " Love, should've brought your ass home".  I hope in this story line they still get a divorce because at this time, I don't feel he is sorry.  If he was, he would've told her what happened after the first time instead he was NEVER going to say anything.  

Can I say I loved how Lynne gave him the hands and how she shut Alicia down quick.  Oooohhhh Saul, you just lost a real woman for a thot.   "shakes head while sticking tongue out saying oooooooo, you in trouble".

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Mama Say

I am having a hard time feeling anything for Saul because I actually don't feel like he really regrets having sex with Alicia.  Idk, I feel like it was great sex and therefore that was why he did it but I still love you Lynne.  Like he compartmentalized his actions and can't grasp the severity of the situation.  As Lynne feels, this wasn't a one off thing, he continued and that showed lack of respect and love for his marriage, wife and family.  I loved her friend saying, Saul threw the love away when he slept with that other woman.  Yesss, Lynne don't feel obligated to stay because it wasn't you, it was Saul and he has to live with the consequences.  A lost wife, lost love of his life and a crazy stalker chick.  

I really want him to see the disillusionment in Mal's eyes and hear his son tell him that he doesn't want to be the man that his father is.  Wonder how he will feel hearing that.

so happy it's back and can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

I think you said it just right.  Saul compartmentalized the sex with Alicia and his feelings for his wife and family in order to give himself permission to continue to have sex with Alicia.  The evidence of that is that he keeps saying "it was just sex".  I think a lot of men can separate sex and love quite easily.  It's why the "it was just sex" or "she didn't mean anything" excuse is always used when men cheat. The problem is that a lot of women DON'T separate sex and love.  It's a package deal, so when their men cheat it means something more to the women they cheat on.  That's the type of woman Lynne is...she doesn't separate sex and love.  Because of this, Saul is going to have long, rocky road to forgiveness.  And even if he GETS forgiveness, it doesn't mean he's going to get his wife back.

As far as Saul and his kids?  The way they feel about him now is going to lay him LOW...especially after a confrontation with Mal.  That's coming up soon.  Thanks for reading.

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: March 28 2015

Title: Chapter 13: The Age of the Cougar?

I feel bad that whatever is happening inside of Saul, that he has yet to truly delve into or address has caused him to lose his happiness.  Unfortunately he has been the cause of his own misery.  I still do not feel that bad that I want Lynne to take him back just yet.  I have a hard time with him sleeping with Alicia after the conversation with Lynne and she brought up a divorce.  If Lynne finds that out, I think it will really be no way to come back from that for Lynne.  Malcolm seems cool but Lynne seems very mature and Malcolm appears a little young in his actions so it would be interesting to see how the romance plays out.  Plus Malcolm doesn't have any children and does he want any?  I like the pace of Malcolm and Lynne being friends first.

I feel like we are going to learn something in Saul's past that has caused him to self-destruct after 25yrs.  You don't go from being happily married to cheating overnight.  I sense a trigger somewhere that we don't know about yet.  Looking forward to how you redeem Saul's character.  He might be the more interesting of the two to read about actually (Shhh, keep that on the DL).



Author's Response:

Malcolm is little boyish, but I don't think he's immature.  I think he's intimidated by Lynne.  She makes him nervous, and that might explain some of his actions.  I think Saul having something in his past that triggered his current behavior is an interesting one.  Once he gets serious about therapy, we'll learn more about his past and how it affected his present.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: April 02 2015

Title: Chapter 14: Blood and Tears

betcha that bish ass Alicia had something to do with this.  Even more reason why Saul will feel guilty as hell for bringing this cray cray chick into Lynne and his kids life.  If he would have kept his little penis in his pants versus trying to get it inside a chick, this would not be happening but ya know what, God always has a plan and this happened for a reason.

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03 2015

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Summary:

Lia Mariani and Dominic MacCleod were two up and coming leading actors who'd met on set and immediately struck up a friendship.  As the friendship blossomed, they both realized they'd fallen in love with each other.  They were just two chickenshit to admit it because of the differences in their races and his families outdated ideas about black people.  HER parents were afraid of their daughter getting hurt if Dominic decided to bow to the pressure of his families disdain for Lia.  

And hiding in the shadows is a man obsessed with possessing Lia.  Will these outside forces bond them together or tear them apart?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:No
Word count: 40900
Read Count: 72175
Published: April 01 2015
Updated: May 26 2015


Title: Chapter 10: Evil Has a Name

Oh crap!!!  They need to do some serious investigating of this dude.  Lia betta walk around with some mace, taser and a knife because she gonna need all three on this sicko.  Dude, she don't know you nor does she want you.  How has his mental illness gone undiscovered for any length of time.  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Four Angry Men

Yesss, Mimi, thank you.  Recognizing this dude is coocoo for a cocoa woman.  Call the police, get a restraining order, keep seamus nearby and again some mace, taser etc on hand.  Never get into an elevator alone with him, check the peephole in the door before opening it for anyone and before leaving your apartment.  Again:  Warning should be plastered across his door: This dude is crazy, stay away.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: April 13 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Shaking Hands with the Devil

If that didn't wake her up to have this guy investigated and to never, eva, be around him alone, I don't know what it.  Who gets mad at an engagement ring and darn near stop all circulation in her hand. 

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Date: April 13 2015

Title: Chapter 23: Mending Fences Part 1

Donal need to divorce her ass.  He deserves someone who loves him and is only using him as a stand in for his brother.  What kind of BS is Irene smoking.  There was something more in her Irish Coffee than whiskey.  He didn't want you, get over it.

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Date: May 24 2015

Title: Chapter 24: A Reprieve From the Insanity

Now I actually feel doubly bad because Donal is or I can at least hope WAS in love with this chick and she prayed on that.  My goodness, does Donal have self esteem issues since his brother seems to be the good looking guy or something?  Does he think he isn't worthy of someone loving ONLY him?  Whew, a mess is exactly right and she has brought children into this sordid BS.  Can I be in the line to whoop Irene's a** behind the other four.  So they don't go to jail, I'll just hop into the story as a non-descript character, whoop her behind and then leave...no one will ever have to know it was me.

I think I would love a conversation between Donal and Dom about their wives and everything that has happened.  They're brothers, aren't they close like Gio is with his fam?

Great update again.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 26 2015

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 71]
Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

Zaira Jacobs and Eli Jacobs (her son) runs away from their past, from the pain, and from a 6 foot 4 German (Adrian Hitzag).

 

However, Adrian is not too eager to let his beloved mate escape from his grasp.

 

Follow the story of a determine mother, a curious son, and a possessive German.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 24066
Read Count: 29457
Published: April 01 2015
Updated: January 07 2016


Title: Chapter 5: The Calm before the Storm [4]

Why do men think that crap is sexy?  Do not come at me and touch me without my expressed wishes.  Zaira trying to keep herself safe has just ran into the hands of the enemy and I hope Colin retains enough sense not to touch her himself.  How would he feel if it was his made in Hitzag hands? 

Good chapter.  Can't wait until they reunite.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 22 2015

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 3]
Summary:

DON'T (The Urban Girl Book 2) by [Griffin, Elizabeth]

NOW AVAILABLE  WWW.ELIZABETHGRIFFIN.NET



Table of Contents
Categories: Books
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 12300
Read Count: 9720
Published: April 03 2015
Updated: May 13 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, Tarah a lil' hot momma.  I feel bad for Kimberly because she feels she can't talk with anyone.  Hope she gets help plus I think Dana would have her back no matter what.  The opposite is that would probably pull Dana further away from boys, thinking of her sister and best friend.  It will take a patient man to win Dana's trust and love.  Let me know when you publish so I could buy, just on these chapters alone.



Author's Response:

Hi Lajack1,

I am glad that you are enjoying DON'T.  I am posting another installment.  I hope you keep reading.  My books are currently available as ebooks on www.bn.com; www.amazon.com; www.amazon.co.uk; www.smashwords.com;itunes and www.kobo.com.

Thanks for the support.

Elizabeth Griffin

www.elizabethgriffin.net

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 11 2017

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[Reviews - 76]
Summary:

Her mistake was underestimating his obsession with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 24639
Read Count: 35206
Published: April 23 2015
Updated: July 14 2016


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter two

And why do I feel that after he drops her off at home he will return for blond chick for the evening.  If I was Maya, I would have to put on the breaks because 1) he invited you and some chick is hugging up on him and he didn't have a problem with it 2) You've known him for 2 minutes with a general background check and he is already going past first base 3) He is just too plain mature, on a whole nother level than Ms. Maya and I think she will be swimming with the sharks when she should stay with the dolphins.

Let's see how he goes from a gorgeous, sweet God to an avenging angel.

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: April 25 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter one

great start!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23 2015

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Summary:

Despite the absurdity of bargaining with the Almighty while topless and bound in the bedroom of a man whose last name she can’t remember, Diya De la Roy gives God an ultimatum:  Send her a man and a love worth having by next Valentine's Day, or she would give up on both.  Forever.  

Unbeknownst to Diya, she'll get that and more, along with a lesson in how perfectly wicked divine humor can be.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13212
Read Count: 10598
Published: May 02 2015
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - All a Part of His Plan

Hahaha, that was a great read.   Boy, oh boy, them dates she had with the bachelors was too much.  When that man said recycled water, I was like oh no.  I would have ran out the door as well.  I kept thinking of all the women he kissed.  Ewwww.   If I ever get a divorce, I will be alone for the rest of my life, too afraid to even think about dating in this world right now.

Whew.  God doesn't send you what you want, He sends you what you need and He doesn't care about the outside packages.

 



Author's Response:

Exactly.  Thanks Lajack1!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2015

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Summary:

Working as a Home Health Aide and struggling to make ends meet. All Aries Washington wanted to do was prove the child she had three years ago, was in fact the son of Cameron Marino. She didn't have any delusions about them putting their differences aside and falling madly in love. Why would she? Cameron was engaged to her ex best friend Ambrosia, A.K.A Ms. Perfect. So imagine her surprise when he not only demands she moves in with him, but marry him too.

Aries had no idea that once she gave birth to her own little Marino, that, that meant she automatically belonged to the whole Marino family. With a group of people who take their strong family ties seriously, she's about to find out that once your in, there's no out. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Marino Family
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 19092
Read Count: 49458
Published: May 14 2015
Updated: June 01 2015


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

As I read this chapter all I could think of is, What kind of mom does Ambrosia have?  Why didn't her mom say anything to her when she dropped out of college?  Isn't her mom a doctor?  Goodness, Ambrosia, you never give up your opportunity to be independent based upon trying to trap a man.  That in and of itself is a plan for potential failure and pitfalls.  Realized, she cant' cut her losses because she put all of her eggs into the Marino basket.  What can she do but go psycho like she is about to.  This man you have slept with since you were 16 is a pedo and needs his behind beat and you know he isn't leaving his wife.  You are the side chick like your dad messes with.  She made my head hurt.

Now I am not too fond of Cameron either.  He knew the torture and hell Aries was going thru and didn't defend her at all when he was just as much a part of the "mistake" and slept with her.  A grown ass man and you couldn't stand up to Ambrosia.  Hell nawl, he would have some begging to do before I even consider him as anything other than this dude who happens to be my son's father.  So you know what, this is karma for him too, that Ambrosia was cheating on him b/c if that is indeed what he did, then hey, you deserve it also to be willfully blind to her mayhem that affected an innocent person.

Great story though and can't wait to read more.

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: May 17 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

This chick is straight loco.  Can we say coo coo, coo coo.  My God, the man nor his family members are not responding to your repeated calls.  He didn't leave you for Aries, he left you because he found out you were cheating and that all the miscarriages he mourned for may not have been his.  Girl, get your life together.  Aries just said, she didn't want any drama but I also believe Ambrosia doesn't realize the Aries from before is not the same Aries as now.  She has a child to protect and she will put those paws on you and have you laid out.  I soo hope she does.  Cameron still has some work to do.  I am not sure he is as over Ambrosia as he seems right now.  This is all hurt feelings, ego and pride right now.  What will he do when the dust settles?

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 01 2015

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