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[Reviews - 37]
Summary:

Bağlılık, the gem of southeast Europe. At its center is Putra a city as bright as the sun with secrets as dark as its shadows. Daniel Winters comes to study and finds herself linked to one of Putras most distinguished families. A link that will challenge her beliefs, shatter her dreams and give her insurmountable hope.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 25007
Read Count: 21554
Published: August 31 2015
Updated: October 06 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Young wolf

I'm curious to where are the other princes and what is Kurt.  Why has this family really taken her into their fold.  Faza is also an interesting character.  Can't wait for more to be revealed.



Author's Response:

Very good thinking Lajacks. While they may have cameo appearances, I'll be focusing on the Okuz for now. You will learn about Kurt though. I like Faza's character as well and he only grows on me.

Thank you for coming this far with me. I hope you continue to enjoy It! ;)

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 10 2015

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 315]
Summary:

The prison had been confined within their hearts but when... when would they truly be set free?

 

 

 

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Transcendence is a original work by CM and is intended for publication so please do not upload, distort, edit, or remove and place on any other site. Respectfully yours, thank you. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 58
Completed:Yes
Word count: 291391
Read Count: 153236
Published: September 13 2015
Updated: May 01 2020


Title: Chapter 9: Decisions

I absolutely hate when people try that "if you truly want to be with me...." well bish I guess I didn't because i do my own stuff in my own time.  I'll find someone else.  That there is the psychological BS.  She keep the ring because she know what it is like to be treated better than by your stanky behind.  I hope she keeps it moving because anytime he wants to downgrade you because of an argument about the stuff he didn't do, he ain't the one.

 

 

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Date: October 08 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Black Coffee

Okay, I can understand his sentiments but I don't like how he took it off her finger while she slept.  That's sneaky maneuvers to me.  I felt he should have stated how he felt first and then asked her to remove it because of how it made him feel and let that be her decision.  It seems like he made it for her and then kinda guilted her into keeping it off versus her coming to that decision.  She has to close that chapter, no one can do it for her.  I hope she puts it back on and tell him, I will take it off when I feel ready and then see how he reacts.  I'm all for testing someone and waiting for an honest response.  

Was it me but some spidey senses were tingling when her sister was talking about her boyfriend.  I'll wait and see what you will write.

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Date: October 04 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Motive

Kiko, Kiko, Kiko.....must you watch a subtitled version of "He's just not that into you" and did you really think after he informed you that he couldn't provide the affection and love you were looking for that touching him without his permission would somehow endear him to you.  Do you think once you put it on him he will bow down and worship at your feet....did you forget who he is...Bish you'll be the one bowing down.  Now you have been kicked out and any affection he did feel for you just went up in flames hibachi style.  If she would have showed some heart and not been a puppet to his mother he would've had more respect for her and she may have garnered his true affection but she behaved like a pawn and therefore got kicked off the board, now he has to checkmate his momma and get his queen.

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Date: October 04 2015

Title: Chapter 16: Visor

As always a pleasure reading about Hiroto and Ebere.  Happy New Year!



Author's Response:

Aww Happy New year to you as well! I pray many blessings and joy to come to you and your house this year! God bless you!

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Date: January 01 2016

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

From the heart.



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Categories: Poetry
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Poetry
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 375
Read Count: 2503
Published: September 21 2015
Updated: September 21 2015


Title: Chapter 1: BLACK FEMALES

How did I miss this.  So much has to be said about this topic and we need honest conversation to let our black females (redbone; dark and lovely and so on) to not use media as the ruler for beauty.  Plus most women who they betray as Black are in essence Latina women who have been marginalized and informed they can't portray a Latina women because it doesn't conform to the stereotype they percieve.  I have two young girls who are different from hair texture to body type and I constantly reinforce they are beautiful and unique, inform them it is great to be black women.  I hope and pray I portray what they need for self-love, confidence and most definitely, don't take no BS from a guy about your worth.  You define that.  I also encourage my son to look at black women as beautiful in all of our shades and not rely on straight hair as the mark of beauty, especially as mom has locs.  I could go on and on but will end it here and if you read this review, great post.



Author's Response:

Better late than ever :-) And I'm glad your children have a mother like you who encourages them to embrace their African beauty. We need more mothers like you.

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: March 10 2016

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Finding love the second time around



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 10289
Read Count: 4805
Published: September 25 2015
Updated: September 28 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 9

Whew, we got some powerful emotions here.  I can't wait for more.  I wanna know is Delaney his daughter and if so, he has a lot of making up to do but I can't get behind Simone sleeping with someone else either especially if she didn't offically call the relationship off to his face or at least a voicemail.  I am always about 100% closure when the relationship is over; not 100% disclosure because there are some things i just want to keep to myself ;)

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Date: September 30 2015

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Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

The year 2016 looks promising for Faith Jamison she's finally going to acheive her purpose in the world and feel good about herself for the first time in her life. Women are now finally allowed to train to be Navy SEALS. Faith isn't going to let that oppurtnuity slip by her not when she sees a future that is brighter than her painful past.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 25940
Read Count: 31848
Published: September 29 2015
Updated: March 21 2016


Title: Chapter 1: PREVIEW

Awww, MP you are doing your job if you have me emotionally attached to this story and Faith.  I have 2 daughters and in stories like this or very similar, I always think about my daughters.  I am enjoying to story and can't wait to see how Faith has the last laugh over Howard and her sperm donor.  I actually hope her mother instills in her son's lives that the behavior that her father displayed is not appropriate and the cycle doesn't repeat itself with the next male generation.   Keep up the good work, I appreciate having something to read besides nursing textbooks.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: October 08 2015

Title: Chapter 4: BUTTERFLY

Kay, at this point the hospital should have intervened.  They would have taken her to a private area and asked if she felt safe at home, especially with the type of injuries she had.  This is still a 15yr old girl and there should be some questions asked.  I can't believe her mother allowed this travesty to happen.  If she didn't like it happening to her and in a new country.   I will be honest and say I can't understand and I am coming from a position of ignorance with regards to the traditions she has grown up with but sometimes love and the right thing to do has to outweigh that.  If we kept that thought, we would still be in chains right now without the small, minute successes we have had.  I am all in my emotions right now.  Time to woo-sah and calm down and realize it is just a book but at the same time, understanding there is some girl going thru this BS for real.  Deep breathing.

 



Author's Response:

Didn't mean to make you upset lajack1 and it's sad that things like this actually happen. The only reason her mother allowed this to happen was beacuse she actually felt that this was her daughter's place in society as a female and Faith didn't feel comfortable going to her mother since she was the one who put her in that situation in the first place.

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Date: October 08 2015

Title: Chapter 6: SOMBER SIXTEEN

Absolutely no justice for her at all. 

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Date: October 24 2015

Title: Chapter 5: FAMILY?

And Bish you a hoe, so we know that, it's a fact...you have no clue about Faith.  Heather what da hell do you mean decent woman.  No decent woman would cheat on her fiancé while he is deployed then.  Hate people who just have to have something negative to say.  Perry, nah he can't even have my platypus name (Phineas and Ferb) so I must come up with something else for him but he is so cocky they wouldn't choose him based upon personality alone.  His whole squad would plan his demise because his arrogance will get them killed.  He doesn't even know how to tone it down at all.  He gonna try Faith and she will have a flashback damn near killing his ass and that is what he needs.  Jackass.

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Date: October 14 2015

Title: Chapter 10: PHYSICAL SCREENING TEST

What da hell is Wilkes problem.  It seems more like an issue of color along with sexism from him.  I hope Faith makes him shove all of that BS down his throat.  Her weakness will be her psychological state.  She needs to figure out how to handle that 'cause I can see Wilkes exploit that.  Really didn't want Ron to pass.  Wonder what Gibbs said to Wilkes.  Also can't wait for his fiancé betrayal to come to light.  If she felt Conrad was do great she would not have fooled around on him while he was away.  She needs her ass whooped.  You was a grown ass women laying with someone who wasn't your fiancé, be a grown ass woman and tell the truth and accept the consequences of your actions.

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Date: March 19 2016

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Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 134]
Summary:

Sometimes hurting the person you love is easier than showing them love, especially when you're hurting inside.

Saint-Luc and Naomi Adebayo-Roux aren't any different.

This is their story.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 46514
Read Count: 96012
Published: October 14 2015
Updated: July 15 2017


Title: Chapter 2: 2.

He is an interesting character.  I think he felt offended when she didn't remember him because he purposely was a butthead so he would stand out to her in comparison to all of the other gentlemen she served that evening.  Then to put on that charade and she didn't remember him...oh the ego.  I think that first sentence was based off of past experienced and again a hurt ego.  He definitely comes accross as an ass but I wonder if it is from boredom with everyone else around him.  I'm sure it has to be pretty stuffy in the upper echelon with the same people.  I wonder how old is he since Miriam called him an old man.  Their conversations should be interesting as I think he is trying to be helpful but sounds like a pompous jerk.  She will have to utilize some good ole Christian values to maintain her calm around him.

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

You're definitely onto something Ms.Jackson :-P

Thank you so much for reading :-).

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: October 19 2015

Title: Chapter 3: 3.

So what does he consider her?  I mean you are paying her to sleep with you but yet you want a Christian wife?  What happened to him in the past?  He didn't start off this way.  I really feel like underneath this straight shooter talk he is a romantic or softie underneath.  Why doesn't he see his brother?  I can't wait for this story to unfold.  You did shock me with him being 45 years old.  I pulled out the calculator to double check my math...LOL



Author's Response:

Lol, he considers her his ''personal assistant''.  Yes Saint does has had quite a lot of growing up to do which has made him into the man he is now, but all that for later. You are definitely one inquisitive reader, I like how your mind works. Thanks so much for reading :-).

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Date: October 23 2015

Title: Chapter 7: 7.

One of them is going to have to open up outside of the bedroom in order for this to progress.  They are hiding themselves from each other and by doing that is actually causing them additional stress.  It is a normal human inclination to simply ask "How are you doing?  You look like there are some things going on?  Would you like to talk about it?"  Maybe Saint can just take her on a date since they kind of skipped the whole courting phase.  Maybe she can suggest an outing where they can both de-stress.  I'm waiting for stuff to hit the fan with her family finding out she married and to an older gentlemen. 

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Date: December 03 2015

Title: Chapter 9: 9.

I would have a hard time believing Saint was in love with her too when he did cheat.  This wasn't a too drunk to get it up but full blown menage ( 2 women ) and then say you are in love with me.  I don't care what I say, you still chose to perform those actions.  Now I don't agree with her treating him like he doesn't matter because every person wants to feel loved, cherished and wanted.  I think Naomi has a lot of issues stemming from her upbringing and she has yet to discover herself and her strength before Saint came along.  I think they need sometime alone without her school or his work, even if for a week or two in an attempt to connect.

Am I the only one suspicious she is pregnant?  Plus Saint, can you really blame her for wanting you to wrap it up after seeing you with two women.  I would have made you get an STD/HIV test before even coming near me again.  What's love got to do with an HIV infection, nothing.

Can't wait to read more.

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Date: December 15 2015

Title: Chapter 10: 10.

I'm partially confused.  Did she miscarry, abortion what happen d then will she continue her studies in Paris or just give up her education all together?  I hope not because she might really feel like a kept women.  Then dang, these two need to learn to use their words appropriately to communicate.  They both go from 0-100 in 0.5 seconds whenever they talk about anything but sex.  They got along fairly well before, hope they can find that common ground again.



Author's Response:

They definitely get turned up so quick and get turned on without a a second's wait lol. It's hard figuring out the two with their bipolar selves lol.

thanks so much for reading :-).

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: December 20 2015

Title: Chapter 12: 12.

I really want to root for these two but I am not sure at this point.  They are both are going down a destructive path separate from each other.  Something has to change quick or I see no hope.  Where is Naomi while his sister in law is chilling at the house.  You can get her and your kids and bring them to your home but you can't go after your wife?  You have enough money to set your SIL up somewhere safe and go get your wife who thinks you are cheating.  Saint is a grown man but it seems in regards to relationships a little boy.   

What I find confusing regarding Saint is that he propositioned her regarding money and marriage so why be upset to think she only wanted him for his money then in reality she hasn't asked him for any money nor has she gone out on shopping spree's so what makes him think she is just with him for his money.  She was highly upset to see him with two women so if her feelings weren't involved and she only wanted money, she would've been like "keep doing you."  Now he made another mistake because the sister in law is going to think bad about her and eventually open her mouth to her husband and mother in law which could start more issues for Naomi. 

I hate to say but this is becoming a drama filled mess and I don't see how they are going to get out of it, especially if they aren't in the same vicinity to actually talk.  They have some strong inner demons they have to exorcise. 

I hope they come together soon to even begin to heal the relationship and each other.



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late reply, but I hope you'll be patient enough to see how it all pans out :-)

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 05 2016

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 245]
Summary:

 

They both had their demons that were trying to deal with. A simple encounter would catapult their lives into a journey where they laughed together, cried together, and healed one another.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:Yes
Word count: 79758
Read Count: 73683
Published: November 02 2015
Updated: March 04 2016


Title: Chapter 12: Adorn

Oh Kayden and Teyana, running away from problems don't make them disappear.  You will have to face your father and sexual intimacy at some point.  I'd rather be prepared and ready to battle than anything else despite the amount of hits I am going to take and may come out limping but I gave it my all.

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Date: December 19 2015

Title: Chapter 20: Long Way To Go

This is the same dude that won't say crap when he see's Becky and Tyrone walking together, holding hands....but wanna say something when a black woman isn't waiting on a black man and is open to dating whoever she likes in whatever color he is.

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Date: February 04 2016

Title: Chapter 21: Breathe Me

Oh my goodness, you had me with tears in my eyes when he was talking to his grandpa...that was such a sweet moment.  So happy he made it in time to say goodbye and for his grandfather to meet the one for him as he said his soulmate.  No matter what happens, I feel strongly they will do everything they can to make it work and sometimes that is exactly what you need, the fight to make it work. 

Loved it.

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 389]
Summary:

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(Chapter 19,  20, & Epilogue uploaded as of 12/19/2018)


Growing up in a southern town like Glenmount, Alabama was never easy for Mercy Stovall especially if your personal demon eventually grow up to be 6'4'' and over 200 lbs. Then one night at a Halloween party, everything changed. It all started with one spanking and spiraled downward from there.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Kink, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 73730
Read Count: 101816
Published: November 03 2015
Updated: December 19 2018


Title: His Mercy

Sounds like a lot of positive things headed your way...Congrats on all the blessings in your life.

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Date: January 07 2017

Title: Chapter 14: Yearn and Burn

As Denzel just said, keep trying.  The reason he is on stage accepting a reward is because of repeated so called failures.  You continue with your goal and vision and you will succeed.  This chapter was fun and light.  It also still showed Gage's dominance.

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Date: February 20 2017

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

 

What will a woman do when her back is up against a wall? Will she take the beating or will she charge forward? Follow the story of Ariana as she escapes an abusive relationship and tries to redefine herself. As she moves back to Texas, she struggles with adjusting to a life without the abuse. Take this journey as she tries to move forward with her life because she refuse to let her past control her future. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4413
Read Count: 2071
Published: December 08 2015
Updated: February 02 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Reaching the Limit [2]

I'm going to need more of this.  Why is his behind whooping on her if he sexing Roxy ass.  How in da hell does he think she want to be with his behind when he has caused her to have a miscarriage.  I wish he would follow me, expect a shotgun blast to your car as soon as I see you on my property.  I ain't got time to play with no fools.  She needs someone to love her the right way and establish her worth independent of anyone else.  Hard to do since it seems like she broke away from cruella de ville and then landed with devil incarnate, now it is time for some peter pan and some never, never land love, eternally feeling young and happy.

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Date: February 03 2016

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Six years ago Ember Michaels left behind her loving family, dear friends, her hometown, and a hurtful event that split her town apart. Now with new friends, finally finishing college, and starting her dream job; she begins to feel like she can enjoy life again. But what can she do when her past wants a future. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 22018
Read Count: 11072
Published: December 28 2015
Updated: December 31 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I don't like Enrique either.  They are both lunatics but Vincent's a special lunatic regarding Ember.  Enrique or Ignacio will have to kill Vincent or they will die a horrible death.  Vincent dude you need to calm down.  He act like he's a 15yr old getting his first sniff of the vajayjay.  He took more time to prepare her on the river bank for the first reconnection then he has since.  Does he think he will overpower her hate of him with these tactics.  I am just curious to see where you take this story and how it will end: Vincent, Enrique or neither.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 01 2016

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