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Summary:

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Chance Gyllenborgh seems to have it all. A pregnant, loving girlfriend, a close knit family, and great life.

 

Angelina Walker is running. She's a top chef and restaurantuer and a workaholic. She throws herself into work to avoid her personal life. Needing a break, she settles down in a town and meet a variety of different people, including Chance.

 

Things seem great at first glance but Below The Surface is where monsters lie and sociopaths dwell.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 58269
Read Count: 47243
Published: May 21 2015
Updated: January 22 2016


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I'm a little iffy about Asgar and Denise.  I don't know.  If he wasn't a priest, I would feel differently but knowing about what he chose to do when he was an adult, I feel bad he is being tempted by Denise and honestly she appears flighty to me.  I love Chance and Angelina though.  I guess I am also sad her boy toy will be very hurt and that could weigh on Asgar as a Priest.  Hmmm, I'm waitng to see how you set their relationship if they do have one.....as grandma said, don't go putting the cart before the horse now.  LOL.  For a taste, it was very delicious.

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Date: January 18 2016

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[Reviews - 152]
Summary:

Appearances can be deceiving



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 26983
Read Count: 35574
Published: May 30 2015
Updated: June 13 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm really interested in Adele's next move at this point.  I had to delete my previous review and still give it some more thought after reading this story.  Will Adele be moved by his sweetly spoken words, begging when he really has taken the time to think about how his words from before affected her.  How will she analyze the meeting when he kinda kicked her to the curb for his position and now how she will be humiliated in a meeting with clients because she was purposefully not given all of the information.  There are so many other nuances than him liking her and her liking him.  It is also about how he views her as an exception vs the norm.  He had no problem downgrading he when he wasn't attracted to her and that is a problem.  Honestly, anything Gabe says or do will be looked at with a side eye if I was Adele.  You claim one thing but do another repeatedly.  I would also not stay in an environment and waste my talents and hardwork somewhere that will never give me the recognition I rightly deserve.  Why put myself thru that stress?  I would finish out my training and take my expertise to the competition and shine.  The best way to make these individuals take notice is to hit their pocketbooks.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 31 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This story has me continuously thinking about these two. 

First Adele:  I am soooo happy she is not staying at this firm.  Humphrey's words conveyed exactly what they thought of her and how she would be treated at the firm.  Go to another firm where she has a clear slate and her actions/knowledge/abilities can shine without any additional preconceived notions based upon past looks and commentary.  She was right to leave Gabe standing there looking dumbfounded. 

Second Gabe:  WTH!!  She was being nice to your behind and you just had to open your big ass entitled/white privilege mouth and inserted (I hope for future purposes) big foot right in.  Did you not hear anything she said to you in the car that night?  Did you not hear how dismissive Humphrey was about her skills?  Are you seriously telling me he would stay in a position with a company that he would not get the respect he has earned or deserved?  I don't believe that BS for one minute.  If the shoe was on the other foot, he would be talking to Mommy and Daddy trying to start him up with his own firm.  He has yet to wake up, understand and acknowledge how the commentary he made helped shape her experience with the firm.  Lo and behold, it was ALL ABOUT GABE AND THE PERCEPTIONS HE WANTS TO PORTRAY to the management team versus ANY CARE ABOUT HER SPIRIT/EMOTION/JOY.  He gonna have to get it together and have a coming to Jesus moment before I begin to like him. 

Third Max:  Please don't let him be gay because I will take him in a heartbeat.  Just write me on in to the story and I will befriend Adele, we can hang out together as long as we was going home together.  :)

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: June 04 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I keep reflecting on your title Good Fit? and I wonder how will Gabriel become a good fit for her because at this stage he needs improvement.  Adele has gone thru her metamorphosis earlier than expected maybe but she has grown and is very realistic in her view of life and what she wants to accomplish and Gabe seems still viewing things thru entitlement glasses.  Some of the glare has been erased but he still has so much more to go before removing those glasses and having Lasix eye surgery to see things a lot clearer.  I really want to see you take us on his journey to becoming a good fit for Adele if he ever does.  Curious if he will speak with his father or mother about his feelings and relationship with Adele and if they can enlighten him anymore.  Also, why hasn't he spoken to Max?

Oh, thank you for sharing a cultural tradition.  That was a wonderful ceremony.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 06 2015

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Rick and Michonne venture out together on a seemingly simple supply run. A one-shot filled with surprises for all Richonne fans. Rating M . WARNING: Heavy sexual content. Make sure to leave your kids.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Michonne
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3125
Read Count: 2405
Published: June 04 2015
Updated: June 04 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was good.  I liked it



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 04 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 210]
Summary:

Part 2



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 11288
Read Count: 21777
Published: June 09 2015
Updated: October 05 2015


Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

Yay!!! It is back, I am sooo happy they are back.  I really am rooting for a HEA between these two but at this time I don't think Madi has the backbone to deal with Matt's family and honestly I don't think Madi is ready for marriage.  She needs plenty of counseling because her need to be loved has stemmed from her parent's death and the horrible treatment from her relatives that she is emotionally stunted to some degree.  I hope Matt understands that and allows her time to grow while in their relationship. 

Ooooohhhh I hope whatever plans Matt's parents have in store backfire.  How utter ridiculous that they concern more about their status than their son's happiness and the person who brings them joy.  I could understand if Maddie had been disrepectful, loud, obnoxious etc but she hasn't been any of those things.  You can tell she is kind, caring and a sweetheart which tells me that his mom whole statement about not being racist was BS.  You dismissed her qualities because she is black. 

Wonder what rollercoaster ride you will take us on during this sequel.



Author's Response:

Hi Lajack1,

You are so right with Madi being emotionally stunted, but she tries. God love her, she tries. I hope part 2 is just as enjoyable as part 1 was. Fingers crossed I don't lose my mind and assinate all my characters in a tube accident :) 

Thanks for reviewing.

K.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09 2015

Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

Wow, Dante, you don't have to date someone for 5 years to know if they are the one for you.  I think this ceremony was great and it will always be remembered because it was just them.  When you love someone and care about their well-being everything else can be worked out and you LEARN how to compromise.  It doesn't happen overnight.  I actually think Matt will calm down now that Maddie has moved in and they are married.  I also hope Maddie talks to her counselor about her feelings of losing herself in Matt's life and maybe they should also do couples' counseling since Matt hasn't had any good role models regarding healthy, mutual loving relationships.  

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Date: September 03 2015

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Summary:

For all Richonne fans who are looking to work Jessie out of their sytem.  At the end of season 5 when Rick planted a peck on Jessie's cheek, I almost threw my TV out the window. Yeah, I didn't take it well. LoL! Anway, thank goodness for ValentChamber where I can work out my frustrations. Here is my way of erasing that imagery from my mind.  There is some Dasha too. Hope you all will like it and leave comments.

Thank you.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Michonne
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6393
Read Count: 6525
Published: June 13 2015
Updated: July 05 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: No One Gives a Fuck About You Jessie

Oooohhhh girrrllll, this was a 10 based upon the description alone.  I was soo pissed with that as well.  As I've stated before on another site, if Rick can't see the awesomeness of Michonne then they need to bring in a character for her to get close to.  Rick would lose his everlovin' mind if Michonne isn't there 100% for his damn kids and his ass.  How in da hell are you going to chose this weak, wounded ass chick who would get you and your kids killed versus the sexy woman who has had your back and kept your crazy ass from going off the deep end.   Whew don't get me started about that mess.



Author's Response:

I feel cheated. I so get what you are saying. I keep asking myself the same thing

 

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Date: June 14 2015

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Summary:

Nathaniel Hendricks lived alone in his lakehouse on Lake Michigan spending his days remebering the young son he tracgically lost and the wife who left him when he needed her the most. The only thing that kept him remotely happy was the lake he lived by boating and fishing. He already failed as a father and a husband so why would God give him another chance?

Eden Wilson spent most of her life running from abuse and now as a young adult she finds herself running from an obsessive abusive ex-boyfriend. Not wanting the child she's carrying to be in danger she spends most of her pregancy running until she tries to get in contact with her uncle for help. Eden finds herself with her uncle's friend a lonely handsome man Nathaniel who gives her shelter in a snowstorm. 

Little did either of them know how close the baby would bring them together or how much this little bundle of joy would help them learn about secound chances.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 28561
Read Count: 36737
Published: June 16 2015
Updated: June 14 2016


Title: Chapter 7: JANUARY 29TH 1990

I truly hope Solomon can bring peace, possibly by helping to remove all obstacles in the way of his happiness like Walter, Curtis and Wendy.  I really do not understand Wendy.  Why ask for your dead child's things when you have so called moved on.  Why can't your rich, have it all husband buy new items.  Walter, why do you want your son to have hand me downs with your snobbish behind.  This is just another way to attempt to hurt Nathaniel who has done nothing wrong to either of you.  Karma will definitely, I hope be a bish to all of them, I hope.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 12 2015

Title: Chapter 9: CAST

Dang, Nathaniel looks fine...forget Walter scrawny looking self...LOL

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Date: July 21 2015

Title: Chapter 10: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

How did Curtis find her so quickly with the snow just now melting?  Did someone point him in her direction?  What is Wendy about to do as she see's Nathaniel getting over her and getting close to Eden b/c regardless of how she left him, she doesn't want to see him with another woman and ol' boy just wants Nathaniel to suffer b/c he knew he was second best.  Wendy chose Nathaniel first.  Wonder how he is about to impact her uncle's job. 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: July 21 2015

Title: Chapter 11: FEBRUARY 23RD 1990

No Wendy, it's called " God doesn't like ugly". Which you have been displaying for a long time while Nathaniel has been treated unnecessarily harsh by everyone and when she gets put into her place, the rest of these wishy washy townies should get it too.  How do you believe negative of Nathaniel when Wendy cheated on him, divorced him and had a kid before any papers were signed who was clearly not Nathaniel's, how is he the bad guy again?  Ignorant folks just like my grandma would say.

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Date: July 25 2015

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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Athena works for an undercover agency, but all she does is sit behind a desk and hack into people's accounts. So when Archie, an agent who loses his brother in a shootout askes Athena to go undercover with him to find his brother's killer, she's a bit hesitant.

How will Athena survive going undercover and "befriending" some of the most dangerous criminals in the city?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2265
Read Count: 495
Published: June 18 2015
Updated: June 18 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Operation: Find Andy

Happy Birthday!!!  I wondered if Archie is crushing on Athena then I thought would he want to put the girl he is crushing on out in the field with no experience to possibly get killed.  I mean him and his brother were skilled people and they got hurt.  I won't say his brother is killed until you produce a body.  So I would like to hear from Archie's perspective on why he wants Athena. What can she do for him?  Feel kinda sad for Tasha when a man who is severely injured still tries to get away from you.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 18 2015

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[Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Who knew Montana had so many temptations?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 5577
Read Count: 4782
Published: June 21 2015
Updated: June 23 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Yasss!!! Get it Camille.  I say the more the merrier.  Why does a woman in a book only  have to have one man. Let her get her lovin' on.  I can't wait to see how Adam will handle her.  Whoooo, I need a shower from all of my imagining's.  LOL.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 23 2015

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Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 35
Completed:No
Word count: 211092
Read Count: 71040
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 08 2020


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - T.M.I. (Revised)

I don't know where I have been and why I haven't read this so far but I have to say I think Brandon was unfair to ask Diya about Marisol calling him at that time of night.  You are in a relationship and understand you wouldn't want a man regardless of friend to call her during a time that's reserved for you two.  So hell yeah, tell Marisol to stop calling and break that chain she is attempting to wrap you up in.  She can go to the store and purchase some Melatonin, benadryl to get her behind to sleep.  Hell go the aromatherapy route with some lavender, chamomile, bish you can even do sleepytime tea...you do not need to hear the sound of his voice to get your ass to sleep.  That is done for and she should have known better and been respectful of the relationship.  Obviously from the previous chapter, she is aware he really likes her if he introducing her as his Girlfriend....the former hit it and quit it king.

Now who is this woman that is still causing him so much anguish and if I was Diya, we gonna need some counseling b/c I don't have time to put effort into this relationship and this chick reappears then you waltzing away with her.  That much anguish still present, feels like strong feelings are still involved.  I understand the reticence in speaking about it to her this early in the relationship but the voice.  Hmmmm.



Author's Response:

Lol @ your extensive list of insomnia remedies.  Brandon wasn't asking for Diya's permission to continue the late night calls so much as he was "asking" Diya to trust him.  Now, whether Marisol is an innocent just doing the same thing as she and Brandon have always done remains to be seen.  And yes, Brandon's feelings are still very much affected by what happened with his ex.  Whether that's the extent of it will become clearer as the story progress.  Thanks Lajack1!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 17 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Missing Pieces

So it is looking like it was his brother who impregnated the girl he was in love with and the way Tyler acted, it appears it was done maliciously and intentionally.  What kind of family does he belong to.  Whew girl you about to take us on a bumpy road, you can't deny it, I already called Ms. Cleo and she told me I better take my heart medicine for this one.



Author's Response:

Lol! Brandon's burdened by some very interesting family dynamics.  They are...let's just say Ms. Cleo didn't steer you wrong.  Thanks Lajack1!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 17 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Slippery When Wet

These two are entirely too much, gotta love them.



Author's Response:

Lol.  Thanks Lajack.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 17 2015

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Surprise, Surprise

At this point, Diya need to pull up her big girl panties, heck even if they are granny panties and get prepared for the war.  If she loves Brandon as much as she thinks then she cannot roll over and play dead like she's done so much before.  You can love and respect your parents and family but you cannot live FOR them.  If your family loves and respects you then they will abide by your decisions.  I remember some quote or statement that mentions love doesn't come with conditions, restrictions etc and that should be true of a parents love for their children.  I am waiting to hear her woman up but I haven't forgotten about Maria Thoteria and Bryan's need to set parameters with her behind also.



Author's Response:

I agree: You can't live for your family.  But in Diya's case, you can't discount their ability to make life and carrying on a healthy relationship very difficult.  The De la Roys don't just criticize and ostracize.  They plot and sabotage.  That's her concern.  She can make whatever declarations and set whatever boundaries she likes, but she can't make them do or not do anything, as you will soon find out.  Marisol is another matter all together.  Thanks lajack1

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 16 2016

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Summary:

True love can be a dangerous thing. Especially when it comes in the form of a Eurasian male with an irresistible mystique. Up-and-coming graphic novelist Dane Takahashi is a man who not only possesses immense talent, but a dark, grisly secret.

Unaware of his shadowy past, Jeneda Larkson is effortlessly drawn to him from their very first meeting, and it doesn’t take long before she submits both her body and emotions in a passionate love affair.

Intrigued by his mysterious nature, Jeneda finds herself wanting to know more about her new lover. But it Isn’t until Dane is compelled by inescapable guilt, that he finally reveals his sordid past.

Shocked to discover that his revelation involves someone dear to her heart, Jeneda finds herself morally torn and ridden with inescapable guilt. But she must decide whether to expose the man she loves, or harbor his morbid secret and forever alter her life.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Kink, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:Yes
Word count: 141708
Read Count: 36693
Published: July 21 2015
Updated: July 21 2015


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, her parents just jacked up both Riley and her life by moving him.  Obviously he is very close to his sister, the only person who has visited him consistently and you are moving him across the country.  How is she suppose to be able to see him b/c of her mother's guilt.  Really, I'm not finding myself fond of either of her parents.  I would visit my brother and leave my mother alone with her 2nd husband.  Dad isn't arguing on her behalf or Riley's behalf of how this would impact him.  Just because he has brain damage doesn't mean he doesn't have feelings.  I feel sad for them.



Author's Response:

Yes, it was a bad decision of her parents, considering they are really close. And yes, neither parent is really all that likeable lol. But that was puposeful becaue I was hoping to show that Jeneda and Riley were really all that each could truly depend on.

Exactly, just because a person has brain damage does not mean they are ignorant to what is happening around them. They know, and can still pick up on things. I'm glad you feel a connection to both Riley and Jeneda.

Thank you for the feedback, lajack1. I appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 21 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Hmmm, is luna jealous that she is dating Dane.



Author's Response:

Could be a smidgen of envy... ;)

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 22 2015

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[Reviews - 423]
Summary:

While returning home to Chicago from a business trip Anika Wallace and Hunter Sterling IV find themselves the only surviors of a plane crash on a South Pacific island. There's no telling when they'll make it back home or if they ever will make it back home for that matter. One thing is for sure they're going to have to learn how to get along their survival is depending on it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 36
Completed:No
Word count: 54201
Read Count: 119536
Published: August 12 2015
Updated: March 02 2017


Title: Chapter 11: DAY 12

I am addicted to this story MP.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 04 2015

Title: Chapter 13: DAY 14

Hmm, Hunter being away from all the trappings and expectations bestowed upon him by his mother and society may actually be a decent individual.  I am curious as they continue to be stranded on this island and get to know each other how Hunter will act once they return to civilization and those expectations are present again.  Will he return to the Good Ole Boy club or actually start to stand up to his overbearing mother and the village idiots.  For me that will be the true test of Hunter's personality and being a man.

Honestly felt a little sad for Hunter because his mother was actually a horrible mom that showed him his simplest desires were unworthy.  He took pride in building that treehouse with his dad, a memory more than the tree house itself and she ruined that for him.  I wonder if she has something over his father's head for him to have remained silent.  At this time his father seems like a punk ass bish for letting this woman have this much control over his SON, who has to grow into a MAN.  Unlike
Anika, Hunter did not have any good role models for adulthood and being a man.  Can he recover from that at this late stage?  I am waiting to see.

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Date: September 11 2015

Title: Chapter 19: TIMELINE CHECKPOINT

you read my mind, I was just thinking about this story literally a minute ago

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Date: December 19 2015

Title: Chapter 29: DAY 49

Once Hunter gets a taste and understands he was her first, he will be on lockdown as well.  Hmmm, wonder if he will become slightly possessive.  Can't wait til they hit the banana leaves.

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Date: May 03 2016

Title: Chapter 34: THE TRIP 3

That is absolutely the one thing I hate is that "angry black woman" theme everytime you attempt to assert yourself to keep from being run over.  It is purposely put in place in an attempt to keep you quiet.  Now you just have to be real slick and keep it calm while going off on people.  In my imagination I am going to pretend that Hunter knew it was Anika he saved vs that Giselle chick because Anika's body/hair etc doesn't feel like Giselle's.  I actually think subconsciously Hunter may have been attracted to Anika from the get go but with his mother's brainwashing was fighting it.  I don't know, that's my theory.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 28 2016

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.