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Summary:

Where do you go from there? Who do you trust when you can't even trust your own jugement?

Is love worth sacrificing everything ?

 

For anyone who feels utterly lost in the love game - this is for you.
Please be aware that this story is a stand alone prequel of  "The One" which is available for purchase on Amazon/itunes/B&N.

 

This story is my property. Please do not copy or post it or extract it to any other websites. Copyright 2017 VMMckeon



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 20961
Read Count: 3286
Published: April 10 2017
Updated: August 04 2017


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5. Why are you so sad?

Is the older woman Melissa is your character pics?  I'm trying to grasp the pics with the story.  Otherwise good.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 11 2017

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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

For Weston Brooks life is perfect. He's at the top of his game as a Pitcher for one of the best MLB teams in the country. He's also just happens to be one of  New York's most notrious bachelors. Wes lives the life every man dreams of. A different city every night, a different woman in his bed, and more money than he knows what to do with. 

But all of that comes to halt when his father has a heart attack and he must go back home. Back to the town he fought so hard to get out of, and the woman he had let slip away. 




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 6518
Read Count: 2026
Published: April 26 2017
Updated: May 05 2017


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Josie doesn't need Wes indecisive self.  I want to know why his dad didn't call and tell him he was even contemplating selling the farm and then to his nemesis.  That seems a little petty of dad so far.  I need to hear some reasoning.  Even his sister sent her husband to do the dirty work.  Makes me wonder what kind of anger issues he got.  

Now Wes you can't be upset she is dating someone when you left her in the dust without a bandana to protect herself.  I do wonder about Dean's motives after hearing their history.  Need to meet him soon so I will reserve judgement.

Piper if she doesn't love him, it won't matter.  The love has to flow two ways for marriage/relationship to truly work.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 08 2017

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww Leukemia.  She's still young, are they going to discuss fertility, her eggs due to side effects of chemo.  What about bone marrow transplant?  Sorry this is just the nurse in me.  Great start and I wonder how he is going to feel about possibly losing her because it seems like he has been sowing his oats.  Is there anyone for her?



Author's Response:

This will certainly be a rollercoaster of emotions! I hope you enjoy the next chapter as much as this one. 

-Maya

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: April 30 2017

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