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Summary:

 

You have had life mapped out at a young age. Get into a performance arts college. Own your own dance studio and stay away from boys.... But what happens when you meet the love of your life?  Then come to find out he has a girlfriend? But, he has eyes for only you...

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 181242
Read Count: 79242
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: December 24 2017


Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 You And Me And All Other People

As much as I like this story, I have to read it now through my fingers like watching a horror movie or something. At this point, there's really no outcome that will satisfy me short of Justin being hit by a bus. Can he be hit by a bus, pleeeaassseeeee???

Ok, let's say that he finally wises up and does the right thing, dumps Stacey, goes for Jalena and gets to be happy with the girl he wants. Yay him. But what does Jalena get? She gets to be with the guy that jerked her around, played with her emotions, pursued her sexually in private while declaring his devotion to someone else in public and worst of the worst, thought so little of her that he tried to smex her in a restroom bathroom. Um...yay? He's had all kinds of time to make his mind about what he wants and all he's done with it is declare his loyalty to Stacy while treating Jalena like a silly chick on the side.

I really, really, REALLY hope that Jalena gets to move on, accomplish her dreams and find someone who both loves AND respects her... while Justin is forced to watch and eat his heart out since he finally got trapped by his girlfriend and is forced to stay with her and be miserable until their 7 children grow up. Or he can just be hit by a bus. Whatever works! 



Author's Response:

Ouch! 

Reviewer: ABBNony Signed
Date: June 02 2012

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Tyler could count on one hand the number of attempted, but failed relationships that he had; had. It was getting to the point that he just was ready to give up on finding love or the right person he could give his entire self to. Most of the women he had a relationship with didn't last long not because they didn't want it, they just couldn't handle his faults or flaws. Tyler Hollis had a secret an extremely large secret that over the years, he had learned how to control to an extent, but at some point in the relationship, it would become the topic of conversation and downhill the relationships would go. He was looking for that one special woman that wouldn't mind them; he wasn't sure if she was the one, but the way he was feeling about her he wanted to make her the one. It wasn't very many women he had wanted in his thirty-eight years, but her he felt he couldn't live without.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Kayla had only had two real relationships in her life, okay let's be honest one and she wasn't even sure that was the real thing. It had been over seven years ago. She had always focused on her career, she was what they called a workaholic, her best friends India and Traci would tell her she was sexually deprived, that she needed to started living before she woke up one morning and life had passed her bye. However, never in her right mind did she think she would be in a predicament like this, it was totally out of her character to let something like this happen, and to let it happen like this. It was overwhelming more like surreal an impulsive act, or so she thought. Could it have been a calculating move on his part or was it just something that happened to happen. But if they both were completely honest with themselves it had been building ever since that faithful snowy morning.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Disclaimer: There is no Copyright Infringement intended. The names and characters in this story are of my own creation, so any similarities to any person or person's in this story dead or alive fictional or non-fictional is purely coincidental. Any and all recognizable characters involved in the images are solely owned and the property of their respective owners or by an unknown developer THAT IS NOT ME!! I do not own it/them and will not make money on them. The author of this story is in no way associated with the franchise/franchises of any creators, producer, owner or any media that may be used along with this story.

© Kaleah, 2011.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:Yes
Word count: 218680
Read Count: 113305
Published: October 03 2011
Updated: January 01 2013


Title: Chapter 31: Crossing the Boundary Lines

Kayla and Tyler are both childish and argumentative. So far, they've done nothing but argue over damn near everything - but that last fight was an entirely different animal. It wasn't one of them whining about phone messages or other friendships or television shows. Tyler out and out called his pregnant girlfriend a liar and a whore and accused her of trying to push another man's baby onto him. That was just way, WAY over the line and after that, Kayla has every right to take time to reevaluate their relationship especially since, if I'm reading the timeline of this story correctly, less than a week has gone by since the blow-up.

 

Tyler seems to have a history of jealousy/trust issues with Kayla which is understandable given the way they met, but not something that anyone should have to deal with on a regular basis. If Tyler's reaction is so over-the-top hurtful, what's to stop him from reacting that way every time his trust button is pushed? They definitely both need to dial down the junior high and really talk about their issues and concerns...but is dinner on Valentine's Day REALLY the time and place for that?

Reviewer: ABBNony Signed
Date: April 19 2012

Title: Chapter 30: Frayed, But Not Totally Demolished

Tyler seems to have a problem with his temper which really needs to end. Kayla - to paraphrase something I read in an Erosa Knowles novel once - needs to teach him right now that he can't just say any old hurtful thing he wants in the heat of anger and then expect that an apology is gonna make it ok. Tyler slept with a virgin with no birth control and was then surprised that she turned up pregnant? Is he that stupid? Then he told the mother of his child (the woman that he supposedly loves and respects) that his mother was right about her - meaning that Kayla is a lying, golddigging whore - and expects that his piddling 'I'm sorry baby' is supposed to make that ok? Yeah right.

Reviewer: ABBNony Signed
Date: April 12 2012

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I think my husband lost his mind when his grandmother came to town with his ex in tow. I think I lost my own damn mind when he convinced me to give her a job. I know that hoe lost her mind when she confessed she was still in love with my husband. And that old hag been lost her mind, since I married him. Good thing I am a fan-fuckin-tastic psychologist and head games are my bread and butter.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14407
Read Count: 5431
Published: January 05 2012
Updated: January 05 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked this story - very well written.  I especially loved how Kasey turns the tables on Matt in a way that has no repercussions for her. (What husband can be openly mad or jealous at a friendship between his wife and a gay man? Brilliant!) Thing is, as it reads, Matt STILL doesn’t seem to get Kasey’s point of view as he seems to blame Kasey’s hurt on HER insecurities and not HIS inappropriate actions. Even when he finally takes responsibility for his actions, he still manages to pass the buck. “I am sorry for everything that is my fault and yours”? What kind of passive aggressive nonsense is that?

 

When I got to the epilogue, I was actually lost and had to go back and re-read it to figure out what was happening. There’s a huge disconnect between the last chapter and the ending. Somewhere between fighting, sex and role playing sex (which was a little unclear - for a minute it seemed to read as if Patricia was Matt's mistress), Matt and Kasey obviously manage to work it out but how does that happen? Does Matt finally wise up on his severe case of idiotism and maybe go halfsies with Kasey on a fruit basket or a gift certificate for new shoes or something as an apology to Jeremy for getting an innocent bystander assaulted in their one-upmanship games? Does Kasey find a way to keep the grandmother’s diabolical schemes from affecting her security and happiness, like maybe murder? Do Kasey and Matt’s mother pool their money and hire Captain Jack Sparrow to take the grandmother out, knowing that the only effective way for them to stay sane and happy is to eliminate the Kraken permanently? Does the grandmother just choke on her corned beef and cabbage and die, leaving everyone except Patricia to live free of her manipulations and happily ever after? What happens (besides the sex) to bring about the happy ending? Yeah, we all know sex can be wonderful and magically delicious…but when it’s over, Matt and Kasey are still in the same situation as before, so what happens (besides the possible death and dismemberment of the grandmother) to bring about the HEA? Maybe you could flesh that out some more? Notice most of my schemes involve the grandmother dying. It seems to be the only option given that it’s obvious that her evil is neverending and equally obvious that Matt’s blinders toward her are fixed and permanent.



Author's Response:

I do love your review so much. This is actually why I posted the story. I was stuck on the edits. Now I can see a clear direction to head into. Thank you so much. As for the epilogue..it is supposed to be a complete continuation of the first chapter. I most definitely need to work on my transitions....thanks mucho for the review. I appreciate it!

Reviewer: ABBNony Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 05 2012

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Summary:

Love does not come with blueprints. There will be pain, violence, humor, vindictiveness, lust, desire, and jealousy before you even get to the kiss.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 19737
Read Count: 16745
Published: February 10 2012
Updated: November 26 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay, I like Beauty & the Beast stories! I'm confused though: who's Jessica?

Reviewer: ABBNony Signed
Date: February 11 2012

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

In the first chapter, you start out by calling Donna's boss Jenna Walters but by the end of the chapter, her name changes to Jessica. Other than that, great story so far.



Author's Response:

Yeah I saw that and I fixed it. I'm sorry. Thank you for the heads up.

Reviewer: ABBNony Signed
Date: February 13 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 72]
Summary:

Once in your life you find somebody who turns your world completely upside down. You love them just as much as you hate them. You do things you wouldn't normally do but everything you do, you do it like crazy..



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: Love Me Iím Crazy
Series: Challenges
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11309
Read Count: 19653
Published: June 11 2012
Updated: June 11 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Like Crazy

Holy shit! Damn this is awesome. And sad at the same time. I know self-destructive couples just like this one.

Reviewer: ABBNony Signed
Date: June 11 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.