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[Reviews - 197]
Summary:

When Joss begins receiving anonymous letters, she has her suspicions as to who might be penning the ominous messages.  But as the list of suspects grows, will she uncover the author’s identity or stumble upon a greater truth?  *A response to the Random Letters prompt.*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46306
Read Count: 37786
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 17 2013


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Their feelings are running so deep.  It will be a major catastrophic heartbreak when he returns to california.  I like to think anything is possible but I just don't know.  I have to believe if nothing else this "relationship" has opened their eyes to things about what they would want in a significant other if it can be each other.  They really seem to make each other better people.  Can't wait to read more even though I have the kleenex ready for a sad chapter.



Author's Response:

I think you're right about this experience opening their eyes.  It will be a good teacher for them both.  We'll soon see if lessons and heartache is all it leaves them with.  Thanks for reading and commenting, Lajack!  Updates forthcoming.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: October 12 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I actually understand why she choose to say goodbye because she knows how much love and passion he has for his family and beliefs that could possibly hurt the relationship in the future.  He needs to be away from her and realize what he wants because it will hurt him the most to be alienated from his family.  Her mother may say things but will not stand in her way of happiness whereas it doesn't seem the same for Eshan.  Again, he has to make that choice and sometimes being away from that person will bring the right choice to light.  I hope he can be strong enough to speak to his parents and tell them the truth and they can be understanding of what will make their son happy.  Great chapter and can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

I agree with your take on the situation.  Joss sacrificed to see Eshan happy.  Let's see if his parents will do the same.  Update posted.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Lajack1!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: October 16 2013

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 59]
Summary:

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Stop fighting about the same old thing, Let's start over, We can't let our good love die, Maybe we can start over, Give love another life,

 

I know that this will hurt you, I know you'll cry, I know I called you selfish, but that's a lie, I feel I know that's the best for us,

 

Let's start over 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 31466
Read Count: 10916
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: September 19 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Characters

I am definitely hooked on this story, can't wait for your next update and that is too many days out of the week to see yo mamma when you are married with children.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: October 30 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Greenlight

What is so funny to me is that Ethan is getting upset over imaginary scenarios with Aurora and another man but she gets blindsided with reality that he is essentially doing those scenarios with Katherine.  You are drinking right now because you know you are wrong.  I have the feeling he kept Katherine private from Aurora because he knew if she learned he was in a RELATIONSHIP with someone else, that information would distance her further emotionally from him.  If she wasn't in a relationship now she soon would be.  Please give her a love interest so Ethan can truly see how it feels vs just using his imagination.  It sounds like she is taking the blame for their marriage falling apart and Ethan is still clueless on his part.  Dude, how much money do you need?  He needs some counseling for his childhood and overcompensation in adulthood.  Hell hire a Vice President to help out with the workload.  Work is his escape, it had become a clutch.  Talking down about her career choice is a no no.  Regardless if you agree, you respect her choice.  I have a feeling these little digs have happened before during the marriage and was probably helped along by the MIL.  

They should set their mother up with a guy so she can be out of their business but knowing dragon lady, he will run with scorch marks on his butt.   The difference I see between Ethan and Ian is that Ian understands and accepts his wife as his first responsibility (a little late, but better late than never) and when push comes to shove it will be his wife.  For Ethan it will be his mother.  That is a heavy toll on a wife who is loving you physically, emotionally to know you will always be second best and despite your efforts, you have allowed your mother to degrade me on my wifely duties.  Wonder what Alma is going to say to him next.  

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Date: June 22 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Ring the Alarm

I'm not feeling Ethan right now.  He is able to sex up another woman in his home with his daughter present but get mad over a mythical guy sexing up his ex-wife?  Uh no.  Then he can't stand up to his momma. I don't mind you love and care for your mother but her blatant disrespect to your spouse and sister-in-law, seriously.  I'm pissed at Ethan and Ian for making their significant others come to thus BS.  I'm sorry if I was Aurora I would find someone else successful who could lay the pipe.  I don't need an early grave dying of a stroke because of this stress, unnecessary stress mind you.

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Date: January 14 2016

Title: Chapter 8: Diva

Absolutely loved it.  She slayed as soon as she stepped thru the door.  Loved the way she was throwing them digs at Ethan and at this point with Ethan heaping praise and affection on Katherine in her face when he considers her career a joke, as nothing serious while his career-driven girlfriend is wearing her clothes to make her look good, Puhleese Ethan.  Ethan need some help and honestly I don't want Aurora pining over him at all. I hope Alma let it slip that she stayed over and he sexed her up so that will give Aurora the unfortunately heartbreak needed to move on.  Once he knows she is REALLY moving on from him, he going to have a coming to Jesus moment.  But I hope he suffers a little more.  Maybe that's the sadistic devil on my shoulder.  He see's her out and smiling and being affectionate with someone other than him.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: September 24 2016

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

For Elyshia Jenkins, one night will change her life forever.
If it is for the better or worse, only time will tell.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 16634
Read Count: 38110
Published: September 03 2013
Updated: January 03 2014


Title: Chapter 6: Contract

He has his nerve.  If he had such a dossier on her, he knew how she looked prior to the negotiation/contract.  To sit here and call her unpretty because she is not falling in line lusting after him is ridiculous.  I would love to see his viewpoint sometimes just to have an understanding of what he is looking for and why.  I'm sorry, you got your money's worth, my virginity for $15000, you have been compensated in full especially as I asked you to stop and you didn't.  So how long does she have to sleep with him for this contract to be fulfilled?  Did I miss the specific contract details?



Author's Response:

He is definately a jackness, and not to worry I didn't write the specific contract details, maybe the coming up chapter or the one after.  Thank you for reading and reviewing though, really appreciate it.

FYI, you are kind of funny.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: January 04 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 35]
Summary:

 "All the years we've been together was a lie. The I love yous we told each other meant nothing to him. The promises we made to each other would never happen. All of our hopes and dreams would never come true. I felt like I was in a bad dream that I couldn't wake up from."

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1709
Read Count: 4592
Published: September 21 2013
Updated: September 21 2013


Title: Chapter 1: A fool in love.

I want to see these characters again but move time forward like 2-5 yrs and have Bailey become a strong, compassionate, caring woman that David and Veronica can't touch.  Let her meet a man that is so much more than David even though she will have difficulty with opening her heart to trust again after this dumbass duo.  If you knew he wasn't happy you should have spoken to your friend like the woman you are and how dumb are you that you let is man screw you and your friend for 3 years.  The only reason he moving her out is because he either got caught or you just started making demands.  Ugh, damn if you have long term friends like this, who the hell needs an enemy.  I would go Madea on that ass and then leave with my head held high.  Please bring these characters back.  Would love to see more.



Author's Response:

OMG!!! I LOVE your review lol. And I will be bringing them back. You will see the again real soon! Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21 2013

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 71]
Summary:

Formally Ashes, Ashes

Red flashing lights…

Heavy footsteps echoed through the deserted hallway.

Fire alarms blared...

Breaths lodged in throats as the search for survival worsened.

Pungent smell of death overwhelmed as the Z’s closed in...

Survival was futile now, running was the only escape; in this new apocalyptic post war world, living was no longer guaranteed.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Horror
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge 6
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 65447
Read Count: 77508
Published: October 12 2013
Updated: June 05 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Run!

I find myself more fascinated by the story with the third character because how will he affect Celeste and Jasper's relationship.  

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Date: October 31 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Run!

I am not a walking dead fan but this story has me soo interested that I can't stop reading any and every update you post and will not stop until the story is complete and I am sure by that time I will be sad that it is ended.  What is going on with Celeste, why is she strapped down and where.  You must post soon.

By the way, at first I did skip over this story because the title did not draw me in but I am soooo happy I decided to read it because I love it.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: November 26 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Run!

Is Jasper jealous and is Celeste special.  I can't wait to see how this unfolds and if this cabin is actually an a base for counterattack on the Z's.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: November 02 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

Who knew the boy with the big dreams and kind smile would be her undoing. She may have fallen in love, but he fell along with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 4234
Read Count: 7641
Published: October 20 2013
Updated: December 04 2013


Title: Chapter 1: The Meeting

What!  Oliver has a girlfriend and is making Googly eyes at Alaia.  That will be bogus.  I hope he isn't trying to play with her emotions.  I am dying for more, please update.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: October 26 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

He's the world's most famous supermodel.

She's the church singer whose hypocritical lifestyle has been unveiled by one simple picture with him.

 

A story of redemption, love and family.  

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 26153
Read Count: 31585
Published: October 22 2013
Updated: October 24 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Whatever Happen's in the Dark comes to Light.

It's seems funny to me how everyone wants to pop up in her life and tell her what to do when she is a grown woman.   She is supporting herself and having fun.  She hasn't had sex or does drugs.  How is she suppose to meet Mr. Right if she doesn't date.  Please if they are so big into The Lord and Scripture, doesn't it go something like he who has not sinned shall cast the first stone.  Hello, her daddy and mommy have sinned many times over.  Puhleese, they need to back off.  Ain't know way, I'm backing off of David Gandy, fine specimen of a man, that he is.   Please, want to read what poss hypocritical daddy has to say.



Author's Response:

LOL review is on point

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: October 23 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Whatever Happen's in the Dark comes to Light.

Good Lord,  Mamma about to come in here and mess stuff up.  You may not like David, but you seriously want her with a man like Nathaniel.  Puhleese,  I am seriously thinking Mamma bear need a shrink and not just Jesus.  Please update, can't wait to see how this is going to go down.  

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Date: December 16 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Whatever Happen's in the Dark comes to Light.

That is one thing I never fail to understand.  Just because you attend church doesn't mean everyone else has to.  Your  beliefs are just that, your beliefs and I don't think she should have gotten so angry with him expressing himself especially if he WASN'T raised in the church.  Did she think dating her would give him an epiphany in 2 nights.  Then she didn't lay out a good argument for religion with all she told him.  She is bascially revolting against some tenements of her church herself and was scolded for it, she is going to do the same thing and scold him.  Not being very open minded.  He may change his mind or he may not, if she wants to be with him, she will have to accept it.   Will this weekend end well.



Author's Response:

when you love someone it's selfless, so if she loves David I am sure she will be accepting of him..

 

if she loves him. 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: November 05 2013

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Cambridge

Excuse me but my personal life is not up for discussion.  I am an intelligent young woman that you are able to see from my LSAT scores.  Can I comb thru your closet and find it squeaky clean.  I think not you pompous ass.  Good thing 5 out of the 7 didn't have sticks up their butts.  You surprised me with this.  Glad it is back.  I think I will re-read it just to make sure I got the gist of everything.  Doesn't hurt my David fantasy.

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 25 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 30]
Summary: Is their love the kind that really stands the test of time, and distance. A young army family full of love but ever growing and facing challenges can this young couple make it. Also please everyone keep in mind this site is very new to me.I need a beta as well if anyone who happens to read this is interested, please do let me know. PS I love feedback good or bad

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 13311
Read Count: 6418
Published: October 25 2013
Updated: February 11 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- cast chapter 1

Good job,  can't wait to see what challenges they will face because they seem like such a strong unit.  Can't wait for more updates.

 



Author's Response:

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 26 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Okay, she is wrong for talking to everyone else about their problems.  The way to make bigger problems in your marriage is to speak w/ everyone else about them and listen to input that might not be in your best interest.  Also him getting jealous is ridiculous.  What are you going to do when you are thousands of miles away at war.  Plus, he wants to have another baby when she already complained to his behind that she felt like she was a single parent when he was deployed before.  You want to reenlist and leave me with TWO BABIES to take care of and place an additional burden on his and her family to help.  How selfish is that.  Unconsciously he said exactly what was on his mind.  That was the most truthful was what is waiting for him here.  And I would be soo pissed.  Here I am the love of  your life, YOUR CHILD, and we are not enough for you to DESIRE to be with us.  "shakes head*  Update soon



Author's Response:

Author's Response: PREACH! lol loved reading your review and I have to agree, and I am working on an up for for beofore the 24thI'm hoping :) thanks for reading

Author's Response: PREACH! lol loved reading your review and I have to agree, and I am working on an update for beofore the 24thI'm hoping :) thanks for reading

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: December 20 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I can't wait for the storm to happen.  I really want to see how they can work out these two polar opposite decisions.  Isn't there any other way he can serve his country without going back to war.  Does he want his little girl to grow up with out her father because he couldn't say no.  I understand his desire but if those are his reasons, there are other ways to obtain the same satisfaction.  Is there somebody he is trying to be with and can only be with in the barracks vs at home.  How would he feel if she finds a man to do all those "manly" chores around the home for her.  He would be highly upset.  I think more is going on here than meets the eye with his NEED to re-enlist.



Author's Response:

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Date: November 26 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 97]
Summary:

Denise is a young woman who is on the verge of giving up on love. Never having love in her life she is wondering what is wrong until she meets Issac. Issac has been avoiding relationships for the past few years to support himself but is ashamed of telling someone what he does for a living. Will he tell her his secret? But will she tell him hers?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 35052
Read Count: 29404
Published: October 29 2013
Updated: December 08 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am enjoying the read and I like the flow in the last chapter, it moved like a movie.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Keep enjoying

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: October 31 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

That was a very nice beginning to the week and it was wonderful that Isaac didn't pressure her or anything towards something physical right now. Is it just me but I don't understand why Sam and Henry just didn't do in vitro fertilization or something to have kids.  Now she about to go to jail over something so stupid and he about to lose his man.  Ridiculous.  But please let them find closure about his past and hers and move one with each other.  Graduation is only a short time away.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 26 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Actually these women are ridiculous, you pay for him to escort you and have sex with you and you think you are almighty.  The whole business is just that business and no emotion, why are you getting that involved.  There are others.  Anyway, I actually can understand Isaac's reticence to tell Denise especially after her full disclosure.  I would be concerned if she would be able to handle it, despite the face she shows today.  Then when he has tried to be honest before he was called names and laughed at.  He is in love and that would crush him if she didn't understand and left or returned to cutting herself because of him.  I'm not perfect but I would probably ride and die shaggy's theme " It wasn't me."



Author's Response:

Girl no you didn't bring Shaggy into this. Yeah his situation is a rough.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02 2013

Retired
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Formerly Fate and Coincidence (and by formerly I mean completely rewritten, my NaNoWriMo project)

A year abroad did nothing to help Cassandra Mitchell heal from the earth-shattering death of her on-again-off-again boyfriend. She did not think coming home to the familiarity of the Big City would do her much good either. But an encounter with Luke, be it a coincidence or destined by fate, on the flight home has her making more strides toward healing than any trip around the world ever could have. With the help of a new friend, Cassie finds herself again and perhaps something more.

Luke is a lawyer who spends too much time in the office; he's on the precipice of a big promotion. In every other way, Luke is a fairly laid-back person with a tendency to go with the flow. Running into Cassie presents an opportunity for Luke to get out of the office and experience life. However, his easy going demeanor may get him less than what he wants.

* Title subject to change



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Homosexuality, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 69481
Read Count: 143158
Published: November 20 2013
Updated: August 14 2022


Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I feel bad for Luke because I don't see Cassie "waking up" until Luke is gone and with another woman.  She needs to understand her previous love isn't here anymore and it is okay to find love again.  Has she been to grief counseling or anything because her grief isn't moving through the stages.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
Date: April 08 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 238]
Summary:

This is the sequel to Tess and Jay; they have been married for two years now, and are happy. However with Tess being very busy all of the time and Jay trying to make a name for himself in the company, sometimes they just don't have the time to be as close as they use to be. Combined with this and Jay's new beautifual assistant, Tess' old insecurities are beginning to creep in. Can this marriage survive the strain?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 52947
Read Count: 28571
Published: November 29 2013
Updated: January 18 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Bitter Cold...

Okay, Jay is being a dumb butt.  Tess is testing his behind to see what he is going to do.  What has he been doing?  Has he done anything to warm up the frost he is getting.  Flowers delivered to work.  Going to her office for foot massages and talking.  Having dinner at home prepared with wine, please don't let him mess up.  Did you really think this girl was going to be honest about starting the rumor.  This is also your professional image being tarnished as well.  He needs to think about that and transfer chick somewhere else.  Can't wait for future updates.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 02 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Bow down...

I wonder what Jay is going to say about this because this is exactly what he did to Eric in the hallway.  Plus, we all know that Toni is not gone for good.  I have a feeling she will try to play on his sympathy to drive a wedge in between them.  I hope Jay stands his ground and forcefully says no and back it up with action because I don't think he was fighting that hard during that struggle which makes me wonder if he will cheat.  I just feel like if she would have gotten him inside orally or vaginally he would have done it and then felt sorry afterwards, because back to massage.  It just felt good.  Can't wait for your next update, I am hooked on their story.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02 2013

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